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** Dyna defending Ranma and the crew to her sisters when the latter tries to force the Kamikazes to leave after everything they did for her.
** Dyna's people have two types of body, [[CuteRobotGirl "life-shells"]], which look like child-sized (but not necessarily child-''proportioned'') dolls, and ''[[MiniMecha "war-shells"]], which are hulking, ape-like frames loaded with dial weaponry. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's barely half a dozen war-shells ''left'', because the gynoids have been at peace for so long they dismantled them.
** Dyna's people have two types of body, [[CuteRobotGirl "life-shells"]], which look like child-sized (but not necessarily child-''proportioned'') dolls, and ''[[MiniMecha "war-shells"]], which are hulking, ape-like frames loaded with dial weaponry. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's barely half a dozen war-shells ''left'', because the gynoids have been at peace for so long they dismantled them.
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** Dyna defending defends Ranma and the crew to her sisters when the latter tries to force the Kamikazes to leave after everything they did for her.
** Dyna's people have two types of body,[[CuteRobotGirl [[RobotGirl "life-shells"]], which look like child-sized (but not necessarily child-''proportioned'') dolls, and ''[[MiniMecha [[MiniMecha "war-shells"]], which are hulking, ape-like frames loaded with dial weaponry. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's there are barely half a dozen war-shells ''left'', because the gynoids have been at peace for so long they dismantled them.
** Dyna's people have two types of body,
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** Dyna defending Ranma and the crew to her sisters when the latter tries to force the Kamikazes to leave after everything they did for her.
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** When Kubera tries to use Harumi as a hostage in order to force Lilith to surrender, the swordsman refuses to submit and tells Lilith not to agree rather than let her go back to that monster.
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** Dyna's people have two types of body, "life-shells" and ''[[MiniMecha war-shells]]'', their bodies made using iron-cloud. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's only half a dozen of them ''with'' war-shells, Dyna included.
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** Dyna's people have two types of body, "life-shells" [[CuteRobotGirl "life-shells"]], which look like child-sized (but not necessarily child-''proportioned'') dolls, and ''[[MiniMecha war-shells]]'', their bodies made using iron-cloud. "war-shells"]], which are hulking, ape-like frames loaded with dial weaponry. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's only barely half a dozen of them ''with'' war-shells, Dyna included.war-shells ''left'', because the gynoids have been at peace for so long they dismantled them.
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** Dyna's people have two types of body, "life-shells'' and ''[[MiniMecha war-shells]]'', their bodies made using iron-cloud. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's only half a dozen of them ''with'' war-shells, Dyna included.
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** Dyna's people have two types of body, "life-shells'' "life-shells" and ''[[MiniMecha war-shells]]'', their bodies made using iron-cloud. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's only half a dozen of them ''with'' war-shells, Dyna included.
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** Dyna's people have two types of body, "[[RoboGirl life-shells]]'' and ''[[MiniMecha war-shells]]'', their bodies made using iron-cloud. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's only half a dozen of them ''with'' war-shells, Dyna included.
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** Dyna's people have two types of body, "[[RoboGirl life-shells]]'' "life-shells'' and ''[[MiniMecha war-shells]]'', their bodies made using iron-cloud. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's only half a dozen of them ''with'' war-shells, Dyna included.
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** Dyna ''arrives home''. That's heartwarming enough as it is.
** Dyna's people have two types of body, "[[RoboGirl life-shells]]'' and ''[[MiniMecha war-shells]]'', their bodies made using iron-cloud. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's only half a dozen of them ''with'' war-shells, Dyna included.
** When Dyna decides to leave Hestavar to be part of Ranma's crew practically permanently, her people have done something special for her, especially since iron-cloud is especially brittle below cloud level... They used the raw materials from Dyna's spider-tank body to make Dyna effectively a brand-new Hestavar war-shell, removing most of the drawbacks of her replacement body and giving her a way to continue to be part of the Kamikazes.
** Dyna ''arrives home''. That's heartwarming enough as it is.
** Dyna's people have two types of body, "[[RoboGirl life-shells]]'' and ''[[MiniMecha war-shells]]'', their bodies made using iron-cloud. By the time that Dyna finds her way to Hestavar, there's only half a dozen of them ''with'' war-shells, Dyna included.
** When Dyna decides to leave Hestavar to be part of Ranma's crew practically permanently, her people have done something special for her, especially since iron-cloud is especially brittle below cloud level... They used the raw materials from Dyna's spider-tank body to make Dyna effectively a brand-new Hestavar war-shell, removing most of the drawbacks of her replacement body and giving her a way to continue to be part of the Kamikazes.
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** The Skryre catch a break after the Kamikazes defeat Nosferatu, as the villagers of Wisborg are perfectly willing to work with them instead of forcing them to rummage through trash like the rats that they resemble, much to their shock.
** The Skryre catch a break after the Kamikazes defeat Nosferatu, as the villagers of Wisborg are perfectly willing to work with them instead of forcing them to rummage through trash like the rats that they resemble, much to their shock.
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** After the scrolls are destroyed, Ranma cheers up Dyna by pointing out that they at least know that Dyna's homeland is called Hestavar now.
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** After the scrolls are destroyed, Ranma cheers up Dyna by pointing out that they at least know that Dyna's homeland is called Hestavar now.now, and that even if she can't find it, she's always got the rest of the Kamikazes.
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** Penelope bonding with Dyna over their shared desire to learn more about their homelands.
** After the scrolls are destroyed, Ranma cheers up Dyna by pointing out that they at least know that Dyna's homeland is called Hestavar now.
** Penelope bonding with Dyna over their shared desire to learn more about their homelands.
** After the scrolls are destroyed, Ranma cheers up Dyna by pointing out that they at least know that Dyna's homeland is called Hestavar now.
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** When Ranma thinks Ukyo has been crushed under the bell she saved from falling on him, he's absolutely heartbroken. The ''instant'' he sees she's alive, he crushes her in a hug and scolds her not to scare him like that, with Ukyo only able to blush, smile like an idiot, and babble inanely as her lifelong crush embraces her.
** When assigned to laundry duty, Miriam mentions that, as a SharkMan, she can easily smell the blood in the boiling laundry vats and the resultant steam. When her stomach growls, the nuns flinch away in fear, leading to an indignant Kodachi calling them out for their FantasticRacism.
** Penelope and Harumi bonding over their shared love of books in the library. Harumi even privately assesses the mink's geeking out over the sheer size of the library as one of the most adorable things he's ever seen.
** When assigned to laundry duty, Miriam mentions that, as a SharkMan, she can easily smell the blood in the boiling laundry vats and the resultant steam. When her stomach growls, the nuns flinch away in fear, leading to an indignant Kodachi calling them out for their FantasticRacism.
** Penelope and Harumi bonding over their shared love of books in the library. Harumi even privately assesses the mink's geeking out over the sheer size of the library as one of the most adorable things he's ever seen.
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** The Kamikazes intervening when the criminal nuns are about to execute the Chaser sisters in cold blood.
** The Kamikazes intervening when the criminal nuns are about to execute the Chaser sisters in cold blood.
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** Miriam takes Harumi for a ride through the sea-clouds, letting her smaller boyfriend cling to her back as she rockets through the faux-ocean like only a sharkgirl can. When she realizes Penelope would like a go as well, she happily adds the skunk to her back and resumes cavorting like an oversized dolphin.
** When Ranma sees a fire break out in Thunderhead Bay, his ''immediate'' response is to go to help extinguish it.
** Harumi and Miriam both try to take all the blame for starting the fire that got the Kamikaze Pirates chased out of Thunderhead Bay, neither being willing to let the other get in trouble with Ranma for it.
** Miriam takes Harumi for a ride through the sea-clouds, letting her smaller boyfriend cling to her back as she rockets through the faux-ocean like only a sharkgirl can. When she realizes Penelope would like a go as well, she happily adds the skunk to her back and resumes cavorting like an oversized dolphin.
** When Ranma sees a fire break out in Thunderhead Bay, his ''immediate'' response is to go to help extinguish it.
** Harumi and Miriam both try to take all the blame for starting the fire that got the Kamikaze Pirates chased out of Thunderhead Bay, neither being willing to let the other get in trouble with Ranma for it.
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* In Chapter 27, after Nabiki discovers Shampoo's nightly habit of sneaking into Ranma's room to sleep cuddled up to him, Shampoo offers to let Nabiki join since there's plenty of room. The willingness to share shows how accepting Shampoo has become of the other girls.
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* In Chapter 25, the crew's sincere delight when they finally get confirmation from Shiki that Sky-Islands exist, and the knowledge of how to reach the Sky-Sea.
* When Harumi accidentally gets a glimpse of Penelope under her robes and learns that she's a Mink, he agrees to keep her secret.
* The Kamikazes giving Lilith food, after she'd been stranded there without it for a week.
* When Harumi accidentally gets a glimpse of Penelope under her robes and learns that she's a Mink, he agrees to keep her secret.
* The Kamikazes giving Lilith food, after she'd been stranded there without it for a week.
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* In Chapter 25, the crew's sincere delight for Dyna when they finally get confirmation from Shiki that Sky-Islands exist, and the knowledge of how to reach the Sky-Sea.
* ** When Harumi accidentally gets a glimpse of Penelope under her robes and learns that she's a Mink, he agrees to keep her secret.
* The Kamikazes giving Lilith food, after she'd been strandedthere in the Stomach Baron without it for a week.
* The Kamikazes giving Lilith food, after she'd been stranded
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* When Harumi accidentally gets a glimpse of Penelope under her robes and learns that she's a Mink, he agrees to keep her secret.
