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Added: 134

Changed: 27

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You clearly don’t know how haikus work. They were the right amount of syllables to begin with.


"Oh son of a bitch"\\
Church stared death right in the face.\\
[Firing main cannon]
-->"Episode 8: Don’t [=Ph34r=] the Reaper", Season 1.



Why we're here?" asking\\
In the base.

to:

Why we're here?" asking\\
In the
Simmons asked Grif\\
On top of their
base.

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too many syllables


"Oh son of a bitch"\\
Church stared death right in the face.\\
[Firing main cannon]
-->"Episode 8: Don’t [=Ph34r=] the Reaper", Season 1.



Why we're here?" Simmons asked Grif\\
On top of their base.

to:

Why we're here?" Simmons asked Grif\\
On top of their
asking\\
In the
base.
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A haiku goes 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.


"You ever wonder why are\\
we here," Simmons asked Grif one day\\

to:

"You ever wonder why are\\
we here,"
wonder\\
Why we're here?"
Simmons asked Grif one day\\Grif\\
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"Why are we here?" Grif\\
asked his pal Simmons, one day\\

to:

"Why are "You ever wonder why are\\
we here?" Grif\\
here," Simmons asked his pal Simmons, Grif one day\\
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The middle line is supposed to have 7 syllables.


asked his pal Simmons, one boring day\\

to:

asked his pal Simmons, one boring day\\
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On top of their base.\\
-->"Episode 1: Why Are We Here?", Season 1.

to:

On top of their base.\\
-->"Episode
base.
--> "Episode
1: Why Are We Here?", Season 1.
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Because it needs to be here


-->"Episode 1: Why Are We Here?, Season 1.

to:

-->"Episode 1: Why Are We Here?, Here?", Season 1.

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-->"Episode 8: Don’t [=Ph34r=] the Reaper", Season 1.

to:

-->"Episode 8: Don’t [=Ph34r=] the Reaper", Season 1.

"Why are we here?" Grif\\
asked his pal Simmons, one boring day\\
On top of their base.\\
-->"Episode 1: Why Are We Here?, Season
1.
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Oh son of a bitch\\

to:

Oh "Oh son of a bitch\\bitch"\\



[Firing main cannon]\\
-Season 1: Episode 8

to:

[Firing main cannon]\\
-Season 1: Episode 8
cannon]
-->"Episode 8: Don’t [=Ph34r=] the Reaper", Season 1.
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Oh son of a bitch
Church stared death right in the face.
Firing main cannon

to:

Oh son of a bitch
bitch\\
Church stared death right in the face.
Firing
face.\\
[Firing
main cannoncannon]\\
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Oh son of a bitch
Church stared death right in the face.
Firing main cannon
-Season 1: Episode 8

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