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Spelling/grammar fix(es) Oh, come on, I made another friggin typo?!
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-->'''Amanda:''' You don't want everypone thinking you don't blow, right Davara?
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-->'''Amanda:''' You don't want everypone everyone thinking you don't blow, right Davara?
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Spelling/grammar fix(es) forgot one of the Davara misspellings
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* DoubleEntendre: The line Amanda uses to goad Devara into summoning the Empty Man.
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* DoubleEntendre: The line Amanda uses to goad Devara Davara into summoning the Empty Man.
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-->'''Amanda:''' You don't want people to think you don't blow, right Devara?
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-->'''Amanda:''' You don't want people to think everypone thinking you don't blow, right Devara?Davara?
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* DoubleEntendre: The line Amanda uses to goad Devara into summoning the Empty Man.
-->'''Amanda:''' You don't want people to think you don't blow, right Devara?
-->'''Amanda:''' You don't want people to think you don't blow, right Devara?
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* Lasombra uses a birthday coupon to [[LoopholeAbuse get out of paying for his lunch]]. Shortly after, [[SurpriseParty all the waitstaff at the restaurant come out]] to half-heartedly sing him "Happy Birthday", and present him with a pitifully small cake. Lasombra is mortified by the whole thing.
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* Lasombra uses a birthday coupon to [[LoopholeAbuse get out of paying for his lunch]]. Shortly after, [[SurpriseParty all the waitstaff at the restaurant come out]] to half-heartedly sing him "Happy Birthday", and present him with a pitifully small cake. [[CringeComedy Lasombra is mortified by the whole thing.thing]].
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---> '''Lasombra:''' ''[{{Beat}}]'' Yeeeah... no.\\
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** It gets even funnier with [[spoiler: TheReveal that Lasombra is a [[{{Tulpa}} thoughtform]], and that he was created the night before; it really ''was'' his birthday.]]
** The best part? [[spoiler: Lasombra later finds the coupon in his file at The Pontifex Institute, among the items they used to create him. That's right, ''The Pontifex Society explicitly wanted him to celebrate his birthday''.]]
** The best part? [[spoiler: Lasombra later finds the coupon in his file at The Pontifex Institute, among the items they used to create him. That's right, ''The Pontifex Society explicitly wanted him to celebrate his birthday''.]]
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* Lasombra uses a birthday coupon to [[LoopholeAbuse get out of paying for his lunch]]. Shortly after, [[SurpriseParty all the waitstaff at the restaurant come out]] to sing him "Happy Birthday", and present him with a pitifully small cake. Lasombra is mortified by the whole thing.
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* Lasombra uses a birthday coupon to [[LoopholeAbuse get out of paying for his lunch]]. Shortly after, [[SurpriseParty all the waitstaff at the restaurant come out]] to half-heartedly sing him "Happy Birthday", and present him with a pitifully small cake. Lasombra is mortified by the whole thing.
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** It gets even funnier with [[spoiler: TheReveal that Lasombra is a [[{{Tulpa}} thoughtform]], and he was created the night before; it really ''was'' his birthday.]]
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** It gets even funnier with [[spoiler: TheReveal that Lasombra is a [[{{Tulpa}} thoughtform]], and that he was created the night before; it really ''was'' his birthday.]]
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''[[[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Lasombra runs like hell]]]''
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''[[[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Lasombra runs like hell]]]''hell]]]''
* After [[VehicularKidnapping forcing Garrett into his car]], Lasombra quickly looks around, only to realize that ''no one'' in the street noticed what was happening.
* After [[VehicularKidnapping forcing Garrett into his car]], Lasombra quickly looks around, only to realize that ''no one'' in the street noticed what was happening.
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* Lasombra uses a birthday coupon to [[LoopholeAbuse get out of paying for his lunch]]. Shortly after, [[SurpriseParty all the waitstaff at the restaurant come out]] to sing him "Happy Birthday", and present him with a pitifully small cake. Lasombra is mortified by the whole thing.
** It gets even funnier with [[spoiler: TheReveal that Lasombra is a [[{{Tulpa}} thoughtform]], and he was created the night before; it really ''was'' his birthday.]]
** The best part? [[spoiler: Lasombra later finds the coupon in his file at The Pontifex Institute, among the items they used to create him. That's right, ''The Pontifex Society explicitly wanted him to celebrate his birthday''.]]
* Lasombra's reaction when the cultists at the camp notice him, and all start [[MirrorRoutine copying his movements]]:
---> '''Lasombra:''' ''[{{Beat}}]'' Yeeeah... no.\\
''[[[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Lasombra runs like hell]]]''
** It gets even funnier with [[spoiler: TheReveal that Lasombra is a [[{{Tulpa}} thoughtform]], and he was created the night before; it really ''was'' his birthday.]]
** The best part? [[spoiler: Lasombra later finds the coupon in his file at The Pontifex Institute, among the items they used to create him. That's right, ''The Pontifex Society explicitly wanted him to celebrate his birthday''.]]
* Lasombra's reaction when the cultists at the camp notice him, and all start [[MirrorRoutine copying his movements]]:
---> '''Lasombra:''' ''[{{Beat}}]'' Yeeeah... no.\\
''[[[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Lasombra runs like hell]]]''
