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* The Critic and Film Brain discussing Ma-Ti's cremation in a Quaker Oats container
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-->'''Film Brain''': Which you wrote
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-->'''Film Brain''': After his death
-->'''Critic''': As I had to
-->'''Film Brain''': [[CrossesTheLineTwice In his blood]]
-->'''Critic''': Yeah, that was a weird request in his will
-->'''Film Brain''': Which you wrote
-->'''Critic''': He would have wanted it that way
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-->'''Critic''': As I had to
-->'''Film Brain''': [[CrossesTheLineTwice In his blood]]
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* Critic thinking an angry, bitter Terl is his mother getting into the booze again.
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* Spoony strapped up to a device that reads his unconscious mind. And when you've got three other reviewers in the room asking embarrassing questions, it turns into a hilarious lie detector test that not only claims that Spoony loves Rebecca Black, Black ''and'' has sexual thoughts about his sister, but he's also got a soft spot for Highlander 2 and the Final Fantasy series.
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-->'''Luke''': Wow, you are such a phony!
-->'''Luke''': Wow, you are such a phony!
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* After introducing himself as the Cinema Snob's protégé, Luke immediately criticizes the next line-read.
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* Critic clings to the Chick in terror at his computer exploding, but then...
-->'''Critic:''' [[MoodWhiplash That was definitely meant for you.]]
* Prick saying with complete earnestness "Smurfs 2 may have to be cancelled," to which some characters would most likely think, "and nothing of value was lost."
-->'''Critic:''' [[MoodWhiplash That was definitely meant for you.]]
* Prick saying with complete earnestness "Smurfs 2 may have to be cancelled," to which some characters would most likely think, "and nothing of value was lost."
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** Terl stealing a line from [[{{Dune}} Baron Harkonnen]]. [[LargeHam Largehamception!]]
* Critic clings to the Chick in terror at his computer exploding, but then...
-->'''Critic:''' [[MoodWhiplash That was definitely meant for you.]]Largehamception!]]
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* Critic's entire conversation with Dr. Block and Dr. Tease about Spoony's "head".
-->'''Critic''': You mean his brain?\\
'''Dr. Tease''': No, his penis. But we should check that, too. Write that down.
-->'''Critic''': You mean his brain?\\
'''Dr. Tease''': No, his penis. But we should check that, too. Write that down.
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-->'''Critic:''' [[MoodWhiplashthat That was definitely meant for you.]]
-->'''Critic:''' .............
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* Critic shields himself behind Chick in terror at the cryptic messages on his computer!
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-->'''Zod:''' The Critic has the right idea. Turn this ship into a house!
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** Terl stealing a line from [[{{Dune}} Baron Harkonnen]]. [[LargeHam Largehamception!]]
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->'''Critic:''' "Now, I know I've ''never'' [[BlatantLies asked anything of you guys before."]]
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* The name of the house-spaceship used to flee from whatever it is that's chasing the Critic? The USS Exit Strategy.
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