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* Shiro giving Harry some mentoring and telling him that the war with the Red Court was ''not'' all his fault.
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* Ebenezar [=McCoy=] going all PapaWolf and [[spoiler: dropping the satellite]] on Ortega. Mess with Harry, and Ebenezar will end you.
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* Ebenezar [=McCoy=] going all PapaWolf and [[spoiler: dropping the satellite]] on Ortega. Mess with Harry, and Ebenezar will end you.
** Also, the fact that he gives Harry an offer of shelter on his farm.
** Also, the fact that he gives Harry an offer of shelter on his farm.
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* Anna Valmont steals Harry's coat, his car, and leaves town in a big hurry, but she makes sure to give them back after Harry saves her life. She even has the duster dry-cleaned.
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* Mortimer using his abilities to check up on Susan for Harry. Small but sweet.
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* When Michael tells Harry he needs the latter to do something, Harry earnestly promises that whatever it is, Harry will do it--he owes that much and more to Michael. It's kinda subverted when he tells Michael he can't stay out, but the affection and care on both sides is very clear to see.
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--> [[NobleDemon Marcone was still a black hat. The pain and suffering of the criminal state he ruled accounted for an untold amount of human misery]]. [[WellIntentionedExtremist Maybe he'd been doing it for a noble reason]]. I could understand that. But it didn't change anything. Marconi's good intentions could have paved a new lane on the road to hell.\\
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--> [[NobleDemon Marcone was still a black hat. The pain and suffering of the criminal state he ruled accounted for an untold amount of human misery]]. [[WellIntentionedExtremist Maybe he'd been doing it for a noble reason]]. I could understand that. But it didn't change anything. Marconi's Marcone's good intentions could have paved a new lane on the road to hell.\\
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** Afterwards, Harry discusses this - and his view on Marcone.
--> [[NobleDemon Marcone was still a black hat. The pain and suffering of the criminal state he ruled accounted for an untold amount of human misery]]. [[WellIntentionedExtremist Maybe he'd been doing it for a noble reason]]. I could understand that. But it didn't change anything. Marconi's good intentions could have paved a new lane on the road to hell.\\
But dammit, I couldn't hate him anymore. I couldn't hate him because [[PapaWolf I wasn't sure that I wouldn't have made the same choice]] in his place.\\
Hate was simpler, but the world ain't a simple place. It would have been easier to hate Marcone.\\
I just couldn't do it.
--> [[NobleDemon Marcone was still a black hat. The pain and suffering of the criminal state he ruled accounted for an untold amount of human misery]]. [[WellIntentionedExtremist Maybe he'd been doing it for a noble reason]]. I could understand that. But it didn't change anything. Marconi's good intentions could have paved a new lane on the road to hell.\\
But dammit, I couldn't hate him anymore. I couldn't hate him because [[PapaWolf I wasn't sure that I wouldn't have made the same choice]] in his place.\\
Hate was simpler, but the world ain't a simple place. It would have been easier to hate Marcone.\\
I just couldn't do it.
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--> [[spoiler: ''I hadn't ever pictured John Marcone praying. But I saw him forming the word ''please,'' over and over.'']]
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--> [[spoiler: ''I I hadn't ever pictured John Marcone praying. But I saw him forming the word ''please,'' over and over.'']]]]
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--> ''"Remember. God sees hearts, boy. And now I see yours. Take it[[note]]Fidelacchius, the Sword of Faith[[/note]]. Hold it in trust until you find the one it belongs to."''
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* This is the book where we are first introduced to The Archive. Although she's an seven-year-old girl, she's got the sum total of all human knowledge and wisdom, as well as the collective life experience of every Archive before her. She proceeds to unnerve Harry with her maturity and power despite looking like she could almost be his daughter. But when she sees Mister, Harry's cat, she squeals "KITTY!" like a little girl should and starts playing with him.
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* This is the book where we are first introduced to The Archive. Although she's an a seven-year-old girl, she's got the sum total of all human knowledge and wisdom, as well as the collective life experience of every Archive before her. She proceeds to unnerve Harry with her maturity and power despite looking like she could almost be his daughter. But when she sees Mister, Harry's cat, she squeals "KITTY!" like a little girl should and starts playing with him.him.
* Harry [[spoiler: picking up Lasciel's coin to save Harry Carpenter. It's a trick from the Denarians, and it's later mentioned that he could've picked Harry up instead, but he was still allowing a fallen angel into his brain in order to stop it getting into a kid's. Very Harry Dresden.]]
* Harry [[spoiler: picking up Lasciel's coin to save Harry Carpenter. It's a trick from the Denarians, and it's later mentioned that he could've picked Harry up instead, but he was still allowing a fallen angel into his brain in order to stop it getting into a kid's. Very Harry Dresden.]]
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* Ebenezar McCoy going all PapaWolf and [[spoiler: dropping the satellite]] on Ortega. Mess with Harry, and Ebenezar will end you.
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* Ebenezar McCoy [=McCoy=] going all PapaWolf and [[spoiler: dropping the satellite]] on Ortega. Mess with Harry, and Ebenezar will end you.
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* The very last lines. "I took Susan's picture down. I put the postcards in a brown envelope. I picked up the jewel box that held the dinky engagement ring I'd offered her, and that she'd turned down. Then I put them all in my closet. I laid the old man's cane on my fireplace mantle. Maybe some things just aren't made to go together. Things like oil and water. Orange juice and toothpaste. Me and Susan. But tomorrow was another day."
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* The very last lines. "I took Susan's picture down. I put the postcards in a brown envelope. I picked up the jewel box that held the dinky engagement ring I'd offered her, and that she'd turned down. Then I put them all in my closet. I laid the old man's cane on my fireplace mantle. Maybe some things just aren't made to go together. Things like oil and water. Orange juice and toothpaste. Me and Susan. But tomorrow was another day.""
* Ebenezar McCoy going all PapaWolf and [[spoiler: dropping the satellite]] on Ortega. Mess with Harry, and Ebenezar will end you.
* Ebenezar McCoy going all PapaWolf and [[spoiler: dropping the satellite]] on Ortega. Mess with Harry, and Ebenezar will end you.
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* The very last lines. "I took Susan's picture down. I put the postcards in a brown envelope. I picked up the jewel box that held the dinky engagement ring I'd offered her, and that she'd turned down. Then I put them all in my closet. I laid the old man's cane on my fireplace mantle. Maybe some things just aren't made to go together. Things like oil and water. Orange juice and toothpaste. Me and Susan. But tomorrow was another day."
* Marcones' visit to the hospital where [[spoiler: "Persephone"]] is being cared for. He [[spoiler: brings her a teddy bear, reads to her from a book for an hour, and then lays the Shroud of Turin over her.]] The clincher is at the end, as Harry is watching.
-->''I hadn't ever pictured John Marcone praying. But I saw him forming the word ''please,'' over and over.''
* Marcones' visit to the hospital where [[spoiler: "Persephone"]] is being cared for. He [[spoiler: brings her a teddy bear, reads to her from a book for an hour, and then lays the Shroud of Turin over her.]] The clincher is at the end, as Harry is watching.
-->''I hadn't ever pictured John Marcone praying. But I saw him forming the word ''please,'' over and over.''
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* The very last lines. "I took Susan's picture down. I put the postcards in a brown envelope. I picked up the jewel box that held the dinky engagement ring I'd offered her, and that she'd turned down. Then I put them all in my closet. I laid the old man's cane on my fireplace mantle. Maybe some things just aren't made to go together. Things like oil and water. Orange juice and toothpaste. Me and Susan. But tomorrow was another day."
* Marcones'Marcone's visit to the hospital where [[spoiler: "Persephone"]] is being cared for. He [[spoiler: brings her a teddy bear, reads to her from a book for an hour, and then lays the Shroud of Turin over her.]] The clincher is at the end, as Harry is watching.
-->''I --> [[spoiler: ''I hadn't ever pictured John Marcone praying. But I saw him forming the word ''please,'' over and over.'''']]
* Marcones'
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--> ''"Remember. God sees hearts, boy. And now I see yours. Take it[[note]]Fidelacchius, the Sword of Faith[[/note]]. Hold it in trust until you find the one it belongs to."''"''
* The very last lines. "I took Susan's picture down. I put the postcards in a brown envelope. I picked up the jewel box that held the dinky engagement ring I'd offered her, and that she'd turned down. Then I put them all in my closet. I laid the old man's cane on my fireplace mantle. Maybe some things just aren't made to go together. Things like oil and water. Orange juice and toothpaste. Me and Susan. But tomorrow was another day."
* The very last lines. "I took Susan's picture down. I put the postcards in a brown envelope. I picked up the jewel box that held the dinky engagement ring I'd offered her, and that she'd turned down. Then I put them all in my closet. I laid the old man's cane on my fireplace mantle. Maybe some things just aren't made to go together. Things like oil and water. Orange juice and toothpaste. Me and Susan. But tomorrow was another day."
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--> ''"Remember. God sees hearts, boy. And now I see yours. Take it[[hottip:*:Fidelacchius, the Sword of Faith]]. Hold it in trust until you find the one it belongs to."''
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--> ''"Remember. God sees hearts, boy. And now I see yours. Take it[[hottip:*:Fidelacchius, it[[note]]Fidelacchius, the Sword of Faith]].Faith[[/note]]. Hold it in trust until you find the one it belongs to."''
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* This is the book where we are first introduced to The Archive. Although she's an seven-year-old girl, she's got the sum total of all human knowledge and wisdom, as well as the collective life experience of every Archive before her. She proceeds to unnerve Harry with her maturity and power despite looking like she could almost be his daughter. But when she sees Mister, Harry's cat, she squeals "KITTY!" like a little girl should and starts playing with him.
* The very last lines. "I took Susan's picture down. I put the postcards in a brown envelope. I picked up the jewel box that held the dinky engagement ring I'd offered her, and that she'd turned down. Then I put them all in my closet. I laid the old man's cane on my fireplace mantle. Maybe some things just aren't made to go together. Things like oil and water. Orange juice and toothpaste. Me and Susan. But tomorrow was another day."
* Marcones' visit to the hospital where [[spoiler: "Persephone"]] is being cared for. He [[spoiler: brings her a teddy bear, reads to her from a book for an hour, and then lays the Shroud of Turin over her.]] The clincher is at the end, as Harry is watching.
-->''I hadn't ever pictured John Marcone praying. But I saw him forming the word ''please,'' over and over.''
* [[spoiler:Shiro]] lies tortured, broken, dying, his life taken to fuel a monstrous curse, his blood defiling the airport chapel. But the Denarians couldn't take his dignity, nor his purpose.
--> ''"Remember. God sees hearts, boy. And now I see yours. Take it[[hottip:*:Fidelacchius, the Sword of Faith]]. Hold it in trust until you find the one it belongs to."''
* The very last lines. "I took Susan's picture down. I put the postcards in a brown envelope. I picked up the jewel box that held the dinky engagement ring I'd offered her, and that she'd turned down. Then I put them all in my closet. I laid the old man's cane on my fireplace mantle. Maybe some things just aren't made to go together. Things like oil and water. Orange juice and toothpaste. Me and Susan. But tomorrow was another day."
* Marcones' visit to the hospital where [[spoiler: "Persephone"]] is being cared for. He [[spoiler: brings her a teddy bear, reads to her from a book for an hour, and then lays the Shroud of Turin over her.]] The clincher is at the end, as Harry is watching.
-->''I hadn't ever pictured John Marcone praying. But I saw him forming the word ''please,'' over and over.''
* [[spoiler:Shiro]] lies tortured, broken, dying, his life taken to fuel a monstrous curse, his blood defiling the airport chapel. But the Denarians couldn't take his dignity, nor his purpose.
--> ''"Remember. God sees hearts, boy. And now I see yours. Take it[[hottip:*:Fidelacchius, the Sword of Faith]]. Hold it in trust until you find the one it belongs to."''
