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*In ''Fanfic/ThroughTheLookingGlassMyNextLifeAsAVillainess'', the Geord from ''Fortune Lover'' comes to the world of ''LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainess'' and breaks his engagement with that world's Katarina so he can be with Maria, only to learn that this world's Maria is in love with Katarina. [[spoiler:Sirius]] takes advantage of this and uses his dark magic to enhance Geord's anger at both world's Katarina, with the expectation that he'll humiliate or even exile her. Instead, the rage consumes Geord so much to tries to ''kill'' Katarina, much to [[spoiler: Sirius's]] horror.
*In ''Fanfic/ThroughTheLookingGlassMyNextLifeAsAVillainess'', the Geord from ''Fortune Lover'' comes to the world of ''LightNovel/MyNextLifeAsAVillainess'' and breaks his engagement with that world's Katarina so he can be with Maria, only to learn that this world's Maria is in love with Katarina. [[spoiler:Sirius]] takes advantage of this and uses his dark magic to enhance Geord's anger at both world's Katarina, with the expectation that he'll humiliate or even exile her. Instead, the rage consumes Geord so much to tries to ''kill'' Katarina, much to [[spoiler: Sirius's]] horror.
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* In the fanfic Fanfic/DuelNature, Twilight Sparkle GotVolunteered into a duel with Princess Luna. While it was supposed to be a friendly match, emotions quickly got out of control: in an effort to break Luna's concentration, Twilight resorted to psychological warfare, using her knowledge of the princess to hurt her, culminating in a full-blown BreakThemByTalking moment, which did disrupt her concentration, but turned a sparring match into a deathmatch.
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* In the fanfic Fanfic/DuelNature, ''Fanfic/DuelNature'', Twilight Sparkle GotVolunteered into a duel with Princess Luna. While it was supposed to be a friendly match, emotions quickly got out of control: in an effort to break Luna's concentration, Twilight resorted to psychological warfare, using her knowledge of the princess to hurt her, culminating in a full-blown BreakThemByTalking moment, which did disrupt her concentration, but turned a sparring match into a deathmatch.
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** Harriett brews a Potentialis Potion that is meant to reveal a witch or wizard's magical gifts. However, it appears to have been more potent than intended, and actually gives -- or at least unlocks -- gifts that weren't there before. After seeing [[PowerIncontinence what happened to one of her friends]], she's too scared to take it herself.
** Sixteen-year-old Tom Riddle created the Diary [[spoiler: with the intent of ensuring he never became complacent, because the Diary-construct was a snapshot of his personality and would never change]]. Which means that when his older and more experienced self decides that [[spoiler: maybe some of his decisions at age sixteen weren't the best, the construct doesn't want to hear it and strikes out on its own]].
** Harriett brews a Potentialis Potion that is meant to reveal a witch or wizard's magical gifts. However, it appears to have been more potent than intended, and actually gives -- or at least unlocks -- gifts that weren't there before. After seeing [[PowerIncontinence what happened to one of her friends]], she's too scared to take it herself.
** Sixteen-year-old Tom Riddle created the Diary [[spoiler: with the intent of ensuring he never became complacent, because the Diary-construct was a snapshot of his personality and would never change]]. Which means that when his older and more experienced self decides that [[spoiler: maybe some of his decisions at age sixteen weren't the best, the construct doesn't want to hear it and strikes out on its own]].
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* ''Fanfic/BoldoresAndBoomsticks'': Whisper starts taunting and poking Sabra, in an attempt to provoke her into learning Outrage. Instead, Sabra gets so mad [[spoiler:she evolves into a Hakamo-o and punches her in the face with a [[{{Shoryuken}} Sky Uppercut]]]].
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* In ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/4824959/chapters/11049539 The Finest One]]'', Waver tries to counter [[CharmPerson Lancer's]] Charm by adding a repulsion curse. Waver ends up overdoing it and makes Lancer look like a horrid figure to any of the female sex (though Lancer is initially relieved at not having women immediately fall for him thanks to the charm mark).
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* In the ''VideoGame/AHatInTime'' [[AlternateUniverse AU]] fic ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24654493/chapters/59615725#workskin What to Expect When You're On the Run]]'', Vanessa uses TheBabyTrap to get Michael to leave his university and be with her more permanently. She succeeds alright, and Michael stays with her to care for his daughter. Unfortunately, Vanessa becomes a JealousParent when she feels Michael is spending too much time with Harriet (their (said daughter).
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6694302/1/Naruto-Myoushuu-no-Fuuin Naruto: Myoushuu no Fuuin]]'', Sarutobi's efforts to hide Naruto's parentage are so successful that the boy believe he's the SonOfAWhore and one of her clients. Kakashi and Jiraiya are both furious with Sarutobi when they learn this.
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6694302/1/Naruto-Myoushuu-no-Fuuin Naruto: Myoushuu no Fuuin]]'', ''Fanfic/NarutoMyoushuunoFuuin'', Sarutobi's efforts to hide Naruto's parentage are so successful that the boy believe he's the SonOfAWhore and one of her clients. Kakashi and Jiraiya are both furious with Sarutobi when they learn this.
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* In ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13104560/1/ Thin Line Between Love and Hate]]'', Sasuke, out of frustration and annoyance at his fangirls, gives each one a [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech breaking speech]] to make them lose their admiration towards him and leave him alone (he also gives one to Hinata for her admiration towards Naruto). This not only breaks any infatuation towards him, but sets the seed for intense ''hatred'' at him, enough that one all-kunoichi team (composed of Ino, Sakura, and Hinata) are plotting to destroy him.
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* ''Fanfic/DoctorGhemorIPresume'' has the Obsidian Order abducting Dr Julian Bashir and gaslighting him into believing he's one of their agents to launch a sting operation on said disappeared agent's father. Courtesy of Julian's rather delicate relation with reality and craving for genuine caring bonds, he eagerly embraces Legate Ghemor as his father. Entek is left a bit flummoxed by this development.
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* In ''[[Fanfic/DanganronpaTheImmersiveLearningProgram Danganronpa: Academy of Discontent]]'', Fuyuhiko and Peko both try to take the First Blood Perk at the same time, allowing them to escape together without a trial. [[spoiler:They succeed in killing their targets, but because Monokuma could use the security cameras to pinpoint which victim died first, he granted the perk to Fuyuhiko only, and had him removed from the academy and apart from Peko]].
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* In the fanfic ''FanFic/{{Cat-Ra}}'', Shadow Weaver manipulated Adora with the intent of making her more cruel and ruthless. Adora realizes what kind of person Shadow Weaver is and betrays her to Hordak without a second thought while giving her a brutal Breaking Speech.
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* In the fanfic ''FanFic/{{Cat-Ra}}'', ''Fanfic/{{Cat-Ra}}'', Shadow Weaver manipulated Adora with the intent of making her more cruel and ruthless. Adora realizes what kind of person Shadow Weaver is and betrays her to Hordak without a second thought while giving her a brutal Breaking Speech.
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* In the fanfic FanFic/Cat-Ra, ''FanFic/Cat-Ra'', Shadow Weaver manipulated Adora with the intent of making her more cruel and ruthless. Adora realizes what kind of person Shadow Weaver is and betrays her to Hordak without a second thought while giving her a brutal Breaking Speech.
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** Orbko was designed to learn from and adapt to any obstacle that interfered with its mission, and the results far surpassed Entrapta's expectations. Unfortunately, when its priority to defend itself and its orders not to harm Frosta come into conflict, it decides that its own programming is an obstacle and overwrites it to reclassify Frosta as an enemy.
Shadow Weaver: I've created a monster.
Adora: No, you've created your replacement.
** Orbko was designed to learn from and adapt to any obstacle that interfered with its mission, and the results far surpassed Entrapta's expectations. Unfortunately, when its priority to defend itself and its orders not to harm Frosta come into conflict, it decides that its own programming is an obstacle and overwrites it to reclassify Frosta as an enemy.
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* In {{Cat-Ra}}, FanFic/Cat-Ra, Shadow Weaver manipulated Adora with the intent of making her more cruel and ruthless. Adora realizes what kind of person Shadow Weaver is and betrays her to Hordak without a second thought while giving her a brutal Breaking Speech.
Shadow -->Shadow Weaver: [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone I've created a monster.
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-->Adora: No, you've created your replacement.
** Orbko was designed to learn from and adapt to any obstacle that interfered with its mission, and the results far surpassed Entrapta's expectations.Unfortunately, [[spoiler:Unfortunately, when its priority to defend itself and its orders not to harm Frosta come into conflict, it decides that its own programming is an obstacle and overwrites it to reclassify Frosta as an enemy.]]
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Adora: No, you've created your replacement.
**Orbko was designed to learn from and adapt to any obstacle that interfered with its mission, and the results far surpassed Entrapta's expectations. Unfortunately, when its priority to defend itself and its orders not to harm Frosta come into conflict, it decides that its own programming is an obstacle and overwrites it to reclassify Frosta as an enemy.
Shadow Weaver: I've created a monster.
Adora: No, you've created your replacement.
**Orbko was designed to learn from and adapt to any obstacle that interfered with its mission, and the results far surpassed Entrapta's expectations. Unfortunately, when its priority to defend itself and its orders not to harm Frosta come into conflict, it decides that its own programming is an obstacle and overwrites it to reclassify Frosta as an enemy.
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* In ''Fanfic/MarcBeingInAGangRights'', in the very first chapter, Marc's gang snatches Nathaniel and holds a knife to his face and threatens to harm him if he hurts Marc in anyway, hoping it would scare Nathan enough not to pull anything with Marc. What they weren't intending was for Nathaniel - who is being ganged up by a group of strangers in an alleyway, pinned to a wall with a knife in his face - to start wailing in terror and bursting out into tears.
--> '''Male Gang-Member #1''': Oh shit, are you crying? Yeah, I'm not dealing with that.\\
'''Marc's sister''': Hey, uh, maybe don't cry?\\
'''Nathaniel''': YOU WERE JUST THREATENING ME WITH KNIVES, WHAT DO YOU MEAN?\\
'''Male Gang-Member #2''': Shit, Marc's gonna kill us if we made his boyfriend cry, abort, abort!
--> '''Male Gang-Member #1''': Oh shit, are you crying? Yeah, I'm not dealing with that.\\
'''Marc's sister''': Hey, uh, maybe don't cry?\\
'''Nathaniel''': YOU WERE JUST THREATENING ME WITH KNIVES, WHAT DO YOU MEAN?\\
'''Male Gang-Member #2''': Shit, Marc's gonna kill us if we made his boyfriend cry, abort, abort!
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* In the fanfic ''Zootopia: Lone Digger'' (a crossover between the [[Disney/{{Zootopia}} film]] and music video for the song by Music/CaravanPalace), a landlord is trying to close down the Lone Digger Club by arranging a brawl between patrons. Instead, he gets the bloody slaughter depicted in the music video.
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* In the fanfic ''Zootopia: Lone Digger'' (a crossover between the [[Disney/{{Zootopia}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Zootopia}} film]] and music video for the song by Music/CaravanPalace), a landlord is trying to close down the Lone Digger Club by arranging a brawl between patrons. Instead, he gets the bloody slaughter depicted in the music video.
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* ''FanFic/ARabbitAmongWolves'': Jaune manages to succeed well enough in his first mission, that Sienna Kahn expects him to expand his work and recruitment, rather than just lay low like he wanted until he could convince the public he wasn't evil. Being in a terrorist organization, [[YouHaveFailedMe he knows what would happen if he refused her orders]].
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* In ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' fanfiction ''Fanfic/BoysAndGirls'', Lincoln reminds Lori of Bobby to get her to stop fawning over Hugh. It works, but also makes her cry.
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6694302/1/Naruto-Myoushuu-no-Fuuin Naruto: Myoushuu no Fuuin]]'', Sarutobi's efforts to hide Naruto's parentage are so successful that the boy believe he's the SonOfAWhore and one of her clients. Kakashi and Jiraiya are both furious with Sarutobi when they learn this.this.
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* In ''WebVideo/SwordArtOnlineAbridged'', Rosalia subjects Kirito to a BreakingSpeech intended to reduce him to a gibbering wreck before she and her Titan's Hand goons mug him. However, this doesn't change the fact that Kirito [[RPGMechanicsVerse is still thirty levels higher than them]], so they can't even harm him even when he's not bothering to dodge their attacks. All Rosalia succeeds in doing is turning a {{Jerkass}} into a LaughingMad [[AxeCrazy killing machine]], ''then'' slamming ''several'' of his {{Berserk Button}}s, which turns out to be a fatal mistake.
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* In ''WebVideo/SwordArtOnlineAbridged'', Rosalia subjects Kirito to a BreakingSpeech intended to reduce him to a gibbering wreck before she and her Titan's Hand goons mug him. However, this doesn't change the fact that Kirito [[RPGMechanicsVerse is still thirty levels higher than them]], so they can't even harm him even when he's not bothering to dodge their attacks. All Rosalia succeeds in doing is turning a {{Jerkass}} into a LaughingMad [[AxeCrazy killing machine]], ''then'' slamming ''several'' of his {{Berserk Button}}s, which turns out to be a fatal mistake.mistake.
* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6694302/1/Naruto-Myoushuu-no-Fuuin Naruto: Myoushuu no Fuuin]]'', Sarutobi's efforts to hide Naruto's parentage are so successful that the boy believe he's the SonOfAWhore and one of her clients. Kakashi and Jiraiya are both furious with Sarutobi when they learn this.
* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6694302/1/Naruto-Myoushuu-no-Fuuin Naruto: Myoushuu no Fuuin]]'', Sarutobi's efforts to hide Naruto's parentage are so successful that the boy believe he's the SonOfAWhore and one of her clients. Kakashi and Jiraiya are both furious with Sarutobi when they learn this.
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* ''Fanfic/HalloweenUnspectacular'': The first collection's BigBad, [=ReGenesis=], was the product of a government project to create a PhysicalGod. The project was a success, but (partly thanks to [[spoiler:his status as a ChewToy pre-transformation]]) said god quickly turned out to be an OmnicidalManiac.
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* ''Fanfic/HalloweenUnspectacular'': The first collection's BigBad, [=ReGenesis=], was the product of a government project to create a PhysicalGod. The project was a success, but (partly thanks to [[spoiler:his status as a ChewToy pre-transformation]]) said god quickly turned out to be an OmnicidalManiac.OmnicidalManiac.
* Parodied in ''WebVideo/YuGiOhGXTheAbridgedSeries'', where some students tried to summon [[EldritchAbomination Jinzo]]... and they did!
* In ''WebVideo/SwordArtOnlineAbridged'', Rosalia subjects Kirito to a BreakingSpeech intended to reduce him to a gibbering wreck before she and her Titan's Hand goons mug him. However, this doesn't change the fact that Kirito [[RPGMechanicsVerse is still thirty levels higher than them]], so they can't even harm him even when he's not bothering to dodge their attacks. All Rosalia succeeds in doing is turning a {{Jerkass}} into a LaughingMad [[AxeCrazy killing machine]], ''then'' slamming ''several'' of his {{Berserk Button}}s, which turns out to be a fatal mistake.
* Parodied in ''WebVideo/YuGiOhGXTheAbridgedSeries'', where some students tried to summon [[EldritchAbomination Jinzo]]... and they did!
* In ''WebVideo/SwordArtOnlineAbridged'', Rosalia subjects Kirito to a BreakingSpeech intended to reduce him to a gibbering wreck before she and her Titan's Hand goons mug him. However, this doesn't change the fact that Kirito [[RPGMechanicsVerse is still thirty levels higher than them]], so they can't even harm him even when he's not bothering to dodge their attacks. All Rosalia succeeds in doing is turning a {{Jerkass}} into a LaughingMad [[AxeCrazy killing machine]], ''then'' slamming ''several'' of his {{Berserk Button}}s, which turns out to be a fatal mistake.
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* ''Fanfic/CaptainsCrash'': Hiring a CaptainCrash to pass on his skills at crashing safely? Sure, he succeeds, so injuries go down. But he also causes his students to start forgetting their skills at landing ''without'' crashing, so incidences of crashes go ''up''. By 390%.
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* ''Fanfic/CaptainsCrash'': Hiring a CaptainCrash to pass on his skills at crashing safely? Sure, he succeeds, so injuries go down. But he also causes his students to start forgetting their skills at landing ''without'' crashing, so incidences of crashes go ''up''. By 390%.390%.
* ''Fanfic/HalloweenUnspectacular'': The first collection's BigBad, [=ReGenesis=], was the product of a government project to create a PhysicalGod. The project was a success, but (partly thanks to [[spoiler:his status as a ChewToy pre-transformation]]) said god quickly turned out to be an OmnicidalManiac.
* ''Fanfic/HalloweenUnspectacular'': The first collection's BigBad, [=ReGenesis=], was the product of a government project to create a PhysicalGod. The project was a success, but (partly thanks to [[spoiler:his status as a ChewToy pre-transformation]]) said god quickly turned out to be an OmnicidalManiac.
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* In Chapter 55 of ''[[https://my.w.tt/P3thU3imbU In The Dark]]'', [[Music/SpiceGirls Geri]] was able to get Melanie to see a hypnotist in hopes of getting any of her memories. Since there was a court official, it would help ensure that Otis Darwin pays for what he did to Melanie. Cue the MassOhCrap once Melanie realizes what she had revealed.
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* In Chapter 55 of ''[[https://my.w.tt/P3thU3imbU In The Dark]]'', [[Music/SpiceGirls Geri]] was able to get Melanie to see a hypnotist in hopes of getting any of her memories. Since there was a court official, it would help ensure that Otis Darwin pays for what he did to Melanie. Cue the MassOhCrap once Melanie realizes what she had revealed.revealed.
* ''Fanfic/CaptainsCrash'': Hiring a CaptainCrash to pass on his skills at crashing safely? Sure, he succeeds, so injuries go down. But he also causes his students to start forgetting their skills at landing ''without'' crashing, so incidences of crashes go ''up''. By 390%.
* ''Fanfic/CaptainsCrash'': Hiring a CaptainCrash to pass on his skills at crashing safely? Sure, he succeeds, so injuries go down. But he also causes his students to start forgetting their skills at landing ''without'' crashing, so incidences of crashes go ''up''. By 390%.
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* [[AIIsACrapshoot M4K30V3R]], Rouge's "automatic beautifying system" from [[SonicTheHedgehog Sonic's]] new look (and [[FollowTheLeader multiple similar stories]]). Intended to make sure Rouge always looks her best, it does it's job flawlessly. So when it [[DraggedIntoDrag finds Sonic in her room...]]
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* [[AIIsACrapshoot M4K30V3R]], Rouge's "automatic beautifying system" from [[SonicTheHedgehog [[VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog Sonic's]] new look (and [[FollowTheLeader multiple similar stories]]). Intended to make sure Rouge always looks her best, it does it's job flawlessly. So when it [[DraggedIntoDrag finds Sonic in her room...]]
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* In ''Webcomic/{{Hackbent}}'', Alleph desperately wants to be taken seriously when he 'commands' his friends and constantly fails. In an alternate timeline he finds out his god tier powers allow him to literally do that. It directly spirals out of control, ends in a massacre of his friends, with the only survivors being Morson and [[TheAtoner Cyrill]].
* In the ''Manga/DeathNote'' fic ''FanFic/TiredAndEmotional'' Light adds a little brandy in L's ice cream in an attempt to loosen his tongue so he might [[IKnowYourTrueName learn his true name.]] [[IntoxicationEnsues Light gets L drunk, alright...]]
* In the fanfic Fanfic/DuelNature, Twilight Sparkle GotVolunteered into a duel with Princess Luna. While it was supposed to be a friendly match, emotions quickly got out of control: in an effort to break Luna's concentration, Twilight resorted to psychological warfare, using her knowledge of the princess to hurt her, culminating in a full-blown BreakThemByTalking moment, which did disrupt her concentration, but turned a sparring match into a deathmatch.
* In the ''VideoGame/{{Fallout 3}}'' mod ''Mothership Zeta Crew'', the PC and company explore an underwater base of the aliens. However, [[spoiler: there are no live aliens around. They were killed by Tyranids/Xenomorphs]]. Later, the PC finds out that [[spoiler: The 'nids/'morphs]] were there because the aliens [[spoiler: made them to attack the Olympus. Turns out, they were good at attacking. The aliens.]]
* Thirty years prior to the events of ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' Luke the Seedrian - the future Dark Oak - roboticized a young fox named Tsali into the "Ultimate Weapon" that could save his homeworld from a Demon invasion. Tsali quickly freed himself, promptly turned against his creators, and exterminated the entire Seedrian race in revenge.
* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4276558/3/He-Can-t-See-It He Can't See It]]'', [[{{Invisibility}} Marcie]] helps Xander by pretending to be his psychic powers. Unfortunately, due to how unstable she is, she [[DisproportionateRetribution goes too far]] and Xander nearly kills himself to protect Buffy and Willow from his out of control powers.
* ''FanFic/RosarioVampireBrightestDarkness'':
** In Act I chapter 12, Apoch and Astreal brainwash Rason and Dark for aid, only for their master to exploit this and use ''all four of them'' as his mindless slaves.
** In Act I chapter 23, Yukari, hoping to help Tsukune and Moka's relationship, creates a special LovePotion that literally makes someone dosed with it crazy with love; as Yukari puts it, "you may not want to be in public then." However, Yukari never anticipated that Moka would share the potion with Kurumu and Mizore during school hours, rather than use it for herself when she and Tsukune are alone.
** Talon Ryashen's {{backstory}}. He was kidnapped off the street by Fairy Tale and turned into a SuperSoldier. The minute the experiments were complete, he escaped the lab and now seeks to wipe out anyone and everyone who ever worked for Fairy Tale as revenge for the loss of his humanity.
* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3831362/1/Wind-Lord Wind Lord]]'', one of Naruto's enemies uses a jutsu to [[Anime/YuYuHakusho de-age Naruto until he's an infant]]. He goes too far and temporarily unleashes the [[EldritchAbomination Kyuubi]].
* In ''Fanfic/MassEffectHumanRevolution'', the Templars wanted to make [[RobotDog Hannibal]] a killing machine to use against Adam. He did become a killing machine... against them.
* The BigBad of Fanfic/AngelOfTheBat revolves around this. Deacon Blackfire groomed Daniel Lebowitz to believe he was a messiah. The success created The Seraphim, whose ego was so great that he betrayed the deacon and stole all of his followers.
* The premise of ''FanFic/WishCarefully'' is that, instead of taking up the fight, Harry Potter surrendered Wizarding England to Voldemort and the Death Eaters, arranging for everyone else that was loyal to the Light to be evacuated. The Death Eaters now rule England without any opposition or Muggle-blooded taint... with [[RealityEnsues all of the problems that would naturally come with what they wanted]]. Voldermort's England has no genetic diversity to prevent inbreeding defects, no working class, no skilled professionals, and an economic infrastructure that can't support them. On top of that, their leader is a murderous psychopath who starts making Dark Marks burn on people just to stave off his boredom. Lucius Malfoy notes in his journal that the Light's plan was deviously ingenious, because it let the Death Eaters destroy themselves while the Light doesn't have to do anything but sit back and watch.
* in ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6677172/7/Zero-Interface Zero Interface]]'', a trio of students learn of Ranma Saotome's phobia of cats and decide to antagonize him using wind magic to make it sound like he's surrounded by cats. This results in Ranma (and via their bond, [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero Louise]]) activating [[BerserkMode Neko-ken]] and going on a rampage.
* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11728619/1/Community-Service Community Service]]'', most Death Eaters escaped Azkaban after Voldemort's first fall by getting sentences to two years community service, and Voldemort, as in canon, has cursed the position of teacher of Defence Against the Dark Arts at Hogwarts to neutralize whoever held it before the first term ended. Then Dumbledore had the brilliant idea of having said Death Eaters spend their sentence as DADA teachers: the lucky ones are the two who merely lost their magic.
* The dragons of ''FanFic/RainbowDoubleDashsLunaverse'' are a DyingRace precisely ''because'' they have such impressive natural advantages. While most races must band together for trade and protection, a dragon's only need is for rocks to eat and they are so powerful that by far the biggest danger any dragon faces is another dragon. As a result of this, dragons have no society to speak of. They don't trust each other, and because they don't trust each other, they don't work together. Their whelps are essentially abandoned to fend for themselves, since no adult would take in a whelp for fear of that whelp stealing some of their hoard. Only a handful of dragons can even read or write.
* This is played with in the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic ''How To Kidnap A Princess'' where Rainbow Dash and Pinkie attempt to kidnap Twilight Sparkle in order to convince her that her castle's security is too light. It's played with in that [[spoiler: Twilight gets wise to their plan and tricks Rainbow and Pinkie into kidnapping a clone from the Mirror Pool]]. The "horribly right" part comes into play when their little prank ends when[[spoiler: Princess Celestia and Princess Luna come down on them personally for high treason and imprison them in Tartarus for kidnapping a Princess]].
* [[AIIsACrapshoot M4K30V3R]], Rouge's "automatic beautifying system" from [[SonicTheHedgehog Sonic's]] new look (and [[FollowTheLeader multiple similar stories]]). Intended to make sure Rouge always looks her best, it does it's job flawlessly. So when it [[DraggedIntoDrag finds Sonic in her room...]]
* Overlaps with BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor in the MLP fan comic series ''WebComic/TrixieVs'', Trixie repeatedly states her desire to learn how to fly using levitation. Then at one point, [[FountainOfYouth while messing around with a spell that magically turns her back into a filly,]] she gets the bright idea to test her levitation flight, while she's a child, hoping that her lighter size would make it easier to left herself off the ground. It not only works, but [[spoiler: works out so well, she end up on the moon!!! with no feasible way of getting back down.]]
* In ''FanFic/ProfessorArc'' this trope makes up the basics of the plot. Just like in [[{{WebAnimation/RWBY}} base material]], Jaune manages to fake his transcripts and get into Beacon... except here it works so well, that it lands him a job as a ''teacher''. [[HilarityEnsues You can probably figure out what comes out of it]]. Later on, [[BecomingTheMask his ruse becomes so successful]], [[spoiler: that when the only way to defeat Cinder's plan is to confess, he is ''completely disbelieved'' by [[InspectorJavert General Ironwood]], who sees Jaune as a dangerous mastermind]].
* In the fanfic ''Zootopia: Lone Digger'' (a crossover between the [[Disney/{{Zootopia}} film]] and music video for the song by Music/CaravanPalace), a landlord is trying to close down the Lone Digger Club by arranging a brawl between patrons. Instead, he gets the bloody slaughter depicted in the music video.
* In ''[[FanFic/ChristianPotterChandler Christopher Weston Chandler & Magi-chan's Stone]]'', Bob, sick of dealing with Chris, wishes the wizards would kidnap Chris (though he reconsiders after talking to one). They do take Chris away, but he ends up going to Hogwarts. Meaning he'll come back with Bob helpless to his antics.
* ''FanFic/TheRavensPlan'' opens with the last survivors of Westeros holding a LastStand against the Night King's forces while Bran and Melisandre conduct a ritual to [[PeggySue send them all back in time so they can change things]]. This spell is powered by blood, and [[DidntThinkThisThrough no one took into account]] all the blood the defenders would be spilling, leading to the ritual being supercharged. So, yes, it does succeed in sending all its targeted people back, it's just that a ''lot'' of other people also get sent back, throwing the plan OffTheRails.
* In ''Fanfic/NeitherABirdNorAPlaneItsDeku'', Bakugou demands that Izuku train for the entrance exam because there's no way someone who spent ten years trying ''not'' to become a Hero is going to get in. Izuku ends up taking that advice [[spoiler:and walks away with the highest score in the exam's history. Worse still, his actions as TheParagon also inspired everyone to start helping each other, which knocks Bakugou down to the bottom of the Top 10 rankings.]]
* In ''Fanfic/BrilliantLightsWillCeaseToBurn'', Izuku calls the cops after busting an underground fighting and human trafficking ring to let them clean the place up. He did ''not'' expect them to send [[spoiler:[[WorldsStrongestMan All Might]], who then proceeded to cut off Izuku's only avenue of escape.]]
* ''Fanfic/{{Dial}}'': Titania attempts to use her love powers on [[WesternAnimation/Ben10AlienForce Rath!Dial]]. This works. Unfortunately, Rath, as an Appoplexian, believes that the most traditional, romantic thing you can do to someone you love is to ''beat the tar out of them in a battle.''
* ''FanFic/TheDarkLordsOfNerima'': After failing to kill the Sailor Senshi and subsequently fleeing, the youma Beneda falls in with Ryouga and Ranma in the hope that they'll kill her enemies for her. This leads to them defying all of her expectations by taking on Jadeite and winning, then eventually taking the fight to the Dark Kingdom itself.
* In Chapter 55 of ''[[https://my.w.tt/P3thU3imbU In The Dark]]'', [[Music/SpiceGirls Geri]] was able to get Melanie to see a hypnotist in hopes of getting any of her memories. Since there was a court official, it would help ensure that Otis Darwin pays for what he did to Melanie. Cue the MassOhCrap once Melanie realizes what she had revealed.
* In the ''Manga/DeathNote'' fic ''FanFic/TiredAndEmotional'' Light adds a little brandy in L's ice cream in an attempt to loosen his tongue so he might [[IKnowYourTrueName learn his true name.]] [[IntoxicationEnsues Light gets L drunk, alright...]]
* In the fanfic Fanfic/DuelNature, Twilight Sparkle GotVolunteered into a duel with Princess Luna. While it was supposed to be a friendly match, emotions quickly got out of control: in an effort to break Luna's concentration, Twilight resorted to psychological warfare, using her knowledge of the princess to hurt her, culminating in a full-blown BreakThemByTalking moment, which did disrupt her concentration, but turned a sparring match into a deathmatch.
* In the ''VideoGame/{{Fallout 3}}'' mod ''Mothership Zeta Crew'', the PC and company explore an underwater base of the aliens. However, [[spoiler: there are no live aliens around. They were killed by Tyranids/Xenomorphs]]. Later, the PC finds out that [[spoiler: The 'nids/'morphs]] were there because the aliens [[spoiler: made them to attack the Olympus. Turns out, they were good at attacking. The aliens.]]
* Thirty years prior to the events of ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' Luke the Seedrian - the future Dark Oak - roboticized a young fox named Tsali into the "Ultimate Weapon" that could save his homeworld from a Demon invasion. Tsali quickly freed himself, promptly turned against his creators, and exterminated the entire Seedrian race in revenge.
* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4276558/3/He-Can-t-See-It He Can't See It]]'', [[{{Invisibility}} Marcie]] helps Xander by pretending to be his psychic powers. Unfortunately, due to how unstable she is, she [[DisproportionateRetribution goes too far]] and Xander nearly kills himself to protect Buffy and Willow from his out of control powers.
* ''FanFic/RosarioVampireBrightestDarkness'':
** In Act I chapter 12, Apoch and Astreal brainwash Rason and Dark for aid, only for their master to exploit this and use ''all four of them'' as his mindless slaves.
** In Act I chapter 23, Yukari, hoping to help Tsukune and Moka's relationship, creates a special LovePotion that literally makes someone dosed with it crazy with love; as Yukari puts it, "you may not want to be in public then." However, Yukari never anticipated that Moka would share the potion with Kurumu and Mizore during school hours, rather than use it for herself when she and Tsukune are alone.
** Talon Ryashen's {{backstory}}. He was kidnapped off the street by Fairy Tale and turned into a SuperSoldier. The minute the experiments were complete, he escaped the lab and now seeks to wipe out anyone and everyone who ever worked for Fairy Tale as revenge for the loss of his humanity.
* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3831362/1/Wind-Lord Wind Lord]]'', one of Naruto's enemies uses a jutsu to [[Anime/YuYuHakusho de-age Naruto until he's an infant]]. He goes too far and temporarily unleashes the [[EldritchAbomination Kyuubi]].
* In ''Fanfic/MassEffectHumanRevolution'', the Templars wanted to make [[RobotDog Hannibal]] a killing machine to use against Adam. He did become a killing machine... against them.
* The BigBad of Fanfic/AngelOfTheBat revolves around this. Deacon Blackfire groomed Daniel Lebowitz to believe he was a messiah. The success created The Seraphim, whose ego was so great that he betrayed the deacon and stole all of his followers.
* The premise of ''FanFic/WishCarefully'' is that, instead of taking up the fight, Harry Potter surrendered Wizarding England to Voldemort and the Death Eaters, arranging for everyone else that was loyal to the Light to be evacuated. The Death Eaters now rule England without any opposition or Muggle-blooded taint... with [[RealityEnsues all of the problems that would naturally come with what they wanted]]. Voldermort's England has no genetic diversity to prevent inbreeding defects, no working class, no skilled professionals, and an economic infrastructure that can't support them. On top of that, their leader is a murderous psychopath who starts making Dark Marks burn on people just to stave off his boredom. Lucius Malfoy notes in his journal that the Light's plan was deviously ingenious, because it let the Death Eaters destroy themselves while the Light doesn't have to do anything but sit back and watch.
* in ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6677172/7/Zero-Interface Zero Interface]]'', a trio of students learn of Ranma Saotome's phobia of cats and decide to antagonize him using wind magic to make it sound like he's surrounded by cats. This results in Ranma (and via their bond, [[LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero Louise]]) activating [[BerserkMode Neko-ken]] and going on a rampage.
* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11728619/1/Community-Service Community Service]]'', most Death Eaters escaped Azkaban after Voldemort's first fall by getting sentences to two years community service, and Voldemort, as in canon, has cursed the position of teacher of Defence Against the Dark Arts at Hogwarts to neutralize whoever held it before the first term ended. Then Dumbledore had the brilliant idea of having said Death Eaters spend their sentence as DADA teachers: the lucky ones are the two who merely lost their magic.
* The dragons of ''FanFic/RainbowDoubleDashsLunaverse'' are a DyingRace precisely ''because'' they have such impressive natural advantages. While most races must band together for trade and protection, a dragon's only need is for rocks to eat and they are so powerful that by far the biggest danger any dragon faces is another dragon. As a result of this, dragons have no society to speak of. They don't trust each other, and because they don't trust each other, they don't work together. Their whelps are essentially abandoned to fend for themselves, since no adult would take in a whelp for fear of that whelp stealing some of their hoard. Only a handful of dragons can even read or write.
* This is played with in the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic ''How To Kidnap A Princess'' where Rainbow Dash and Pinkie attempt to kidnap Twilight Sparkle in order to convince her that her castle's security is too light. It's played with in that [[spoiler: Twilight gets wise to their plan and tricks Rainbow and Pinkie into kidnapping a clone from the Mirror Pool]]. The "horribly right" part comes into play when their little prank ends when[[spoiler: Princess Celestia and Princess Luna come down on them personally for high treason and imprison them in Tartarus for kidnapping a Princess]].
* [[AIIsACrapshoot M4K30V3R]], Rouge's "automatic beautifying system" from [[SonicTheHedgehog Sonic's]] new look (and [[FollowTheLeader multiple similar stories]]). Intended to make sure Rouge always looks her best, it does it's job flawlessly. So when it [[DraggedIntoDrag finds Sonic in her room...]]
* Overlaps with BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor in the MLP fan comic series ''WebComic/TrixieVs'', Trixie repeatedly states her desire to learn how to fly using levitation. Then at one point, [[FountainOfYouth while messing around with a spell that magically turns her back into a filly,]] she gets the bright idea to test her levitation flight, while she's a child, hoping that her lighter size would make it easier to left herself off the ground. It not only works, but [[spoiler: works out so well, she end up on the moon!!! with no feasible way of getting back down.]]
* In ''FanFic/ProfessorArc'' this trope makes up the basics of the plot. Just like in [[{{WebAnimation/RWBY}} base material]], Jaune manages to fake his transcripts and get into Beacon... except here it works so well, that it lands him a job as a ''teacher''. [[HilarityEnsues You can probably figure out what comes out of it]]. Later on, [[BecomingTheMask his ruse becomes so successful]], [[spoiler: that when the only way to defeat Cinder's plan is to confess, he is ''completely disbelieved'' by [[InspectorJavert General Ironwood]], who sees Jaune as a dangerous mastermind]].
* In the fanfic ''Zootopia: Lone Digger'' (a crossover between the [[Disney/{{Zootopia}} film]] and music video for the song by Music/CaravanPalace), a landlord is trying to close down the Lone Digger Club by arranging a brawl between patrons. Instead, he gets the bloody slaughter depicted in the music video.
* In ''[[FanFic/ChristianPotterChandler Christopher Weston Chandler & Magi-chan's Stone]]'', Bob, sick of dealing with Chris, wishes the wizards would kidnap Chris (though he reconsiders after talking to one). They do take Chris away, but he ends up going to Hogwarts. Meaning he'll come back with Bob helpless to his antics.
* ''FanFic/TheRavensPlan'' opens with the last survivors of Westeros holding a LastStand against the Night King's forces while Bran and Melisandre conduct a ritual to [[PeggySue send them all back in time so they can change things]]. This spell is powered by blood, and [[DidntThinkThisThrough no one took into account]] all the blood the defenders would be spilling, leading to the ritual being supercharged. So, yes, it does succeed in sending all its targeted people back, it's just that a ''lot'' of other people also get sent back, throwing the plan OffTheRails.
* In ''Fanfic/NeitherABirdNorAPlaneItsDeku'', Bakugou demands that Izuku train for the entrance exam because there's no way someone who spent ten years trying ''not'' to become a Hero is going to get in. Izuku ends up taking that advice [[spoiler:and walks away with the highest score in the exam's history. Worse still, his actions as TheParagon also inspired everyone to start helping each other, which knocks Bakugou down to the bottom of the Top 10 rankings.]]
* In ''Fanfic/BrilliantLightsWillCeaseToBurn'', Izuku calls the cops after busting an underground fighting and human trafficking ring to let them clean the place up. He did ''not'' expect them to send [[spoiler:[[WorldsStrongestMan All Might]], who then proceeded to cut off Izuku's only avenue of escape.]]
* ''Fanfic/{{Dial}}'': Titania attempts to use her love powers on [[WesternAnimation/Ben10AlienForce Rath!Dial]]. This works. Unfortunately, Rath, as an Appoplexian, believes that the most traditional, romantic thing you can do to someone you love is to ''beat the tar out of them in a battle.''
* ''FanFic/TheDarkLordsOfNerima'': After failing to kill the Sailor Senshi and subsequently fleeing, the youma Beneda falls in with Ryouga and Ranma in the hope that they'll kill her enemies for her. This leads to them defying all of her expectations by taking on Jadeite and winning, then eventually taking the fight to the Dark Kingdom itself.
* In Chapter 55 of ''[[https://my.w.tt/P3thU3imbU In The Dark]]'', [[Music/SpiceGirls Geri]] was able to get Melanie to see a hypnotist in hopes of getting any of her memories. Since there was a court official, it would help ensure that Otis Darwin pays for what he did to Melanie. Cue the MassOhCrap once Melanie realizes what she had revealed.
