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Dear Sariatu\\
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Such a warm, caring mother\\
Daughter of the Moon
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Such a warm, caring mother\\
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Kubo's shamisen\\
Does more than play catchy tunes\\
Power to the song!
Does more than play catchy tunes\\
Power to the song!
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Does more than play catchy tunes\\
Power to
His Grandfather stole his eye\\
That's the
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She's quite handy with the blade\\
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Don't mess with Monkey
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Don't mess with Monkey
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Bereft of a dad
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This bug knows his archery\\
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The Mighty Beetle
"Not so good at ending them"\\
Kubo has talent
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Hanzo's nemesis\\
The unblinking moon watches\\
All hail the Moon King
The unblinking moon watches\\
All hail the Moon King
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All hail the Moon King
Lovely soul, likes stories with\\
Fire-breathing chickens
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Eerily, they hunt Kubo\\
Beware the Sisters
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Beware the Sisters
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Power to the
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Monsters great and small\\
From Gashadokuro to\\
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The Garden
Greatest Hero in Japan\\
Father of
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His Grandfather stole his eye\\
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That's the least of it...
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That's
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Greatest Hero in Japan\\
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Father of Kubo
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Father of Kubo
Eerily, they hunt Kubo\\
Beware the Sisters
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Kubo chose mercy]]
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Kubo chose mercy]]
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She's quite handy with the blade\\
Don't mess with Monkey
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This bug knows his archery\\
The Mighty Beetle
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Monsters great and small\\
From Gashadokuro to\\
The Garden of Eyes
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Kubo could have hurt or helped\\
Kubo chose mercy]]
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This bug knows his archery\\
The Mighty Beetle
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Monsters great and small\\
From Gashadokuro to\\
The Garden of Eyes
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[[spoiler: A mortal grandpa\\
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Kubo chose mercy]]
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End the story together\\
Two last words: the end...]]
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Kubo could have hurt or helped\\
Kubo chose mercy]]
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[[spoiler: Mother, Father, Son\\
End the story together\\
Two last words: the end...]]
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Origami stories\\
Are Kubo's occupation\\
The kid has talent
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Are Kubo's occupation\\
The kid has talent
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He whispered four words\\
These words changed everything\\
"I love you, Monkey"
He whispered four words\\
These words changed everything\\
"I love you, Monkey"
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The kid's got talent
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The kid's got kid has talent
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Kubo's shamisen
shamisen\\
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Does more than play catchy
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She's quite handy with the blade
She's quite handy with the blade
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Serious primate
primate\\
She's quite handy with thebladeblade\\
She's quite handy with the
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Inside his thorax
thorax\\
This bug knows hisarcheryarchery\\
This bug knows his
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Origami stories
Are Kubo's occupation
Are Kubo's occupation
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Origami stories
stories\\
Are Kubo'soccupationoccupation\\
Are Kubo's
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Hanzo's nemesis
The unblinking moon watches
The unblinking moon watches
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Hanzo's nemesis
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The unblinking moonwatcheswatches\\
The unblinking moon
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First one, and then two
Eerily, they hunt Kubo
Eerily, they hunt Kubo
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First one, and then two
two\\
Eerily, they huntKuboKubo\\
Eerily, they hunt
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Monsters great and small
From Gashadokuro to
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Monsters great and small
small\\
From Gashadokurototo\\
From Gashadokuro
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His name is Kubo
His Grandfather stole his eye
His Grandfather stole his eye
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His name is Kubo
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His Grandfather stole his
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Greatest Hero in Japan
Greatest Hero in Japan
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Hanzo\\
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Greatest Hero in
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He whispered four words
These words changed everything
These words changed everything
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These words changed everything
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Hanzo's nemesis
The unblinking moon watches
All hail the Moon King
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Eerily, they hunt Kubo
Beware the Sisters
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Monsters great and small
From Gashadokuro to
The Garden of Eyes
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His name is Kubo
His Grandfather stole his eye
That's the least of it...
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Samurai Hanzo
Greatest Hero in Japan
Father of Kubo
Hanzo's nemesis
The unblinking moon watches
All hail the Moon King
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First one, and then two
Eerily, they hunt Kubo
Beware the Sisters
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Monsters great and small
From Gashadokuro to
The Garden of Eyes
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His name is Kubo
His Grandfather stole his eye
That's the least of it...
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Greatest Hero in Japan
Father of Kubo
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Origami stories
Are Kubo's occupation
The kid's got talent
Origami stories
Are Kubo's occupation
The kid's got talent
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Does more than play catchy tunes
Power to the song!
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Serious primate
She's quite handy with the blade
Don't mess with Monkey
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Inside his thorax
This bug knows his archery
The Mighty Beetle
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Power to the song!
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Serious primate
She's quite handy with the blade
Don't mess with Monkey
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Inside his thorax
This bug knows his archery
The Mighty Beetle
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