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*** And when he's finally drunk enough that he's willing to tell Thorndyke the secret to Herbie's racing capabilities -The very thing Thorndyke spent the whole night trying to coax out of him- he's all but too honest about [[HeartIsAnAwesomePower his take on the matter]].
--->'''Tennessee:''' [''Drunk and slurring''] You wanna know the secret to the little car?\\
'''Thorndyke:''' [''Hastily getting a pen and notepad''] Oh yes, just a moment... Yes, proceed!\\
'''Tennessee:''' [''Completely earnest, almost to tears''] Heart... It's heart.\\
'''Thorndyke:''' [''Immediately disappointed''] Yes... Well, I'll certainly make a note of that! [''discards the pen and notepad into an empty coffee mug'']\\
'''Tennessee:''' [''Drunkenly absent mindedly sprays some whipped cream into said mug while Thorndyke [[FacePalm facepalms]]'']
--->'''Tennessee:''' [''Drunk and slurring''] You wanna know the secret to the little car?\\
'''Thorndyke:''' [''Hastily getting a pen and notepad''] Oh yes, just a moment... Yes, proceed!\\
'''Tennessee:''' [''Completely earnest, almost to tears''] Heart... It's heart.\\
'''Thorndyke:''' [''Immediately disappointed''] Yes... Well, I'll certainly make a note of that! [''discards the pen and notepad into an empty coffee mug'']\\
'''Tennessee:''' [''Drunkenly absent mindedly sprays some whipped cream into said mug while Thorndyke [[FacePalm facepalms]]'']
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** Thorndyke asking him which part of Ireland his mother came from. He replies with "[[{{Incredibly Lame Pun}} Coney Ireland]]."
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** Thorndyke asking him which part of Ireland his mother came from. He replies with "[[{{Incredibly Lame Pun}} "[[{{Pun}} Coney Ireland]]."
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-->'''Thorndyke:''' [''On the verge of tears''] I tell you Havershaw. I tell you that that car is out to get me!\\
'''Havershaw:''' [''Very doting and calming''] Oh now, sir, don't go losing your nerv-\\
'''Havershaw:''' [''Very doting and calming''] Oh now, sir, don't go losing your nerv-\\
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-->'''Thorndyke:''' [''On the verge of tears''] I tell you Havershaw. I tell you Havershaw, I'm not a cowardly man, but I'm beginning to sense that that car thing is out to get me!\\
'''Havershaw:''' [''Very doting and calming'']Oh Now now, sir, don't go none of that, sir. We're not losing your nerv-\\our nerve are w-\\
'''Havershaw:''' [''Very doting and calming'']
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** Even funnier is how the noise started with Tennessee throwing a tantrum breaking things in the workshop, before stopping at some point and calmly walking between an arguing Carole and Jim with a nonchalant "Pardon me" while the noise continues uninterrupted in the background.
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* This beautiful moment where Thorndyke, after being released from Herbie by the tritagonists, is "set free" akin to a rescued animal brought back into the wild. All he can do is hobble towards a tree, then twist around screaming:
-->'''Thorndyke:''' HAVERSHAW!
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* Thorndyke's breakdown throughout the race, especially when he nearly has a panic attack.
-->'''Thorndyke:''' [''On the verge of tears''] I tell you Havershaw. I tell you that that car is out to get me!\\
'''Havershaw:''' [''Very doting and calming''] Oh now, sir, don't go losing your nerv-\\
'''Thorndyke:''' ''[[SuddenlyShouting BLAST YOU, HAVERSHAW!]] HOW DARE YOU PATRONIZE ME?! [[HypocriticalHumor I AM NOT LOSING MY NERVE!]]''
-->'''Thorndyke:''' [''On the verge of tears''] I tell you Havershaw. I tell you that that car is out to get me!\\
'''Havershaw:''' [''Very doting and calming''] Oh now, sir, don't go losing your nerv-\\
'''Thorndyke:''' ''[[SuddenlyShouting BLAST YOU, HAVERSHAW!]] HOW DARE YOU PATRONIZE ME?! [[HypocriticalHumor I AM NOT LOSING MY NERVE!]]''
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* Nicole's [[AttackHello introduction]] to Willoughby after learning he came from Alonzo Hawk's office.
-->'''Nicole:''' [''Politely''] How do you do? ['''''PUNCH''''']
-->'''Nicole:''' [''Politely''] How do you do? ['''''PUNCH''''']
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-->'''Thorndyke:''' [upon the glovebox being opened] ''GET ME OUT OF HERE!!''\\
'''Carol:''' [makes an OhCrap face]
'''Carol:''' [makes an OhCrap face]
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-->'''Thorndyke:''' [upon ''[upon the glovebox being opened] opened]'' ''GET ME OUT OF HERE!!''\\
'''Carol:'''[makes ''[makes an OhCrap face]face]''
'''Carol:'''
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-->'''Alonzo Hawk:''' Of course it is, you idiot! I know it like I know my own address! [hangs up; {beat}] Wait a minute... [[OhCrap It IS my own address!]]
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-->'''Alonzo Hawk:''' Of course it is, you idiot! I know it like I know my own address! [hangs up; {beat}] {{beat}}] Wait a minute... [[OhCrap It IS my own address!]]
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-->'''Jim''': Why is it that all we ever have in this house is parrot food? I mean we don't even have a parrot!
-->'''Tennessee''': Here! Eat that! It's pressed kelp! It aerates your liver.
* Carole's {{What The Hell Hero}} rant to Jim about his apparent success in winning races, which was actually Herbie's doing, while loud crashing sounds are going on in the background, [[spoiler: which turn out to be Herbie ramming himself repeatedly against the Lamborghini that Jim bought to replace him]].
-->'''Tennessee''': Here! Eat that! It's pressed kelp! It aerates your liver.
* Carole's {{What The Hell Hero}} rant to Jim about his apparent success in winning races, which was actually Herbie's doing, while loud crashing sounds are going on in the background, [[spoiler: which turn out to be Herbie ramming himself repeatedly against the Lamborghini that Jim bought to replace him]].
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-->'''Tennessee''':
'''Tennessee:''' Here! Eat that! It's pressed kelp! It aerates your liver.
* Carole's
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-->'''Thorndyke:''' [upon the glovebox being opened] ''GET ME OUT OF HERE!!''
-->'''Carol:''' [makes an OhCrap face]
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-->'''Carol:'''
'''Carol:''' [makes an OhCrap face]
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* This beautiful moment where Thorndyke, after being released from Herbie by the tritagonists, is "set free" akin to a rescued animal brought back into the wild. All he can do is hobble towards a tree, then twist around screaming:-
--> '''Thorndyke:''' HAVERSHAW!
--> '''Thorndyke:''' HAVERSHAW!
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* This beautiful moment where Thorndyke, after being released from Herbie by the tritagonists, is "set free" akin to a rescued animal brought back into the wild. All he can do is hobble towards a tree, then twist around screaming:-
--> '''Thorndyke:'''screaming:
-->'''Thorndyke:''' HAVERSHAW!
--> '''Thorndyke:'''
-->'''Thorndyke:''' HAVERSHAW!
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--> '''Tennessee:''' I can't weld that!
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* ''"The little car takes first... And third place!"''
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* ''"The little car takes first... And and third place!"''
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* '''Alonzo Hawk''': HELSINKI?!
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* '''Alonzo Hawk''': Willoughby's phone call to his uncle where he fakes being at the dock and boarding a ship for:
-->'''Alonzo Hawk:''' HELSINKI?!
-->'''Alonzo Hawk:''' HELSINKI?!
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* Willoughby manages to convince Herbie to [[SaveTheVillain spare Mr. Hawk]] by telling him
-->'''Willoughby''': If you don't stop, you won't be invited to the wedding!" Once the excitement has died down, Nicole [[DoubleTake realizes what he said]] and asks: ---'''Nicole''': What wedding?
-->'''Willoughby''': If you don't stop, you won't be invited to the wedding!" Once the excitement has died down, Nicole [[DoubleTake realizes what he said]] and asks: ---'''Nicole''': What wedding?
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* Willoughby manages to convince Herbie to [[SaveTheVillain spare Mr. Hawk]] by telling him
-->'''Willoughby''':him:
-->'''Willoughby:''' If you don't stop, you won't be invited to thewedding!" wedding!
** Once the excitement has died down, Nicole [[DoubleTake realizes what he said]] andasks: ---'''Nicole''': asks:
--->'''Nicole:''' What wedding?
-->'''Willoughby''':
-->'''Willoughby:''' If you don't stop, you won't be invited to the
** Once the excitement has died down, Nicole [[DoubleTake realizes what he said]] and
--->'''Nicole:''' What wedding?
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* Tennessee speaking to Mr. Wu in Cantonese. SoLongAsItSoundsForeign is firmly in effect in their conversation.
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** '''Alonzo Hawk''': Of course it is, you idiot! I know it like I know my own address! {beat} Wait a minute.....[[OhCrap It ''IS'' my own address]]!
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** '''Alonzo Hawk''': Of course it is, you idiot! I know it like I know my own address! {beat} Wait a minute.....[[OhCrap It ''IS'' IS my own address]]!
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* "HELSINKI?!"
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* "HELSINKI?!" '''Alonzo Hawk''': HELSINKI?!
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** "Of course it is, you idiot! I know it like I know my own address! {beat} Wait.....[[OhCrap It IS my own address]]!"
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* Willoughby manages to convince Herbie to [[SaveTheVillain spare Mr. Hawk]] by telling him "If you don't stop, you won't be invited to the wedding!" Once the excitement has died down, Nicole [[DoubleTake realizes what he said]] and asks "What wedding?"
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* Willoughby manages to convince Herbie to [[SaveTheVillain spare Mr. Hawk]] by telling him "If him
-->'''Willoughby''': If you don't stop, you won't be invited to the wedding!" Once the excitement has died down, Nicole [[DoubleTake realizes what he said]] andasks "What wedding?"asks: ---'''Nicole''': What wedding?
-->'''Willoughby''': If you don't stop, you won't be invited to the wedding!" Once the excitement has died down, Nicole [[DoubleTake realizes what he said]] and