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* The mere fact that this movie apparently takes place in the same universe as ''Film/{{Brightburn}}'' is ridiculously hilarious due to how out-of-place the dark comedic tone of this movie is with the serious horror atmosphere of ''Brightburn''.
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* The mere fact that this movie apparently takes place in the same universe as ''Film/{{Brightburn}}'' is ridiculously hilarious due to how out-of-place the dark comedic tone of this movie is with the serious horror atmosphere of ''Brightburn''.''Brightburn''.
* Boltie using "Gay" and "Cocksucker" as insults has a level of irony when considering that she was portrayed by a pre-op ''Creator/ElliotPage'' who at the time identified as a Lesbian.
* Boltie using "Gay" and "Cocksucker" as insults has a level of irony when considering that she was portrayed by a pre-op ''Creator/ElliotPage'' who at the time identified as a Lesbian.
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* At the end of the montage of his more successful superhero outings, Frank runs to his car after attempting a SmokeOut (which only confuses the hoodlums because [[EpicFail it makes very little smoke]]) accidentally drops his wrench to the ground and has to clumsily stop and pick it up before driving away laughing victoriously.
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* The mere fact that this movie apparently takes place in the same universe as Film/{{Brightburn}} ''Film/{{Brightburn}}'' is ridiculously hilarious due to how out-of-place the dark comedic tone of this movie is with the serious horror atmosphere of Brightburn.''Brightburn''.
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* The mere fact that this movie takes place in the same universe as Film/Brightburn Film/{{Brightburn}} is ridiculously hilarious due to how out-of-place the dark comedic tone of this movie is with the serious horror atmosphere of Brightburn.
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* The mere fact that this movie takes place in the same universe as Brightburn is ridiculously hilarious due to how out-of-place the comedic tone of this movie is with the serious horror atmosphere of Brightburn.
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* The mere fact that this movie takes place in the same universe as Brightburn Film/Brightburn is ridiculously hilarious due to how out-of-place the dark comedic tone of this movie is with the serious horror atmosphere of Brightburn.
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** ...Dude, I found most of her Boltie stuff intensely disturbing. Maybe I missed the point.
*** It can be both.
*** It's supposed to be both.
*** Most of what Boltie does is BlackComedy.
*** Personally, the comedy aspect was lost after [[spoiler: she raped Frank]], at least for me.
*** It can be both.
*** It's supposed to be both.
*** Most of what Boltie does is BlackComedy.
*** Personally, the comedy aspect was lost after [[spoiler: she raped Frank]], at least for me.
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*** Personally, the comedy aspect was lost after [[spoiler: she[[Double Standard raped Frank]]...]], at least for me.
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*** Personally, the comedy aspect was lost after [[spoiler: she[[Double Standard she raped Frank]]...]], Frank]], at least for me.
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*** Personally, the comedy aspect was lost after [[spoiler:she[[Double Standard she raped frank]]...]], at least for me.
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*** Personally, the comedy aspect was lost after [[spoiler:she[[Double [[spoiler: she[[Double Standard she raped frank]]...Frank]]...]], at least for me.
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*** Personally, the comedy aspect was lost after [[spoiler:[[Double Standard she raped frank]]]], at least for me.
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*** Personally, the comedy aspect was lost after [[spoiler:[[Double [[spoiler:she[[Double Standard she raped frank]]]], frank]]...]], at least for me.
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*** Personally, the comedy aspect was lost after [[spoiler:[[Double Standard she raped frank]]]], at least for me.
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** "YOU TELL EVERYONE YOU KNOW THAT ANY TIME SOME STUPID ''FUCKING BASTARD'' DECIDES TO COMMIT SOME ''GAY-ASS CRIME'', THE CRIMSON BOLT AND BOLTIE ARE GONNA SMASH THEIR FUCKIN' HEADS IN!"
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** "YOU TELL EVERYONE YOU KNOW THAT ANY TIME SOME STUPID ''FUCKING BASTARD'' DECIDES TO COMMIT SOME ''GAY-ASS CRIME'', THE CRIMSON BOLT AND BOLTIE ARE GONNA SMASH THEIR FUCKIN' HEADS IN!"IN!"[[note]]Little girl bystander: ''(smiles and waves)''[[/note]]
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** The visual gags in that scene are great all around--for example, the regular customer whose expression goes from ''"Who the hell are these people"'' to ''"Right on!"'' as Frank and Libby fill their cart with boxes of ammo, and the bit where another customer shoves past Libby and she pulls what appears to be a cutlass on him.
* Jacques' lampshading of the entire movie's premise:
-->''Hey, come on, it's just this crazy guy! I mean, it's funny! ...Right, Abe?''
* Jacques' lampshading of the entire movie's premise:
-->''Hey, come on, it's just this crazy guy! I mean, it's funny! ...Right, Abe?''
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*** Most of what Boltie does is BlackComedy.
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* The gun sale montage, and Libby testing out a pink rifle before Frank yanks it out of her hands...and hands her a rocket launcher.
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* The gun sale montage, and Libby testing out a pink rifle before Frank yanks it out of her hands...and hands her a rocket launcher.launcher.
* The mere fact that this movie takes place in the same universe as Brightburn is ridiculously hilarious due to how out-of-place the comedic tone of this movie is with the serious horror atmosphere of Brightburn.
* The mere fact that this movie takes place in the same universe as Brightburn is ridiculously hilarious due to how out-of-place the comedic tone of this movie is with the serious horror atmosphere of Brightburn.
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* Everything Libby does while in Boltie mode is just hysterical. "NOW YOU DON'T HAVE LEGS ANYMORE!" "IT'S CALLED INTERNAL BLEEDING FUCKER, NOW YOU'RE GONNA DIE!" Not to mention her outrageous fighting prowess she shows off to Frank, consisting of clumsy cartwheels, a weak hand stand, and a few kicks in the air.
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* Everything Libby does while in Boltie mode is just hysterical. "NOW YOU DON'T HAVE "AND NOW YOUR LEGS ANYMORE!" ARE GONE!" "IT'S CALLED INTERNAL BLEEDING FUCKER, NOW YOU'RE GONNA DIE!" Not to mention her outrageous fighting prowess she shows off to Frank, consisting of clumsy cartwheels, a weak hand stand, and a few kicks in the air.
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* Crimson flying over and going completely house on the line-cutter with his wrench was funny, in that Marcellus Wallace shooting wildly and hitting random people after being hit by a car sort of way. Which is to say possibly not at all funny, depending on the audience.
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* Crimson flying over and going completely house on the line-cutter with his wrench was funny, in that [[Film/PulpFiction Marcellus Wallace shooting wildly and hitting random people after being hit by a car Wallace-shooting-wildly-and-hitting-random-people-after-being-hit-by-a-car]] sort of way. Which is to say possibly not at all funny, depending on the audience.
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-->'''Frank''': I got a lot of work to do. We're really busy right now. ''[cut to view of the empty cafe]''
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-->'''Frank''': I got a lot of work to do. We're really busy right now. ''[cut to view of the empty cafe]''cafe]''
* The gun sale montage, and Libby testing out a pink rifle before Frank yanks it out of her hands...and hands her a rocket launcher.
* The gun sale montage, and Libby testing out a pink rifle before Frank yanks it out of her hands...and hands her a rocket launcher.
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* The Holy Avenger, be it his show or Frank's hallucinations. If you've seen ''{{Bibleman}}'', it's especially hilarious.
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* The Holy Avenger, be it his show or Frank's hallucinations. If you've seen ''{{Bibleman}}'', ''Series/{{Bibleman}}'', it's especially hilarious.
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** Demonswill, the show's villain (played by Creator/JamesGunn, no less) constantly waggling his tongue in every scene he's in.
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* Crimson flying over and going completely house on the line-cutter with his wrench was funny, in that Marcellus Wallace shooting wildly and hitting random people after being hit by a car sort of way. Which is to say possibly not at all funny, depending on the audience.
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* Crimson flying over and going completely house on the line-cutter with his wrench was funny, in that Marcellus Wallace shooting wildly and hitting random people after being hit by a car sort of way. Which is to say possibly not at all funny, depending on the audience.audience.
* Frank trying to get Libby to leave him alone before she figures out he's the Crimson Bolt.
-->'''Frank''': I got a lot of work to do. We're really busy right now. ''[cut to view of the empty cafe]''
* Frank trying to get Libby to leave him alone before she figures out he's the Crimson Bolt.
-->'''Frank''': I got a lot of work to do. We're really busy right now. ''[cut to view of the empty cafe]''
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*** It's supposed to be both.
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** "I'll pick it up later!"
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* "Shut Up, crime."
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* "Shut Up, crime.""
* Crimson flying over and going completely house on the line-cutter with his wrench was funny, in that Marcellus Wallace shooting wildly and hitting random people after being hit by a car sort of way. Which is to say possibly not at all funny, depending on the audience.
* Crimson flying over and going completely house on the line-cutter with his wrench was funny, in that Marcellus Wallace shooting wildly and hitting random people after being hit by a car sort of way. Which is to say possibly not at all funny, depending on the audience.
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** "YOU TELL EVERYONE YOU KNOW THAT ANY TIME SOME STUPID FUCKIN' BASTARD DECIDES TO COMMIT SOME ''GAY-ASS CRIME'', THE CRIMSON BOLT AND BOLTIE ARE GONNA SMASH THEIR FUCKIN' HEADS IN!"
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** "YOU TELL EVERYONE YOU KNOW THAT ANY TIME SOME STUPID FUCKIN' BASTARD ''FUCKING BASTARD'' DECIDES TO COMMIT SOME ''GAY-ASS CRIME'', THE CRIMSON BOLT AND BOLTIE ARE GONNA SMASH THEIR FUCKIN' HEADS IN!"
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* Everything Libby does while in Boltie mode is just hysterical. "NOW YOU DON'T HAVE LEGS ANYMORE!!" "IT'S CALLED INTERNAL BLEEDING, NOW YOU'RE GONNA DIE!!" Not to mention her outrageous fighting prowess she shows off to Frank, consisting of clumsy cartwheels, a weak hand stand, and a few kicks in the air.
** "YOU TELL EVERYONE YOU KNOW THAT ANY TIME SOME STUPID FUCKIN' BASTARD DECIDES TO COMMIT SOME GAY-ASS CRIME, THE CRIMSON BOLT AND BOLTIE ARE GONNA SMASH THEIR FUCKIN HEADS IN!"
** "YOU TELL EVERYONE YOU KNOW THAT ANY TIME SOME STUPID FUCKIN' BASTARD DECIDES TO COMMIT SOME GAY-ASS CRIME, THE CRIMSON BOLT AND BOLTIE ARE GONNA SMASH THEIR FUCKIN HEADS IN!"
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* Everything Libby does while in Boltie mode is just hysterical. "NOW YOU DON'T HAVE LEGS ANYMORE!!" ANYMORE!" "IT'S CALLED INTERNAL BLEEDING, BLEEDING FUCKER, NOW YOU'RE GONNA DIE!!" DIE!" Not to mention her outrageous fighting prowess she shows off to Frank, consisting of clumsy cartwheels, a weak hand stand, and a few kicks in the air.
** "YOU TELL EVERYONE YOU KNOW THAT ANY TIME SOME STUPID FUCKIN' BASTARD DECIDES TO COMMIT SOMEGAY-ASS CRIME, ''GAY-ASS CRIME'', THE CRIMSON BOLT AND BOLTIE ARE GONNA SMASH THEIR FUCKIN FUCKIN' HEADS IN!"
** "YOU TELL EVERYONE YOU KNOW THAT ANY TIME SOME STUPID FUCKIN' BASTARD DECIDES TO COMMIT SOME
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* "Crimson Bolt's Journal, Night Two. There was no crime last night. I did, however, see some suspicious characters who might have been planning somethi... HOLD ON! (...) It was just a box. The wind was pushing it down the street."
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* "Crimson Bolt's Journal, Night Two. There was no crime last night. I did, however, see some suspicious characters who might have been planning somethi... HOLD ON! (...) It was just a box. The wind was pushing it down the street."
* "Shut Up, Crime."
* "Shut Up, Crime."
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* The Holy Avenger, be it his show or Frank's hallucinations. If you've seen {{Bibleman}}, it's especially hilarious.
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* The Holy Avenger, be it his show or Frank's hallucinations. If you've seen {{Bibleman}}, ''{{Bibleman}}'', it's especially hilarious.
