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* Rancora got a majority of her negative energy ideas from books on Negatite Arts and Crafts. Who wrote those books and why?
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* Rancora got a majority of her negative energy ideas from books on books, such as Negatite Arts and Crafts. Who wrote those books and why?
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** Given that around 50 percent of wish missions end in failure and their society hasn't collapsed by now, granted wish energy seems just ''that'' powerful. Children's wishes being granted has a major increase in power, as well. Since Star Darlings as a species are close to humans, even if their society isn't, it could also be a metaphor for pollution, especially with negative energy. [[spoiler:Scarlet's book ''confirms'' the pollution metaphor, with there being a negative energy dumping ground that's slowly been leaking over time]].
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** Given that around 50 percent of wish missions end in failure and their society hasn't collapsed by now, granted wish energy seems just ''that'' powerful. Children's wishes being granted has a major increase in power, as well. Since Star Darlings Starlings as a species are close to humans, even if their society isn't, it could also be a metaphor for pollution, especially with negative energy. [[spoiler:Scarlet's Scarlet's book ''confirms'' the pollution metaphor, with there being a negative energy dumping ground that's slowly been leaking over time]].time.
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* So Rancora got a majority of her negative energy ideas from a book. Who wrote that book and why?
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* So Rancora got a majority of her negative energy ideas from a book. books on Negatite Arts and Crafts. Who wrote that book those books and why?
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* So if there's a big energy crisis looming and there's the threat of all of Wishland losing its magic, shouldn't they maybe be trying to conserve some of that magic instead of continuing to use it for frivolous-seeming things like guide robots and new outfits and re-creating your entire room and, y'know, things that us "primitive" humans have been managing fine without for years? It's a bit hard to be concerned when the terrible crisis doesn't seem to have affected their way of life at all so far.
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* So if there's a big energy crisis looming and there's the threat of all of Wishland Starland losing its magic, shouldn't they maybe be trying to conserve some of that magic instead of continuing to use it for frivolous-seeming things like guide robots and new outfits and re-creating your entire room and, y'know, things that us "primitive" humans have been managing fine without for years? It's a bit hard to be concerned when the terrible crisis doesn't seem to have affected their way of life at all so far.
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* So Rancora got a majority of her negative energy ideas from a book. Who wrote that book and why?
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** In official art her hair is loose. It's only in the cartoon where it's braided.
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* So if there's a big energy crisis looming and there's the threat of all of Wishland losing it's its magic, shouldn't they maybe be trying to conserve some of that magic instead of continuing to use it for frivolous-seeming things like guide robots and new outfits and re-creating your entire room and, y'know, things that us "primitive" humans have been managing fine without for years? It's a bit hard to be concerned when the terrible crisis doesn't seem to have affected their way of life at all so far.
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** Because the story seems to be about her connecting to Scarlet, who is Scorpio.
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** Because the story seems to be about her connecting to Scarlet, who is Scorpio.
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*If Sage is matched to Sagittarius like the character page (and her name) implies, why is her hair styled after a pair of scorpion tails?
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** Given that around 50 percent of wish missions end in failure and their society hasn't collapsed by now, granted wish energy seems just ''that'' powerful. Children's wishes being granted has a major increase in power, as well. Since Star Darlings as a species are close to humans, even if their society isn't, it could also be a metaphor for pollution, especially with negative energy. [[spoiler:Scarlet's book ''confirms'' the pollution metaphor, with there being a negative energy dumping ground that's slowly been leaking over time]].
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** Their society is, as the above troper noted, very different from ours. They seem to be far more advanced than humans in some ways while far behind us in others, and things like doing chores are one of the ways they're behind. Besides, if they've been using magic to do simple things for so long, they honestly might not know how to do these things without magic.
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** Given that around 50 percent of wish missions end in failure and their society hasn't collapsed by now, granted wish energy seems just ''that'' powerful. Children's wishes being granted has a major increase in power, as well. Since Star Darlings as a species are close to humans, even if their society isn't, it could also be a metaphor for pollution, especially with negative energy.
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