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* "Team Trawn Redrawn" has [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=16&page=16 a relatively twisted example]]. [[spoiler: After NJ saves Aerynn, she asks if this means that he actually likes her. He denies it, but this denial makes him victim to a spell Aerynn cast to expose liars.]]
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* "Team Trawn Redrawn" has [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=16&page=16 a relatively twisted example]].added one]] that didn't appear in the original version of issue #2. [[spoiler: After NJ saves Aerynn, she asks if this means that he actually likes her. He denies it, but this denial makes him victim to a spell Aerynn cast to expose liars.]]
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* From "Into Thin Aerynn": [[spoiler: After NJ brings Aerynn out of hiding, he [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=21 grabs her]] to keep her from leaving again. NJ proceeds to assure Aerynn that Trawn has decided to continue trying to hide her from Natasha, so the two of them start to head back to see Trawn. Before they go up the stairs, NJ asks Aerynn if they can have "one more", so they share [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=22 a welcome back hug.]]]]
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* From "Into Thin Aerynn": [[spoiler: After NJ brings Aerynn out of hiding, he [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=21 grabs her]] to keep her from leaving again. NJ proceeds to assure Aerynn that Trawn has decided to continue trying to hide her from Natasha, so the two of them start to head back upstairs to see Trawn. Before they go up the stairs, go, NJ asks Aerynn if they can have "one more", so they share [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=22 a welcome back hug.]]]]
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* From "Into Thin Aerynn": [[spoiler: After NJ brings Aerynn out of hiding, he [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=21 grabs her]] to keep her from leaving again. NJ proceeds to assure Aerynn that Trawn has decided to continue trying to hide her from Natasha, so the two of them start to head back to see Trawn. Before they go up the stairs, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=22 Aerynn and NJ hug.]]]]
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* From "Into Thin Aerynn": [[spoiler: After NJ brings Aerynn out of hiding, he [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=21 grabs her]] to keep her from leaving again. NJ proceeds to assure Aerynn that Trawn has decided to continue trying to hide her from Natasha, so the two of them start to head back to see Trawn. Before they go up the stairs, NJ asks Aerynn if they can have "one more", so they share [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=22 Aerynn and NJ a welcome back hug.]]]]
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** Also note that scene marks the first time in years that Aerynn didn't call NJ by his EmbarassingFirstName.
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** Also note that scene marks the first time in years that Aerynn didn't call NJ by his EmbarassingFirstName.EmbarrassingFirstName.
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* From "Into Thin Aerynn": [[spoiler: After NJ brings Aerynn out of hiding, he [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=21 grabs her]] to keep her from leaving again. NJ proceeds to assure Aerynn that Trawn has decided to continue trying to hide her from Natasha, so the two of them start to head back to see Trawn. Before they go up the stairs, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=22 Aerynn and NJ hug.]]]]
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* From "Into Thin Aerynn": [[spoiler: After NJ brings Aerynn out of hiding, he [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=21 grabs her]] to keep her from leaving again. NJ proceeds to assure Aerynn that Trawn has decided to continue trying to hide her from Natasha, so the two of them start to head back to see Trawn. Before they go up the stairs, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=22 Aerynn and NJ hug.]]]]]]]]
** Also note that scene marks the first time in years that Aerynn didn't call NJ by his EmbarassingFirstName.
** Also note that scene marks the first time in years that Aerynn didn't call NJ by his EmbarassingFirstName.
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* From "Into Thin Aerynn": [[spoiler: After NJ brings Aerynn out of hiding, he [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=21 grabs her]] to keep her from leaving again. NJ proceeds to assure Aerynn that Trawn has decided to continue trying to hide her from Natasha, so the two of them start to head back to see Trawn. Before they do, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=22 Aerynn and NJ hug.]]]]
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* From "Into Thin Aerynn": [[spoiler: After NJ brings Aerynn out of hiding, he [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=21 grabs her]] to keep her from leaving again. NJ proceeds to assure Aerynn that Trawn has decided to continue trying to hide her from Natasha, so the two of them start to head back to see Trawn. Before they do, go up the stairs, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=22 Aerynn and NJ hug.]]]]
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* The piracy in "Shrooming With Shroomy" comes to an end after [[spoiler: Nathaniel Wing licenses the unavailable media to a smaller distribution company. Nina Wing initially seems mad that her husband did this without asking her. Instead, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=14&page=21&seriesID=11 she admires his assertiveness]], and the two of them proceed to make out.]]
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* The piracy in "Shrooming With Shroomy" comes to an end after [[spoiler: Nathaniel Wing licenses the unavailable media to a smaller distribution company. Nina Wing initially seems mad that her husband did this without asking her. Instead, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=14&page=21&seriesID=11 she admires his assertiveness]], and the two of them proceed to make out.]]]]
* From "Into Thin Aerynn": [[spoiler: After NJ brings Aerynn out of hiding, he [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=21 grabs her]] to keep her from leaving again. NJ proceeds to assure Aerynn that Trawn has decided to continue trying to hide her from Natasha, so the two of them start to head back to see Trawn. Before they do, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=22 Aerynn and NJ hug.]]]]
* From "Into Thin Aerynn": [[spoiler: After NJ brings Aerynn out of hiding, he [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=21 grabs her]] to keep her from leaving again. NJ proceeds to assure Aerynn that Trawn has decided to continue trying to hide her from Natasha, so the two of them start to head back to see Trawn. Before they do, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=17&page=22 Aerynn and NJ hug.]]]]
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* The piracy in "Shrooming With Shroomy" comes to an end after [[spoiler: Nathaniel Wing licenses the unavailable media to a smaller distribution company. Nina Wing initially seems mad that her husband did this without asking her. Instead, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=14&page=21&seriesID=11 she admires his courage]] in performing business deals without telling her, and the two make out.]]
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* The piracy in "Shrooming With Shroomy" comes to an end after [[spoiler: Nathaniel Wing licenses the unavailable media to a smaller distribution company. Nina Wing initially seems mad that her husband did this without asking her. Instead, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=14&page=21&seriesID=11 she admires his courage]] in performing business deals without telling her, assertiveness]], and the two of them proceed to make out.]]
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* Considering how sadistic Jodie acts for the rest of "The Time That People Forgot", her [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=11&page=8 advice]] for NJ to disregard the results of aptitude tests seems a little heartwarming.
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* Considering how sadistic Jodie acts for the rest of "The Time That People Forgot", her [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=11&page=8 advice]] for NJ to disregard the results of aptitude tests seems a little heartwarming.heartwarming.
* The piracy in "Shrooming With Shroomy" comes to an end after [[spoiler: Nathaniel Wing licenses the unavailable media to a smaller distribution company. Nina Wing initially seems mad that her husband did this without asking her. Instead, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=14&page=21&seriesID=11 she admires his courage]] in performing business deals without telling her, and the two make out.]]
* The piracy in "Shrooming With Shroomy" comes to an end after [[spoiler: Nathaniel Wing licenses the unavailable media to a smaller distribution company. Nina Wing initially seems mad that her husband did this without asking her. Instead, [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=14&page=21&seriesID=11 she admires his courage]] in performing business deals without telling her, and the two make out.]]
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* "Team Trawn Redrawn" has [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=16&page=16 a relatively twisted example]]. [[spoiler: After NJ saves Aerynn, she asks if this means that he actually likes her. He denies it, but this denial makes him victim to a spell Aerynn cast to expose liars.]]
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** [=LuLo=] also has the part where Trawn [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=7&page=7 refuses]] to sue Lululu's impoverished parents, even though Lululu hit Trawn with her car.
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** [=LuLo=] "[=LuLo=]" also has the part where Trawn [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=7&page=7 refuses]] to sue Lululu's impoverished parents, even though Lululu hit Trawn with her car.
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** [=LuLo=] also has the part where Trawn [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=7&page=7 refuses]] to sue Lululu's impoverished parents, even though Lululu hit Trawn with her car.
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Maybe it\'s just my eyesight, but sometimes that looks more like \"hitting\" than \"hiring\"
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* [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=1&page=17 Trawn hiring Aerynn]] in the first comic.
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* [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=1&page=17 Trawn hiring enlisting Aerynn]] in the first comic.
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* After you read the flashbacks in "Wings", [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=7&page=21 Natasha assuring Trawn]] that she won't neglect her again in "[=LuLo=]" seems retroactively heartwarming.
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* After you read the flashbacks in "Wings", [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=7&page=21 Natasha assuring Trawn]] that she won't neglect her again in "[=LuLo=]" seems retroactively heartwarming.heartwarming after the flashbacks in "Wings" illustrated how close they were in college, and how far away they drifted after graduating.
