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I don't think this has to involve fans. I also fixed a Chained Sinkhole and tried trimming this slightly.
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When fans feel the fate a character gets is more harsh than what they deserved.
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When fans viewers feel the fate a character gets is more harsh harsher than what they deserved.
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-->[-Now for [[JustForFun/TVTropesWillRuinYourLife a fate you didn't deserve]] [[KarmicOverkill HERE]].-]
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-->[-Now for [[JustForFun/TVTropesWillRuinYourLife a fate fate]] you didn't deserve]] deserve [[KarmicOverkill HERE]].-]
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-->[-Now for [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife a fate you didn't deserve]] [[KarmicOverkill HERE]].-]
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-->[-Now for [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife [[JustForFun/TVTropesWillRuinYourLife a fate you didn't deserve]] [[KarmicOverkill HERE]].-]
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-->[-Now for a fate you didn't deserve [[KarmicOverkill HERE]].-]
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-->[-Now for [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife a fate you didn't deserve deserve]] [[KarmicOverkill HERE]].-]
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"More than they deserve" is a phrase that usually means the opposite of what is intended here.
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When fans feel the fate a character gets is more than what they deserved.
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When fans feel the fate a character gets is more harsh than what they deserved.
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-->[-Now for a fate you didn't reserve [[KarmicOverkill HERE]].-]
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-->[-Now for a fate you didn't reserve deserve [[KarmicOverkill HERE]].-]
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When fans feel the fate a character gets is more than what they deserved.
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-->[-Now for a fate you didn't reserve [[KarmicOverkill HERE]].-]
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-->[-Now for a fate you didn't reserve [[KarmicOverkill HERE]].-]
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