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A populated room suddenly goes dark and when the lights return, someone's found mysteriously murdered. Try not to scream.
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A populated room suddenly goes dark and when the lights return, someone's found mysteriously murdered. Try not to scream.scream.
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A populated room suddenly does dark and when the lights return, someone's found mysteriously murdered. Try not to scream.
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A populated room suddenly does goes dark and when the lights return, someone's found mysteriously murdered. Try not to scream.
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A populated room suddenly does dark and when the lights return, someone's found mysteriously murdered. There may be screams gun noises.
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A populated room suddenly does dark and when the lights return, someone's found mysteriously murdered. There may be screams gun noises.Try not to scream.
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A room of people suddenly does dark and when the lights come back on, someone is found mysteriously murdered. Expect to hear screams when this occurs.
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A populated room of people suddenly does dark and when the lights come back on, someone is return, someone's found mysteriously murdered. Expect to hear There may be screams when this occurs.gun noises.
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A room of people suddenly does dark and when the lights come back on, someone is found mysteriously murdered. Expect to hear screams when this occurs
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A room of people suddenly does dark and when the lights come back on, someone is found mysteriously murdered. Expect to hear screams when this occursoccurs.
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A room of people suddenly does dark and when the lights come back on, someone is found mysteriously murdered.
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A room of people suddenly does dark and when the lights come back on, someone is found mysteriously murdered. Expect to hear screams when this occurs
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The room of people suddenly does dark and when the lights comes back on, someone is found mysteriously murdered.
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The room of people suddenly does dark and when the light comes back a character is found mysteriously murdered.
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The room of people suddenly does dark and when the light lights comes back a character on, someone is found mysteriously murdered.
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The room of people suddenly does dark and when the light comes back a character is found mysteriously murdered.
