Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
No meta moment, see this query.
Changed line(s) 38,39 (click to see context) from:
* In the ''Growing Pains'' timeline, what ultimately prevented Flowey from carrying out the plan that turned him back into Asriel in ''Monster in the Mountain'' was a song which Frisk sang to them. Once again, Frisk sings another song to prevent Asriel from severing their relationship and doom monsterkind forever.
* {{Meta}}-wise, WordOfGod stated that the story was original slated to be a [[PornWithoutPlot pure smut-fic]] at its conception, but changed it to a fleshed-out plot because they "think Asriel and Frisk deserve better than that." And so for the first 14 chapters, we have a gripping and heartfelt narrative as Frisk forms a bond of love with Asriel that goes deeper than sexual gratification.
* {{Meta}}-wise, WordOfGod stated that the story was original slated to be a [[PornWithoutPlot pure smut-fic]] at its conception, but changed it to a fleshed-out plot because they "think Asriel and Frisk deserve better than that." And so for the first 14 chapters, we have a gripping and heartfelt narrative as Frisk forms a bond of love with Asriel that goes deeper than sexual gratification.
to:
* In the ''Growing Pains'' timeline, what ultimately prevented Flowey from carrying out the plan that turned him back into Asriel in ''Monster in the Mountain'' was a song which Frisk sang to them. Once again, Frisk sings another song to prevent Asriel from severing their relationship and doom monsterkind forever.
* {{Meta}}-wise, WordOfGod stated that the story was original slated to be a [[PornWithoutPlot pure smut-fic]] at its conception, but changed it to a fleshed-out plot because they "think Asriel and Frisk deserve better than that." And so for the first 14 chapters, we have a gripping and heartfelt narrative as Frisk forms a bond of love with Asriel that goes deeper than sexual gratification.forever.
* {{Meta}}-wise, WordOfGod stated that the story was original slated to be a [[PornWithoutPlot pure smut-fic]] at its conception, but changed it to a fleshed-out plot because they "think Asriel and Frisk deserve better than that." And so for the first 14 chapters, we have a gripping and heartfelt narrative as Frisk forms a bond of love with Asriel that goes deeper than sexual gratification.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 38 (click to see context) from:
* In the ''Growing Pains'' timeline, what ultimately prevented Flowey from carrying out the plan that turned him back into Asriel in ''Monster in the Mountain'' was a song which Frisk sang to them. Once again, Frisk sings another song to prevent Asriel from severing their relationship and doom .onsterkind forever.
to:
* In the ''Growing Pains'' timeline, what ultimately prevented Flowey from carrying out the plan that turned him back into Asriel in ''Monster in the Mountain'' was a song which Frisk sang to them. Once again, Frisk sings another song to prevent Asriel from severing their relationship and doom .onsterkind doom monsterkind forever.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* In the ''Growing Pains'' timeline, what ultimately prevented Flowey from carrying out the plan that turned him back into Asriel in ''Monster in the Mountain'' was a song which Frisk sang to them. Once again, Frisk sings another song to prevent Asriel from severing their relationship and doom .onsterkind forever.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Ironically, Asriel's selfish sacrifice of the monsters made this possible by wiping out the entire year of their interaction with humanity from existence, allowing him to seamlessly guide Frisk into Ligaya's embrace and ensuring they still have a family.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 33 (click to see context) from:
* In a twisted sense, amidst the horror of Asriel destroying the world, the fact that Frisk's soul was immediately returned to them after he loaded a save file indicates he was completely genuine in the implementation of the contract.
to:
* In a twisted sense, amidst the horror of Asriel destroying the world, there are two new indications that Asriel was completely genuine in his love for Frisk.
** First, the fact that he was even willing to reveal such a horrific AwfulTruth, something that sever the love relationship for almost anyone, indicates just how much his care for Frisk overpowers his need to possess their love. Asriel never needed to reveal it, and was even discouraged to do so by Frisk.
** Second, the fact that Frisk's soul was immediately returned to them after he loaded a save fileindicates he was completely genuine in indicated the implementation of the contract.contract and its terms were real and binding, and not a lightshow he conjured to trick Frisk.
** First, the fact that he was even willing to reveal such a horrific AwfulTruth, something that sever the love relationship for almost anyone, indicates just how much his care for Frisk overpowers his need to possess their love. Asriel never needed to reveal it, and was even discouraged to do so by Frisk.
** Second, the fact that Frisk's soul was immediately returned to them after he loaded a save file
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 33 (click to see context) from:
* Amidst the horror of Asriel destroying the world, the fact that Frisk's soul was immediately returned to them, even after he loaded a save file, indicates he was completely genuine in the implementation of the contract.
to:
* Amidst In a twisted sense, amidst the horror of Asriel destroying the world, the fact that Frisk's soul was immediately returned to them, even them after he loaded a save file, file indicates he was completely genuine in the implementation of the contract.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* Amidst the horror of Asriel destroying the world, the fact that Frisk's soul was immediately returned to them, even after he loaded a save file, indicates he was completely genuine in the implementation of the contract.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* Chapter 19:
** Asriel's concern for Frisk's wellbeing.
** Meeting Sans and Toriel.
** Frisk's proposal.
** Asriel's concern for Frisk's wellbeing.
** Meeting Sans and Toriel.
** Frisk's proposal.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 28 (click to see context) from:
to:
* Asriel loathes humanity and is disgusted by the thought of turning into one. In spite of this, in chapter 18 he demonstrates a willingness to shapeshift into one so he can go out in public with Frisk. He loves them that much.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 7,8 (click to see context) from:
'''-->--Asriel'''
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 7,8 (click to see context) from:
'''--Asriel'''
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
-> ''“Whatever happens… in the future… I’ll never stop loving you, I promise”'' '''--Asriel'''
to:
-> ''“Whatever happens… in the future… I’ll never stop loving you, I promise”'' promise”''
'''--Asriel'''
'''--Asriel'''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
-> ''“Whatever happens… in the future… I’ll never stop loving you, I promise”'' '''-Asriel'''
to:
-> ''“Whatever happens… in the future… I’ll never stop loving you, I promise”'' '''-Asriel'''
'''--Asriel'''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6,7 (click to see context) from:
-> ''“Whatever happens… in the future… I’ll never stop loving you, I promise”''
to:
-> ''“Whatever happens… in the future… I’ll never stop loving you, I promise”''
promise”'' '''-Asriel'''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
-> ''“Whatever happens… in the future… I’ll never stop loving you, I promise”''
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 12 (click to see context) from:
** By the same token, he never takes sexual advantage of Frisk, and is initially repulsed by the mere suggestion. He stops Frisk from stripping when he ordered it as a punishment (on reflex), and [[{{Defied}} does not]] [[ConfessionTriggersConsummation engage in sex the moment he declares their love]] even if his RagingStiffie would be a perfect setup in any PornWithPlot fic.
to:
** By the same token, he He also never takes sexual advantage of Frisk, and is initially repulsed even feigns revulsion by the mere suggestion. suggestion before his confession. He stops Frisk from stripping when he ordered it as a punishment (on reflex), and [[{{Defied}} does not]] [[ConfessionTriggersConsummation engage in sex the moment he declares their love]] even if his RagingStiffie would be a perfect setup in any PornWithPlot fic.fic.
** When they ''do'' start to engage in sexual activities, Asriel never attempts to actively nor passively force himself on Frisk, and the two remain cognizant of their partner's consent and concerns throughout the activity.
** When they ''do'' start to engage in sexual activities, Asriel never attempts to actively nor passively force himself on Frisk, and the two remain cognizant of their partner's consent and concerns throughout the activity.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 25 (click to see context) from:
* {{Meta}}-wise, WordOfGod stated that the story was original slated to be a [[PornWithoutPlot pure smut-fic]] at its conception, but changed it to a fleshed-out plot because they "think Asriel and Frisk deserve better than that." 84,000 words in, and there is no {{Lemon}} to speak of. Instead, we have a gripping and heartfelt narrative as Frisk forms a bond of love with Asriel that goes deeper than sexual gratification.
to:
* {{Meta}}-wise, WordOfGod stated that the story was original slated to be a [[PornWithoutPlot pure smut-fic]] at its conception, but changed it to a fleshed-out plot because they "think Asriel and Frisk deserve better than that." 84,000 words in, and there is no {{Lemon}} to speak of. Instead, And so for the first 14 chapters, we have a gripping and heartfelt narrative as Frisk forms a bond of love with Asriel that goes deeper than sexual gratification.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
* Doubling as a TearJerker, Frisk's AdaptationalBackstoryChange reveals they are an orphan. Despite this, they have a loving aunt and cousin who raised them when their parents died in a car accident. This accident happens to be right next to Mount Ebott. It's good to know that, while Frisk may have come to the mountain for an unhappy reason, there are still people that love them and care for them out on the surface.
to:
* Doubling as a TearJerker, Frisk's AdaptationalBackstoryChange reveals they are an orphan. Despite this, they have a loving aunt and cousin who raised them when their parents died in a car accident. This accident happens to be right next to Mount Ebott. It's good to know that, while Frisk may have come to the mountain for an unhappy reason, reason as a child, there are still people that love them and care for them out on the surface.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
* Doubles as a TearJerker. Frisk's AdaptationalBackstoryChange reveals they are an orphan. Despite this, they have a loving aunt and cousin who raised them when their parents died in a car accident. This accident happens to be right next to Mount Ebott. It's good to know that, while Frisk may have come to the mountain for an unhappy reason, there are still people that love them and care for them out on the surface.
to:
* Doubles Doubling as a TearJerker. TearJerker, Frisk's AdaptationalBackstoryChange reveals they are an orphan. Despite this, they have a loving aunt and cousin who raised them when their parents died in a car accident. This accident happens to be right next to Mount Ebott. It's good to know that, while Frisk may have come to the mountain for an unhappy reason, there are still people that love them and care for them out on the surface.
Changed line(s) 13 (click to see context) from:
* In chapter 11, Asriel hosts a birthday party for Frisk, and the gift he provides them is an opulent crown he crafted himself. Sounds like someone wants to crown their queen, ([[PronounTrouble or rather, their sovereign]]).
to:
* In chapter 11, Asriel hosts a birthday party for Frisk, and the gift he provides them is an opulent crown he crafted himself. Sounds like someone wants to crown their queen, queen ([[PronounTrouble or rather, their sovereign]]).
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 14 (click to see context) from:
* Their first hug (pictured). It reduces Asriel, who has never been hugged in all his time spent as a god, into a trembling wreck.
to:
* Their Frisk and Asriel's first hug (pictured). It almost reduces Asriel, who has never been hugged in all his time spent as a god, into a trembling wreck.
Changed line(s) 16 (click to see context) from:
** There is a bit of FridgeBrilliance when one realizes this last hug may very well be the hug Frisk delivers on the pacifist route of ''Undertale''.
to:
** There is a bit of FridgeBrilliance comes into play when one realizes this last hug may very well be the hug Frisk delivers on the pacifist route of ''Undertale''.''Undertale''.
** The second time they hug, it gets a slightly bigger reaction out of Asriel with silent sobbing.
** The second time they hug, it gets a slightly bigger reaction out of Asriel with silent sobbing.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 11 (click to see context) from:
* For all of his {{Jerkass}} tendencies and dismissal of humans as a species, Asriel never directly or intentionally hurts Frisk, even when provoked, and goes to unusual lengths to accommodate them. This culminates when Frisk slips and falls into Hotland's magma chamber, where the god's first instinct is to fly down and try and catch Frisk. Though he may deny it, [[WhatYouAreInTheDark deep down Asriel really cares for Frisk.]]
to:
* For all of his {{Jerkass}} tendencies and dismissal of humans as a species, Asriel never directly or nor intentionally hurts Frisk, even when provoked, and goes to unusual lengths to accommodate them. This culminates when Frisk slips and falls into Hotland's magma chamber, where the god's first instinct is to fly down and try and catch Frisk. Though he may deny it, [[WhatYouAreInTheDark deep down Asriel really cares for Frisk.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* Doubles as a TearJerker. Frisk's AdaptationalBackstoryChange reveals they are an orphan. Despite this, they have a loving aunt and cousin who raised them when their parents died in a car accident. This accident happens to be right next to Mount Ebott. It's good to know that, while Frisk may have come to the mountain for an unhappy reason, there are still people that love them and care for them out on the surface.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6 (click to see context) from:
Despite everything, it's still them.
to:
Despite everything, it's Frisk never experiencing their adventure in the Underground, and despite Asriel ascending into an EvilGod with the capacity to cause much destruction upon the humans he hates, the kindness that existed in both of them when they were children still them.persists to this day.
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
* In chapter 11, Asriel hosts a birthday party for Frisk, and the gift he provides them is an opulent crown he crafted himself. Sounds like someone wants to crown their queen, ([[GenderVocabularySlip or rather, their sovereign]]).
to:
** By the same token, he never takes sexual advantage of Frisk, and is initially repulsed by the mere suggestion. He stops Frisk from stripping when he ordered it as a punishment (on reflex), and [[{{Defied}} does not]] [[ConfessionTriggersConsummation engage in sex the moment he declares their love]] even if his RagingStiffie would be a perfect setup in any PornWithPlot fic.
* In chapter 11, Asriel hosts a birthday party for Frisk, and the gift he provides them is an opulent crown he crafted himself. Sounds like someone wants to crown their queen,([[GenderVocabularySlip ([[PronounTrouble or rather, their sovereign]]).
* In chapter 11, Asriel hosts a birthday party for Frisk, and the gift he provides them is an opulent crown he crafted himself. Sounds like someone wants to crown their queen,
Deleted line(s) 12,13 (click to see context) :
--> '''Frisk:''' “Did our hug last night make you cry last night? Is that why you left the way you did?”
--> ...
--> ...
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
* In chapter 11, Asriel hosts a birthday party for Frisk, and the gift he provides them is an opulent crown he crafted himself. Sounds like someone wants to crown their queen, (or rather, their sovereign).
to:
* In chapter 11, Asriel hosts a birthday party for Frisk, and the gift he provides them is an opulent crown he crafted himself. Sounds like someone wants to crown their queen, (or ([[GenderVocabularySlip or rather, their sovereign).sovereign]]).
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8,11 (click to see context) from:
* For all of his belligerent attitude, Asriel never directly or intentionally hurts Frisk. This culminates when Frisk slips and falls into Hotland's magma chamber, where his first instinct is to fly down and try and catch Frisk. This is in spite of, and demeaning Frisk as a slave the day befr
* In chapter 11,
* By chapter 13, the cat is finally out of the bag. Asriel makes a LoveConfession to Frisk.
* In chapter 11,
* By chapter 13, the cat is finally out of the bag. Asriel makes a LoveConfession to Frisk.
to:
* Frisk's binding with Asriel was not born out of any material temptation by the god, or their lust for him. Rather, it was a sacrifice that they made on behalf of Napstablook, trading their freedom for his. 11 years later, and Frisk is still the same compassionate human they were at age 9.
* For all of hisbelligerent attitude, {{Jerkass}} tendencies and dismissal of humans as a species, Asriel never directly or intentionally hurts Frisk. Frisk, even when provoked, and goes to unusual lengths to accommodate them. This culminates when Frisk slips and falls into Hotland's magma chamber, where his the god's first instinct is to fly down and try and catch Frisk. This is in spite of, and demeaning Frisk as a slave the day befr
Though he may deny it, [[WhatYouAreInTheDark deep down Asriel really cares for Frisk.]]
* In chapter11,
11, Asriel hosts a birthday party for Frisk, and the gift he provides them is an opulent crown he crafted himself. Sounds like someone wants to crown their queen, (or rather, their sovereign).
* Their first hug (pictured). It reduces Asriel, who has never been hugged in all his time spent as a god, into a trembling wreck.
--> '''Frisk:''' “Did our hug last night make you cry last night? Is that why you left the way you did?”
--> ...
--> '''Asriel:''' “I was a child… the last time I had a proper hug… and… it… didn’t occur to me that it would affect me so strongly the way it did.”
** There is a bit of FridgeBrilliance when one realizes this last hug may very well be the hug Frisk delivers on the pacifist route of ''Undertale''.
* By chapter 13, the cat is finally out of thebag. bag: Asriel makes has loved Frisk since day 1, but feared the consequences of having a romantic relationship with Frisk until his LoveConfession the same chapter. Bonus points when you consider the context of the situation with ''Undertale''. For 11 years and who-knows-how-many timelines, he has been utterly alone. Frisk is the last remaining person Asriel has any connection to. For him, they are his last source of love in the world.
--> '''Asriel:''' “Your forgiving attitude has always made me feel hopeful.”
--> '''Frisk:''' “Good, stay hopeful because I’m here toFrisk.
stay babe, we’ll never be lonely again.”
--> '''Asriel:''' “...Never?”
--> '''Frisk:''' “Never, I promise.”
--> '''Asriel:''' “I promise as well.”
* For all of his
* In chapter
* Their first hug (pictured). It reduces Asriel, who has never been hugged in all his time spent as a god, into a trembling wreck.
--> '''Frisk:''' “Did our hug last night make you cry last night? Is that why you left the way you did?”
--> ...
--> '''Asriel:''' “I was a child… the last time I had a proper hug… and… it… didn’t occur to me that it would affect me so strongly the way it did.”
** There is a bit of FridgeBrilliance when one realizes this last hug may very well be the hug Frisk delivers on the pacifist route of ''Undertale''.
* By chapter 13, the cat is finally out of the
--> '''Asriel:''' “Your forgiving attitude has always made me feel hopeful.”
--> '''Frisk:''' “Good, stay hopeful because I’m here to
--> '''Asriel:''' “...Never?”
--> '''Frisk:''' “Never, I promise.”
--> '''Asriel:''' “I promise as well.”
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
!'''As a Moments subpage, all spoilers are unmarked [[Administrivia/SpoilersOff as per policy.]] Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.'''
[[quoteright:152:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/hugs_7.png]]
[[caption-width-right:152:''It was so nice, they didn’t want to let go of him...'']]
Despite everything, it's still them.
----
* For all of his belligerent attitude, Asriel never directly or intentionally hurts Frisk. This culminates when Frisk slips and falls into Hotland's magma chamber, where his first instinct is to fly down and try and catch Frisk. This is in spite of, and demeaning Frisk as a slave the day befr
* In chapter 11,
* By chapter 13, the cat is finally out of the bag. Asriel makes a LoveConfession to Frisk.
* {{Meta}}-wise, WordOfGod stated that the story was original slated to be a [[PornWithoutPlot pure smut-fic]] at its conception, but changed it to a fleshed-out plot because they "think Asriel and Frisk deserve better than that." 84,000 words in, and there is no {{Lemon}} to speak of. Instead, we have a gripping and heartfelt narrative as Frisk forms a bond of love with Asriel that goes deeper than sexual gratification.
[[quoteright:152:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/hugs_7.png]]
[[caption-width-right:152:''It was so nice, they didn’t want to let go of him...'']]
Despite everything, it's still them.
----
* For all of his belligerent attitude, Asriel never directly or intentionally hurts Frisk. This culminates when Frisk slips and falls into Hotland's magma chamber, where his first instinct is to fly down and try and catch Frisk. This is in spite of, and demeaning Frisk as a slave the day befr
* In chapter 11,
* By chapter 13, the cat is finally out of the bag. Asriel makes a LoveConfession to Frisk.
* {{Meta}}-wise, WordOfGod stated that the story was original slated to be a [[PornWithoutPlot pure smut-fic]] at its conception, but changed it to a fleshed-out plot because they "think Asriel and Frisk deserve better than that." 84,000 words in, and there is no {{Lemon}} to speak of. Instead, we have a gripping and heartfelt narrative as Frisk forms a bond of love with Asriel that goes deeper than sexual gratification.