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* When Dan returns to his home after saving the world, he rolls the garbage bin back over to his house, even before greeting his family.
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* When Dan returns to his home after saving the world, he [[HumbleHero rolls the garbage bin back over to his house, house]], even before greeting his family.
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-->'''Class:''' (in unison) Ancient volcanos.
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-->'''Class:''' (in unison) ''(in weary unison)'' Ancient volcanos.
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* The first time any of Dan's team make contact with a Whitespike (in a stairwell)Charlie does a [[ClusterFBomb Cluster S-Bomb]]. He, while shooting wildly at it, keeps a constant repeat of "shit, shit, shit!"
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* During Charlie's EstablishingCharacterMoment, he points out that one of the recruits is wearing a chef's hat. When it does cut to said recruit, not only is he wearing the chef's hat, but is ''wearing a full-on white chef uniform.''
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* During Charlie's EstablishingCharacterMoment, he points out that one of the recruits is wearing a chef's hat. When it does cut to said recruit, not only is he wearing the chef's hat, but is ''wearing a full-on white chef uniform.'''' One wonders if he came straight from his job and didn't even bother to change.
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* During Charlie's EstablishingCharacterMoment, he points out that one of the recruits is wearing a chef's hat. When it does cut to said recruit, not only is he wearing the chef's hat, but is ''wearing a full-on white chef uniform.''
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* Muri is digging in the ground, looking for 'vaccines' because Dan taught her that the tuberculosis vaccines were discovered in germs in the dirt. Dan shows her how to dig properly, but accidentally cuts a cable that wasn't buried deep enough in the ground while doing so. He offers to pay Muri 10 dollars if she tells her mother that she cut the cable. With a smile, she immediately haggles up to 20.
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* Muri is digging in the ground, looking for 'vaccines' because Dan taught her she learned that the tuberculosis vaccines were discovered in germs in the dirt. Dan shows her how to dig properly, properly with a shovel, but accidentally cuts a cable that wasn't buried deep enough in the ground while doing so. He offers to pay Muri 10 dollars if she tells her mother that she cut the cable. With a smile, she immediately haggles up to 20.
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* Muri is digging in the ground, looking for 'vaccines' because Dan taught her that the tuberculosis vaccines were discovered in germs in teh dirt. Dan shows her how to dig properly, but accidentally cuts a cable while doing so. He offers to pay Muri 10 dollars if she tells her mother that she cut the table. She immediately haggles up to 20.
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* Muri is digging in the ground, looking for 'vaccines' because Dan taught her that the tuberculosis vaccines were discovered in germs in teh the dirt. Dan shows her how to dig properly, but accidentally cuts a cable that wasn't buried deep enough in the ground while doing so. He offers to pay Muri 10 dollars if she tells her mother that she cut the table. She cable. With a smile, she immediately haggles up to 20.
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* Dan realizes that Martin's knowledge of ancient volcanos might help them work our where the white spikes are in 2023.
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* Dan realizes that Martin's knowledge of ancient volcanos might help them work our where the white spikes whitespikes are in 2023.2023. We cut to a ReactionShot of Martin, who is slightly weirded out that Dan is singling him out.
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* Martin asks for a laptop to help find the Whitespikes.
-->'''Dan:''' Is there any way to pinpoint exactly where in Russia that ash would have landed?
-->'''Martin:''' (snaps fingers) Laptop!
-->'''Charlie:''' (gleefully) I love this kid!
** After he gets the laptop, he winks at the girl who gave it to her when he says thanks.
-->'''Dan:''' Is there any way to pinpoint exactly where in Russia that ash would have landed?
-->'''Martin:''' (snaps fingers) Laptop!
-->'''Charlie:''' (gleefully) I love this kid!
** After he gets the laptop, he winks at the girl who gave it to her when he says thanks.
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* Dan Forester teaches a high school science class, and asks the class if there's anything the class wants to talk about. Martin, one of the students, is the only kid to raise his hand, but Dan avoids calling on him. We soon find out why:
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* Dan Forester teaches a high school science class, and asks the class if there's anything the class wants to talk about. Martin, one of the students, is the only kid to raise his hand, but Dan avoids calling on him. We soon find out why:why: he's ''obsessed'' with ancient volcanoes, and it's clear that the entire class is tired of hearing him gush over them.
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* Muri is digging in the ground, looking for 'vaccines'. Dan shows her how to dig properly, but accidentally cuts a cable. He tells Muri he'll give her 10 dollars if she tells her mother that she cut the table. She immediately haggles up to 20.
* Ltd. Hart announces that basic training will not involve physical training, as one week is not enough time to whip conscripts into shape. Cowan, a heavyset guy, tells one of the other soldiers that he was looking forward to that.
* Ltd. Hart announces that basic training will not involve physical training, as one week is not enough time to whip conscripts into shape. Cowan, a heavyset guy, tells one of the other soldiers that he was looking forward to that.
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* Muri is digging in the ground, looking for 'vaccines'. 'vaccines' because Dan taught her that the tuberculosis vaccines were discovered in germs in teh dirt. Dan shows her how to dig properly, but accidentally cuts a cable. cable while doing so. He tells offers to pay Muri he'll give her 10 dollars if she tells her mother that she cut the table. She immediately haggles up to 20.
*Ltd.Lt. Hart announces that basic training will not involve physical training, as one week is not enough time to whip conscripts into shape. Cowan, a heavyset guy, tells complains to one of the other soldiers that he was looking forward to that.
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* Dan realizes that Martin's knowledge of ancient volcanos might help them work our where the whitespikes are in the present.
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* Dan realizes that Martin's knowledge of ancient volcanos might help them work our where the whitespikes white spikes are in the present. 2023.
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* The monsters being named "Whitespikes" may count due to how [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin bluntly straightforward the name is.]]
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* Dan Forrester teaches a high school science class, and asks the class if there's anything the class wants to talk about. Martin, one of the students, is the only kid to raise his hand, but Dan avoids calling on him. We soon find out why:
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* Dan Forrester Forester teaches a high school science class, and asks the class if there's anything the class wants to talk about. Martin, one of the students, is the only kid to raise his hand, but Dan avoids calling on him. We soon find out why:
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* Dan Forrester teaches a high school science class, and asks the class if there's anything the class wants to talk about. Martin, one of the students, is the only kid to raise his hand, but Dan avoids calling on him. We soon find out why:
-->'''Dan:''' Class, what does Martin want to talk about?
-->'''Class, in unison:''' Ancient volcanos.
* Muri is digging in the ground, looking for 'vaccines'. Dan shows her how to dig properly, but accidentally cuts a cable. He tells Muri he'll give her 10 dollars if she tells her mother that she cut the table. She immediately haggles up to 20.
* Ltd. Hart announces that basic training will not involve physical training, as one week is not enough time to whip conscripts into shape. Cowan, a heavyset guy, tells one of the other soldiers that he was looking forward to that.
* Dan shows a nervous Charlie how to load his weapon properly while the countdown for the Jump Link runs down.
-->'''Charlie:''' How do you know how to do all of this stuff, man? How are you so calm?
-->'''Dan:''' [[ItsALongStory Long story.]]
-->'''Charlie:''' What, are you, like, ex-military?
-->'''Dan:''' (sheepishly) Yeah. Yeah. Kind of a short story, I guess.
* Dan realizes that Martin's knowledge of ancient volcanos might help them work our where the whitespikes are in the present.
-->'''Martin:''' Am I in trouble?
-->'''Dan:''' Martin, the lives of every man, woman, and child on this planet could be saved if we could just get the answer to one question, and it's all about volcanos.
-->'''Martin:''' I ''knew'' this would happen.
-->'''Charlie:''' Oh, I would have killed for a moment like this in high school.
* [[IllKillYou Dan yells "Die!"]] as he plunges a vial of the whitespike-killing toxin and finishes off the last female whitespike. He collapses in the snow next to his father.
-->'''James:''' [[LampshadedTrope Did you tell it to die?]]
-->'''Dan:''' Yeah.
-->'''James:''' Well, it worked. Why didn't you tell it sooner?
* When Dan returns to his home after saving the world, he rolls the garbage bin back over to his house, even before greeting his family.
-->'''Dan:''' Class, what does Martin want to talk about?
-->'''Class, in unison:''' Ancient volcanos.
* Muri is digging in the ground, looking for 'vaccines'. Dan shows her how to dig properly, but accidentally cuts a cable. He tells Muri he'll give her 10 dollars if she tells her mother that she cut the table. She immediately haggles up to 20.
* Ltd. Hart announces that basic training will not involve physical training, as one week is not enough time to whip conscripts into shape. Cowan, a heavyset guy, tells one of the other soldiers that he was looking forward to that.
* Dan shows a nervous Charlie how to load his weapon properly while the countdown for the Jump Link runs down.
-->'''Charlie:''' How do you know how to do all of this stuff, man? How are you so calm?
-->'''Dan:''' [[ItsALongStory Long story.]]
-->'''Charlie:''' What, are you, like, ex-military?
-->'''Dan:''' (sheepishly) Yeah. Yeah. Kind of a short story, I guess.
* Dan realizes that Martin's knowledge of ancient volcanos might help them work our where the whitespikes are in the present.
-->'''Martin:''' Am I in trouble?
-->'''Dan:''' Martin, the lives of every man, woman, and child on this planet could be saved if we could just get the answer to one question, and it's all about volcanos.
-->'''Martin:''' I ''knew'' this would happen.
-->'''Charlie:''' Oh, I would have killed for a moment like this in high school.
* [[IllKillYou Dan yells "Die!"]] as he plunges a vial of the whitespike-killing toxin and finishes off the last female whitespike. He collapses in the snow next to his father.
-->'''James:''' [[LampshadedTrope Did you tell it to die?]]
-->'''Dan:''' Yeah.
-->'''James:''' Well, it worked. Why didn't you tell it sooner?
* When Dan returns to his home after saving the world, he rolls the garbage bin back over to his house, even before greeting his family.
