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* Idle chatter between Idira and Pasqal has her asking if he has any sense of humor. Pasqal responds with a quip involving a "layperson" and a tech priest entering an unblessed building. Or to put it in laymen's terms, two guys walk into a bar...
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* Idle chatter between Idira and Pasqal has her asking if he has any sense of humor. Pasqal responds with a quip involving a "layperson" "layperson", a potential servitor candidate, and a tech priest thief entering an unblessed building. Or to put it in laymen's terms, two three guys walk into a bar...
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** If you ask him if there are any other acolytes in the Koronus Expanse, he'll just sigh in disappointment.
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** If you ask him if there are any other acolytes in the Koronus Expanse, he'll just sigh in disappointment.disappointment.
* Idle chatter between Idira and Pasqal has her asking if he has any sense of humor. Pasqal responds with a quip involving a "layperson" and a tech priest entering an unblessed building. Or to put it in laymen's terms, two guys walk into a bar...
* On a meta level, Jae's talents allow her to substitute her Intelligence score with Fellowship for knowledge checks. This means that she can very easily outclass Heinrix, an ''Inquisitor-in-training'', when it comes to her knowledge of aliens, the warp, and the Imperium as a whole, with nothing but her [[StreetSmart street smarts]].
* Idle chatter between Idira and Pasqal has her asking if he has any sense of humor. Pasqal responds with a quip involving a "layperson" and a tech priest entering an unblessed building. Or to put it in laymen's terms, two guys walk into a bar...
* On a meta level, Jae's talents allow her to substitute her Intelligence score with Fellowship for knowledge checks. This means that she can very easily outclass Heinrix, an ''Inquisitor-in-training'', when it comes to her knowledge of aliens, the warp, and the Imperium as a whole, with nothing but her [[StreetSmart street smarts]].
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** If the Rogue Trader decides to wait patiently (which grants an {{Achievement}}), they will miss the certification deadline by several hours. They can throw a fit... or accept their fate and, much to Jae's dismay, start the entire process over again, which includes traveling to another ''planet'' to get a stamp.
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** If you bring along Cassia and ask if the Master of Seals knows who you are, she'll mention that the von Velancius dynasty has owed House Orsellio one gold crown for several decades, tossing Cassia one in order to mark the matter as resolved.
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** If you bring along Cassia and ask if the Master of Seals knows who you are, she'll mention that the von Velancius Valancius dynasty has owed House Orsellio one gold crown for several decades, tossing Cassia one in order to mark the matter as resolved.
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--> '''[Awareness test succeeded:]''' No. It most definitely is not.
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--> '''[Awareness test succeeded:]''' [[ConsummateLiar No. It most definitely is not.]]
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*You never find out Jae's real name, even when she tells you her real backstory on Commoragh.
--> '''Rogue Trader:''' Is Jae your real name, at least?
--> '''Jae:''' I swear on the grave of my drunkard father who sold me into the mines and on the lives of the eleven siblings I never had, shereen!
--> '''[Awareness test succeeded:]''' No. It most definitely is not.
--> '''Rogue Trader:''' Is Jae your real name, at least?
--> '''Jae:''' I swear on the grave of my drunkard father who sold me into the mines and on the lives of the eleven siblings I never had, shereen!
--> '''[Awareness test succeeded:]''' No. It most definitely is not.
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* "The silence is broken by a string of untranslatable but highly expressive xenos profanities: Marazhai has regained his power of speech and is now using it to curse someone's kin and progeny."
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* "The silence is broken by a string of untranslatable but highly expressive xenos profanities: Marazhai has regained his power of speech and is now using it to curse someone's kin and progeny.""
* When talking to [[StateSec Henrix]], you can ask him what sort of duties he's been performing, he'll give an amused or [[TheUnsmile unintentionally unsettling]] smile as he points out he ''obviously'' can't tell you that.
** If you ask him if there are any other acolytes in the Koronus Expanse, he'll just sigh in disappointment.
* When talking to [[StateSec Henrix]], you can ask him what sort of duties he's been performing, he'll give an amused or [[TheUnsmile unintentionally unsettling]] smile as he points out he ''obviously'' can't tell you that.
** If you ask him if there are any other acolytes in the Koronus Expanse, he'll just sigh in disappointment.
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* Jae's companion quest to become a Trader Representative involves dealing with the Adeptus Administratum. After going through the arduous task of signing multiple forms and travelling through a couple of different planets for the documents seals, the party are lead to an enormous room where hundreds of people are waiting in queue. At first, Jae tries to be cheery about things. But when the wait takes several hours, she agonizes how torturous the wait is and reckons that they'll probably turn old by the time their number is called (the Rogue Trader has the option to blame Jae for their predicament).
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** Ironically, [[DumbassHasAPoint he may have a point]]. Imperial bureaucracy is notoriously inefficient (see below), and many things grind to a halt because of misplaced or unsigned forms with astonishing frequency. The ApocalypticLog on Rykad Philia mentions the author was trapped because someone misplaced their tax forms for ''years'' and the interest built up without anyone telling him he owed anything. Atilius himself mentions that a great deal of ships are being prevented from launching because no one knows who has permission to send them anywhere.
* Jae's companion quest to become a Trader Representative involves dealing with the Adeptus Administratum. After going through the arduous task of signing multiple forms and travelling through a couple of different planets for thedocuments document's seals, the party are lead led to an enormous room where hundreds of people are waiting in queue. At first, Jae tries to be cheery about things. But when the wait takes several hours, she agonizes how torturous the wait is and reckons that they'll probably turn old by the time their number is called (the Rogue Trader has the option to blame Jae for their predicament).
* Jae's companion quest to become a Trader Representative involves dealing with the Adeptus Administratum. After going through the arduous task of signing multiple forms and travelling through a couple of different planets for the
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--->''The xenos stills and looks at you intently. He is not accustomed to anyone so adroitly and quickly navigating his verbal labyrinths, that much is clear. At last, you hear [[ActuallyPrettyFunny a low chuckle]] behind his mask and the xenos [[SlowClap claps his hands slowly]], saying only one word: "[[{{Touche}} Bravo]]."''
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** He can also quiz the Trader on what the most dangerous animal on Fenris is - a successful Imperium check can give you the prompt of "Wrath-badger", which halts his speech dead in its tracks as he asks why. You can either say [[InherentlyFunnyWords that it just sounds funny]], or elaborate that, since there's so little information about the creature, that hunters logically must be actively avoiding encounters with it.
--->''The giant warrior's chuckle slams into your chest like a strike from a sonic weapon.'' "Very good! I hoped to tell you about the black curse of the Wulfen, but your answer wasn't bad either! Wrath-badger, ha!"
--->''The giant warrior's chuckle slams into your chest like a strike from a sonic weapon.'' "Very good! I hoped to tell you about the black curse of the Wulfen, but your answer wasn't bad either! Wrath-badger, ha!"
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--->'''Ulfar''': Ha! A fine jest! He is joking, yes? (''Ulfar catches your eye, and the humor evaporates from his face'') [[HoldYourHippogriffs Troll balls]], [[MyGodYouAreSerious you're not joking]]!\\
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** If you offer Marazhai mercy and a place in your party, Ulfar's response is hilarious.
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--->'''Ulfar''': Ha! A fine jest! He is joking, yes? (''Ulfar catches your eye, and the humor evaporates from his face'') Troll balls, [[MyGodYouAreSerious you're not joking]]!\\
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--->'''Ulfar''': Ha! A fine jest! He is joking, yes? (''Ulfar catches your eye, and the humor evaporates from his face'') [[HoldYourHippogriffs Troll balls, balls]], [[MyGodYouAreSerious you're not joking]]!\\
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--->'''Ulfar''': Ha! A fine jest! He is joking, yes? (''Ulfar catches your eye, and the humor evaporates from his face'') Troll balls, [[MyGodYouAreSerious you're not joking]]!
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--->'''Ulfar''': Ha! A fine jest! He is joking, yes? (''Ulfar catches your eye, and the humor evaporates from his face'') Troll balls, [[MyGodYouAreSerious you're not joking]]!joking]]!\\
'''Abelard''': (''[[BeleagueredAssistant Abelard sighs and comments quietly]]'') Welcome to our fraternity of the perplexed, my lord Ulfar! Get used to it. The Rogue Trader never fails to astonish.
'''Abelard''': (''[[BeleagueredAssistant Abelard sighs and comments quietly]]'') Welcome to our fraternity of the perplexed, my lord Ulfar! Get used to it. The Rogue Trader never fails to astonish.
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** If you offer Marazhai mercy and a place in your party, Ulfar's response is hilarious.
--->'''Ulfar''': Ha! A fine jest! He is joking, yes? (''Ulfar catches your eye, and the humor evaporates from his face'') Troll balls, [[MyGodYouAreSerious you're not joking]]!
--->'''Ulfar''': Ha! A fine jest! He is joking, yes? (''Ulfar catches your eye, and the humor evaporates from his face'') Troll balls, [[MyGodYouAreSerious you're not joking]]!
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--->'''Stranger''': The xenos stills and looks at you intently. He is not accustomed to anyone so adroitly and quickly navigating his verbal labyrinths, that much is clear. At last, you hear [[ActuallyPrettyFunny a low chuckle]] behind his mask and the xenos [[SlowClap claps his hands slowly]], saying only one word: "[[{{Touche}} Bravo]]."
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