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Removing non-haikus
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pizza, it's mine!\\
but theft comes soon after\\
but give up, i don't
-->--@/Awe921
but theft comes soon after\\
but give up, i don't
-->--@/Awe921
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Remember!\\
[[SilenceIsGolden Minimise dialogue!]]\\
They prefer it that way.
-->--Tropers/SomeLibre, after a [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=15722191200A41285800&page=93#comment-2311 soft lesson]] by {{Tropers/MOARPYLONZ}} regarding dialogue-heavy scenes.
[[SilenceIsGolden Minimise dialogue!]]\\
They prefer it that way.
-->--Tropers/SomeLibre, after a [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=15722191200A41285800&page=93#comment-2311 soft lesson]] by {{Tropers/MOARPYLONZ}} regarding dialogue-heavy scenes.
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Sorry about all the edits, the saves were glitching.
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-->--Tropers/SomeLibre, after a [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=15722191200A41285800&page=93#comment-2311 soft lesson]] by {{Tropers/MOARPYLONZ}} regarding dialogue-heavy scenes.
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-->--Tropers/SomeLibre, after a [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=15722191200A41285800&page=93#comment-2311 soft lesson]] by {{Tropers/MOARPYLONZ}} regarding dialogue-heavy scenes.scenes.
I held the pizza\\
In my hands, then it was gone!\\
Someone had took it.
-->—@/Pbskidsfan
I held the pizza\\
In my hands, then it was gone!\\
Someone had took it.
-->—@/Pbskidsfan
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-->-Tropers/DookieIdiotNimrod
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Silence Is Golden, newcomers.
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Remember!\\
[[SilenceIsGolden Minimise dialogue!]]\\
They prefer it that way.
-->--Tropers/SomeLibre, after a [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=15722191200A41285800&page=93#comment-2311 soft lesson]] by {{Tropers/MOARPYLONZ}} regarding dialogue-heavy scenes.
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This pizza is yours?\\
Why, that simply cannot be!\\
Now die horribly.
-->—@/PurpleEyedGuma
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THAT PIZZA MINE! \\
DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM!\\
I'M RICHER THAN GOD!
-->--[[Tropers/{{Foreman}} Foreman]]
DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM!\\
I'M RICHER THAN GOD!
-->--[[Tropers/{{Foreman}} Foreman]]
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DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM!\\
I'M RICHER THAN GOD!
-->--[[Tropers/{{Foreman}} Foreman]]
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-->--Tropers/NineTailedCat
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You have the pizza!\\
*smack smack punch punch punch kick kick*\\
No pizza for you!
-->--Tropers/R3Ked
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I wrote this haiku\\
To distract you long enough\\
To steal the pizza.
-->--Tropers/NineTailedCat
I wrote this haiku\\
To distract you long enough\\
To steal the pizza.
-->--Tropers/NineTailedCat
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I'M RICHER THAN GOD!\\
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I'M RICHER THAN GOD!\\GOD!
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THAT PIZZA MINE!
DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM!
I'M RICHER THAN GOD!
DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM!
I'M RICHER THAN GOD!
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THAT PIZZA MINE!
MINE! \\
DO YOU KNOW WHO IAM!
AM!\\
I'M RICHER THANGOD!GOD!\\
DO YOU KNOW WHO I
I'M RICHER THAN
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-->--[[Tropers/{{Florien}} Florien]]
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THAT PIZZA MINE!
DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM!
I'M RICHER THAN GOD!
-->--[[Tropers/{{Foreman}} Foreman]]
THAT PIZZA MINE!
DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM!
I'M RICHER THAN GOD!
-->--[[Tropers/{{Foreman}} Foreman]]
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-->--@/Awe921
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We all claim it, yes.\\
The hunger for it is vast.\\
By losing, all win.
-->--[[Tropers/{{Florien}} Florien]]
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-->--@/TheWhistleTropes
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pizza, it's mine!\\
but theft comes soon after\\
but give up, i don't
-->--@/Awe921
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-Tropers/DookieIdiotNimrod
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Well, what have we here?\\
Pepperoni pizza pie?\\
Gimme that--oh fuck.
-->--@/TheWhistleTropes
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I finally have it
I put in my mouth
and OUCH WHAT THE FU-
I put in my mouth
and OUCH WHAT THE FU-
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I finally have it
it\\
I put in mymouth
mouth\\
and OUCH WHAT THEFU-
FU-\\
I put in my
and OUCH WHAT THE
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With One Pizza Standing
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I put in my mouth and OUCH WHAT THE FU-
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I put in my mouth mouth
and OUCH WHAT THE FU-
and OUCH WHAT THE FU-
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-->—[[Tropers/KungFuCutBug Kung-Fu Cutbug]]
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-->—[[Tropers/KungFuCutBug Kung-Fu Cutbug]]Cutbug]]
With One Pizza Standing
I finally have it
I put in my mouth and OUCH WHAT THE FU-
—->-Tropers/DookieIdiotNimrod
With One Pizza Standing
I finally have it
I put in my mouth and OUCH WHAT THE FU-
—->-Tropers/DookieIdiotNimrod
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-->—Tropers/MadameButterflyKnife
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oh, look, there's pizza!\\
time to fight you to the death\\
just to have a bite!
-->—[[Tropers/KungFuCutBug Kung-Fu Cutbug]]
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Give me that pizza.\\
I will commit a war crime\\
So I can eat it.
-->—Tropers/MadameButterflyKnife
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Only one pizza.\\
We fight and try to get it.\\
And kill each other.
-->—Tropers/{{Jaketroper}}
We fight and try to get it.\\
And kill each other.
-->—Tropers/{{Jaketroper}}