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At the end of chapter 11, Gil takes Punch and Judy to see his father, the first time he's seen them in eighteen years. It goes ''much'' better than in canon.
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* At the end of chapter 11, Gil takes Punch and Judy to see his father, the first time he's seen them in eighteen years. It goes ''much'' better than in canon.
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At the end of chapter 11, Gil takes Punch and Judy to see his father, the first time he's seen them in eighteen years. It goes ''much'' better than in canon.
-->"It's been too long," Lilith said.\\
Gil and Boris exchanged equally bewildered looks, but not nearly as much as when Klaus gave a full-bellied laugh and embraced his old friends.\\
It looked, astoundingly, and for a minimum of at least ''several'' seconds, that the Baron was actually joyful.
-->"It's been too long," Lilith said.\\
Gil and Boris exchanged equally bewildered looks, but not nearly as much as when Klaus gave a full-bellied laugh and embraced his old friends.\\
It looked, astoundingly, and for a minimum of at least ''several'' seconds, that the Baron was actually joyful.
