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* The fact that Tiffany manages to see through everyone, '''''everyone''''''s pretenses (Granny Weatherwax and Miss Treason and Annagramma and...) is oddly heartwarming. While the rest of the world will always see what they want to see in you, it's nice to know one weird little girl (later a weird woman) who always sees you for who you truly are.
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* The fact that Tiffany manages to see through everyone, '''''everyone''''''s pretenses (Granny Weatherwax and Miss Treason and Annagramma and...) is oddly equal parts outrageous, odd, and heartwarming. While the rest of the world will always see what they want to see in you, it's nice to know one weird little girl (later a weird woman) who always sees you for who you truly are.
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* The fact that Tiffany manages to see through everyone, '''''everyone''''''s pretenses (Granny Weatherwax and Miss Treason and Annagramma and...) is oddly heartwarming. Even if the rest of the world will always what they want to see in you, it's nice to know one weird little girl (later a weird woman) who always sees you for who you truly are.
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* The fact that Tiffany manages to see through everyone, '''''everyone''''''s pretenses (Granny Weatherwax and Miss Treason and Annagramma and...) is oddly heartwarming. Even if While the rest of the world will always see what they want to see in you, it's nice to know one weird little girl (later a weird woman) who always sees you for who you truly are.
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* The fact that Tiffany manages to see through everyone, '''''everyone''''''s pretenses (Granny Weatherwax and Miss Treason and Annagramma and...) is oddly heartwarming. Even if the rest of the world will always see you as only one thing, it's nice to know one weird little girl (later a weird woman) who always sees you for who you truly are.
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* The fact that Tiffany manages to see through everyone, '''''everyone''''''s pretenses (Granny Weatherwax and Miss Treason and Annagramma and...) is oddly heartwarming. Even if the rest of the world will always what they want to see you as only one thing, in you, it's nice to know one weird little girl (later a weird woman) who always sees you for who you truly are.
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* Annagramma [[TookALevelInBadass coming to Tiffany's rescue]]. She not only shows the utility of the Earwig style of Wizard magic (using a fireball to melt the Wintersmith's Snowlem), but while Tiffany is still in shock, lends her a fast broom and sends her off as quickly as possible.
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* Annagramma [[TookALevelInBadass coming to Tiffany's rescue]]. She not only shows the utility of the Earwig style of Wizard magic (using a fireball to melt the Wintersmith's Snowlem), but while Tiffany is still in shock, lends her a fast broom and sends her off as quickly as possible.possible.
* The fact that Tiffany manages to see through everyone, '''''everyone''''''s pretenses (Granny Weatherwax and Miss Treason and Annagramma and...) is oddly heartwarming. Even if the rest of the world will always see you as only one thing, it's nice to know one weird little girl (later a weird woman) who always sees you for who you truly are.
* The fact that Tiffany manages to see through everyone, '''''everyone''''''s pretenses (Granny Weatherwax and Miss Treason and Annagramma and...) is oddly heartwarming. Even if the rest of the world will always see you as only one thing, it's nice to know one weird little girl (later a weird woman) who always sees you for who you truly are.
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** And the other men (thank gods!) were ready to grab him before he moved. Joe Aching is not only the sort of selfless man who'd sacrifice himself, but the sort of well-respected and openly-loving man they ''knew'' would do so.
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** And the other men (thank gods!) were ready to grab him before he moved. Joe Aching is not only the sort of selfless man who'd try to sacrifice himself, but the sort of well-respected and openly-loving man neighbor they ''knew'' ''anticipated'' would do so.nothing less.
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** And the other men (thank gods!) were ready to grab him before he moved. Joe Aching is not only the sort of selfless man who'd sacrifice himself, but the sort of well-respected and openly-loving man they ''knew'' would do so.
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* Granny Weatherwax getting caught with the kitten You curled up under her hat, then freaking out when You trots into the Cornucopia.
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* Granny Weatherwax getting caught with the kitten You curled up under her hat, blustering her way through a SayingTooMuch explanation of "the kitten just cries and cries if I leave her alone", then freaking out when You trots into the Cornucopia.
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'''All Moments Pages are SPOILERS OFF. Unmarked spoilers are below, so read at your own risk.'''
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* "You forgot the last three lines. [[spoiler:Strength enough to build a home, Time enough to hold a child, Love enough to break a heart.]]"
** Followed by a ''literal'' moment of "heartwarming" [[spoiler:when Tiffany channels the heat of the sun and melts the Wintersmith, leaving behind only the nail from his heart]].
*** [[spoiler:--And drew down the sun.]]
* Granny Weatherwax getting caught with [[spoiler:the kitten You curled up under her hat]].
** Followed by a ''literal'' moment of "heartwarming" [[spoiler:when Tiffany channels the heat of the sun and melts the Wintersmith, leaving behind only the nail from his heart]].
*** [[spoiler:--And drew down the sun.]]
* Granny Weatherwax getting caught with [[spoiler:the kitten You curled up under her hat]].
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* "You forgot the last three lines. [[spoiler:Strength Strength enough to build a home, Time enough to hold a child, Love enough to break a heart.]]"
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** Followed by a ''literal'' moment of "heartwarming"[[spoiler:when when Tiffany channels the heat of the sun and melts the Wintersmith, leaving behind only the nail from his heart]].
*** [[spoiler:--And drew down the sun.]]
heart.
* Granny Weatherwax getting caught with[[spoiler:the the kitten You curled up under her hat]].hat, then freaking out when You trots into the Cornucopia.
** Followed by a ''literal'' moment of "heartwarming"
*** [[spoiler:--And drew down the sun.]]
* Granny Weatherwax getting caught with
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* Granny getting caught with You under her hat is an additional Heartwarming for You: cats only sleep on or near a person that they trust. Despite Granny's initial chilly reception, You absolutely trusts the old witch and knows she's safe and loved.
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* Annagramma [[TookALevelInBadass coming to Tiffany's rescue]]. She not only shows the utility of the Earwig style of Wizard magic (using a fireball to melt the Wintersmith's [[Snowlems snow body]]), but while Tiffany is still in shock, lends her a fast broom and sends her off as quickly as possible.
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* Annagramma [[TookALevelInBadass coming to Tiffany's rescue]]. She not only shows the utility of the Earwig style of Wizard magic (using a fireball to melt the Wintersmith's [[Snowlems snow body]]), Snowlem), but while Tiffany is still in shock, lends her a fast broom and sends her off as quickly as possible.
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* Annagramma [[TookALevelInBadass coming to Tiffany's rescue]]. She not only shows the utility of the Earwig style of Wizard magic (using a fireball to melt the Wintersmith's [[snowlem]]), but while Tiffany is still in shock, lends her a fast broom and sends her off as quickly as possible.
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* Annagramma [[TookALevelInBadass coming to Tiffany's rescue]]. She not only shows the utility of the Earwig style of Wizard magic (using a fireball to melt the Wintersmith's [[snowlem]]), [[Snowlems snow body]]), but while Tiffany is still in shock, lends her a fast broom and sends her off as quickly as possible.
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* Annagramma [[TookALevelInBadass coming to Tiffany's rescue]]. She not only shows the utility of the Earwig style of Wizard magic (using a fireball to melt the snowman), but while Tiffany is still in shock, lends her a fast broom and sends her off as quickly as possible.
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* Annagramma [[TookALevelInBadass coming to Tiffany's rescue]]. She not only shows the utility of the Earwig style of Wizard magic (using a fireball to melt the snowman), Wintersmith's [[snowlem]]), but while Tiffany is still in shock, lends her a fast broom and sends her off as quickly as possible.
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* In the first chapter, Tiffany requires a bonfire so she can channel the heat to melt the snow and free the lambs. Her brother is also out there. When the bonfire runs low, her father throws his ''coat'' on the flames, and has to be held back from ''following'' it. For his children.
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* In the first chapter, Tiffany requires a bonfire so she can channel the heat to melt the snow and free the lambs. Her brother is also out there. When the bonfire runs low, her father throws his ''coat'' on the flames, and has to be held back from ''following'' it. For his children.children.
* Annagramma [[TookALevelInBadass coming to Tiffany's rescue]]. She not only shows the utility of the Earwig style of Wizard magic (using a fireball to melt the snowman), but while Tiffany is still in shock, lends her a fast broom and sends her off as quickly as possible.
* Annagramma [[TookALevelInBadass coming to Tiffany's rescue]]. She not only shows the utility of the Earwig style of Wizard magic (using a fireball to melt the snowman), but while Tiffany is still in shock, lends her a fast broom and sends her off as quickly as possible.
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* In the first chapter, Tiffany requires a bonfire so she can channel the heat to melt the snow and free the lambs. Her brother is also out there. When the bonfire runs low, her father throws his ''coat'' on the flames, and has to be held back from following it. For his children.
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* In the first chapter, Tiffany requires a bonfire so she can channel the heat to melt the snow and free the lambs. Her brother is also out there. When the bonfire runs low, her father throws his ''coat'' on the flames, and has to be held back from following ''following'' it. For his children.
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* In the first chapter, Tiffany requires a bonfire so she can channel the heat to melt the snow and free the lambs. Her brother is also out there. When the bonfire runs low, her father throws his ''coat'' on the flames, and has to be held back from following it. For his children.
