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* Chapter 11 opens with Hibiki waking up to an empty bed, literally; Nanami left while Hibiki was sleeping, and Hibiki literally rolled out of bed in her sleep.
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* Chapter 11 opens with Hibiki waking up to an empty bed, literally; Nanami left while Hibiki was sleeping, and Hibiki literally rolled out of bed in her sleep.sleep.
* The mastermind themselves[[note]]An RP blog[[/note]] is reading the story, and of course they're giving commentary as they go along. It's hysterical to see Kawaiiwolf and [[spoiler:Emoshima]] interact.
* The mastermind themselves[[note]]An RP blog[[/note]] is reading the story, and of course they're giving commentary as they go along. It's hysterical to see Kawaiiwolf and [[spoiler:Emoshima]] interact.
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* After Hibiki refutes one of Hanamura's arguments, it's mentioned that "[[AccidentalInnuendo The chef got stiff]]." It gets even better because having an erection is somewhat in-character for Hanamura.
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* After Hibiki refutes one of Hanamura's arguments, it's mentioned that "[[AccidentalInnuendo The chef got stiff]]." It gets even better because having an erection is somewhat in-character for Hanamura.Hanamura.
* Chapter 11 opens with Hibiki waking up to an empty bed, literally; Nanami left while Hibiki was sleeping, and Hibiki literally rolled out of bed in her sleep.
* Chapter 11 opens with Hibiki waking up to an empty bed, literally; Nanami left while Hibiki was sleeping, and Hibiki literally rolled out of bed in her sleep.
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* Hibiki's reaction to finding out they have to [[ThePerfectCrime kill someone and not get caught?]] "Kill someone? And ruin my perfect outfit?"
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* Hibiki's reaction to finding out they have to [[ThePerfectCrime kill someone and not get caught?]] "Kill someone? And ruin my perfect outfit?"outfit?"
* After Hibiki refutes one of Hanamura's arguments, it's mentioned that "[[AccidentalInnuendo The chef got stiff]]." It gets even better because having an erection is somewhat in-character for Hanamura.
* After Hibiki refutes one of Hanamura's arguments, it's mentioned that "[[AccidentalInnuendo The chef got stiff]]." It gets even better because having an erection is somewhat in-character for Hanamura.
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* Hibiki's reaction to finding out they have to [[ThePerfectCrime kill someone and not get caught?]] "Kill someone? And ruin my perfect outfit?"
* Hibiki's reaction to finding out they have to [[ThePerfectCrime kill someone and not get caught?]] "Kill someone? And ruin my perfect outfit?"
