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-->''The brothers each vowed before their Father, words of binding loyalty to Him, but more importantly, to each other, to work together to honour their brother, to honour their family. To not be torn apart by deceit and corruption, to deny the grip of Chaos, to not allow themselves to be their own worst enemies. Even if they had not forgiven their Father for his wrong doings, the bonds of brotherhood were much more important. And somewhere, sometime, the thread that tied these many realities was severed.''
-->''The brothers each vowed before their Father, words of binding loyalty to Him, but more importantly, to each other, to work together to honour their brother, to honour their family. To not be torn apart by deceit and corruption, to deny the grip of Chaos, to not allow themselves to be their own worst enemies. Even if they had not forgiven their Father for his wrong doings, the bonds of brotherhood were much more important. And somewhere, sometime, the thread that tied these many realities was severed.''
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** The slaves being finally freed from the Nucerian High-Riders and [[spoiler: the little boys being taken in by the various Space Marines such as Tarik Torgaddon.]]
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*Despite the realities of conflict in the 42nd Millenium keeping their family apart, it is very obvious that Roboute Guilliman, Yvraine and Aegidius share a very strong family bond and truly enjoy the few moments they have with each other.
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