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* Upon returning to the ship from shore leave, Kirk encounters two crewmembers who had just had their engagement party while planetside. Having learned that the groom's mother was uncomfortable with him marrying someone who outranked him, Kirk put the man in for a well-earned promotion...the orders for which arrived during the party, to everyone's delight.
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* Spock's conversation with Sarek at the beginning, while couched in Vulcan logic, contains sporadic moments of good natured ribbing between the two, such as Sarek asking if Spock is indulging in human "small talk" and noting that it is logical that Spock should think of his mother and wish her well.
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* One word: Naraht. Just one of many of the ''Enterprise'' minor officers... except that he's a Horta. More so, he's said to be a son of the Horta that Kirk and Spock rescued in "[[Recap/StarTrekS1E25TheDevilInTheDark The Devil in the Dark]]." Minor, but still heartwarming.
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* One word: Naraht. Just one of many of the ''Enterprise'' minor officers... except that he's a Horta. More so, he's said to be a son of the Horta that Kirk and Spock rescued in "[[Recap/StarTrekS1E25TheDevilInTheDark The Devil in the Dark]]." Minor, Now he's working with the crew who realized the truth about his people and about-faced their position to protect them. Just as one would expect from the Federation's policy that adopting new alien races to the fold promotes general well-being, Nahraht is quite happy in his new posting and the ''Enterprise's'' various departments are constantly battling over who benefits from his [[EatDirtCheap unique abilities.]] It may be an almost throwaway moment, but it's still heartwarming.quite heartwarming.
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-->'''[=McCoy=]''': Pride and fear together have gone with all your falls before, and the one you're about to to take now if you're not careful. I would very much like to see you not take it. I am rather fond of you people. You scare me sometimes, but it would be a poor universe without you. But unless you move through your fear, which was the emotion Surak was most concerned about -- and rightly -- and come out the other side, the fall is waiting for you... Surak would be ''very'' disappointed in you if you blew up the planet. And so would we.
** [=McCoy=]'s efforts to keep the planet from making this mistake grow more impressive when Spock mentions the two had a SideBet on the outcome of the secession vote (which Spock won). [=McCoy=] [[DeterminedDefeatist apparently didn't have much hope that things would work out, but he tried his hardest anyway]]...and succeeded, meaning he poured his heart and soul into making sure he lost his own bet.
** [=McCoy=]'s efforts to keep the planet from making this mistake grow more impressive when Spock mentions the two had a SideBet on the outcome of the secession vote (which Spock won). [=McCoy=] [[DeterminedDefeatist apparently didn't have much hope that things would work out, but he tried his hardest anyway]]...and succeeded, meaning he poured his heart and soul into making sure he lost his own bet.
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-->'''[=McCoy=]''': Pride and fear together have gone with all your falls before, and the one you're about to to take now if you're not careful. I would very much like to see you not take it. I am rather fond of you people. You scare me sometimes, but it would be a poor universe without you. But unless you move through your fear, which was the emotion Surak was most concerned about -- and rightly -- and come out the other side, the fall is waiting for you... Surak would be ''very'' disappointed {{disappointed in you you}} if you blew up the planet. And so would we.
** [=McCoy=]'s efforts to keep the planet from making this mistake grow more impressive when Spock mentions the two had a SideBet on the outcome of the secession vote (which Spock won). The doctor may have bet that Vulcan would secede despite everyone's efforts, but his actions throughout imply he wasn't upset about being wrong. [=McCoy=] [[DeterminedDefeatist apparently didn't have much hope that things would work out, but hetried his hardest anyway]]...and succeeded, meaning he poured his heart and soul into making sure he lost his own bet.the battle anyway]]...and succeeded.
** [=McCoy=]'s efforts to keep the planet from making this mistake grow more impressive when Spock mentions the two had a SideBet on the outcome of the secession vote (which Spock won). The doctor may have bet that Vulcan would secede despite everyone's efforts, but his actions throughout imply he wasn't upset about being wrong. [=McCoy=] [[DeterminedDefeatist apparently didn't have much hope that things would work out, but he
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** [=McCoy=]'s efforts to keep the planet from making this mistake grow more impressive when Spock mentions the two had a SideBet on the outcome of the secession vote (which Spock won). [=McCoy=] [[DeterminedDefeatist apparently didn't have much hope that things would work out, but he tried his hardest anyway]]...and succeeded.
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** [=McCoy=]'s efforts to keep the planet from making this mistake grow more impressive when Spock mentions the two had a SideBet on the outcome of the secession vote (which Spock won). [=McCoy=] [[DeterminedDefeatist apparently didn't have much hope that things would work out, but he tried his hardest anyway]]...and succeeded. succeeded, meaning he poured his heart and soul into making sure he lost his own bet.
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* One word: Naraht. Just one of many of the ''Enterprise'' minor officers... except that he's a Horta. More so, he's heavily implied said to be a son of the Horta that Kirk and Spock rescued in "[[Recap/StarTrekS1E25TheDevilInTheDark The Devil in the Dark]]." Minor, but still heartwarming.
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** [=McCoy=]'s efforts to keep the planet from making this mistake grow more impressive when Spock mentions the two had a SideBet on the outcome of the secession vote (which Spock won). [=McCoy=] [[DeterminedDefeatist apparently didn't have much hope that things would work out, but he tried his hardest anyway]]...and succeeded.
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* Sarek's story, where he's taken from a tech lab and sent - for reasons he can't fathom at the time - to serve as staff for a new off-world embassy with this race the Vulcans just met called "Humans". He ends up enraptured by his experiences on Earth to where he impresses the Vulcan government - and his matriarch T'Pau - into being named ambassador.
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* Sarek's story, where he's taken from a tech lab and sent - for reasons he can't fathom at the time - sent to serve as staff for a new off-world embassy with this race the Vulcans just met called "Humans". He ends up enraptured by his experiences on Earth to where he impresses the Vulcan government - and his matriarch T'Pau - into being named ambassador.
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** The chapter ends with Sarek and Amanda staring down at their newborn son Spock, with the reader well aware of how important his character will become....
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** The chapter ends with Sarek and Amanda staring down at their newborn son Spock, with the reader well aware of how important his character will become....become....
* At the very end, the leader of the secession movement, now in custody, asks to see Kirk, Spock, and [=McCoy=]. The three have some of the best reasons of anyone caught up in the recent crisis to be angry at this person, but they remain gentlemen. Furthermore, this stuns the secession leader, who had expected mockery, and Duane hints that it may surprise said person into letting go of their anger and changing their life.
* At the very end, the leader of the secession movement, now in custody, asks to see Kirk, Spock, and [=McCoy=]. The three have some of the best reasons of anyone caught up in the recent crisis to be angry at this person, but they remain gentlemen. Furthermore, this stuns the secession leader, who had expected mockery, and Duane hints that it may surprise said person into letting go of their anger and changing their life.
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* One word: Naraht. Just one of many of the ''Enterprise'' minor officers... except that he's a Horta. More so, he's heavily implied to be a son of the Horta that Kirk and Spock rescued in "[[Recap/StarTrekS1E25TheDevilInTheDark The Devil in the Dark]]." Minor, but still heartwarming.
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-->'''[=McCoy=]''': Pride and fear together have gone with all your falls before, and the one you're about to to take now if you're not careful. I would very much like to see you not take it. I am rather fond of you people. You scare me sometimes, but it would be a poor universe without you. But unless you move through your fear, which was the emotion Surak was most concerned about -- and rightly -- and come out the other side, the fall is waiting for you...Surak would be ''very'' disappointed in you if you blew up the planet. And so would we.
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-->'''[=McCoy=]''': Pride and fear together have gone with all your falls before, and the one you're about to to take now if you're not careful. I would very much like to see you not take it. I am rather fond of you people. You scare me sometimes, but it would be a poor universe without you. But unless you move through your fear, which was the emotion Surak was most concerned about -- and rightly -- and come out the other side, the fall is waiting for you... Surak would be ''very'' disappointed in you if you blew up the planet. And so would we.
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** The chapter ends with Sarek and Amanda staring down at their newborn son Spock, with the reader well aware of how important his character will become...
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** The chapter ends with Sarek and Amanda staring down at their newborn son Spock, with the reader well aware of how important his character will become...become....
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* Surak. The Vulcan philosopher whose movement for Logic saves his whole planet as he hoped it would, even at the cost of his own life.
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* Surak. The Vulcan philosopher whose movement for Logic saves his whole planet as he hoped it would, even at the cost of his own life.life.
* Sarek's story, where he's taken from a tech lab and sent - for reasons he can't fathom at the time - to serve as staff for a new off-world embassy with this race the Vulcans just met called "Humans". He ends up enraptured by his experiences on Earth to where he impresses the Vulcan government - and his matriarch T'Pau - into being named ambassador.
** And then he meets Amanda. And we [[SlapSlapKiss find out why marrying her]] was "the logical thing to do."
** The chapter ends with Sarek and Amanda staring down at their newborn son Spock, with the reader well aware of how important his character will become...
* Sarek's story, where he's taken from a tech lab and sent - for reasons he can't fathom at the time - to serve as staff for a new off-world embassy with this race the Vulcans just met called "Humans". He ends up enraptured by his experiences on Earth to where he impresses the Vulcan government - and his matriarch T'Pau - into being named ambassador.
** And then he meets Amanda. And we [[SlapSlapKiss find out why marrying her]] was "the logical thing to do."
** The chapter ends with Sarek and Amanda staring down at their newborn son Spock, with the reader well aware of how important his character will become...
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-->'''[=McCoy=]''': Pride and fear together have gone with all your falls before, and the one you're about to to take now if you're not careful. I would very much like to see you not take it. I am rather fond of you people. You scare me sometimes, but it would be a poor universe without you. But unless you move through your fear, which was the emotion Surak was most concerned about -- and rightly -- and come out the other side, the fall is waiting for you...Surak would be ''very'' disappointed in you if you blew up the planet. And so would we.we.
* Surak. The Vulcan philosopher whose movement for Logic saves his whole planet as he hoped it would, even at the cost of his own life.
* Surak. The Vulcan philosopher whose movement for Logic saves his whole planet as he hoped it would, even at the cost of his own life.
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-->'''[=McCoy=]''': Pride and fear together have gone with all your falls before, and the one you're about to to take now if you're not careful. I would very much like to see yo ot take it. I am rather fond of you people. You scare me sometimes, but it would be a poor universe without you. But unless you move through your fear, which was the emotion Surak was most concerned about -- and rightly -- and come out the other side, the fall is waiting for you...Surak would be ''very'' disappointed in you if you blew up the planet. And so would we.
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-->'''[=McCoy=]''': Pride and fear together have gone with all your falls before, and the one you're about to to take now if you're not careful. I would very much like to see yo ot you not take it. I am rather fond of you people. You scare me sometimes, but it would be a poor universe without you. But unless you move through your fear, which was the emotion Surak was most concerned about -- and rightly -- and come out the other side, the fall is waiting for you...Surak would be ''very'' disappointed in you if you blew up the planet. And so would we.
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* [=McCoy=]'s compassion for the Vulcans. He ''really'' doesn't like their ideology, admits that they scare him sometimes, and could have had a major grudge against them for [[Recap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime what they nearly did to his two best friends.]] But it's clear that he honestly doesn't want them to hurt themselves.
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* [=McCoy=]'s compassion for the Vulcans. He ''really'' doesn't like their ideology, admits that they scare him sometimes, and could have had a major grudge against them for [[Recap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime what they nearly did to his two best friends.]] But it's clear that he honestly doesn't want them to hurt themselves.themselves.
-->'''[=McCoy=]''': Pride and fear together have gone with all your falls before, and the one you're about to to take now if you're not careful. I would very much like to see yo ot take it. I am rather fond of you people. You scare me sometimes, but it would be a poor universe without you. But unless you move through your fear, which was the emotion Surak was most concerned about -- and rightly -- and come out the other side, the fall is waiting for you...Surak would be ''very'' disappointed in you if you blew up the planet. And so would we.
-->'''[=McCoy=]''': Pride and fear together have gone with all your falls before, and the one you're about to to take now if you're not careful. I would very much like to see yo ot take it. I am rather fond of you people. You scare me sometimes, but it would be a poor universe without you. But unless you move through your fear, which was the emotion Surak was most concerned about -- and rightly -- and come out the other side, the fall is waiting for you...Surak would be ''very'' disappointed in you if you blew up the planet. And so would we.
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* One word: Naraht. Just one of many of the ''Enterprise'' minor officers...except that he's a Horta. More so, he's heavily implied to be a son of the Horta that Kirk and Spock rescued in "The Devil in the Dark." Minor, but still heartwarming.
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* One word: Naraht. Just one of many of the ''Enterprise'' minor officers...except that he's a Horta. More so, he's heavily implied to be a son of the Horta that Kirk and Spock rescued in "The "[[Recap/StarTrekS1E25TheDevilInTheDark The Devil in the Dark.Dark]]." Minor, but still heartwarming.
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* [=McCoy=]'s compassion for the Vulcans. He ''really'' doesn't like their ideology, admits that they scare him sometimes, and could have had a major grudge against them for [[Tecap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime what they nearly did to his two best friends.]] But it's clear that he honestly doesn't want them to hurt themselves.
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* [=McCoy=]'s compassion for the Vulcans. He ''really'' doesn't like their ideology, admits that they scare him sometimes, and could have had a major grudge against them for [[Tecap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime [[Recap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime what they nearly did to his two best friends.]] But it's clear that he honestly doesn't want them to hurt themselves.
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* [=McCoy=]'s compassion for the Vulcans. He ''really'' doesn't like their ideology, admits that they scare him sometimes, and could have had a major grudge against them for what they nearly did to his two best friends. But it's clear that he honestly doesn't want them to hurt themselves.
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* [=McCoy=]'s compassion for the Vulcans. He ''really'' doesn't like their ideology, admits that they scare him sometimes, and could have had a major grudge against them for [[Tecap/StarTrekS2E1AmokTime what they nearly did to his two best friends. friends.]] But it's clear that he honestly doesn't want them to hurt themselves.
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* Kirk's encounters at a party partway through the book, specifically Savesh and T'Mahdt. It's encouraging to see that, amidst all the arrogance and bigotry sometimes associated with the breed, there are decent Vulcans besides Spock himself.
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* Kirk's encounters at a party partway through the book, specifically Savesh and T'Mahdt. It's encouraging to see that, amidst all the arrogance and bigotry sometimes associated with the breed, there are decent Vulcans besides Spock himself.himself.
* [=McCoy=]'s compassion for the Vulcans. He ''really'' doesn't like their ideology, admits that they scare him sometimes, and could have had a major grudge against them for what they nearly did to his two best friends. But it's clear that he honestly doesn't want them to hurt themselves.
* [=McCoy=]'s compassion for the Vulcans. He ''really'' doesn't like their ideology, admits that they scare him sometimes, and could have had a major grudge against them for what they nearly did to his two best friends. But it's clear that he honestly doesn't want them to hurt themselves.
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* Kirk's encounters at the party on Vulcan. It's encouraging to see that, amidst all the arrogance and bigotry sometimes associated with the breed, there are decent Vulcans besides Spock himself.
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* Kirk's encounters at the a party on Vulcan.partway through the book, specifically Savesh and T'Mahdt. It's encouraging to see that, amidst all the arrogance and bigotry sometimes associated with the breed, there are decent Vulcans besides Spock himself.
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* Kirk's encounters at the party on Vulcan. It's nice to see that, amidst all the arrogance and bigotry sometimes associated with the breed, there are decent Vulcans besides Spock himself.
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* Kirk's encounters at the party on Vulcan. It's nice encouraging to see that, amidst all the arrogance and bigotry sometimes associated with the breed, there are decent Vulcans besides Spock himself.
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* One word: Naraht. Just one of many of the ''Enterprise'' minor officers...except that he's a Horta. More so, he's heavily implied to be a son of the Horta that Kirk and Spock rescued in "The Devil in the Dark." Minor, but still heartwarming.heartwarming.
* Kirk's encounters at the party on Vulcan. It's nice to see that, amidst all the arrogance and bigotry sometimes associated with the breed, there are decent Vulcans besides Spock himself.
* Kirk's encounters at the party on Vulcan. It's nice to see that, amidst all the arrogance and bigotry sometimes associated with the breed, there are decent Vulcans besides Spock himself.
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