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* How does Nocturna work? By Tim's reaction it seems like humans don't know about it, but it's not an issue if they do either. Lots of Nocturna workers who do seem Tim do not have that big of a reaction to seeing a little boy who is supposed to be asleep discovering their operation.
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* How does Nocturna work? By Tim's reaction it seems like humans don't know about it, but it's not an issue if they do either. Lots of Nocturna workers who do seem see Tim do not have that big of a reaction to seeing a little boy who is supposed to be asleep discovering their operation.
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* How does Nocturna work? By Tim's reaction it seems like humans don't know about it, but it's not an issue if they do either.
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* How does Nocturna work? By Tim's reaction it seems like humans don't know about it, but it's not an issue if they do either. Lots of Nocturna workers who do seem Tim do not have that big of a reaction to seeing a little boy who is supposed to be asleep discovering their operation.
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* Now that the whole lunar process is automated, wouldn't it be public knowledge in Nocturna that there is no longer a Star Keeper?
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* Now that the whole lunar process is automated, wouldn't it be public knowledge in Nocturna that there is no longer a Star Keeper?Keeper?
* If one boy's fear of the night can cause such a big problem, what about all the other nichtophobic children?
* If one boy's fear of the night can cause such a big problem, what about all the other nichtophobic children?
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* How does Nocturna work? By Tim's reaction it seems like humans don't know about it, but it's not an issue if they do either.
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* How does Nocturna work? By Tim's reaction it seems like humans don't know about it, but it's not an issue if they do either.either.
* Now that the whole lunar process is automated, wouldn't it be public knowledge in Nocturna that there is no longer a Star Keeper?
* Now that the whole lunar process is automated, wouldn't it be public knowledge in Nocturna that there is no longer a Star Keeper?
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* How does Nocturna work? By Tim's reaction it seems like humans don't know about it, but it's not an issue if they do either.
