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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera becomes TheBerserker and tries like mad to get out, but falls just short before she's sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, and gently strokes her until his murderers put him to sleep for the final time.]]
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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, Voll Golden-Nape, barely out of hatchlinghood, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible and a TearJerker when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera becomes TheBerserker and tries like mad to get out, but falls just short before she's sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, and gently strokes her until his murderers put him to sleep for the final time.]]
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* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He, Harrell and Vaniss imagine all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, made her a brand new set of clothing, and generally pampered her silly. When they see the giant, war-weary new arrivals, they're just as curious and friendly toward them, offering valuable gifts to the appreciative griffins. After a heartwarming conversation between the entire group and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
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* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He, Harrell and Vaniss imagine all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, made her a brand new set of clothing, and generally pampered her silly. When they see the giant, war-weary new arrivals, they're just as curious and friendly toward them, offering valuable gifts to the appreciative griffins.griffins - including the priceless gift of a tablet computer loaded with a complete copy of Wikipedia. After a heartwarming conversation between the entire group and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
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* Kwap and Tirrsill hide in a treehouse near a lake, with a suburban home nearby that contains several cats. After a little while, one of the cats comes over to the treehouse, being curious as cats are, and Tirrsill "adopts" him. Then they meet the owner of the house - a human covered with tattoos and heavily armed. Bad, bad news, right? [[spoiler:Wrong. He'd already chased away the assassins looking for them, brings Kwap and Tirrsill desperately needed food, and offers his hand in friendship - which Kwap accepts with a gentle touch.]]
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* Kwap and Tirrsill hide in a treehouse near a lake, with a suburban home nearby that contains several cats. After a little while, one of the cats comes over to the treehouse, being curious as cats are, and Tirrsill "adopts" him. Then they meet the owner of the house - [[ScaryBlackMan a human black man covered with tattoos and heavily armed.armed]]. Bad, bad news, right? [[spoiler:Wrong. He'd already chased away the assassins looking for them, brings Kwap and Tirrsill desperately needed food, and offers his hand in friendship - which Kwap accepts with a gentle touch.]]
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** [[www.furaffinity.net/view/26572230 This.]] Just...[[www.furaffinity.net/view/26572230 this]]. [[spoiler:It's Altera, Keet the chick, and Kinnee playing a game of pounce-the-blind-griffin together.]]
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** [[www.[[http://www.furaffinity.net/view/26572230 This.]] Just...[[www.[[http://www.furaffinity.net/view/26572230 this]]. [[spoiler:It's Altera, Keet the chick, and Kinnee playing a game of pounce-the-blind-griffin together.]]
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* It's virtually impossible not to crack a smile when, after the utter hell both have been through, [[spoiler:Altera Blue and Kinnee are finally re-united, and form a family with Kreet's surviving chick.]]
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* It's virtually impossible not to crack a smile when, after the utter hell both have been through, [[spoiler:Altera Blue and Kinnee are finally re-united, and form a family with Kreet's surviving chick.]]
** [[www.furaffinity.net/view/26572230 This.]] Just...[[www.furaffinity.net/view/26572230 this]]. [[spoiler:It's Altera, Keet the chick, and Kinnee playing a game of pounce-the-blind-griffin together.]]
** [[www.furaffinity.net/view/26572230 This.]] Just...[[www.furaffinity.net/view/26572230 this]]. [[spoiler:It's Altera, Keet the chick, and Kinnee playing a game of pounce-the-blind-griffin together.]]
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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera becomes TheBerserker and tries like mad to get out, but falls just short before she's sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, then faces his murderers with cold stoicism that would shame an adult Ranger and awaits the final needle.]]
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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera becomes TheBerserker and tries like mad to get out, but falls just short before she's sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, then faces and gently strokes her until his murderers with cold stoicism that would shame an adult Ranger and awaits put him to sleep for the final needle.]]time.]]
-->'''Aera''':Please don't go......*falls unconscious*
-->'''Aera''':Please don't go......*falls unconscious*
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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera becomes TheBerserker and tries like mad to get out, but falls just short before she's sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, then faces his murderers with stoicism that would shame a Ranger and awaits the final needle.]]
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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera becomes TheBerserker and tries like mad to get out, but falls just short before she's sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, then faces his murderers with cold stoicism that would shame a an adult Ranger and awaits the final needle.]]
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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera becomes TheBerserker and tries like mad to get out, but falls just short before she's sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, then faces his murders proudly and awaits the final needle.]]
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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera becomes TheBerserker and tries like mad to get out, but falls just short before she's sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, then faces his murders proudly murderers with stoicism that would shame a Ranger and awaits the final needle.]]
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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera fights like mad to get out, but fails and is sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, then faces his murders proudly and awaits the final needle.]]
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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera fights becomes TheBerserker and tries like mad to get out, but fails and is falls just short before she's sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, then faces his murders proudly and awaits the final needle.]]
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* Among the captives, Voll, little more than a child, is an IronWoobie and TheHeart to Aera. He thinks only of her happiness and is constantly comforting her. [[spoiler:It makes it all the more horrible when the humans come to take him away to his death. Aera fights like mad to get out, but fails and is sedated. As she drifts away, Voll whispers final reassurances to her, then faces his murders proudly and awaits the final needle.]]
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* It's virtually impossible not to crack a smile when, after the utter hell both have been through, Altera Blue and Kinnee are finally re-united, and form a family with Kreet's surviving chick.
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* It's virtually impossible not to crack a smile when, after the utter hell both have been through, Altera [[spoiler:Altera Blue and Kinnee are finally re-united, and form a family with Kreet's surviving chick.]]
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* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He, Harrell and Vaniss imagine all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, made her a brand new set of clothing, and generally pampered her silly When they see the giant, war-weary new arrivals, they're just as curious and friendly toward them, offering valuable gifts to the appreciative griffins. After a heartwarming conversation between the entire group and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
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* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He, Harrell and Vaniss imagine all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, made her a brand new set of clothing, and generally pampered her silly silly. When they see the giant, war-weary new arrivals, they're just as curious and friendly toward them, offering valuable gifts to the appreciative griffins. After a heartwarming conversation between the entire group and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
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* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He, Harrell and Vaniss imagine all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, made her a brand new set of clothing, and generally pampered her silly...and when they see the giant new arrivals, they're just as curious and friendly toward them, offering valuable gifts to the appreciative griffins. After a heartwarming conversation between the entire group and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
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* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He, Harrell and Vaniss imagine all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, made her a brand new set of clothing, and generally pampered her silly...and when silly When they see the giant giant, war-weary new arrivals, they're just as curious and friendly toward them, offering valuable gifts to the appreciative griffins. After a heartwarming conversation between the entire group and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
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* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He, Harrell and Vaniss imagine all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, made her a brand new set of clothing, and generally pampered her silly...and when they see the giant new arrivals, they're just as curious and friendly toward them, offering gifts to the appreciative griffins. After a heartwarming conversation between the entire group and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
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* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He, Harrell and Vaniss imagine all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, made her a brand new set of clothing, and generally pampered her silly...and when they see the giant new arrivals, they're just as curious and friendly toward them, offering valuable gifts to the appreciative griffins. After a heartwarming conversation between the entire group and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
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* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He imagines all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, and generally pampered her silly. After a heartwarming conversation between Kwap, Tirrsill and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
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* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He imagines He, Harrell and Vaniss imagine all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, made her a brand new set of clothing, and generally pampered her silly. silly...and when they see the giant new arrivals, they're just as curious and friendly toward them, offering gifts to the appreciative griffins. After a heartwarming conversation between Kwap, Tirrsill the entire group and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
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* Kwap starts out exceedingly uncomfortable with Tirrsill's physical familiarity - griffins ''do not like'' to be touched by strangers, and rarely touch each other except during sex. [[spoiler:By the time it's all over, he's gently scratching Tirrsill and willingly cuddling her under his wing.]]
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* Kwap starts out exceedingly uncomfortable with Tirrsill's physical familiarity - griffins ''do not like'' to be touched by strangers, and rarely touch each other except during sex. [[spoiler:By the time it's all over, he's gently scratching Tirrsill and willingly cuddling her under his wing.]]]]
* It's virtually impossible not to crack a smile when, after the utter hell both have been through, Altera Blue and Kinnee are finally re-united, and form a family with Kreet's surviving chick.
* It's virtually impossible not to crack a smile when, after the utter hell both have been through, Altera Blue and Kinnee are finally re-united, and form a family with Kreet's surviving chick.
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* Kwap and Tirrsill hide in a treehouse near a lake, with a suburban home nearby that contains several cats. After a little while, one of the cats comes over to the treehouse, being curious as cats are, and Tirrsill "adopts" him. Then they meet the owner of the house - a human covered with tattoos and heavily armed. Bad, bad news, right? [[spoiler:Wrong. He'd already chased away the assassins looking for them, brings Kwap and Tirrsill desperately needed food, and offers his hand in friendship - which Kwap accepts with a gentle touch.]]
* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He imagines all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, and generally pampered her silly. After a heartwarming conversation between Kwap, Tirrsill and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
* Kwap starts out exceedingly uncomfortable with Tirrsill's physical familiarity - griffins ''do not like'' to be touched by strangers, and rarely touch each other except during sex. [[spoiler:By the time it's all over, he's gently scratching Tirrsill and willingly cuddling her under his wing.]]
* Kwap and Tirrsill hide in a treehouse near a lake, with a suburban home nearby that contains several cats. After a little while, one of the cats comes over to the treehouse, being curious as cats are, and Tirrsill "adopts" him. Then they meet the owner of the house - a human covered with tattoos and heavily armed. Bad, bad news, right? [[spoiler:Wrong. He'd already chased away the assassins looking for them, brings Kwap and Tirrsill desperately needed food, and offers his hand in friendship - which Kwap accepts with a gentle touch.]]
* That gets even ''more'' heartwarming when Kwap [[spoiler:is forced to leave Tirrsill behind in the human world]]. He imagines all the horrors that Tirrsill must be going through...and when he returns to the lake house, she's not there. [[spoiler:Turns out the family took her into the main house, introduced her to human culture, fed her, and generally pampered her silly. After a heartwarming conversation between Kwap, Tirrsill and the family (with Coro-er translating), they part friends.]]
* Kwap starts out exceedingly uncomfortable with Tirrsill's physical familiarity - griffins ''do not like'' to be touched by strangers, and rarely touch each other except during sex. [[spoiler:By the time it's all over, he's gently scratching Tirrsill and willingly cuddling her under his wing.]]
