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--->'''Momma''': "My friend! My friend!" You big crybaby. Go bury him in the yard before he stinks up the place.
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--->'''Momma''': [[LackOfEmpathy "My friend! My friend!" You big crybaby. Go bury him in the yard before he stinks up the place. ]]
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* When Beth visits Larry's class, Pinsky, who's book project is "100 Girls I'd Like to Pork", asks her her name. When he's told, he says thoughtfully, "Beth, eh?" Larry gives him a DeathGlare and warns, "Don't even '''''think''''' about it."[[note]]'''Student:''' Hang in there, Pinsky.[[/note]]
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* When Beth visits Larry's class, Pinsky, who's whose book project is "100 Girls I'd Like to Pork", asks her her name. When he's told, he says thoughtfully, "Beth, eh?" Larry gives him a DeathGlare and warns, "Don't even '''''think''''' about it."[[note]]'''Student:''' Hang in there, Pinsky.[[/note]]
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* The sex scene between Margaret and Mr. Lopez, especially her [[ExcuseMeWhileIMultitask ability to carry on]] an intelligent, if somewhat bored, phone conversation.
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* The sex scene between Margaret and Mr. Lopez, especially her [[ExcuseMeWhileIMultitask ability to carry on]] on an intelligent, if somewhat bored, phone conversation.
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* Mrs. Hazeltine's story. This goes double for writers.
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* Mrs. Hazeltine's StylisticSuck story. This goes double for writers.
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** ''And'' the shot of Pinsky's ''published'' book, entitled simply ''Pinsky''.
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** ''And'' the shot of Pinsky's ''published'' book, book sitting on Larry's desk at the end of the film, entitled simply ''Pinsky''.
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-->'''Momma:''' Owen doesn't ''have'' any friends!
-->'''Larry:''' That's because he's shy.
-->'''Larry:''' That's because he's shy.
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-->'''Momma:''' Owen doesn't ''have'' any friends!
-->'''Larry:''' That's becausea friend!
-->'''Larry:''' ...Because he's shy.
-->'''Larry:''' That's because
-->'''Larry:''' ...Because he's shy.
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** ''And'' the shot of Pinsky's ''published'' book, entitled simply ''Pinsky''.
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* When Beth visits Larry's class, Pinsky, who's book project is "100 Girls I'd Like to Pork", asks her her name. When he's told, he says thoughtfully, "Beth, eh?" Larry gives him a DeathGlare and warns, "Don't even '''''think''''' about it."
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* When Beth visits Larry's class, Pinsky, who's book project is "100 Girls I'd Like to Pork", asks her her name. When he's told, he says thoughtfully, "Beth, eh?" Larry gives him a DeathGlare and warns, "Don't even '''''think''''' about it.""[[note]]'''Student:''' Hang in there, Pinsky.[[/note]]
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** And then he shows the book to the cops when they come to investigate Beth's disappearance.
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** And then he shows the book to the cops when they come to investigate Beth's Margret's disappearance.
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** And then he shows the book to the cops when they come to investigate Beth's disappearance.
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* After Owen tries to kill her by blowing a trumpet in her ear while she sleeps, she wakes up a moment later and yells, "Holy shit! What a dream I was having! Louis Armstrong was trying to kill me!", followed by the GroinAttack below.
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* After Owen tries to kill her by blowing a trumpet in her ear while she sleeps, she wakes up a moment later and yells, "Holy shit! What a dream I was having! Louis Armstrong Music/LouisArmstrong was trying to kill me!", followed by the GroinAttack below.
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* Many scenenes, if not all of'em, with Momma involved.
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* Many scenenes, scenes, if not all of'em, of them, with Momma involved.
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-->'''Momma:''' No he's not. He's fat and he's stupid!
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-->'''Momma:''' No No, he's not. not! He's fat and he's stupid!
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-->'''Momma:''' Get out of my way you black bastard!!
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-->'''Momma:''' Get out of my way you black bastard!!bastard!
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-->'''Momma''': Don't you "In a minute, Momma" me! Get off your fat little ass or I'll break it for you! I want two soft boiled eggs, white toast, and some of that grape jelly god damn it! And don't burn the toast!
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-->'''Momma''': Don't you "In a minute, Momma" me! Get off your fat little ass or I'll break it for you! I want two soft boiled eggs, white toast, and some of that grape jelly god jelly, God damn it! And don't burn the toast!
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--->'''Momma''': Your friend had an accident, he's dead! You go bowling and leave a corpse to take care of me!
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--->'''Momma''': Your friend had an accident, he's accident. He's dead! You go bowling and leave a corpse to take care of me!
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* Momma sees Larry for the first time, eating breakfast with Owen in the kitchen.
--> '''Momma:''' Who's this?
--> '''Owen:''' This is Cousin Paddy. He's gonna' be staying with us for a while. Isn't that nice?
--> '''Momma:''' You don't have a Cousin Paddy!
--> '''Owen:''' ''(Glares at Larry.)'' You lied to me! ''(Hits him with a frying pan.)''
--> '''Momma:''' Who's this?
--> '''Owen:''' This is Cousin Paddy. He's gonna' be staying with us for a while. Isn't that nice?
--> '''Momma:''' You don't have a Cousin Paddy!
--> '''Owen:''' ''(Glares at Larry.)'' You lied to me! ''(Hits him with a frying pan.)''
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--> '''Momma:''' Who's this?
--> '''Owen:''' This is Cousin Paddy. He's gonna' be staying with us for a while. Isn't that nice?
--> '''Momma:''' You don't have a Cousin Paddy!
--> '''Owen:''' ''(Glares at Larry.)'' You lied to me! ''(Hits him with a frying pan.)''
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--> '''Momma:''' Who's this?
--> '''Owen:''' This is Cousin Paddy. He's gonna' be staying with us for a while. Isn't that nice?
--> '''Momma:''' You don't have a Cousin Paddy!
--> '''Owen:''' ''(Glares at Larry.)'' You lied to me! ''(Hits him with a frying pan.)''
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(After seeing Larry falling down in the basement)
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-->'''Momma''': Your friend had an accident, he's dead! You go bowling and leave a corpse to take care of me!
-->'''Owen''': He's dead?
-->'''Momma''': See for yourself.
-->'''Owen''': Larry! My friend, my friend... Larry!
-->'''Momma''': "My friend! My friend!" You big crybaby. Go bury him in the yard before he stinks up the place.
-->'''Owen''': He's dead?
-->'''Momma''': See for yourself.
-->'''Owen''': Larry! My friend, my friend... Larry!
-->'''Momma''': "My friend! My friend!" You big crybaby. Go bury him in the yard before he stinks up the place.
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-->'''Momma''': Pain in the ass !
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* When Larry and Owen are joking about his trouble to start his book ("The night was moist"), Momma pipes in with the ''perfect'' opening ("The night was ''sultry''"), which finally breaks Larry, who quietly declares he's going to ''kill'' the bitch.
