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* During a Fused Loop with ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo'', Sayori calls Hanako "best girl" due to having played the game --with the H-scenes off -- and finding her route to be the best with Rin and Lilly's being pretty good as well.
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Chapter 30.2 has Natsuki saying that Yuri's look -- which she describes as Cybergoth -- looks good on her and Yuri smiles (though not enough to break the effect) and says "Thank you".
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* Chapter 30.2 has Natsuki saying that Yuri's look -- which she describes as Cybergoth -- looks good on her and Yuri smiles (though not enough to break the effect) and says "Thank you".
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* During Chapter 30.1, after Yuri is turned into a vampire by [[Anime/{{Hellsing}} Alucard]], she and Natsuki have a conversation:
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* During Chapter 30.1, 1:
** Natsuki healing Yuri after she's shot in the gut by Seras, via drawing a complicated transmutation circle on the palm of her unbloodied hand, Yuri says that Alucard would have fixed it up just fine, we get this between the duo:
--> '''Natsuki''' ''as she helps Yuri up to her feet'': Yeah, well, you're not his responsibility.\\
'''Yuri''' ''raises an eyebrow at that'' Oh, really? You're responsible for me now, are you?\\
'''Natsuki''' ''firmly'' As the Club's least-fucked-in-the-head and the one with the best grasp of the concept of 'self-care', yes, I'm responsible, I make sure Monika sleeps when she goes too long without it, I make sure I'm always prepared for Sayori's rapid descents, and I make sure your body stays functional despite your best efforts. It's a thankless job, but lesser badasses than I have worked harder for their loved ones.\\
''A small giggle bubbles out of Yuri, and she leans down and plants a surprise kiss on Natsuki's nose.'' Thank you, my sweet kitten, ''she whispers. Natsuki's ears start to smoke.''\\
''A high-pitched, keening squee draws their attention back to Seras, who has her hands over her mouth and looks like she had just seen a unicorn.''\\
'''Natsuki''' ''sighs'' Yes, we're precious, I know. So, you two have clearly met before ''narrows her eyes at Seras''.
** After Yuri is turned into a vampire by [[Anime/{{Hellsing}} Alucard]], she and Natsuki have a conversation:
** Natsuki healing Yuri after she's shot in the gut by Seras, via drawing a complicated transmutation circle on the palm of her unbloodied hand, Yuri says that Alucard would have fixed it up just fine, we get this between the duo:
--> '''Natsuki''' ''as she helps Yuri up to her feet'': Yeah, well, you're not his responsibility.\\
'''Yuri''' ''raises an eyebrow at that'' Oh, really? You're responsible for me now, are you?\\
'''Natsuki''' ''firmly'' As the Club's least-fucked-in-the-head and the one with the best grasp of the concept of 'self-care', yes, I'm responsible, I make sure Monika sleeps when she goes too long without it, I make sure I'm always prepared for Sayori's rapid descents, and I make sure your body stays functional despite your best efforts. It's a thankless job, but lesser badasses than I have worked harder for their loved ones.\\
''A small giggle bubbles out of Yuri, and she leans down and plants a surprise kiss on Natsuki's nose.'' Thank you, my sweet kitten, ''she whispers. Natsuki's ears start to smoke.''\\
''A high-pitched, keening squee draws their attention back to Seras, who has her hands over her mouth and looks like she had just seen a unicorn.''\\
'''Natsuki''' ''sighs'' Yes, we're precious, I know. So, you two have clearly met before ''narrows her eyes at Seras''.
** After Yuri is turned into a vampire by [[Anime/{{Hellsing}} Alucard]], she and Natsuki have a conversation:
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* From the second part of Loop 29.5:
--> '''Yuri''': Squid ink pasta. Try it.\\
''Natsuki sighs before grabbing a forkful and taking a bite''\\
'''Natsuki''': Needs less salt.\\
'''Yuri''': Got ya. By the way, you got something on your face.\\
'''Natsuki''': Where?\\
'''Yuri''': Your lips.\\
''Natsuki wipes them with her hand, and sees a black streak. She gives Yuri a look before getting up.''\\
'''Yuri''': Natsuki?\\
''Yuri soon finds her lips getting met with Natsuki's own. After pulling away, Natsuki lets out a cheeky grin.''\\
'''Natsuki''': Got something on your face.\\
'''Yuri ''(with black lips)'' ''': Yeah, I do.
--> '''Yuri''': Squid ink pasta. Try it.\\
''Natsuki sighs before grabbing a forkful and taking a bite''\\
'''Natsuki''': Needs less salt.\\
'''Yuri''': Got ya. By the way, you got something on your face.\\
'''Natsuki''': Where?\\
'''Yuri''': Your lips.\\
''Natsuki wipes them with her hand, and sees a black streak. She gives Yuri a look before getting up.''\\
'''Yuri''': Natsuki?\\
''Yuri soon finds her lips getting met with Natsuki's own. After pulling away, Natsuki lets out a cheeky grin.''\\
'''Natsuki''': Got something on your face.\\
'''Yuri ''(with black lips)'' ''': Yeah, I do.
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* Chapter 5.11 has Belle not holding it against Natsuki after it turns out the latter was Stealth-Looping - Natsuki had seen ''Beauty and the Beast'' in the Hub and figured the curse wouldn't break if Belle knew the Beast (who Natsuki had Looped in as) was a girl this time, and apologizing to her for the deception.
* Chapter 20.2 has [[Franchise/TouhouProject Doremy Sweet]] dispelling Sayori's nightmare about hanging herself, then giving Sayori a therapy session about bad dreams. When Monika tells Sayori after the latter wakes up that she needs help with a new project, Sayori is holding a frilly pillow to her chest; when Monika asks Sayori where she got the pillow as it's not coded like anything Monika has seen before, Sayori says "Let's just say I got it from a friend" and the pillow is revealed to say "Doremy's Sweet Sleep Pillow, guaranteed to help your sleep be the sweetest it can be."
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* It's rather understated, but Monika's first reaction to the Mini-Me Loop that is Chapter 23.7 is not to kill her past self with eagerness but instead to try and convince her not to go through with it, showing that despite being TheAtoner, she ultimately doesn't truly hate herself to outright try and kill her other self.
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* After Psyche is made the new admin, when meeting the girls, she mentally whispers to each of them that she knows exactly what they're going through, having spent a full sleepless night playing the game and taking notes.
* 5.11 has Belle not holding it against Natsuki after it turns out Natsuki was stealth-looping because Natsuki saw Beauty and the Beast in the hub and figured the curse wouldn't break if Belle knew Natsuki was a girl and tells Belle she's really sorry.
* Chapter 20.2 has [[Franchise/TouhouProject Doremy Sweet]] dispelling Sayori's nightmare about hanging herself and then giving Sayori a therapy session about how if Sayori expects to have bad dreams (because they're the lone place why Sayori is still vulnerable) and then when Monika tells Sayori after the latter woke up that she needs help with a new project, Sayori is holding a frilly pillow to her chest and when Monika asks Sayori where she got the pillow as its not coded like anything Monika has seen before, Sayori says "Let's just say I got it from a friend" and the pillow is revealed to say "Doremy's Sweet Sleep Pillow, guaranteed to help your sleep be the sweetest it can be."
* 5.11 has Belle not holding it against Natsuki after it turns out Natsuki was stealth-looping because Natsuki saw Beauty and the Beast in the hub and figured the curse wouldn't break if Belle knew Natsuki was a girl and tells Belle she's really sorry.
* Chapter 20.2 has [[Franchise/TouhouProject Doremy Sweet]] dispelling Sayori's nightmare about hanging herself and then giving Sayori a therapy session about how if Sayori expects to have bad dreams (because they're the lone place why Sayori is still vulnerable) and then when Monika tells Sayori after the latter woke up that she needs help with a new project, Sayori is holding a frilly pillow to her chest and when Monika asks Sayori where she got the pillow as its not coded like anything Monika has seen before, Sayori says "Let's just say I got it from a friend" and the pillow is revealed to say "Doremy's Sweet Sleep Pillow, guaranteed to help your sleep be the sweetest it can be."
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* After Psyche is made the new admin, Admin of the ''DDLC'' Branch, when meeting the girls, girls she mentally whispers to each of them that she knows exactly what they're going through, having spent a full sleepless night playing the game and taking notes.
* 5.11 has Belle not holding it against Natsuki after it turns out Natsuki was stealth-looping because Natsuki saw Beauty and the Beast in the hub and figured the curse wouldn't break if Belle knew Natsuki was a girl and tells Belle she's really sorry.
* Chapter 20.2 has [[Franchise/TouhouProject Doremy Sweet]] dispelling Sayori's nightmare about hanging herself and then giving Sayori a therapy session about how if Sayori expects to have bad dreams (because they're the lone place why Sayori is still vulnerable) and then when Monika tells Sayori after the latter woke up that she needs help with a new project, Sayori is holding a frilly pillow to her chest and when Monika asks Sayori where she got the pillow as its not coded like anything Monika has seen before, Sayori says "Let's just say I got it from a friend" and the pillow is revealed to say "Doremy's Sweet Sleep Pillow, guaranteed to help your sleep be the sweetest it can be."notes.
* 5.11 has Belle not holding it against Natsuki after it turns out Natsuki was stealth-looping because Natsuki saw Beauty and the Beast in the hub and figured the curse wouldn't break if Belle knew Natsuki was a girl and tells Belle she's really sorry.
* Chapter 20.2 has [[Franchise/TouhouProject Doremy Sweet]] dispelling Sayori's nightmare about hanging herself and then giving Sayori a therapy session about how if Sayori expects to have bad dreams (because they're the lone place why Sayori is still vulnerable) and then when Monika tells Sayori after the latter woke up that she needs help with a new project, Sayori is holding a frilly pillow to her chest and when Monika asks Sayori where she got the pillow as its not coded like anything Monika has seen before, Sayori says "Let's just say I got it from a friend" and the pillow is revealed to say "Doremy's Sweet Sleep Pillow, guaranteed to help your sleep be the sweetest it can be."
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* 5.11 has Belle not holding it against Natsuki after it turns out Natsuki was stealth-looping because Natsuki saw Beauty and the Beast in the hub and figured the curse wouldn't break if Belle knew Natsuki was a girl and tells Belle she's really sorry.
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* Chapter 11.11, where the girls meet [[Anime/{{Shelter}} Rin]], gives the latter a happy ending in making her a Traveling Looper.
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* Chapter 11.11, where the girls meet [[Anime/{{Shelter}} [[Anime/{{Shelter|2016}} Rin]], gives the latter a happy ending in making her a Traveling Looper.
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'''Yuri:''' ''[lifts Natsuki up the breastplate]'' This is fucking why! ''[slams her lips into Natsuki's, hard]''
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'''Yuri:''' ''[lifts Natsuki up by the breastplate]'' This is fucking why! ''[slams her lips into Natsuki's, hard]''
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* During Chapter 30.1, after Yuri is turned into a vampire by Alucard, she and Natsuki have a conversation:
-->'''Yuri:''' Do you...please, be honest, do you think, maybe, we're not such a good match, after all? We're as different as night and day. I'll never be able appreciate your sickeningly sweet proclivities, any more than you'll ever appreciate my grotesque intrigues. And I...I'm not sure if I could give this up, to make you happy.\\
-->'''Yuri:''' Do you...please, be honest, do you think, maybe, we're not such a good match, after all? We're as different as night and day. I'll never be able appreciate your sickeningly sweet proclivities, any more than you'll ever appreciate my grotesque intrigues. And I...I'm not sure if I could give this up, to make you happy.\\
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* During Chapter 30.1, after Yuri is turned into a vampire by Alucard, [[Anime/{{Hellsing}} Alucard]], she and Natsuki have a conversation:
-->'''Yuri:''' Do you...please, be honest, do you think, maybe, we're not such a good match, after all? We're as different as night and day. I'll never be able to appreciate your sickeningly sweet proclivities, any more than you'll ever appreciate my grotesque intrigues. And I...I'm not sure if I could give this up, to make you happy.\\
-->'''Yuri:''' Do you...please, be honest, do you think, maybe, we're not such a good match, after all? We're as different as night and day. I'll never be able to appreciate your sickeningly sweet proclivities, any more than you'll ever appreciate my grotesque intrigues. And I...I'm not sure if I could give this up, to make you happy.\\
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* All of the Hobby Picking snips in Chapter 36 (36.2, 36.5, 36.7 and 36.10) due to simply being slice of life stories wherein one of the girls shows the other three one of their hobbies (except for Natsuki):
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* All of the Hobby Picking snips in Chapter 36 (36.2, 36.5, 36.7 7, and 36.10) due to simply being slice of life SliceOfLife stories wherein one of the girls shows the other three one of their hobbies (except for Natsuki):
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** Yuri: Looper hide-and-seek, the girls can use Looper abilities, but can't mess with the code, can use their bracelets to warn each other about the seeker, call each other and the seeker has a map and the other's don't.
** Monika: Making terrariums without using Looper skills and then collaborating on a giant walk-in terrarium that Monika has in her pocket.
* Chapter 36.12 wherein Natsuki and Yuri make crepes for everyone while talking about Helltaker and how it kept referring to crepes as pancakes.
** Monika: Making terrariums without using Looper skills and then collaborating on a giant walk-in terrarium that Monika has in her pocket.
* Chapter 36.12 wherein Natsuki and Yuri make crepes for everyone while talking about Helltaker and how it kept referring to crepes as pancakes.
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** Yuri: Looper hide-and-seek, hide-and-seek - the girls can use Looper abilities, but can't mess with the code, can use their bracelets to warn each other about the seeker, and call each other and other. However, the seeker has a map and the other's don't.
others don't, and nobody can mess with the code.
** Monika: Making terrariums without using Looperskills skills, and then collaborating on a giant walk-in terrarium that Monika she has in her pocket.
Pocket.
* Chapter 36.12wherein has Natsuki and Yuri make crepes for everyone while talking about Helltaker ''VideoGame/{{Helltaker}}'' and how it kept referring to crepes as pancakes.
pancakes.
** Monika: Making terrariums without using Looper
* Chapter 36.12
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'''Yuri:''' ''[begins tearing up, huging Natsuki tightly]'' I can never get over how much sharper my senses are, how much more richly detailed the world becomes in this form, I thought I already knew your body by heart, but there's still so much more to you. It's like I'm experiencing you for the first time, all over again. My sweet little cupcake. My fierce hot-blooded kitten. My inimitable, irreplaceable summer breeze. My Natsuki.
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'''Yuri:''' ''[begins tearing up, huging hugging Natsuki tightly]'' I can never get over how much sharper my senses are, how much more richly detailed the world becomes in this form, I thought I already knew your body by heart, but there's still so much more to you. It's like I'm experiencing you for the first time, all over again. My sweet little cupcake. My fierce hot-blooded kitten. My inimitable, irreplaceable summer breeze. My Natsuki.Natsuki.
* All of the Hobby Picking snips in Chapter 36 (36.2, 36.5, 36.7 and 36.10) due to simply being slice of life stories wherein one of the girls shows the other three one of their hobbies (except for Natsuki):
** Sayori: Making origami.
** Yuri: Looper hide-and-seek, the girls can use Looper abilities, but can't mess with the code, can use their bracelets to warn each other about the seeker, call each other and the seeker has a map and the other's don't.
** Monika: Making terrariums without using Looper skills and then collaborating on a giant walk-in terrarium that Monika has in her pocket.
* Chapter 36.12 wherein Natsuki and Yuri make crepes for everyone while talking about Helltaker and how it kept referring to crepes as pancakes.
* All of the Hobby Picking snips in Chapter 36 (36.2, 36.5, 36.7 and 36.10) due to simply being slice of life stories wherein one of the girls shows the other three one of their hobbies (except for Natsuki):
** Sayori: Making origami.
** Yuri: Looper hide-and-seek, the girls can use Looper abilities, but can't mess with the code, can use their bracelets to warn each other about the seeker, call each other and the seeker has a map and the other's don't.
** Monika: Making terrariums without using Looper skills and then collaborating on a giant walk-in terrarium that Monika has in her pocket.
* Chapter 36.12 wherein Natsuki and Yuri make crepes for everyone while talking about Helltaker and how it kept referring to crepes as pancakes.
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* During Chapter 19, Monika has her Baseline transgressions absolved by [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Venus]]. Made even better when Sailor Moon herself gives Monika some much-needed mental clarity on her life and friends.
** Also, during said chapter, Natsuki gives her stance on romance to Sayori, namely she feels she was only put in the game for {{Tsundere}} reasons and that no one would be able to geuninely love her and as such, romance isn't for her. The snip goes over what she had failed to notice culminating in Yuri demanding "QROW, BOOZE ME NOW!" and after he does so, it leads to this:
--> '''Natsuki:''' "Ooooookay? What's going on here, exa--?"
--> '''Yuri:''' In about five minutes that's all going to hit at once," Yuri explained brusquely. "And you, Natsuki, are going to be responsible for whatever happens next, got it?!"
-->'''Natsuki:''' "...Sure, I guess...? But... uh... why?"
-->Yuri grabbed her by the breastplate and lifted her up with her teeth clenched. "This is fucking why!"
-->She slammed her lips onto Natsuki's, hard.
Thus starting their official couple relationship
** Also, during said chapter, Natsuki gives her stance on romance to Sayori, namely she feels she was only put in the game for {{Tsundere}} reasons and that no one would be able to geuninely love her and as such, romance isn't for her. The snip goes over what she had failed to notice culminating in Yuri demanding "QROW, BOOZE ME NOW!" and after he does so, it leads to this:
--> '''Natsuki:''' "Ooooookay? What's going on here, exa--?"
--> '''Yuri:''' In about five minutes that's all going to hit at once," Yuri explained brusquely. "And you, Natsuki, are going to be responsible for whatever happens next, got it?!"
-->'''Natsuki:''' "...Sure, I guess...? But... uh... why?"
-->Yuri grabbed her by the breastplate and lifted her up with her teeth clenched. "This is fucking why!"
-->She slammed her lips onto Natsuki's, hard.
Thus starting their official couple relationship
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* During Chapter 19, 19:
** Monika has her Baseline transgressions absolved by [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Venus]]. Made even better when Sailor Moon herself gives Monika some much-needed mental clarity on her life and friends.
**Also, during said chapter, Natsuki gives her stance on romance to Sayori, namely that she feels she was only put in the game for {{Tsundere}} reasons and that no one would be able to geuninely love her and as such, romance isn't for her. The snip goes over what she had failed to notice notice, culminating in Yuri demanding "QROW, BOOZE ME NOW!" and after After he does so, it leads to this:
--> '''Natsuki:''' "Ooooookay?she downs the bottle's contents and smashes it:
--->'''Natsuki:''' Ooooookay? What's going on here,exa--?"
-->exa--?\\
'''Yuri:''' In about five minutes that's all going to hit atonce," Yuri explained brusquely. "And once. And you, Natsuki, are going to be responsible for whatever happens next, got it?!"
-->'''Natsuki:''' "...it?!\\
'''Natsuki:''' ...Sure, I guess...? But... uh...why?"
-->Yuri grabbed her bywhy?\\
'''Yuri:''' ''[lifts Natsuki up thebreastplate and lifted her up with her teeth clenched. "This breastplate]'' This is fucking why!"
-->She slammedwhy! ''[slams her lips onto into Natsuki's, hard.
hard]''
*** ...Thus starting their official couplerelationship
relationship.
** Monika has her Baseline transgressions absolved by [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Venus]]. Made even better when Sailor Moon herself gives Monika some much-needed mental clarity on her life and friends.
**
--> '''Natsuki:''' "Ooooookay?
--->'''Natsuki:''' Ooooookay? What's going on here,
-->
'''Yuri:''' In about five minutes that's all going to hit at
-->'''Natsuki:''' "...
'''Natsuki:''' ...Sure, I guess...? But... uh...
-->Yuri grabbed her by
'''Yuri:''' ''[lifts Natsuki up the
-->She slammed
*** ...Thus starting their official couple
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* During Chapter 30.1, after Yuri is turned into a vampire by Alucard, Natsuki and Yuri have a conversation that's basically them reaffirming their love for each other:
-->'''Yuri:''' "Natsuki?"
-->'''Natsuki:''' "Mm?"
-->'''Yuri:''' "Please don't get angry."
-->'''Natsuki:''' "Kay."
-->"Do you…please, be honest, do you think, maybe, we're not such a good match, after all?" Yuri asked hesitantly. Timidly, even. "We're as different as night and day. I'll never be able appreciate your sickeningly sweet proclivities, any more than you'll ever appreciate my grotesque intrigues. And I…I'm not sure if I could give this up, to make you happy."
-->Natsuki sighed heavily. "Yuri, you dunce," she grumbled. "We're a horrible match, by any measurement, for the reasons you just said and a thousand others."
-->Yuri sank her teeth into her own lip to stop herself from crying out.
-->Natsuki's arms tightened around her, and she continued, "And none of that 'on paper' crap matters, because I love you and there's no one I would rather be with than you. And don't sweat it, I wouldn't presume to ask you to give up anything for me, cuz I know you wouldn't do that to me, either. Look, do you want a partner who's more like you than me?"
-->"No!" Yuri gasped, "Natsuki, how could you…"
-->"Exactly, you silly ass," Natsuki giggled, nuzzling her face into the crook of Yuri's neck and planting a kiss. "That's exactly how I feel, too. Sure, we're as different as night and day. That makes you the yin to my yang. We complete each other. Seeing you go all unhinged like that when you were transforming just brought up old traumas and sent my head to a bad place. But that's okay, because my happy place is with you, too."
-->Yuri gave another strangled gasp as emotion overwhelmed her, affection and gratitude gushing up inside of her and spilling over in the form of tears. She hugged Natsuki as tightly as she dared, burying her face in her hair. She breathed in deeply, and laughed. "I can never get over how much sharper my senses are, how much more richly detailed the world becomes in this form," she murmured, running her hands up and down Natsuki's back and arm. "I thought I already knew your body by heart, but there's still so much more to you. It's like I'm experiencing you for the first time, all over again. My sweet little cupcake. My fierce hot-blooded kitten. My inimitable, irreplaceable summer breeze. My Natsuki."
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-->'''Yuri:'''
-->'''Natsuki:''' "Mm?"
-->'''Yuri:''' "Please don't get angry."
-->'''Natsuki:''' "Kay."
-->"Do you…please,
-->Natsuki sighed heavily. "Yuri,
'''Natsuki:''' ''[sighs heavily]'' Yuri, you
-->Yuri sank her teeth into her own lip to stop herself from crying out.
-->Natsuki's arms tightened around her, and she continued, "And
-->"No!" Yuri gasped, "Natsuki,
'''Yuri:''' No! Natsuki, how could
-->"Exactly,
'''Natsuki:''' Exactly, you silly
-->Yuri gave another strangled gasp as emotion overwhelmed her, affection and gratitude gushing up inside of her and spilling over in the form of tears. She hugged
'''Yuri:''' ''[begins tearing up, huging Natsuki
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* During Chapter 19, Monika has her Baseline transgressions absolved by [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Venus]]. Made even better when Sailor Moon herself gives Monika some much-needed mental clarity on her life and friends.
** Also, during said chapter, Natsuki gives her stance on romance to Sayori, namely she feels she was only put in the game for {{Tsundere}} reasons and that no one would be able to geuninely love her and as such, romance isn't for her. The snip goes over what she had failed to notice culminating in Yuri demanding "QROW, BOOZE ME NOW!" and after he does so, it leads to this:
--> '''Natsuki:''' "Ooooookay? What's going on here, exa--?"
--> '''Yuri:''' In about five minutes that's all going to hit at once," Yuri explained brusquely. "And you, Natsuki, are going to be responsible for whatever happens next, got it?!"
-->'''Natsuki:''' "...Sure, I guess...? But... uh... why?"
-->Yuri grabbed her by the breastplate and lifted her up with her teeth clenched. "This is fucking why!"
-->She slammed her lips onto Natsuki's, hard.
Thus starting their official couple relationship
** Also, during said chapter, Natsuki gives her stance on romance to Sayori, namely she feels she was only put in the game for {{Tsundere}} reasons and that no one would be able to geuninely love her and as such, romance isn't for her. The snip goes over what she had failed to notice culminating in Yuri demanding "QROW, BOOZE ME NOW!" and after he does so, it leads to this:
--> '''Natsuki:''' "Ooooookay? What's going on here, exa--?"
--> '''Yuri:''' In about five minutes that's all going to hit at once," Yuri explained brusquely. "And you, Natsuki, are going to be responsible for whatever happens next, got it?!"
-->'''Natsuki:''' "...Sure, I guess...? But... uh... why?"
-->Yuri grabbed her by the breastplate and lifted her up with her teeth clenched. "This is fucking why!"
-->She slammed her lips onto Natsuki's, hard.
Thus starting their official couple relationship
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* During Chapter 30.1, after Yuri is turned into a vampire by Alucard, Natsuki and Yuri have a conversation that's basically them reaffirming their love for each other:
-->'''Yuri:''' "Natsuki?"
-->'''Natsuki:''' "Mm?"
-->'''Yuri:''' "Please don't get angry."
-->'''Natsuki:''' "Kay."
-->"Do you…please, be honest, do you think, maybe, we're not such a good match, after all?" Yuri asked hesitantly. Timidly, even. "We're as different as night and day. I'll never be able appreciate your sickeningly sweet proclivities, any more than you'll ever appreciate my grotesque intrigues. And I…I'm not sure if I could give this up, to make you happy."
-->Natsuki sighed heavily. "Yuri, you dunce," she grumbled. "We're a horrible match, by any measurement, for the reasons you just said and a thousand others."
-->Yuri sank her teeth into her own lip to stop herself from crying out.
-->Natsuki's arms tightened around her, and she continued, "And none of that 'on paper' crap matters, because I love you and there's no one I would rather be with than you. And don't sweat it, I wouldn't presume to ask you to give up anything for me, cuz I know you wouldn't do that to me, either. Look, do you want a partner who's more like you than me?"
-->"No!" Yuri gasped, "Natsuki, how could you…"
-->"Exactly, you silly ass," Natsuki giggled, nuzzling her face into the crook of Yuri's neck and planting a kiss. "That's exactly how I feel, too. Sure, we're as different as night and day. That makes you the yin to my yang. We complete each other. Seeing you go all unhinged like that when you were transforming just brought up old traumas and sent my head to a bad place. But that's okay, because my happy place is with you, too."
-->Yuri gave another strangled gasp as emotion overwhelmed her, affection and gratitude gushing up inside of her and spilling over in the form of tears. She hugged Natsuki as tightly as she dared, burying her face in her hair. She breathed in deeply, and laughed. "I can never get over how much sharper my senses are, how much more richly detailed the world becomes in this form," she murmured, running her hands up and down Natsuki's back and arm. "I thought I already knew your body by heart, but there's still so much more to you. It's like I'm experiencing you for the first time, all over again. My sweet little cupcake. My fierce hot-blooded kitten. My inimitable, irreplaceable summer breeze. My Natsuki."
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* Monika eventually being forgiven by Sayori, Natsuki, and Yuri for what she'd done to them in Baseline. There ''is'' happiness in the Literature Club.
* Chapter 11.11, where the girls meet [[Anime/{{Shelter}} Rin]], gives the latter a happy ending in making her a Traveling Looper.
* Chapter 18 has lots of warm fuzzies, which is fitting given that it's a BirthdayEpisode (or, as Sayori puts it, "anni-birth-sary").
* During Chapter 19, Monika has her Baseline transgressions absolved by [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Venus]]. Made even better when Sailor Moon herself gives Monika some much-needed mental clarity on her life and friends.
* Chapter 22.7 has Natsuki's father being genuinely nice and caring, resulting in her spending as much time with him as possible that Loop.
* During Chapter 28.1, Monika gets upset that Sayori is overacting, soon figuring that she had a bad Loop, to which Sayori soon quietly admits that it was a Null Loop where she replaced ''ComicBook/HarleyQuinn''.
-->'''Monika:''' Oh. Oh, damn, Sayori–you know what? We are getting you ice cream and cotton candy and fried food and then we are getting back home where you can sleep it all off, and then we are having a real talk tomorrow, okay?\\
'''Sayori:''' ...okay...
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* Monika eventually being forgiven by Sayori, Natsuki, and Yuri for what she'd done to them in Baseline. There ''is'' happiness in the Literature Club.
* Chapter 11.11, where the girls meet [[Anime/{{Shelter}} Rin]], gives the latter a happy ending in making her a Traveling Looper.
* Chapter 18 has lots of warm fuzzies, which is fitting given that it's a BirthdayEpisode (or, as Sayori puts it, "anni-birth-sary").
* During Chapter 19, Monika has her Baseline transgressions absolved by [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Venus]]. Made even better when Sailor Moon herself gives Monika some much-needed mental clarity on her life and friends.
* Chapter 22.7 has Natsuki's father being genuinely nice and caring, resulting in her spending as much time with him as possible that Loop.
* During Chapter 28.1, Monika gets upset that Sayori is overacting, soon figuring that she had a bad Loop, to which Sayori soon quietly admits that it was a Null Loop where she replaced ''ComicBook/HarleyQuinn''.
-->'''Monika:''' Oh. Oh, damn, Sayori–you know what? We are getting you ice cream and cotton candy and fried food and then we are getting back home where you can sleep it all off, and then we are having a real talk tomorrow, okay?\\
'''Sayori:''' ...okay...
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