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Weblinks Are Not Examples, so i added descriptions.
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* Molly's YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre pep talk with Kip. Which culminates in [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/35 this]]. Aww.
* [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/40 "You did the right thing."]]
* [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/40 "You did the right thing."]]
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* Molly's YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre pep talk with Kip. Which culminates in [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/35 this]].a hug]]. Aww.
* [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/40"You Kip tells Roy he did the right thing."]]thing in talking to Wallace.]] He immediately gets hugged in response, and takes it.
* [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/40
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* Ben assuring Wallace that he can tell him anything that bothers him. He doesn't have to downplay his feelings to him. It's nice to see Wallace befriending people, when his first few days haven't been the greatest.
** Props to Roy and Molly who give him a chance and treat him as if he's an old friend they knew for years.
** Props to Roy and Molly who give him a chance and treat him as if he's an old friend they knew for years.
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Tweaked a bit that might come across as natter. Hope that\'s okay
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* Molly's YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre pep talk with Kip. Aww.
** Which culminates in [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/35 this]].
** Which culminates in [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/35 this]].
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* Molly's YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre pep talk with Kip. Aww.
**Which culminates in [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/35 this]]. Aww.
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* The entire [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/45 dinner date]] with Molly, Kip and Roy getting to know Wallace.
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* The entire [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/45 dinner date]] with Molly, Kip and Roy getting to know Wallace.Wallace.
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* [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/40 "You did the right thing."]]
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* [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/40 "You did the right thing."]]"]]
* The entire [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/45 dinner date]] with Molly, Kip and Roy getting to know Wallace.
* The entire [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/45 dinner date]] with Molly, Kip and Roy getting to know Wallace.
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* Molly's YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre pep talk with Kip. Aww.
** Which culminates in [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/35 this]].
* [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/40 "You did the right thing."]]
** Which culminates in [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/35 this]].
* [[http://monsterkind.enenkay.com/comic/40 "You did the right thing."]]
