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* Before it goes to hell, Ellie and Riley's run through the mall is packed with great stuff. The highlight is passing a working video arcade with Ellie just staring in wonder at it.
-->'''Ellie''': This is the most beautiful thing I've ever seen.
-->'''Ellie''': This is the most beautiful thing I've ever seen.
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*** The friendship between Frank and Tess is also very sweet. Frank being the one that first contacted her (and by extension, Joel) and bonding with her, even coming up with the radio code based on 80s Songs, akin to two friends at a sleepover.
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* When Ellie asks Joel who her favourite astronaut is, he immediately guesses (correctly) that it's Sally Ride. It's a small moment, but even before he formally accepts the role of her surrogate father he knows Ellie well enough to know the sort of person she'd admire, and given that Ellie doesn't comment on his guess, just firmly repeats what he said, it's clear that she knew he'd know.
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--->'''Tess''': Save who you can.
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--->'''Tess''': Save who you can.
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-->''Joel turns and stares at [[ReplacementGoldfish Ellie]] with a sad expression on his face.''
-->''Ellie realizes what he means and stares back at Joel with a similar expression.''
* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige and they proceed to share a laugh over the terrible jokes. The moment is very quickly ruined however when the Fireflies show up.
-->''Ellie realizes what he means and stares back at Joel with a similar expression.''
* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige and they proceed to share a laugh over the terrible jokes. The moment is very quickly ruined however when the Fireflies show up.
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-->''Ellie realizes what he means and stares back at Joel with a similar expression.''
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* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige and they proceed to share a laugh over the terrible jokes. Although the moment is very quickly ruined when the Fireflies show up.
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* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige and they proceed to share a laugh over the terrible jokes. Although the The moment is very quickly ruined however when the Fireflies show up.
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* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige and they proceed to share a laugh over the terrible jokes.
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* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige and they proceed to share a laugh over the terrible jokes. Although the moment is very quickly ruined when the Fireflies show up.
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* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige.
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* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige.oblige and they proceed to share a laugh over the terrible jokes.
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* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige and they proceed to share some laughs over the terrible jokes.
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* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige and they proceed to share some laughs over the terrible jokes.oblige.
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* After their conversation mentioned above, Joel further helps Ellie cheer up by asking her to read him some more "shitty puns" from her joke book. Ellie is more than happy to oblige and they proceed to share some laughs over the terrible jokes.
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* As they return to Jackson, Joel opens up to Ellie about what Sarah was like, and in turn, she finally tells him about Riley.
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* After Joel recounts the story of his near-suicide after Sarah's death, Ellie assumes Joel eventually just got over his daughter's death, but it turns out not to be the case.
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* After Joel recounts the story of his near-suicide after Sarah's death, Ellie assumes Joel eventually just got over his daughter's death, but it turns out not to be the case.he never really did until Ellie came into his life.
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* After Joel recounts the story of his near-suicide after Sarah's death, Ellie assumes Joel eventually just got over it, but it turns out not to be the case.
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* In the aftermath of her ordeal in Silver Lake, Ellie is withdrawn and quiet. Joel spends half the episode trying to cheer her up: finding a board game for her to play, scrounging up a can of Chef Boyardee and offering to teach her to play guitar. It isn't until they run into a docile giraffe that Ellie starts acting more like her old self, and Joel is visibly overjoyed at her giggles.
* After Joel recounts the story of his near-suicide after Sarah's death, Ellie assumes Joel eventually just got overit, his daughter's death, but it turns out not to be the case.
* After Joel recounts the story of his near-suicide after Sarah's death, Ellie assumes Joel eventually just got over
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-->''Joel turns and stares at Ellie with a sad expression on his face.''
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-->''Joel turns and stares at Ellie [[ReplacementGoldfish Ellie]] with a sad expression on his face.''
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* In the aftermath of her ordeal in Silver Lake, Ellie is withdrawn and quiet. Joel spends half the episode trying to cheer her up: finding a board game for her to play, scrounging up a can of Chef Boyardee and offering to teach her to play guitar. It isn't until they run into a docile giraffe that Ellie starts acting more like her old self, and Joel is visibly overjoyed at her giggles.
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* In the aftermath of her ordeal in Silver Lake, Ellie is withdrawn and quiet. Joel spends half the episode trying to cheer her up: finding a board game for her to play, scrounging up a can of Chef Boyardee and offering to teach her to play guitar. It isn't until they run into a docile giraffe that Ellie starts acting more like her old self, and Joel is visibly overjoyed at her giggles.
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* While Joel's massacre of the Fireflies was an extremely heinous act, he only did it out of love for Ellie. After what happened to Sarah, he couldn't bear to lose yet another daughter to a bunch of faceless soldiers.
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* While Joel's massacre of the Fireflies was an extremely heinous act, act that has possibly doomed humanity, he only did it out of love for Ellie. After what happened to Sarah, he couldn't bear to lose yet another daughter to a bunch of faceless soldiers.
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* While Joel's massacre of the Fireflies was an extremely heinous act, he only did it out of love for Ellie, a girl who's become like a daughter to him. After what happened to Sarah, he couldn't bear to lose yet another daughter to a bunch of faceless soldiers.
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* While Joel's massacre of the Fireflies was an extremely heinous act, he only did it out of love for Ellie, a girl who's become like a daughter to him.Ellie. After what happened to Sarah, he couldn't bear to lose yet another daughter to a bunch of faceless soldiers.
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* While Joel's massacre of the Fireflies was an extremely heinous act, he only did it out of love for Ellie, a girl who's become like a daughter to him, and he couldn't bear to lose another daughter after what happened to Sarah.
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* While Joel's massacre of the Fireflies was an extremely heinous act, he only did it out of love for Ellie, a girl who's become like a daughter to him, and him. After what happened to Sarah, he couldn't bear to lose yet another daughter after what happened to Sarah.a bunch of faceless soldiers.
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* While Joel's massacre of the Fireflies was an extremely heinous act, he only did it out of love for Ellie, a girl who's become like a daughter to him, and he couldn't bear to lose another daughter after what happened to Sarah.
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[[folder:Look for the Light]]
* After Joel recounts the story of his near-suicide after Sarah's death, Ellie assumes Joel eventually just got over it, but it turns out not to be the case.
-->'''Ellie:''' So time heals all wounds, I guess.
-->'''Joel (hesitantly):''' It wasn't time that did it.
-->''Joel turns and stares at Ellie with a sad expression on his face.''
-->''Ellie realizes what he means and stares back at Joel with a similar expression.''
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* After Joel recounts the story of his near-suicide after Sarah's death, Ellie assumes Joel eventually just got over it, but it turns out not to be the case.
-->'''Ellie:''' So time heals all wounds, I guess.
-->'''Joel (hesitantly):''' It wasn't time that did it.
-->''Joel turns and stares at Ellie with a sad expression on his face.''
-->''Ellie realizes what he means and stares back at Joel with a similar expression.''
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* Ellie caring for Joel in the basement of the home they're hiding in; giving him small drops of water, trying to give him food, and cuddling against him at night to sleep (with her head over his chest to hear his heartbeat).
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* Ellie caring for Joel in the basement of the home they're hiding in; giving him small drops of water, trying to give him food, and cuddling against him at night to sleep (with her head over on his chest to hear his heartbeat).
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* Ellie caring for Joel in the basement of the home they're hiding in; giving him small drops of water, trying to give him food, and cuddling against him at night to sleep (with her head over his chest to hear his heartbeat).
**Joel slowly leans his head over to rest against hers as she cuddles up next to him.
**Joel slowly leans his head over to rest against hers as she cuddles up next to him.
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* Joel gives a tight hug to comfort a traumatized Ellie after she escapes David.
** Joel calls her "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for Sarah), thereby finally admitting that he sees Ellie as his daughter in all but name.
** Joel calls her "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for Sarah), thereby finally admitting that he sees Ellie as his daughter in all but name.
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* Joel gives a tight hug to comfort a severely traumatized Ellie after she escapes David.
** Joel calls her "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for Sarah), thereby finally admitting out loud thathe sees Ellie as is his daughter in all but name.
** Joel calls her "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for Sarah), thereby finally admitting out loud that
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** Joel fought through hunger, exhaustion, pain, and fever, killing three cannibals to get to Ellie. And he did.
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** Joel fought through hunger, exhaustion, pain, and fever, killing three cannibals to get to Ellie. Ellie even though he could barely keep himself conscious hours earlier. And he did.did it.
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** Joel fought through hunger, exhaustion, pain, and fever, killing three cannibals to get to Ellie. And he did.
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** Joel calls Ellie "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for Sarah), thereby finally admitting that he sees Ellie as his daughter in all but name.
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** Joel calls Ellie her "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for Sarah), thereby finally admitting that he sees Ellie as his daughter in all but name.
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* Joel gives a tight hug to a traumatized Ellie after she escapes David, calling her "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for Sarah).
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* Joel gives a tight hug to comfort a traumatized Ellie after she escapes David, calling her David.
** Joel calls Ellie "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used forSarah).
Sarah), thereby finally admitting that he sees Ellie as his daughter in all but name.
** Joel calls Ellie "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for
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* Joel gives a tight hug to a traumatized Ellie after she escapes David, calling her "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for Sarah). Their bond is permanent.
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* Joel gives a tight hug to a traumatized Ellie after she escapes David, calling her "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for Sarah). Their bond is permanent.\n
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[[folder:When We Are In Need]]
* Joel gives a tight hug to a traumatized Ellie after she escapes David, calling her "baby girl" (the same affectionate name he used for Sarah). Their bond is permanent.
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