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The user is (a):Editorializing and (b): obesity can have a number of factors that greatly exacerbate the issue.
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** Because some people like to pretend weight gain is a result of anything other than overeating.
*** It seemed the majority of his diet was whole pies that was given to him by Master Danavis. So a diet of 90% pies can do that.
*** It seemed the majority of his diet was whole pies that was given to him by Master Danavis. So a diet of 90% pies can do that.
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** Because some people like to pretend weight gain is a result of anything other than overeating.
***It seemed the majority of his diet was whole pies that was given to him by Master Danavis. So a diet of 90% pies can do that.
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*** It seemed the majority of his diet was whole pies that was given to him by Master Danavis. So a diet of 90% pies can do that.
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*** It seemed the majority of his diet was whole pies that was given to him by Master Danavis. So a diet of 90% pies can do that.that.
**** This. While they obviously were fairly poor, there are several things that seem to indicate food was readily available.
**** This. While they obviously were fairly poor, there are several things that seem to indicate food was readily available.
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** Because some people like to pretend weight gain is a result of anything other than overeating.
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** Because some people like to pretend weight gain is a result of anything other than overeating.overeating.
*** It seemed the majority of his diet was whole pies that was given to him by Master Danavis. So a diet of 90% pies can do that.
*** It seemed the majority of his diet was whole pies that was given to him by Master Danavis. So a diet of 90% pies can do that.
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* Kip grew up in a farming village as the son of a single mother who smoked most of their money away. So how did he manage to get fat?
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* Kip grew up in a farming village as the son of a single mother who smoked most of their money away. So how did he manage to get fat?fat?
**Because some people like to pretend weight gain is a result of anything other than overeating.
**Because some people like to pretend weight gain is a result of anything other than overeating.
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* Kip grew up in a farming village as the son of a single mother who smoked most of their money away. So how did he manage to get fat?
