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** The reason he decides to help, which causes him crush the bandits with such overwhelming force the survivors go mad with terror? The named themselves after a song Makoto liked and it annoyed him they were tainting his memory of it.
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** The reason he decides to help, which causes him crush the bandits with such overwhelming force the survivors go mad with terror? The They named themselves after a song Makoto liked and it annoyed him they were tainting his memory of it.
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** The reason he decides to help them, which causes him crush the bandits with such overwhelming force the survivors go mad with terror? The named themselves after a song Makoto liked and it annoyed him they were tainting his memory of it.
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** The reason he decides to help them, help, which causes him crush the bandits with such overwhelming force the survivors go mad with terror? The named themselves after a song Makoto liked and it annoyed him they were tainting his memory of it.
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** The reason he decides to help them, which causes him crush the bandits with such overwhelming force the survivors go mad with terror? The named themselves after a song Makoto liked and it annoyed him they were tainting his memory of it.
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* Tomoe is not happy when she finds out that Mio has a higher level than her, saying that the scroll used to measure it is broken and asking for a another one. Makoto meanwhile, despite leaking so much mana that it needs to be suppressed in order to not be thought to be a demon lord in disguise, is measured to be level one.
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* Upon rescuing Emma from the two-headed dog monster, Makoto tries to talk to her. Naturally, she’s ''terrified,'' and her thought process is presented as a series of RPG-style option boxes.
** Flee: > Impossible
** Fight: > Even More Impossible
** Give Up: > Yes
* Tomoe is not happy when she finds out that Mio has a higher level than her, saying that the scroll used to measure it is broken and asking fora an another one. Makoto meanwhile, despite leaking so much mana that it needs to be suppressed in order to not be thought to be a demon lord in disguise, is measured to be level one.
** Flee: > Impossible
** Fight: > Even More Impossible
** Give Up: > Yes
* Tomoe is not happy when she finds out that Mio has a higher level than her, saying that the scroll used to measure it is broken and asking for
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* Mio's [[LethalChef attempt at cooking]] leaves each test group looking like they were poisoned to the brink of death. That isn't hyperbole.
** Her attempt at Curry Rice involves using soft emeralds instead of green peppers because both are green and also melted the pot it was cooked in. Emma, an elder dwarf, and Komoe are writhing in pain.
** Her attempt at Curry Rice involves using soft emeralds instead of green peppers because both are green and also melted the pot it was cooked in. Emma, an elder dwarf, and Komoe are writhing in pain.
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* Mio's [[LethalChef attempt at cooking]] leaves each test group looking like they were [[NotHyperbole poisoned to the brink of death. That isn't hyperbole.
death]].
** Her attempt at Curry Rice involves using soft emeralds instead of green peppers because both are green and also melted the pot it was cooked in. Emma, an elder dwarf, and Komoe are left writhing inpain.pain after trying some.
** Her attempt at Curry Rice involves using soft emeralds instead of green peppers because both are green and also melted the pot it was cooked in. Emma, an elder dwarf, and Komoe are left writhing in
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* When Makoto decides to help Rana and Eto save Rana's village from some bandits, he picks them up with his superior strength and carries them in his arms as he leaps from a wall onto the tree's tops and jumps again. Rana demands to know what kind of person Makoto is. His response of being just a normal merchant and does a side gig as an adventurer is met with disbelief.
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* Mio's [[LethalChef attempt at cooking Curry Rice]]. Which involved using emeralds instead of green peppers and also melted the pot it was cooked in.
* Tomoe asks Mio to lightly toast some bread to prove her cooking skills. Mio ends up turning it into ash.
* Tomoe asks Mio to lightly toast some bread to prove her cooking skills. Mio ends up turning it into ash.
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* Mio's [[LethalChef attempt at cooking cooking]] leaves each test group looking like they were poisoned to the brink of death. That isn't hyperbole.
** Her attempt at CurryRice]]. Which involved Rice involves using soft emeralds instead of green peppers because both are green and also melted the pot it was cooked in.
*in. Emma, an elder dwarf, and Komoe are writhing in pain.
** Her second attempt is horrible enough to knock out an Alke, a species that is almost as voracious as Mio, and uses a monster plant that rips into Lime's mouth causing him to bleed because it is still alive and attacks when he bites it. The meat is so tough, the highland orcs, mist lizards, and forest ogres are unable to bite it. She also puts bananas on as a garnish covered in a fluid better used as machinery lubricant, to Aqua and Eris' suffering.
** Tomoe asks Mio to lightly toast some bread to prove her cooking skills. Mio ends up turning it intoash.ash.
** After all these failures, Tomoe tells Mio to go on a journey to learn how to cook properly for the young master. Mio is grateful for the idea while the residents of the Demiplane celebrate being spared her cooking.
** Her attempt at Curry
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** Her second attempt is horrible enough to knock out an Alke, a species that is almost as voracious as Mio, and uses a monster plant that rips into Lime's mouth causing him to bleed because it is still alive and attacks when he bites it. The meat is so tough, the highland orcs, mist lizards, and forest ogres are unable to bite it. She also puts bananas on as a garnish covered in a fluid better used as machinery lubricant, to Aqua and Eris' suffering.
** Tomoe asks Mio to lightly toast some bread to prove her cooking skills. Mio ends up turning it into
** After all these failures, Tomoe tells Mio to go on a journey to learn how to cook properly for the young master. Mio is grateful for the idea while the residents of the Demiplane celebrate being spared her cooking.
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* Mio's [[LethalChef attempt at cooking Curry Rice]]. Which involved using emeralds instead of green peppers and also melted the pot it was cooked in.
* Tomoe asks Mio to lightly toast some bread to prove her cooking skills. Mio ends up turning it into ash.
* Tomoe asks Mio to lightly toast some bread to prove her cooking skills. Mio ends up turning it into ash.
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* An innkeeper that Makoto, Tomoe, and Mio are to spend the night at tell them that a room will cost six gold (which is about the equivalent of about 600,000 yen or around $5500) a night. Tomoe stomps the floorboards breaking them, which makes the innkeeper drop the price to two gold a night.
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* An innkeeper that Makoto, Tomoe, and Mio are to spend the night at tell tells them that a room will cost six gold (which is about the equivalent of about 600,000 yen or around $5500) a night. Tomoe stomps the floorboards breaking them, which makes the innkeeper drop the price to two gold a night.
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* Tomoe is not happy when she fins out that Mio has a higher level than her, saying that the scroll used to measure it is broken and asking for a another one. Makoto meanwhile, despite leaking so much mana that it needs to be suppressed in order to not be thought to be a demon lord in disguise, is measured to be level one.
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* Tomoe is not happy when she fins finds out that Mio has a higher level than her, saying that the scroll used to measure it is broken and asking for a another one. Makoto meanwhile, despite leaking so much mana that it needs to be suppressed in order to not be thought to be a demon lord in disguise, is measured to be level one.
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* Aqua's and Eris's reactions to Makoto feeding Mio to calm her down.
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* Makoto is so angry at Tomoe and Mio for the damage they did to the town in their rescue of Toa that he ties the two of them up and connects it to an arrow that he then fires into the Westland.
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* Tomoe is not happy when she fins out that Mio has a higher level than her, saying that the scroll used to measure it is broken and asking for a another one. Makoto meanwhile, despite leaking so much mana that it needs to be suppressed in order to not be thought to be a demon lord in disguise, is measured to be level one.
* An innkeeper that Makoto, Tomoe, and Mio are to spend the night at tell them that a room will cost six gold (which is about the equivalent of about 600,000 yen or around $5500) a night. Tomoe stomps the floorboards breaking them, which makes the innkeeper drop the price to two gold a night.
* An innkeeper that Makoto, Tomoe, and Mio are to spend the night at tell them that a room will cost six gold (which is about the equivalent of about 600,000 yen or around $5500) a night. Tomoe stomps the floorboards breaking them, which makes the innkeeper drop the price to two gold a night.
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* Upon Makoto agreeing to be sent to another world, Tsukuyomi assures him that he's already disposed of his {{Eroge}}, PornStash and deleted his computer's hard drive. Makoto immediately declares him a ''true'' god.
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* Upon Makoto agreeing to be sent to another world, Tsukuyomi assures him that he's already disposed of his {{Eroge}}, PornStash and deleted his computer's hard drive. Makoto immediately declares him a ''true'' god.god.
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