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%%* Chapter 65. Sothis finally reunites with one of her children, Indech, who [[InelegantBlubbering completely breaks down in her arms]] out of sheer joy and repressed grief.
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%%* In the aftermath of the Hunt for the Chalice, Byleth is in a coma after being brought back from death's door. One by one, Jeralt, Bernadetta, Yuri, Ashe, Claude and Dimitri come to visit her and [[ConverseWithTheUnconscious tell her how much she means to them and plead with her to wake up soon]], with Claude coming close to a LoveConfession. Doubles as a TearJerker.
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* The scene in the Goddess Tower between Byleth, Claude and Dimitri in chapter 36. At Claude's prompting, Byleth finally [[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove spills her feelings for both boys, lamenting that she can't pursue a relationship with them due to being a lowly mercenary.]] Claude immediately declares that bullshit, confesses himself, and encourages Dimitri to do the same, resulting in their long-awaited RelationshipUpgrade.
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* Chapter 65. Sothis finally reunites with one of her children, Indech, who [[InelegantBlubbering completely breaks down in her arms]] out of sheer joy and repressed grief.
* Byleth and Sothis's relationship in general. While she frequently [[DeadpanSnarker snarks and teases her]], particularly when her romantic relationships are involved, Sothis is also very motherly and caring toward her host. Byleth in turn considers Sothis a beloved friend, to the point where insulting her is one of Byleth's {{Berserk Button}}s.
* In the aftermath of the Hunt for the Chalice, Byleth is in a coma after being brought back from death's door. One by one, Jeralt, Bernadetta, Yuri, Ashe, Claude and Dimitri come to visit her and [[ConverseWithTheUnconscious tell her how much she means to them and plead with her to wake up soon]], with Claude coming close to a LoveConfession. Doubles as a TearJerker.
* Byleth and Sothis's relationship in general. While she frequently [[DeadpanSnarker snarks and teases her]], particularly when her romantic relationships are involved, Sothis is also very motherly and caring toward her host. Byleth in turn considers Sothis a beloved friend, to the point where insulting her is one of Byleth's {{Berserk Button}}s.
* In the aftermath of the Hunt for the Chalice, Byleth is in a coma after being brought back from death's door. One by one, Jeralt, Bernadetta, Yuri, Ashe, Claude and Dimitri come to visit her and [[ConverseWithTheUnconscious tell her how much she means to them and plead with her to wake up soon]], with Claude coming close to a LoveConfession. Doubles as a TearJerker.
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* Byleth comes across Altina with the Agarthan children with Mercedes and Emile, Mercedes reading the story of "Stardust" to the children and the children listening in and talking about the story. It's small but it shows that the Agarthans and humans of Fodlan could get along when they get over their differences and biases.
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* In Chapter 85, Count Gloucester shows up and attempts to turn the Alliance against Claude for being a half-Almyran insult to the goddess. What follows is Bernadetta, Felix, Flayn, Dimitri, ''every single Golden Deer including Lorenz'', and finally Byleth (the Archbishop of the very faith the Count is using to justify his bigotry) going right up to bat to defend him.
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* Chapter 81 has Dimitri meeting his cousin, Altina, face to face and the meeting is sweet as Dimitri suggest that she and her mother should live in the palace after the war is over.
* In Chapter 85, Count Gloucester shows up and attempts to turn the Alliance against Claude for being a half-Almyran insult to the goddess. What follows is Bernadetta, Felix, Flayn, Dimitri, ''every single Golden Deer including Lorenz'', and finally Byleth (the Archbishop of the very faith the Count is using to justify his bigotry) going right up to bat to defendhim.him.
* Chapter 88 has the students react to Byleth's pregnancy in varying degrees but also spoke of concerns for her state before they all agree and vow to protect and help Byleth and win the war.
* In Chapter 85, Count Gloucester shows up and attempts to turn the Alliance against Claude for being a half-Almyran insult to the goddess. What follows is Bernadetta, Felix, Flayn, Dimitri, ''every single Golden Deer including Lorenz'', and finally Byleth (the Archbishop of the very faith the Count is using to justify his bigotry) going right up to bat to defend
* Chapter 88 has the students react to Byleth's pregnancy in varying degrees but also spoke of concerns for her state before they all agree and vow to protect and help Byleth and win the war.
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* Chapter 54. In an effort to keep morale from faltering in the wake of the former students turned warfighters from experiencing WarIsHell the hard way, Claude brings up a NoodleIncident involving Lorenz taking Sky Watch only for the wyvern to try and take off before he's properly saddled up. Funny in its own right, but it soon had the desired effect of breaking the tension--everyone starts bullshitting around the campfire about various expediency at Garreg Mach, which turns into Annette singing, pulling everyone into a very rowdy Kingdom campfire song, which prompts Constance to get up and start dancing, leading to other couples joining in as well. And at the end, Claude recalls an old conversation he had with his father...
-->'''Claude's father''': Who wins in a battle, Khalid?\\
'''Claude''': The side with more forces to bring to bear?\\
'''Claude's father''': No, my son. The warrior who wins is the one who has the most to fight for.\\
'''Claude''': If that's the case...there's no way we're going to lose.
-->'''Claude's father''': Who wins in a battle, Khalid?\\
'''Claude''': The side with more forces to bring to bear?\\
'''Claude's father''': No, my son. The warrior who wins is the one who has the most to fight for.\\
'''Claude''': If that's the case...there's no way we're going to lose.
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* Chapter 25 has Sothis firmly telling Marianne YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre (and informing her that Byleth is saying the same thing). For Marianne, who has spent her life praying to goddess for forgiveness and feeling unworthy, it means a lot to actually hear the goddess speaking to her personally.
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* In Chapter 85, Count Gloucester shows up and attempts to turn the Alliance against Claude for being half-Almyran. What follows is Bernadetta, Felix, Flayn, and ''every single Golden Deer'' culminating in Lorenz going right up to bat to defend him.
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* In Chapter 85, Count Gloucester shows up and attempts to turn the Alliance against Claude for being half-Almyran. a half-Almyran insult to the goddess. What follows is Bernadetta, Felix, Flayn, and Dimitri, ''every single Golden Deer'' culminating in Lorenz Deer including Lorenz'', and finally Byleth (the Archbishop of the very faith the Count is using to justify his bigotry) going right up to bat to defend him.
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** Rhea doesn't just apologize—she outright [[KneelBeforeFrodo kneels before Lysithea]], face pressed to her shoes, taking full responsibility for being more concerned with her own desires than with being watchful for possible Agarthan activity within Fódlan's political systems. Seteth does the same, deeply penitent for what he believes is his own negligence. Only a select few characters (Byleth, Hanneman, Linhardt, Edelgard, and Claude in their paired ending epilogue) canonically discover what happened to Lysithea, so this suggestion of what Rhea and Seteth's response might have been is really touching.
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** Rhea doesn't just apologize—she outright [[KneelBeforeFrodo kneels before Lysithea]], face pressed to her shoes, taking full responsibility for being more concerned with her own desires than with being watchful for possible Agarthan activity within Fódlan's political systems. Seteth does the same, deeply penitent for what he believes is his own negligence. Only a select few characters (Byleth, Hanneman, Linhardt, Edelgard, and Claude in their paired ending epilogue) canonically discover what happened to Lysithea, so this suggestion of what Rhea and Seteth's response might have been is really touching.touching.
* In Chapter 85, Count Gloucester shows up and attempts to turn the Alliance against Claude for being half-Almyran. What follows is Bernadetta, Felix, Flayn, and ''every single Golden Deer'' culminating in Lorenz going right up to bat to defend him.
* In Chapter 85, Count Gloucester shows up and attempts to turn the Alliance against Claude for being half-Almyran. What follows is Bernadetta, Felix, Flayn, and ''every single Golden Deer'' culminating in Lorenz going right up to bat to defend him.
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** Rhea doesn't just apologize—she outright [[KneelBeforeFrodo kneels before Lysithea]], face pressed to her shoes, taking full responsibility for being more concerned with her own desires than with being watchful for possible Agarthan activity within Fodlan's political systems. Seteth does the same, deeply penitent for what he believes is his own negligence. Only a select few characters (Byleth, Hanneman, Linhardt, Edelgard, and Claude in their paired ending epilogue) canonically discover what happened to Lysithea, so this suggestion of what Rhea and Seteth's response might have been is really touching.
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** Rhea doesn't just apologize—she outright [[KneelBeforeFrodo kneels before Lysithea]], face pressed to her shoes, taking full responsibility for being more concerned with her own desires than with being watchful for possible Agarthan activity within Fodlan's Fódlan's political systems. Seteth does the same, deeply penitent for what he believes is his own negligence. Only a select few characters (Byleth, Hanneman, Linhardt, Edelgard, and Claude in their paired ending epilogue) canonically discover what happened to Lysithea, so this suggestion of what Rhea and Seteth's response might have been is really touching.
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** Rhea doesn't just apologize—she outright [[KneelBeforeFrodo kneels before Lysithea]], face pressed to her shoes, taking full responsibility for being more concerned with her own desires than with being watchful for possible Agarthan activity within Fodlan's political systems. Seteth does the same, deeply penitent for what he believes is his own negligence. Only a select few characters ([[spoiler:Byleth, Hanneman, Linhardt, Edelgard, and Claude in their paired ending epilogue]]) canonically discover what happened to Lysithea, so this suggestion of what Rhea and Seteth's response might have been is really touching.
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** Rhea doesn't just apologize—she outright [[KneelBeforeFrodo kneels before Lysithea]], face pressed to her shoes, taking full responsibility for being more concerned with her own desires than with being watchful for possible Agarthan activity within Fodlan's political systems. Seteth does the same, deeply penitent for what he believes is his own negligence. Only a select few characters ([[spoiler:Byleth, (Byleth, Hanneman, Linhardt, Edelgard, and Claude in their paired ending epilogue]]) epilogue) canonically discover what happened to Lysithea, so this suggestion of what Rhea and Seteth's response might have been is really touching.
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* When Lysithea tells everyone about her two Crests and [[NightmareFuel their origin]], she ''immediately'' finds herself at the center of a massive group hug. Rhea deeply apologizes for leaving her and her family out to dry, and Claude and Atra then declare that they will force Agartha to fix what they've done to her, and everyone else backs them up.
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* When Lysithea tells everyone about her two Crests and [[NightmareFuel their origin]], she ''immediately'' finds herself at the center of a massive group hug. Rhea deeply apologizes for leaving her and her family out to dry, and Claude and Atra then declare that they will force Agartha to fix what they've done to her, and everyone else backs them up.up.
** Rhea doesn't just apologize—she outright [[KneelBeforeFrodo kneels before Lysithea]], face pressed to her shoes, taking full responsibility for being more concerned with her own desires than with being watchful for possible Agarthan activity within Fodlan's political systems. Seteth does the same, deeply penitent for what he believes is his own negligence. Only a select few characters ([[spoiler:Byleth, Hanneman, Linhardt, Edelgard, and Claude in their paired ending epilogue]]) canonically discover what happened to Lysithea, so this suggestion of what Rhea and Seteth's response might have been is really touching.
** Rhea doesn't just apologize—she outright [[KneelBeforeFrodo kneels before Lysithea]], face pressed to her shoes, taking full responsibility for being more concerned with her own desires than with being watchful for possible Agarthan activity within Fodlan's political systems. Seteth does the same, deeply penitent for what he believes is his own negligence. Only a select few characters ([[spoiler:Byleth, Hanneman, Linhardt, Edelgard, and Claude in their paired ending epilogue]]) canonically discover what happened to Lysithea, so this suggestion of what Rhea and Seteth's response might have been is really touching.
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* The scene in the Goddess Tower between Byleth, Claude and Dimitri in chapter 36. At Claude's prompting, Byleth finally [[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove spills her feelings for both boys, lamenting that she can't pursue a relationship with them due to being a lowly mercenary.]] Claude immediately declares that bullshit, confesses himself, and encourages Dimitri to do the same, resulting in their long-awaited RelationshipUpgrade.
* Chapter 65. Sothis finally reunites with one of her children, Indech, who [[InelegantBlubbering completely breaks down in her arms]] out of sheer joy and repressed grief.
* Byleth and Sothis's relationship in general. While she frequently [[DeadpanSnarker snarks and teases her]], particularly when her romantic relationships are involved, Sothis is also very motherly and caring toward her host. Byleth in turn considers Sothis a beloved friend, to the point where insulting her is one of Byleth's {{Berserk Button}}s.
* In the aftermath of the Hunt for the Chalice, Byleth is in a coma after being brought back from death's door. One by one, Jeralt, Bernadetta, Yuri, Ashe, Claude and Dimitri come to visit her and [[ConverseWithTheUnconscious tell her how much she means to them and plead with her to wake up soon]], with Claude coming close to a LoveConfession. Doubles as a TearJerker.
* When Lysithea tells everyone about her two Crests and [[NightmareFuel their origin]], she ''immediately'' finds herself at the center of a massive group hug. Rhea deeply apologizes for leaving her and her family out to dry, and Claude and Atra then declare that they will force Agartha to fix what they've done to her, and everyone else backs them up.
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* The scene in the Goddess Tower between Byleth, Claude and Dimitri in chapter 36. At Claude's prompting, Byleth finally [[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove spills her feelings for both boys, lamenting that she can't pursue a relationship with them due to being a lowly mercenary.]] Claude immediately declares that bullshit, confesses himself, and encourages Dimitri to do the same, resulting in their long-awaited RelationshipUpgrade.
* Chapter 65. Sothis finally reunites with one of her children, Indech, who [[InelegantBlubbering completely breaks down in her arms]] out of sheer joy and repressed grief.
* Byleth and Sothis's relationship in general. While she frequently [[DeadpanSnarker snarks and teases her]], particularly when her romantic relationships are involved, Sothis is also very motherly and caring toward her host. Byleth in turn considers Sothis a beloved friend, to the point where insulting her is one of Byleth's {{Berserk Button}}s.
* In the aftermath of the Hunt for the Chalice, Byleth is in a coma after being brought back from death's door. One by one, Jeralt, Bernadetta, Yuri, Ashe, Claude and Dimitri come to visit her and [[ConverseWithTheUnconscious tell her how much she means to them and plead with her to wake up soon]], with Claude coming close to a LoveConfession. Doubles as a TearJerker.
* When Lysithea tells everyone about her two Crests and [[NightmareFuel their origin]], she ''immediately'' finds herself at the center of a massive group hug. Rhea deeply apologizes for leaving her and her family out to dry, and Claude and Atra then declare that they will force Agartha to fix what they've done to her, and everyone else backs them up.
