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* [[OverprotectiveDad Shigeru]] coming home and thinking that his daughter just had [[ShowerOfLove sex in the shower]] [[NotWhatItLooksLike with some strange boy]]. And then [[NotWhatItLooksLike Rokuro trying to explain himself]] while he's being chased around by said weapon-brandishing father. [[OpenMouthInsertFoot It goes just as well as you think it does.]]
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* [[OverprotectiveDad [[BoyfriendBlockingDad Shigeru]] coming home and thinking that his daughter just had [[ShowerOfLove sex in the shower]] [[NotWhatItLooksLike with some strange boy]]. And then [[NotWhatItLooksLike Rokuro trying to explain himself]] while he's being chased around by said weapon-brandishing father. [[OpenMouthInsertFoot It goes just as well as you think it does.]]
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--> Akemi: "A week? You can eat this many apples in a ''week''?"
--> Maruchi: "It's my favorite food."
--> Akemi: "Yeah, well, I like ice cream, but you don't see ''me'' eating a ton of it!"
--> Maruchi: "Wouldn't that be because you need to watch your weight?"
--> ''*Gets hit in the face with a two-pound bag of apples*''
--> Maruchi: "It's my favorite food."
--> Akemi: "Yeah, well, I like ice cream, but you don't see ''me'' eating a ton of it!"
--> Maruchi: "Wouldn't that be because you need to watch your weight?"
--> ''*Gets hit in the face with a two-pound bag of apples*''
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--> Akemi: "A '''Akemi:''' A week? You can eat this many apples in a ''week''?"
--> Maruchi: "It's''week''?\\
'''Maruchi:''' It's my favorite food."
--> Akemi: "Yeah,\\
'''Akemi:''' Yeah, well, I like ice cream, but you don't see ''me'' eating a ton ofit!"
--> Maruchi: "Wouldn'tit!\\
'''Maruchi:''' Wouldn't that be because you need to watch yourweight?"
-->weight?\\
''*Gets hit in the face with a two-pound bag of apples*''
--> Maruchi: "It's
'''Maruchi:''' It's my favorite food.
--> Akemi: "Yeah,
'''Akemi:''' Yeah, well, I like ice cream, but you don't see ''me'' eating a ton of
--> Maruchi: "Wouldn't
'''Maruchi:''' Wouldn't that be because you need to watch your
-->
''*Gets hit in the face with a two-pound bag of apples*''
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--> ''[[WhatAnIdiot "GAH! ...]] '''[[WhatAnIdiot Damn]]''' [[WhatAnIdiot it, Maruchi!!"]]''
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--> ''[[WhatAnIdiot "GAH! ...]] '''[[WhatAnIdiot Damn]]''' [[WhatAnIdiot ''"GAH! ... '''Damn''' it, Maruchi!!"]]''Maruchi!!"''
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** ... Which later turns into a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming when he apologizes for being a jackass.
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** ... Which later turns into a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming Moment|s}} when he apologizes for being a jackass.
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* Possibly the entirety of the ''Family Issues'' chapter. Just to give you an idea, it starts out with [[RealMenWearPink Rokuro doing laundry]]. Not really a big deal, until you realize that [[CrowningMomentOfFunny it's]] ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny Akemi's]]'' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny laundry]].
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* Possibly the entirety of the ''Family Issues'' chapter. Just to give you an idea, it starts out with [[RealMenWearPink Rokuro doing laundry]]. Not really a big deal, until you realize that [[CrowningMomentOfFunny it's]] ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny Akemi's]]'' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny laundry]].it's ''Akemi's'' laundry.
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* The breakfast argument in chapter 39, courtesy of the Hirota siblings. It's the kind of banter you'd expect out of them.
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* Maruchi's ''"Onee-chan!!"'' scene. The whole thing is absurdly hilarious, especially considering that he's never acted like that aside from this one time. Apparently, wanting revenge on Akemi warranted this response...
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* Maruchi's ''"Onee-chan!!"'' scene. The whole thing is absurdly hilarious, completely absurd, especially considering that he's never acted like that aside from this one time. Apparently, wanting revenge on Akemi warranted this response...response.
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* This:
--> Akemi: "A week? You can eat this many apples in a ''week''?"
--> Maruchi: "It's my favorite food."
--> Akemi: "Yeah, well, I like ice cream, but you don't see ''me'' eating a ton of it!"
--> Maruchi: "Wouldn't that be because you need to watch your weight?"
--> ''*Gets hit in the face with a two-pound bag of apples*''
--> Akemi: "A week? You can eat this many apples in a ''week''?"
--> Maruchi: "It's my favorite food."
--> Akemi: "Yeah, well, I like ice cream, but you don't see ''me'' eating a ton of it!"
--> Maruchi: "Wouldn't that be because you need to watch your weight?"
--> ''*Gets hit in the face with a two-pound bag of apples*''
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* Most ''definitely'' chapter 11-3. If [[HoYay Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless]] won't cover enough bases, then Maruchi's [[DeadpanSnarker neverending snarky remarks and comebacks]] certainly will.
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* Most ''definitely'' chapter 11-3. If [[HoYay [[ItMakesSenseInContext Rokuro getting examined and touched touched]] [[HoYay by older men while he's shirtless]] won't cover enough bases, then Maruchi's [[DeadpanSnarker neverending snarky remarks and comebacks]] certainly will.
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--> Rokuro: ''I DO NOT HAVE A NUDITY COMPLEX!''
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--> Rokuro: ''I DO NOT HAVE A NUDITY COMPLEX!''COMPLEX! [[{{Beat}} *beat*]] AND I'M STILL WEARING PANTS, YOU KNOW!''
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** That scene just becomes HilariousInHindsight when you realize that [[spoiler: that's a GROWN MAN acting like that in public]].
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** That whole scene just becomes HilariousInHindsight when you realize that [[spoiler: that's a GROWN MAN acting like that in public]].
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--> ''[[WhatAnIdiot "GAH! ...]] '''[[DoesNotUnderstandSarcasm Damn]]''' [[DoesNotUnderstandSarcasm it, Maruchi!!"]]''
* Most ''definitely'' chapter 11-3. If [[HoYay Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless]] won't cover enough bases, then Maruchi's [[DeadpanSnarker neverending snarky remarks and comebacks]] will.
* Most ''definitely'' chapter 11-3. If [[HoYay Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless]] won't cover enough bases, then Maruchi's [[DeadpanSnarker neverending snarky remarks and comebacks]] will.
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--> ''[[WhatAnIdiot "GAH! ...]] '''[[DoesNotUnderstandSarcasm '''[[WhatAnIdiot Damn]]''' [[DoesNotUnderstandSarcasm [[WhatAnIdiot it, Maruchi!!"]]''
* Most ''definitely'' chapter 11-3. If [[HoYay Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless]] won't cover enough bases, then Maruchi's [[DeadpanSnarker neverending snarky remarks and comebacks]] certainly will.
* Most ''definitely'' chapter 11-3. If [[HoYay Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless]] won't cover enough bases, then Maruchi's [[DeadpanSnarker neverending snarky remarks and comebacks]] certainly will.
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** Then later, when Akemi asks the student-teacher pair about their "bet", Maruchi stays awkwardly silent as if he was actually scared of she would do to him if she found out.
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** Then later, when Akemi asks the student-teacher pair about their "bet", Maruchi stays awkwardly silent as if he was were actually scared of she would do to him if she found out.
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* [[OverprotectiveDad Shigeru]] coming home and thinking that his daughter just had [[ShowerOfLove sex in the shower]] [[NotWhatItLooksLike with some strange boy]].
* Possibly the entirety of the ''Family Issues'' chapter. Just to give you an idea, it starts out with [[RealMenWearPink Rokuro]] doing laundry. Not really a big deal, until you realize that [[CrowningMomentOfFunny it's]] ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny Akemi's]]'' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny laundry]].
* Possibly the entirety of the ''Family Issues'' chapter. Just to give you an idea, it starts out with [[RealMenWearPink Rokuro]] doing laundry. Not really a big deal, until you realize that [[CrowningMomentOfFunny it's]] ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny Akemi's]]'' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny laundry]].
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* [[OverprotectiveDad Shigeru]] coming home and thinking that his daughter just had [[ShowerOfLove sex in the shower]] [[NotWhatItLooksLike with some strange boy]].
boy]]. And then [[NotWhatItLooksLike Rokuro trying to explain himself]] while he's being chased around by said weapon-brandishing father. [[OpenMouthInsertFoot It goes just as well as you think it does.]]
* Possibly the entirety of the ''Family Issues'' chapter. Just to give you an idea, it starts out with [[RealMenWearPinkRokuro]] Rokuro doing laundry.laundry]]. Not really a big deal, until you realize that [[CrowningMomentOfFunny it's]] ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny Akemi's]]'' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny laundry]].
* Possibly the entirety of the ''Family Issues'' chapter. Just to give you an idea, it starts out with [[RealMenWearPink
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* Most ''definitely'' chapter 11-3. If [[HoYay Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless]] won't cover enough, then Maruchi's [[DeadpanSnarker neverending snarky remarks and comebacks]] will.
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* Most ''definitely'' chapter 11-3. If [[HoYay Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless]] won't cover enough, enough bases, then Maruchi's [[DeadpanSnarker neverending snarky remarks and comebacks]] will.
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** Then later, when Akemi asks the student-teacher pair about their "bet", Maruchi stays awkwardly silent as if he was actually scared of her finding out.
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** Then later, when Akemi asks the student-teacher pair about their "bet", Maruchi stays awkwardly silent as if he was actually scared of her finding she would do to him if she found out.
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** That scene just becomes HilariousInHindsight when you realize that [[spoiler: that's a GROWN MAN acting like that in public]].
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*** Shichi thought she was talking about Rokuro.
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*** [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Shichi thought she was talking about Rokuro.]]
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** Akemi hits Rokuro with an English textbook to get him to stop yelling, to which the wizard just sits there in pain. When she tries to threaten Maruchi with the same treatment, [[IneffectualDeathThreats he threatens her]].
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** Akemi hits Rokuro with an [[ThrowTheBookAtThem English textbook textbook]] to get him to stop yelling, to which the wizard just sits there in pain. When she tries to threaten Maruchi with the same treatment, [[IneffectualDeathThreats he threatens her]].to kill her]].
** Then later, when Akemi asks the student-teacher pair about their "bet", Maruchi stays awkwardly silent as if he was actually scared of her finding out.
** "I'll just go prepare lunch. Maybe having food when they come back will be enough to appease his Royal Pole-Up-Ass's bad mood."
*** Shichi thought she was talking about Rokuro.
** Then later, when Akemi asks the student-teacher pair about their "bet", Maruchi stays awkwardly silent as if he was actually scared of her finding out.
** "I'll just go prepare lunch. Maybe having food when they come back will be enough to appease his Royal Pole-Up-Ass's bad mood."
*** Shichi thought she was talking about Rokuro.
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* Most definitely chapter 11-3. If Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless won't cover enough, then Maruchi's neverending snarky remarks and comebacks will.
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* Most definitely ''definitely'' chapter 11-3. If [[HoYay Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless shirtless]] won't cover enough, then Maruchi's [[DeadpanSnarker neverending snarky remarks and comebacks comebacks]] will.
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--> Rokuro: ''I DO NOT HAVE A NUDITY COMPLEX!''
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--> Rokuro: ''I DO NOT HAVE A NUDITY COMPLEX!''COMPLEX!''
** Akemi hits Rokuro with an English textbook to get him to stop yelling, to which the wizard just sits there in pain. When she tries to threaten Maruchi with the same treatment, [[IneffectualDeathThreats he threatens her]].
** That entire chapter can be summarized in this one exchange:
--> "Are you '''trying''' to get me pissed off?"
--> "That depends. Is it working?"
** Akemi hits Rokuro with an English textbook to get him to stop yelling, to which the wizard just sits there in pain. When she tries to threaten Maruchi with the same treatment, [[IneffectualDeathThreats he threatens her]].
** That entire chapter can be summarized in this one exchange:
--> "Are you '''trying''' to get me pissed off?"
--> "That depends. Is it working?"
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--> ''[[WhatAnIdiot "GAH! ...]] '''[[DoesNotUnderstandSarcasm Damn]]''' [[DoesNotUnderstandSarcasm it, Maruchi!!"]]''
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--> ''[[WhatAnIdiot "GAH! ...]] '''[[DoesNotUnderstandSarcasm Damn]]''' [[DoesNotUnderstandSarcasm it, Maruchi!!"]]''Maruchi!!"]]''
* Most definitely chapter 11-3. If Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless won't cover enough, then Maruchi's neverending snarky remarks and comebacks will.
--> Maruchi: We're not usually this bad-tempered towards each other. Rokuro might just be in a foul mood because of his little nudity complex.
--> Rokuro: ''I DO NOT HAVE A NUDITY COMPLEX!''
* Most definitely chapter 11-3. If Rokuro getting examined and touched by older men while he's shirtless won't cover enough, then Maruchi's neverending snarky remarks and comebacks will.
--> Maruchi: We're not usually this bad-tempered towards each other. Rokuro might just be in a foul mood because of his little nudity complex.
--> Rokuro: ''I DO NOT HAVE A NUDITY COMPLEX!''
