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* Everyone celebrating Margot's victory as the new champion of the UWB tournament. Then James gives her the thunderbolt iron helmet she wanted that inspired her to participate. It causes her to embrace him like never before, and after a brief moment of humor with them not knowing what to do with the moment, Margot salvages it by leading the BigDamnKiss between them. Everyone cheers them on, with Charlotte noting that there was always a red string pulling them together.
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* Everyone celebrating Margot's victory as the new champion of the UWB tournament. Then James gives her the thunderbolt iron helmet she wanted that inspired her to participate. It causes her to embrace him like never before, and after a brief moment of humor with them not knowing what to do with the moment, Margot salvages it by leading the BigDamnKiss between them. Everyone cheers them on, with Charlotte noting that there was always a red string pulling them together.together.
* After all is said and done, the Youths all decide to head back home and see their families for the summer (and in Gretchen's case, take up an apprenticeship with a witch coven). Seeing how James doesn't have a home to go back to, Margot offers for him to come with her to Francane to live with her caretaker. And if anyone raises a fuss about him being Bretonch, she'll gladly kick their asses.
** Right before the story ends, Serena offers them something she and Charlotte have been working on: crystal balls that function like phones for the Youths to communicate over long distances with one another. With that, the Meddlesome Youths are more confident than ever that they'll always be together, no matter what the world throws at them.
* After all is said and done, the Youths all decide to head back home and see their families for the summer (and in Gretchen's case, take up an apprenticeship with a witch coven). Seeing how James doesn't have a home to go back to, Margot offers for him to come with her to Francane to live with her caretaker. And if anyone raises a fuss about him being Bretonch, she'll gladly kick their asses.
** Right before the story ends, Serena offers them something she and Charlotte have been working on: crystal balls that function like phones for the Youths to communicate over long distances with one another. With that, the Meddlesome Youths are more confident than ever that they'll always be together, no matter what the world throws at them.
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** Charlotte then shows up after Mrs. Zelgad leaves, and tells Polybeus that those that die are never truly gone so long as we remember what they taught us. Both assure each other that they're very kind before the saboteurs show up.
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** Charlotte then shows up after Mrs. Zelgad leaves, and tells Polybeus that those that die are never truly gone so long as we remember what they taught us. Both assure each other that they're very kind before the saboteurs show up.up.
* Everyone celebrating Margot's victory as the new champion of the UWB tournament. Then James gives her the thunderbolt iron helmet she wanted that inspired her to participate. It causes her to embrace him like never before, and after a brief moment of humor with them not knowing what to do with the moment, Margot salvages it by leading the BigDamnKiss between them. Everyone cheers them on, with Charlotte noting that there was always a red string pulling them together.
* Everyone celebrating Margot's victory as the new champion of the UWB tournament. Then James gives her the thunderbolt iron helmet she wanted that inspired her to participate. It causes her to embrace him like never before, and after a brief moment of humor with them not knowing what to do with the moment, Margot salvages it by leading the BigDamnKiss between them. Everyone cheers them on, with Charlotte noting that there was always a red string pulling them together.
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* James coming early to the feast hall with Margot to try out crepes. It's quite obvious that the both of them are hoping that one will come on to the other.
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* James coming early to the feast hall with Margot to try out crepes. It's quite obvious that the both of them are hoping that one will come on to the other.other.
* Charlotte, thanks to the threads of fate, finds Polybeus talking with Gabriev's mom. As he tells her how he didn't deserve to die and that it should have been him, she hugs him like any mother would a distressed child, and reassures him that this is all the fault of the school, not him. She then gives him Gabriev's helmet, telling Polybeus that it is his now, and that he's proof that her son was loved before leaving. The young man declares that he'll wear it with honor.
** Charlotte then shows up after Mrs. Zelgad leaves, and tells Polybeus that those that die are never truly gone so long as we remember what they taught us. Both assure each other that they're very kind before the saboteurs show up.
* Charlotte, thanks to the threads of fate, finds Polybeus talking with Gabriev's mom. As he tells her how he didn't deserve to die and that it should have been him, she hugs him like any mother would a distressed child, and reassures him that this is all the fault of the school, not him. She then gives him Gabriev's helmet, telling Polybeus that it is his now, and that he's proof that her son was loved before leaving. The young man declares that he'll wear it with honor.
** Charlotte then shows up after Mrs. Zelgad leaves, and tells Polybeus that those that die are never truly gone so long as we remember what they taught us. Both assure each other that they're very kind before the saboteurs show up.
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** Rodrigo then has Godfrey and Columbina take James to go prank the dean. Not only does this excursion give James a vital clue about the saboteur, but it also gives him the right amount of lift he needs.
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** Rodrigo then has Godfrey and Columbina take James to go prank the dean. Not only does this excursion give James a vital clue about the saboteur, but it also gives him the right amount of lift he needs.needs.
* James coming early to the feast hall with Margot to try out crepes. It's quite obvious that the both of them are hoping that one will come on to the other.
* James coming early to the feast hall with Margot to try out crepes. It's quite obvious that the both of them are hoping that one will come on to the other.
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** Rodrigo then has Godwyn and Columbina take James to go prank the dean. Not only does this excursion give James a vital clue about the saboteur, but it also gives him the right amount of lift he needs.
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** Rodrigo then has Godwyn Godfrey and Columbina take James to go prank the dean. Not only does this excursion give James a vital clue about the saboteur, but it also gives him the right amount of lift he needs.
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* Noticing how down everyone is from everything that's happened, Rodrigo decides to take matters into his own hands, first by encouraging Ivan to show everyone in Juno's class one of his sillylusions. Seeing his beautiful friend-turned-lover support him causes Ivan to discover a feeling he had not known before: confidence. So he shows the sillylusion (itself a touching tale of a dragon being soothed by a maiden's song known as ''The Dragon and the Songbird'', to Margot's delight), and everyone loves it, with Ivan tearfully declaring that he's actually good at something.
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* Noticing how down everyone is from everything that's happened, Rodrigo decides to take matters into his own hands, first by encouraging Ivan to show everyone in Juno's class one of his sillylusions. Seeing his beautiful friend-turned-lover support him causes Ivan to discover a feeling he had not known before: confidence. So he shows the sillylusion (itself a touching tale of a dragon being soothed by a maiden's song known as ''The Dragon and the Songbird'', to Margot's delight), and everyone loves it, with Ivan tearfully declaring that he's actually good at something.something.
** Rodrigo then has Godwyn and Columbina take James to go prank the dean. Not only does this excursion give James a vital clue about the saboteur, but it also gives him the right amount of lift he needs.
** Rodrigo then has Godwyn and Columbina take James to go prank the dean. Not only does this excursion give James a vital clue about the saboteur, but it also gives him the right amount of lift he needs.
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* While the Youths plan on getting Polybeus caught up for the classes he'll miss while hospitalized, Juno offers the means for him to do so much more easily, solidifying her status as a valuable and compassionate ally.
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* While the Youths plan on getting Polybeus caught up for the classes he'll miss while hospitalized, Juno offers the means for him to do so much more easily, solidifying her status as a valuable and compassionate ally.ally.
* Noticing how down everyone is from everything that's happened, Rodrigo decides to take matters into his own hands, first by encouraging Ivan to show everyone in Juno's class one of his sillylusions. Seeing his beautiful friend-turned-lover support him causes Ivan to discover a feeling he had not known before: confidence. So he shows the sillylusion (itself a touching tale of a dragon being soothed by a maiden's song known as ''The Dragon and the Songbird'', to Margot's delight), and everyone loves it, with Ivan tearfully declaring that he's actually good at something.
* Noticing how down everyone is from everything that's happened, Rodrigo decides to take matters into his own hands, first by encouraging Ivan to show everyone in Juno's class one of his sillylusions. Seeing his beautiful friend-turned-lover support him causes Ivan to discover a feeling he had not known before: confidence. So he shows the sillylusion (itself a touching tale of a dragon being soothed by a maiden's song known as ''The Dragon and the Songbird'', to Margot's delight), and everyone loves it, with Ivan tearfully declaring that he's actually good at something.
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** Later, after everyone refuses James attempt at giving up, Polybeus wakes up, and is actually surprised that everyone there considers him to be a friend. Either way, he's immensely grateful.
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** Later, after everyone refuses James attempt at giving up, Polybeus wakes up, and is actually surprised that everyone there considers him to be a friend. Either way, he's immensely grateful.grateful.
* While the Youths plan on getting Polybeus caught up for the classes he'll miss while hospitalized, Juno offers the means for him to do so much more easily, solidifying her status as a valuable and compassionate ally.
* While the Youths plan on getting Polybeus caught up for the classes he'll miss while hospitalized, Juno offers the means for him to do so much more easily, solidifying her status as a valuable and compassionate ally.
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* Geoffrey volunteering to watch over Polybeus when he's been hospitalized.
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* Geoffrey volunteering to watch over Polybeus when he's been hospitalized.hospitalized.
** Later, after everyone refuses James attempt at giving up, Polybeus wakes up, and is actually surprised that everyone there considers him to be a friend. Either way, he's immensely grateful.
** Later, after everyone refuses James attempt at giving up, Polybeus wakes up, and is actually surprised that everyone there considers him to be a friend. Either way, he's immensely grateful.
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* Chungo Maximo, a disturbing half-ogre, finds comfort in facing Margot, who's quite sympathetic to his plight as a mishapen creature. When the girl's magic goes out of control thanks to the saboteur's magic, he tells her that she's not alone, and that she can overcome it. She does, telling Chungo that he's a true gentleman.
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* Chungo Maximo, a disturbing half-ogre, finds comfort in facing Margot, who's quite sympathetic to his plight as a mishapen creature. When the girl's magic goes out of control thanks to the saboteur's magic, he tells her that she's not alone, and that she can overcome it. She does, telling Chungo that he's a true gentleman.gentleman.
* Geoffrey volunteering to watch over Polybeus when he's been hospitalized.
* Geoffrey volunteering to watch over Polybeus when he's been hospitalized.
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* Polybeus and Serena burying the hatchet after they realize how much they've exhausted themselves trying to outdo one another on the dance floor.
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* Polybeus and Serena burying the hatchet after they realize how much they've exhausted themselves trying to outdo one another on the dance floor.floor.
* Chungo Maximo, a disturbing half-ogre, finds comfort in facing Margot, who's quite sympathetic to his plight as a mishapen creature. When the girl's magic goes out of control thanks to the saboteur's magic, he tells her that she's not alone, and that she can overcome it. She does, telling Chungo that he's a true gentleman.
* Chungo Maximo, a disturbing half-ogre, finds comfort in facing Margot, who's quite sympathetic to his plight as a mishapen creature. When the girl's magic goes out of control thanks to the saboteur's magic, he tells her that she's not alone, and that she can overcome it. She does, telling Chungo that he's a true gentleman.
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** Then he learns that Rodrigo is more into men, just like Achilles. He also expresses disgust at how author [[TakeThat Forr Kydd mistranslated the hero and his lover Patroclus as cousins instead.]] Bottom line, Polybeus says LGBTQ+ rights!
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** Then he learns that Rodrigo is more into men, just like Achilles. He also expresses disgust at how author [[TakeThat Forr Kydd mistranslated the hero and his lover Patroclus as cousins instead.]] Bottom line, Polybeus says LGBTQ+ rights!rights!
* James and Margot encountering each other on the dance floor, and deciding to forget the stupid competition by dancing together.
* Rodrigo just enjoying hearing Ivan rattle off about his sillylusions. At that point, it's just impossible for him to ignore that he's got some really big feelings for the adorable Ruslovakian. So when the discussion comes to a part about playing as lovers together, he makes his move, and what follows is a BigDamnKiss that gets everyone's attention and praise.
* Polybeus and Serena burying the hatchet after they realize how much they've exhausted themselves trying to outdo one another on the dance floor.
* James and Margot encountering each other on the dance floor, and deciding to forget the stupid competition by dancing together.
* Rodrigo just enjoying hearing Ivan rattle off about his sillylusions. At that point, it's just impossible for him to ignore that he's got some really big feelings for the adorable Ruslovakian. So when the discussion comes to a part about playing as lovers together, he makes his move, and what follows is a BigDamnKiss that gets everyone's attention and praise.
* Polybeus and Serena burying the hatchet after they realize how much they've exhausted themselves trying to outdo one another on the dance floor.
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* Up to the beginning of their night out, Polybeus had no idea that James was formerly a girl. Upon realizing it, he compares James to the oracle Tiresias, and how he shares his wisdom. He then declares that the night out will be dedicated to showing James the ropes of manhood. Polybeus says trans rights, folks!
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* Up to the beginning of their night out, Polybeus had no idea that James was formerly a girl. Upon realizing it, he compares James to the oracle Tiresias, and how he shares his wisdom. He then declares that the night out will be dedicated to showing James the ropes of manhood. manhood.
** Then he learns that Rodrigo is more into men, just like Achilles. He also expresses disgust at how author [[TakeThat Forr Kydd mistranslated the hero and his lover Patroclus as cousins instead.]] Bottom line, Polybeus saystrans rights, folks!LGBTQ+ rights!
** Then he learns that Rodrigo is more into men, just like Achilles. He also expresses disgust at how author [[TakeThat Forr Kydd mistranslated the hero and his lover Patroclus as cousins instead.]] Bottom line, Polybeus says
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* Gretchen praising Serena's ability and wishing she got better opponents before comically backtracking, not wanting the saboteur to get her. Serena takes it in stride, and decides to organize a night out for everyone. While no one can see it, Gretch has a beautiful smile beneath her scarf.
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* Gretchen praising Serena's ability and wishing she got better opponents before comically backtracking, not wanting the saboteur to get her. Serena takes it in stride, and decides to organize a night out for everyone. While no one can see it, Gretch has a beautiful smile beneath her scarf.scarf.
* Up to the beginning of their night out, Polybeus had no idea that James was formerly a girl. Upon realizing it, he compares James to the oracle Tiresias, and how he shares his wisdom. He then declares that the night out will be dedicated to showing James the ropes of manhood. Polybeus says trans rights, folks!
* Up to the beginning of their night out, Polybeus had no idea that James was formerly a girl. Upon realizing it, he compares James to the oracle Tiresias, and how he shares his wisdom. He then declares that the night out will be dedicated to showing James the ropes of manhood. Polybeus says trans rights, folks!
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** Later, her friends arrive to praise her, as do Juno and Oomlowt, who are proud to have her as a student. Broomhilda Siegfried even tells her that she did the impossible by making her root for a sorcerer.
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** Later, her friends arrive to praise her, as do Juno and Oomlowt, who are proud to have her as a student. Broomhilda Siegfried even tells her that she did the impossible by making her root for a sorcerer.sorcerer.
* Gretchen praising Serena's ability and wishing she got better opponents before comically backtracking, not wanting the saboteur to get her. Serena takes it in stride, and decides to organize a night out for everyone. While no one can see it, Gretch has a beautiful smile beneath her scarf.
* Gretchen praising Serena's ability and wishing she got better opponents before comically backtracking, not wanting the saboteur to get her. Serena takes it in stride, and decides to organize a night out for everyone. While no one can see it, Gretch has a beautiful smile beneath her scarf.
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* Before the grudge match between Margot and Alys, the other teachers discuss who to root for. While some like Heka Tlancheb and Kovut Nyftek have their reasons for being supportive, it's Juno and, of course, Oomlowt who really want the student to succeed. They even summon banners cheering her on.
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* Before the grudge match between Margot and Alys, the other teachers discuss who to root for. While some like Heka Tlancheb and Kovut Nyftek have their reasons for being supportive, it's Juno and, of course, Oomlowt who really want the student to succeed. They even summon banners cheering her on.on.
* After Margot scores her well-deserved victory over Alys, three professors are practically tripping over themselves to have her in their advanced classes. Them being Simmeon Helmshmied of Enchantment studies, Heka Tlancheb of Combat Casting, and Sulfurous Bladgal of Choleric Studies. Keep in mind that not a few pages earlier it was established that Bladgal resented being a teacher, [[NotSoAboveItAll only for him to regard Margot with nothing but excitement and wonder.]] He even tries to summon his own Doomstar, and laughs off the failed attempt, amused at the thought of learning from a student. Margot decides to have all three, moved to tears by their support.
** Later, her friends arrive to praise her, as do Juno and Oomlowt, who are proud to have her as a student. Broomhilda Siegfried even tells her that she did the impossible by making her root for a sorcerer.
* After Margot scores her well-deserved victory over Alys, three professors are practically tripping over themselves to have her in their advanced classes. Them being Simmeon Helmshmied of Enchantment studies, Heka Tlancheb of Combat Casting, and Sulfurous Bladgal of Choleric Studies. Keep in mind that not a few pages earlier it was established that Bladgal resented being a teacher, [[NotSoAboveItAll only for him to regard Margot with nothing but excitement and wonder.]] He even tries to summon his own Doomstar, and laughs off the failed attempt, amused at the thought of learning from a student. Margot decides to have all three, moved to tears by their support.
** Later, her friends arrive to praise her, as do Juno and Oomlowt, who are proud to have her as a student. Broomhilda Siegfried even tells her that she did the impossible by making her root for a sorcerer.
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* Throughout the story, everyone in the school praises Margot (except Alys of course) wherever she goes, pretty much rendering all of her anxieties regarding her appearance moot, even if all of the attention is a bit much.
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* Throughout the story, everyone in the school praises Margot (except Alys of course) wherever she goes, pretty much rendering all of her anxieties regarding her appearance moot, even if all of the attention is a bit much.much.
* Before the grudge match between Margot and Alys, the other teachers discuss who to root for. While some like Heka Tlancheb and Kovut Nyftek have their reasons for being supportive, it's Juno and, of course, Oomlowt who really want the student to succeed. They even summon banners cheering her on.
* Before the grudge match between Margot and Alys, the other teachers discuss who to root for. While some like Heka Tlancheb and Kovut Nyftek have their reasons for being supportive, it's Juno and, of course, Oomlowt who really want the student to succeed. They even summon banners cheering her on.
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* Ivan finds Polybeus despairing over the death of Gabriev, unwilling to let anyone see him cry. The Ruslovakian boy tells him that the Heroes of Antiquity he so idolizes [[ManlyTears were allowed to feel grief]], like when Achilles mourned Patroclus and such. Upon hearing Ivan's words, he hugs his roommate and takes back every bad thing he ever said about him, calling him a brother in arms.
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* Ivan finds Polybeus despairing over the death of Gabriev, unwilling to let anyone see him cry. The Ruslovakian boy tells him that the Heroes of Antiquity he so idolizes [[ManlyTears were allowed to feel grief]], like when Achilles mourned Patroclus and such. Upon hearing Ivan's words, he hugs his roommate and takes back every bad thing he ever said about him, calling him a brother in arms.arms.
* Throughout the story, everyone in the school praises Margot (except Alys of course) wherever she goes, pretty much rendering all of her anxieties regarding her appearance moot, even if all of the attention is a bit much.
* Throughout the story, everyone in the school praises Margot (except Alys of course) wherever she goes, pretty much rendering all of her anxieties regarding her appearance moot, even if all of the attention is a bit much.
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* Maxeral, the head of the security gargoyles, tells James in private that he admires him and his friends for rising to the occasion in spite of the rules he himself is forever bound to, and swears to do as much as he can to support the boy while he tries and solves the mystery. It's safe to say the gargoyle earns his spot on the Justice tarot card.
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* Maxeral, the head of the security gargoyles, tells James in private that he admires him and his friends for rising to the occasion in spite of the rules he himself is forever bound to, and swears to do as much as he can to support the boy while he tries and solves the mystery. It's safe to say the gargoyle earns his spot on the Justice tarot card.card.
* Ivan finds Polybeus despairing over the death of Gabriev, unwilling to let anyone see him cry. The Ruslovakian boy tells him that the Heroes of Antiquity he so idolizes [[ManlyTears were allowed to feel grief]], like when Achilles mourned Patroclus and such. Upon hearing Ivan's words, he hugs his roommate and takes back every bad thing he ever said about him, calling him a brother in arms.
* Ivan finds Polybeus despairing over the death of Gabriev, unwilling to let anyone see him cry. The Ruslovakian boy tells him that the Heroes of Antiquity he so idolizes [[ManlyTears were allowed to feel grief]], like when Achilles mourned Patroclus and such. Upon hearing Ivan's words, he hugs his roommate and takes back every bad thing he ever said about him, calling him a brother in arms.
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** Even after that, Garbriev uses his last words to tell Polybeus that he's a good person as he succumbs to his wounds.
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** Even after that, Garbriev uses his last words to tell Polybeus that he's a good person as he succumbs to his wounds.wounds.
* Maxeral, the head of the security gargoyles, tells James in private that he admires him and his friends for rising to the occasion in spite of the rules he himself is forever bound to, and swears to do as much as he can to support the boy while he tries and solves the mystery. It's safe to say the gargoyle earns his spot on the Justice tarot card.
* Maxeral, the head of the security gargoyles, tells James in private that he admires him and his friends for rising to the occasion in spite of the rules he himself is forever bound to, and swears to do as much as he can to support the boy while he tries and solves the mystery. It's safe to say the gargoyle earns his spot on the Justice tarot card.
