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*** Violet hanging from the top of the swings by her knees. She has no idea how to get down or even how she got up there in the first place. Getting her down involves Bastion getting knocked to the ground catching her.
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*** Violet hanging from the top of the swings by her knees. She has no idea how to get down or even how she got up there in the first place. Getting her down involves Bastion getting knocked to the ground catching her.
** In chapter 15 after a few too many mishaps while playing football Violet loses her temper and kicks the ball away, only for it to rebound right into her face. And this time it knocks her down.
** In chapter 15 after a few too many mishaps while playing football Violet loses her temper and kicks the ball away, only for it to rebound right into her face. And this time it knocks her down.
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*** Atticus happily recalls a past tree climbing fiasco where he got a wedgie. He considers that a good day because he got to ride in a fire truck. And the tree climbing antics don't stop there because Chazz had no idea how to get down from one at the end of the chapter.
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*** Atticus happily recalls a past tree climbing fiasco where he got a wedgie. He considers that a good day because he got to ride in a fire truck. And the tree climbing antics don't stop there because Chazz had no idea how to get down from one at the end of the chapter.
** Chapter 14 has Chazz on a tire swing for the first time... and Atticus getting a little ''too'' excited about helping him with it. Needless to say the two wind up worse for the wear.
*** Violet hanging from the top of the swings by her knees. She has no idea how to get down or even how she got up there in the first place. Getting her down involves Bastion getting knocked to the ground catching her.
** Chapter 14 has Chazz on a tire swing for the first time... and Atticus getting a little ''too'' excited about helping him with it. Needless to say the two wind up worse for the wear.
*** Violet hanging from the top of the swings by her knees. She has no idea how to get down or even how she got up there in the first place. Getting her down involves Bastion getting knocked to the ground catching her.
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** Chapter 13 has the "speedo incident". It involved Atticus and no one really wants to ask too many questions about it, which seems to have been a wise choice.
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** Chapter 13 has the "speedo incident". It involved Atticus and no one really wants to ask too many questions about it, which seems to have been a wise choice.
*** Atticus happily recalls a past tree climbing fiasco where he got a wedgie. He considers that a good day because he got to ride in a fire truck. And the tree climbing antics don't stop there because Chazz had no idea how to get down from one at the end of the chapter.
*** Atticus happily recalls a past tree climbing fiasco where he got a wedgie. He considers that a good day because he got to ride in a fire truck. And the tree climbing antics don't stop there because Chazz had no idea how to get down from one at the end of the chapter.
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*** Atticus calling Texas "cowboy land", much to his sister's indignation.
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*** Atticus calling Texas "cowboy land", much to his sister's indignation.indignation.
** Chapter 13 has the "speedo incident". It involved Atticus and no one really wants to ask too many questions about it, which seems to have been a wise choice.
** Chapter 13 has the "speedo incident". It involved Atticus and no one really wants to ask too many questions about it, which seems to have been a wise choice.
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** Chapter 12 has Atticus cheerfully declaring Jaden and Alexis [[ThatCameOutWrong slept together]], much to their mortification. Atticus doesn't see the problem as [[ExactWords they just fell asleep next to each other]]. His family sweat drop, wondering if he's messing with them or not.
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** Chapter 12 has Atticus cheerfully declaring Jaden and Alexis [[ThatCameOutWrong slept together]], much to their mortification. Atticus doesn't see the problem as [[ExactWords they just fell asleep next to each other]]. His family sweat drop, wondering if he's messing with them or not. He goes on to repeat the gag about the other couples throughout the chapter.
*** When Atticus calls Zane the latter wonders how much sugar he put in his coffee. Atticus, SarcasmBlind, just retort that he doesn't drink coffee and Zane should already know that.
*** Atticus calling Texas "cowboy land", much to his sister's indignation.
*** When Atticus calls Zane the latter wonders how much sugar he put in his coffee. Atticus, SarcasmBlind, just retort that he doesn't drink coffee and Zane should already know that.
*** Atticus calling Texas "cowboy land", much to his sister's indignation.
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** Chapter 5 shows that Jaden's Spirit Day costume isn't the first time he's done a mix and match.
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** Chapter 5 shows that Jaden's Spirit Day costume isn't the first time he's done a mix and match.
** Chapter 12 has Atticus cheerfully declaring Jaden and Alexis [[ThatCameOutWrong slept together]], much to their mortification. Atticus doesn't see the problem as [[ExactWords they just fell asleep next to each other]]. His family sweat drop, wondering if he's messing with them or not.
** Chapter 12 has Atticus cheerfully declaring Jaden and Alexis [[ThatCameOutWrong slept together]], much to their mortification. Atticus doesn't see the problem as [[ExactWords they just fell asleep next to each other]]. His family sweat drop, wondering if he's messing with them or not.
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** Jaden bluntly questioning how Bastion has his accent when both of his parents are Asian and lack it.
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** Jaden bluntly questioning how Bastion has his accent when both of his parents are Asian and lack it.
** Chapter 5 shows that Jaden's Spirit Day costume isn't the first time he's done a mix and match.
** Chapter 5 shows that Jaden's Spirit Day costume isn't the first time he's done a mix and match.
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** In chapter 4 Hassleberry tosses Bastion his jacket and winds up hitting him in the face, leading Rosa to chide him. Then she does exactly the same thing to Violet.
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** In chapter 4 Hassleberry tosses Bastion his jacket and winds up hitting him in the face, leading Rosa to chide him. Then she does exactly the same thing to Violet.
** Violet tries to give Hassleberry's father a hug after Annie give him one, just to see if she can reach all the way around.
** Hassleberry hugs are seen to come with a risk to one's physical health.
** Jaden bluntly questioning how Bastion has his accent when both of his parents are Asian and lack it.
** Violet tries to give Hassleberry's father a hug after Annie give him one, just to see if she can reach all the way around.
** Hassleberry hugs are seen to come with a risk to one's physical health.
** Jaden bluntly questioning how Bastion has his accent when both of his parents are Asian and lack it.
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** Violet somehow loses her shoe and that winds up with her rolling down the gangplank. Right into Jaden and his mother.
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** Violet somehow loses her shoe and that winds up with her rolling down the gangplank. Right into Jaden and his mother.
** In chapter 4 Hassleberry tosses Bastion his jacket and winds up hitting him in the face, leading Rosa to chide him. Then she does exactly the same thing to Violet.
** In chapter 4 Hassleberry tosses Bastion his jacket and winds up hitting him in the face, leading Rosa to chide him. Then she does exactly the same thing to Violet.
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*** Even [[NotSoAboveItAll Zane]] gets in on the fun.
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*** Even [[NotSoAboveItAll Zane]] gets in on the fun.
** In chapter 3 to distract herself from how cold she feels Violet starts smacking her head against the wall. Bastion has to step in to get her to stop.
** Violet somehow loses her shoe and that winds up with her rolling down the gangplank. Right into Jaden and his mother.
** In chapter 3 to distract herself from how cold she feels Violet starts smacking her head against the wall. Bastion has to step in to get her to stop.
** Violet somehow loses her shoe and that winds up with her rolling down the gangplank. Right into Jaden and his mother.
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** The group recreating the "King of the World" scene from ''Titanic'' has a few chuckle worthy moments. Especially Violet getting knocked over by a sudden wave.
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** The group recreating the "King of the World" scene from ''Titanic'' has a few chuckle worthy moments. Especially Violet getting knocked over by a sudden wave.
*** Even [[NotSoAboveItAll Zane]] gets in on the fun.
*** Even [[NotSoAboveItAll Zane]] gets in on the fun.
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* [[NotSoAboveItAll Chazz winds up crying while watching ''Titanic'']] in chapter 6.
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* ''Summer Love, Summer Fears''
** Violet going temporarily deaf from Chazz's yelling and then yelling herself in chapter 2.
** Syrus reveals that Zane still has a plushie of Cyber End Dragon. Cue said brother turning up right behind Syrus.
** Violet figures out that the guys all have secret plushies of their own. She's right. Except for Hassleberry, who reveals that he has a blankie instead.
** The foghorn scaring everyone. Especially Violet, who thinks aliens are invading.
** The group recreating the "King of the World" scene from ''Titanic'' has a few chuckle worthy moments. Especially Violet getting knocked over by a sudden wave.
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** Violet apparently got into Annie's sugar stash, [[BerserkButton much to Annie's rage]]. Violet tries to scapegoat Chazz. This all leads to the reveal that Chazz pulled a panty raid on Violet's room and she's eager for payback. When it gets out that he did so on a dare from Atticus and Bastion, Violet does get her payback. With an actual bazooka.
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** Violet apparently got into Annie's sugar stash, [[BerserkButton much to Annie's rage]]. Violet tries to scapegoat Chazz. This all leads to the reveal that Chazz pulled a panty raid on Violet's room and she's eager for payback. When it gets out that he did so on a dare from Atticus and Bastion, Violet does get her payback. With an actual bazooka.
* [[NotSoAboveItAll Chazz winds up crying while watching ''Titanic'']] in chapter 6.
* [[NotSoAboveItAll Chazz winds up crying while watching ''Titanic'']] in chapter 6.
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** When Zane tries to leave Violet asks him take her board with him, tossing it at the back of his head. Her subsequent cluelessness about his ensuing DeathGlare just makes it all the funnier.
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** When Zane tries to leave Violet asks him take her board with him, tossing it at the back of his head. Her subsequent cluelessness about his ensuing DeathGlare just makes it all the funnier.
** Jaden being entertained by a duct tape ball Annie made him, much to Violet's jealousy. She quickly gets her own.
*** Said ball soon gets stuck in Chazz's hair, prompting a chase for revenge. Violet escapes him by jumping through the screen. Chazz winds up hitting the brick wall when he tries following her.
** Violet apparently got into Annie's sugar stash, [[BerserkButton much to Annie's rage]]. Violet tries to scapegoat Chazz. This all leads to the reveal that Chazz pulled a panty raid on Violet's room and she's eager for payback. When it gets out that he did so on a dare from Atticus and Bastion, Violet does get her payback. With an actual bazooka.
** Jaden being entertained by a duct tape ball Annie made him, much to Violet's jealousy. She quickly gets her own.
*** Said ball soon gets stuck in Chazz's hair, prompting a chase for revenge. Violet escapes him by jumping through the screen. Chazz winds up hitting the brick wall when he tries following her.
** Violet apparently got into Annie's sugar stash, [[BerserkButton much to Annie's rage]]. Violet tries to scapegoat Chazz. This all leads to the reveal that Chazz pulled a panty raid on Violet's room and she's eager for payback. When it gets out that he did so on a dare from Atticus and Bastion, Violet does get her payback. With an actual bazooka.
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** When Zane tries to leave Violet asks him take her board with him, tossing it at the back of his head. Her subsequent cluelessness about his ensuing DeathGlare just makes it all the funnier.
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** When Zane tries to leave Violet asks him take her board with him, tossing it at the back of his head. Her subsequent cluelessness about his ensuing DeathGlare just makes it all the funnier.
** Jaden being entertained by a duct tape ball Annie made him, much to Violet's jealousy. She quickly gets her own.
*** Said ball soon gets stuck in Chazz's hair, prompting a chase for revenge. Violet escapes him by jumping through the screen. Chazz winds up hitting the brick wall when he tries following her.
** Violet apparently got into Annie's sugar stash, [[BerserkButton much to Annie's rage]]. Violet tries to scapegoat Chazz. This all leads to the reveal that Chazz pulled a panty raid on Violet's room and she's eager for payback. When it gets out that he did so on a dare from Atticus and Bastion, Violet does get her payback. With an actual bazooka.
** Jaden being entertained by a duct tape ball Annie made him, much to Violet's jealousy. She quickly gets her own.
*** Said ball soon gets stuck in Chazz's hair, prompting a chase for revenge. Violet escapes him by jumping through the screen. Chazz winds up hitting the brick wall when he tries following her.
** Violet apparently got into Annie's sugar stash, [[BerserkButton much to Annie's rage]]. Violet tries to scapegoat Chazz. This all leads to the reveal that Chazz pulled a panty raid on Violet's room and she's eager for payback. When it gets out that he did so on a dare from Atticus and Bastion, Violet does get her payback. With an actual bazooka.
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** Violet goes to make some popcorn and somehow winds up snowboarding down a wave of the stuff. Literally snowboarding that is.
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** Violet goes to make some popcorn and somehow winds up snowboarding down a wave of the stuff. Literally snowboarding that is.
** When Zane tries to leave Violet asks him take her board with him, tossing it at the back of his head. Her subsequent cluelessness about his ensuing DeathGlare just makes it all the funnier.
** When Zane tries to leave Violet asks him take her board with him, tossing it at the back of his head. Her subsequent cluelessness about his ensuing DeathGlare just makes it all the funnier.
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** Chapter 2 has Rosa literally dragging Hassleberry to go see the movies. And his stubborn attempts to escape her.
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** Chapter 2 has Rosa literally dragging Hassleberry to go see the movies. And his stubborn attempts to escape her.
** In chapter 3 there's Violet's... unique way of getting everyone to agree to a sing along.
** Chazz trying to flirt with Annie. And Violet's response to that.
** Violet goes to make some popcorn and somehow winds up snowboarding down a wave of the stuff. Literally snowboarding that is.
** In chapter 3 there's Violet's... unique way of getting everyone to agree to a sing along.
** Chazz trying to flirt with Annie. And Violet's response to that.
** Violet goes to make some popcorn and somehow winds up snowboarding down a wave of the stuff. Literally snowboarding that is.
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** Violet's response to finding out what happened in her room.
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** Violet's response to finding out what happened in her room.
* ''A Guy's Worst Nightmare''
** Chapter 2 has Rosa literally dragging Hassleberry to go see the movies. And his stubborn attempts to escape her.
* ''A Guy's Worst Nightmare''
** Chapter 2 has Rosa literally dragging Hassleberry to go see the movies. And his stubborn attempts to escape her.
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** Chazz is the one chosen for the actual raid... and finds out that Violet is prone to booby trapping her room. You just have to read the whole train of hi-jinks he gets put through.
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** Chazz is the one chosen for the actual raid... and finds out that Violet is prone to booby trapping her room. You just have to read the whole train of hi-jinks he gets put through.
** Violet's response to finding out what happened in her room.
** Violet's response to finding out what happened in her room.
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** Chapter 3 gives us an actual character named Mary Sue that winds up being a complete TakeThat to the whole concept. The girls eventually get so fed up with her that they wind up attacking her.
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** Chapter 3 gives us an actual character named Mary Sue that winds up being a complete TakeThat to the whole concept. The girls eventually get so fed up with her that they wind up attacking her.
** Chazz is the one chosen for the actual raid... and finds out that Violet is prone to booby trapping her room. You just have to read the whole train of hi-jinks he gets put through.
** Chazz is the one chosen for the actual raid... and finds out that Violet is prone to booby trapping her room. You just have to read the whole train of hi-jinks he gets put through.
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* ''The Genius and the Panty Raid''
** In chapter 2 there's just everything with simply getting the bonfire set up, from Atticus singing his fingers to Chazz somehow setting his coat on fire.
** Jaden being the only one to not know what a panty raid is. And his embarrassment when Atticus clues him in.
** The dares the guys come up with. Just all of them.
*** Atticus takes pictures of Jaden's dare, which is skinny dipping, planning to use them to bribe Alexis. Chazz, of all people, tries to point out some of the unfortunate implications behind doing it. Atticus doesn't get it and Chazz grumbles that he's dumber than Jaden.
** Chapter 3 gives us an actual character named Mary Sue that winds up being a complete TakeThat to the whole concept. The girls eventually get so fed up with her that they wind up attacking her.
** In chapter 2 there's just everything with simply getting the bonfire set up, from Atticus singing his fingers to Chazz somehow setting his coat on fire.
** Jaden being the only one to not know what a panty raid is. And his embarrassment when Atticus clues him in.
** The dares the guys come up with. Just all of them.
*** Atticus takes pictures of Jaden's dare, which is skinny dipping, planning to use them to bribe Alexis. Chazz, of all people, tries to point out some of the unfortunate implications behind doing it. Atticus doesn't get it and Chazz grumbles that he's dumber than Jaden.
** Chapter 3 gives us an actual character named Mary Sue that winds up being a complete TakeThat to the whole concept. The girls eventually get so fed up with her that they wind up attacking her.