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Salmon stalk the streets\\
The green tide rolls over all\\
The Big Run cometh!
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What's up with the Square?\\
All is bleached a lifeless white\\
Where is everyone?
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All is bleached a lifeless white\\
Where is everyone?
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But has dreadful aim.
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But has dreadful subpar aim.
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Splattershot Nova:\\
Long range, low damage, paints well,\\
But has dreadful aim.
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Squids and octos love\\
Fashion, music, paintball fights\\
And saving the world
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Fashion, music, paintball fights\\
And saving the world
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Splatsville, chaotic city's here\\
All cultures mesh, making it fresh\\
Anarchy rainbow makes all cheer.
Splatsville, chaotic city's here\\
All cultures mesh, making it fresh\\
Anarchy rainbow makes all cheer.
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%%Tabletop Turfwar, a fun way to pass time.\\
[[MiracleRally Wait how did that happen?!]] Damn you Captain!\\
[[SoreLoser Beating me should be a crime!]]
[[MiracleRally Wait how did that happen?!]] Damn you Captain!\\
[[SoreLoser Beating me should be a crime!]]
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%%Tabletop Turfwar, a Turfwar; fun way to pass time.pastime.\\
[[MiracleRallyWait how did Wait, how'd that happen?!]] Damn you Arrrgh, Captain!\\
[[SoreLoserBeating Defeating me should be a crime!]]
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[{DefectorFromDecadence Leaves a life of war behind]]\\
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Octo engineer\\
[{DefectorFromDecadence Leaves a life of war behind]]\\
[[HeelRaceTurn More to come, perhaps?]]
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[{DefectorFromDecadence Leaves a life of war behind]]\\
[[HeelRaceTurn More to come, perhaps?]]
-->-- @/{{Lapsem}}
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There boy. I think I got it now.
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%%Three parties unite to save the Earth\\
Wait, how that fish grow so big? He's the size of an oil rig!\\
Don't bother about that, help him prove his worth
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Wait, how that fish grow so big? He's the size of an oil rig!\\
Don't bother about that, help him prove his worth
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Don't bother about that, help
He fights a bear, despite his
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-->-- @/{{dudeu}}
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If you two want an example of how to write a Mem Cake-style poem, compare my two poems, and check out Inkipedia's page
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Six floating amps, howling in tune.\\
With piercing call passing through walls,\\
From near or far, they sing your doom.
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With piercing call passing through walls,\\
From near or far, they sing your doom.
-->-- @/{{Lapsem}}
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I've commented these entries out until you two can rewrite them to adhere to the rhyming scheme. See the top of the document for the mem cake rhyming structure.
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Three parties unite to save the Earth\\
Three parties unite to save the Earth\\
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Three parties unite to save the Earth\\
Wait, how that fish grow so big? He's the size of an oil rig!\\
Don't bother about that, help him prove his worth
-->-- @/{{dudeu}}
Three parties unite to save the Earth\\
Wait, how that fish grow so big? He's the size of an oil rig!\\
Don't bother about that, help him prove his worth
-->-- @/{{dudeu}}
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Hairmeggedon, eh?\\
Hold on, I can't call it that\\
HR don't like it.
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Hold on, I can't call it that\\
HR don't like it.
-->-- @/{{dudeu}}
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[[MagicMusic The Inkantation,]] in beat with splatters.\\
Carved into DNA,Here’s what I say:\\
[[TheParanoiac Can’t trust it, shred it to tatters.]]
Tabletop Turfwar, a fun way to pass time.\\
[[MiracleRally Wait how did that happen?!]] Damn you Captain!\\
[[SoreLoser Beating me should be a crime!]]
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[[MagicMusic The Inkantation,]] in beat with splatters.\\
Carved into DNA,Here’s what I say:\\
[[TheParanoiac Can’t trust it, shred it to tatters.]]
Tabletop Turfwar, a fun way to pass time.\\
[[MiracleRally Wait how did that happen?!]] Damn you Captain!\\
[[SoreLoser Beating me should be a crime!]]
-->-- @/{{Cyboy}}
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Fail test? [[ExplosiveLeash Kablooey!]]
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Underground subway\\
A trial at each station\\
Fail test? [[ExplosiveLeash Kablooey!]]
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Splat in a flash, but there's a catch:\\
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[[ArtAttacker Brushing the turf with frantic swings.]]\\
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[[ArtAttacker Inking the turf with frantic swings.]]\\
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[[ArtAttacker Inking Brushing the turf with frantic swings.]]\\
Splatwith in a slash, flash, but there's a catch:\\
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[[ArtAttacker Inking the turf with frantic swings.]]\\
Splat with a slash, but there's a catch:\\
[[CloseRangeCombatant Those far away won't feel its sting.]]
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Splat with a slash, but there's a catch:\\
[[CloseRangeCombatant Those far away won't feel its sting.]]
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Squidkids flinging ink\\
In [[HumanitysWake a world bereft of man]]?\\
In [[HumanitysWake a world bereft of man]]?\\
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[[ItMakesSenseInContext Squidkids flinging ink\\
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[[HumanitysWake In a world bereft ofman]]?\\man?]]\\
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Squidkids flinging ink\\
In [[HumanitysWake a world bereft of man]]?\\
[[CrazyEnoughToWork Where do I sign up?]]
-->-- @/{{Lapsem}}
In [[HumanitysWake a world bereft of man]]?\\
[[CrazyEnoughToWork Where do I sign up?]]
-->-- @/{{Lapsem}}
