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--> "I feel qualified to participate in the Long Walk because I am one useless S.O.B. and the world would be better off without me, unless I happened to win, in which case I would buy a [[Creator/VincentVanGogh Van]] [[YouMakeMeSic Go]] to put in every room of my manshun and order up sixty high-class horrs and not bother anybody." ... and then I put in parenthesis, (I would give all my sixty high-class horrs old-age pensions, too.)"
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--> "I feel qualified to participate in the Long Walk because I am one useless S.O.B. and the world would be better off without me, unless I happened to win, in which case I would buy a [[Creator/VincentVanGogh Van]] [[YouMakeMeSic Van Go]] to put in every room of my manshun and order up sixty high-class horrs and not bother anybody." ... and then I put in parenthesis, (I would give all my sixty high-class horrs old-age pensions, too.)"
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--> "I feel qualified to participate in the Long Walk because I am one useless S.O.B. and the world would be better off without me, unless I happened to win, in which case I would buy a Van Go to put in every room of my manshun and order up sixty high-class horrs and not bother anybody." ... and then I put in parenthesis, (I would give all my sixty high-class horrs old-age pensions, too.)"
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--> "I feel qualified to participate in the Long Walk because I am one useless S.O.B. and the world would be better off without me, unless I happened to win, in which case I would buy a Van Go [[Creator/VincentVanGogh Van]] [[YouMakeMeSic Go]] to put in every room of my manshun and order up sixty high-class horrs and not bother anybody." ... and then I put in parenthesis, (I would give all my sixty high-class horrs old-age pensions, too.)"
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*Olson isn't exactly impressed by Barkovitch's "Plan," which involves Barkovitch getting three warnings right off the bat, forcing him to walk at full speed for three hours, and meaning that ''any'' slip-ups in the first hour will get him killed.
-->“Your Plan and the stuff that comes out of my asshole bear a suspicious resemblance to each other."
-->“Your Plan and the stuff that comes out of my asshole bear a suspicious resemblance to each other."
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* If you own the original Signet paperback, it's quite humorous to turn to the back pages and see some of Stephen King's work advertised among other paperbacks then being sold by Signet. Bachman's work was likewise being offered on the back pages of Stephen King's paperbacks.
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--> "I feel qualified to participate in the Long Walk because I am one useless S.O.B. and the world would be better off without me, unless I happened to win, in which case I would buy a Van Go to put in every room of my manshun and order up sixty high-class horrs and not bother anybody." ... and then I put in parenthesis, (I would give all my sixty high-class horrs old-age pensions, too.)"
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--> "I feel qualified to participate in the Long Walk because I am one useless S.O.B. and the world would be better off without me, unless I happened to win, in which case I would buy a Van Go to put in every room of my manshun and order up sixty high-class horrs and not bother anybody." ... and then I put in parenthesis, (I would give all my sixty high-class horrs old-age pensions, too.)")"
* If you own the original Signet paperback, it's quite humorous to turn to the back pages and see some of Stephen King's work advertised among other paperbacks then being sold by Signet. Bachman's work was likewise being offered on the back pages of Stephen King's paperbacks.
* If you own the original Signet paperback, it's quite humorous to turn to the back pages and see some of Stephen King's work advertised among other paperbacks then being sold by Signet. Bachman's work was likewise being offered on the back pages of Stephen King's paperbacks.
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-->'''Narration:''' The soldiers did not look exactly struck to the heart with terror at the thought.
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-->'''Narration:''' The soldiers did not look exactly struck to the heart with terror at the thought.thought.
* Abraham's essay on why he'd be a good candidate for the Long Walk:
--> "I feel qualified to participate in the Long Walk because I am one useless S.O.B. and the world would be better off without me, unless I happened to win, in which case I would buy a Van Go to put in every room of my manshun and order up sixty high-class horrs and not bother anybody." ... and then I put in parenthesis, (I would give all my sixty high-class horrs old-age pensions, too.)"
* Abraham's essay on why he'd be a good candidate for the Long Walk:
--> "I feel qualified to participate in the Long Walk because I am one useless S.O.B. and the world would be better off without me, unless I happened to win, in which case I would buy a Van Go to put in every room of my manshun and order up sixty high-class horrs and not bother anybody." ... and then I put in parenthesis, (I would give all my sixty high-class horrs old-age pensions, too.)"
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* The response of one Walker to the guards setting up a beach umbrella for themselves: "You sonsabitches! My Prize is gonna be your public castration!"
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* The response of one Walker to the guards setting up a beach umbrella for themselves: "You sonsabitches! My Prize is gonna be your public castration!"castration!"
-->'''Narration:''' The soldiers did not look exactly struck to the heart with terror at the thought.
-->'''Narration:''' The soldiers did not look exactly struck to the heart with terror at the thought.
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-->'''Stebbins:''' Neither will anyone else. You'll see.
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-->'''Stebbins:''' Neither will anyone else. You'll see.see.
* The response of one Walker to the guards setting up a beach umbrella for themselves: "You sonsabitches! My Prize is gonna be your public castration!"
* The response of one Walker to the guards setting up a beach umbrella for themselves: "You sonsabitches! My Prize is gonna be your public castration!"
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* The boys joking about the Major buggering his mother/dog before breakfast.
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* The boys joking about the Major buggering his mother/dog mother/grandmother/dog before breakfast.
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-->"I believe in a good screw."
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-->"I believe in a good screw.""
* This exchange:
-->'''Garraty:''' What if they all hiss and boo and throw canteens at him, or something?
-->'''Stebbins:''' Are you going to hiss and boo and throw your canteen?
-->'''Garraty:''' No.
-->'''Stebbins:''' Neither will anyone else. You'll see.
* This exchange:
-->'''Garraty:''' What if they all hiss and boo and throw canteens at him, or something?
-->'''Stebbins:''' Are you going to hiss and boo and throw your canteen?
-->'''Garraty:''' No.
-->'''Stebbins:''' Neither will anyone else. You'll see.
