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* Special mention goes to the script's description of Hobie's introduction, which points out Miles' jealousy like this: ''"Yeah, this guy rules. And thus as far as Miles is concerned, this guy sucks."''
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** Going by the chase frame by frame shows more clearly that a Spider-character that gives Miles a lot of trouble is ''Spider-Monkey'', who attacks Miles over and over again and he eventually has to pull him away from his face and throw him hard to finally be rid of him.
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** Going by Watching the chase frame by frame in slow-motion shows more clearly that a Spider-character that gives Miles a lot of trouble is ''Spider-Monkey'', who attacks Miles over and over again and he eventually has to pull him away from his face and throw him hard to finally be rid of him.
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*** Listen closely and Miles is shouting "Yippee-kay-kay!" while he rides Widow.
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->''"Do you think spider-people too often use comedy as a crutch? Get it? Crutch?"''
->--'''Charlotte Webber''', right before smacking Miles with one of her crutches.
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* Of the worlds The Spot peeks into when exploring his interdimensional capabilities, he visits a stop-motion world BuiltWithLEGO where he causes some slight chaos, and then the live-action Film/SonysSpiderManUniverse where he meets [[Characters/SSUSanFrancisco Mrs. Chen]], who is [[SeenItAll not startled at all]].
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* Of the worlds The Spot peeks into when exploring his interdimensional capabilities, he visits a stop-motion world BuiltWithLEGO where he causes some slight chaos, and then the live-action Film/SonysSpiderManUniverse where he meets [[Characters/SSUSanFrancisco [[Characters/SSUCivilians Mrs. Chen]], who is [[SeenItAll not startled at all]].
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* When Miles meets Earth 42's Rio (not knowing that he's in Earth 42) he remembers his conversation with his mother from earlier in the movie and tells her that she was right.
--> '''Rio''' Of course, I was right. I'm always right. *{{Beat}}* What am I right about?
--> '''Rio''' Of course, I was right. I'm always right. *{{Beat}}* What am I right about?
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'''Miles:''' The Spider-Verse...\\
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'''Miles:''' [[TitleDrop The Spider-Verse...Spider-Verse]]...\\
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'''Miguel:''' Which sounds... stupid, too, I guess...
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'''Miguel:''' [[{{Touche}} Which sounds... stupid, too, I guess...guess]]...
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-->'''Miles:''' ''Neither does mom!''\\
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'''Miles:''' Wait, what!?
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'''Miles:''' Wait, what!?what!?\\
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* [[RunningGag As with the first film]], the first frame after the opening logos is the approval stamp from UsefulNotes/TheComicsCode.
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* [[RunningGag As with the first film]], the first frame after the opening logos is the approval stamp from UsefulNotes/TheComicsCode.MediaNotes/TheComicsCode.
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-->'''Pavitr''': "Chai tea?!" "Chai" means "tea", bro! You're saying "tea tea!" Would I ask you for a coffee-coffee with room for cream-cream?!
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-->'''Pavitr''': "Chai tea?!" "Chai" means "tea", bro! You're saying "tea tea!" "[[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment tea tea]]!" Would I ask you for a coffee-coffee with room for cream-cream?!
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'''Hobie:''' ''(to Gwen)'' Are those my chucks?
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* Peter B. insists on showing photos of Mayday to Gwen and Miles despite that she's right there, as Gwen attempts to point out. What follows is her and Miles giving each other a disbelieving look while Peter B. practically pushes Mayday pictures in their faces.
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* Peter B. insists on showing photos of Mayday to Gwen and Miles despite that she's right there, as Gwen attempts to point out. What follows is her and Miles giving each other a disbelieving look while Peter B. practically pushes Mayday pictures in their faces.
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-->'''Miles:''' So, is that a costume...?
-->'''The Spot:''' unfortunately for both of us, [[NakedPeopleAreFunny this is skin.]]
-->'''Miles:''' Oh, dang.
-->'''The Spot:''' unfortunately for both of us, [[NakedPeopleAreFunny this is skin.]]
-->'''Miles:''' Oh, dang.
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-->'''Miles:''' So, is that a costume...?
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'''The Spot:'''unfortunately Unfortunately for both of us, [[NakedPeopleAreFunny this is skin.]]
-->'''Miles:''']]\\
'''Miles:''' Oh, dang.
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'''Miles:''' Oh, dang.
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* Jeff asks Miles if he's hanging out with Ganke and states that he never liked him. Miles incredulously corrects him "Yes, you ''did."''
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* Jeff asks Miles if he's hanging out with Ganke and states that he never liked him. Miles incredulously corrects him "Yes, you ''did."''"'' It's the tone of voice that indicates Jeff really did forget that and Miles has to remind him.
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* Jeff asks Miles if he's hanging out with Ganke and states that he never liked him. Miles incredulously corrects him "Yes, you ''did."''
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* Ben Reilly/Scarlet Spider's habit of narrating everything he does. The way this line in particular is delivered makes it sound like Creator/AndySamberg is just making it up on the spot based on what's happening on-screen:
-->'''Ben Reilly:''' Possible disturbance in the alley... better go check it out. [''Webs down''] [[CaptainObvious Now I'm here in the alley]]. But there's something unusual happening... looking at the walls, those are normal, but there's something in front of me. [Said something is a massive portal, which Ben is pulled into via web].
-->'''Ben Reilly:''' Possible disturbance in the alley... better go check it out. [''Webs down''] [[CaptainObvious Now I'm here in the alley]]. But there's something unusual happening... looking at the walls, those are normal, but there's something in front of me. [Said something is a massive portal, which Ben is pulled into via web].
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** Pay attention, and Gwen wears an annoyed or sad expression through the entire part that Miles interacts with Spider-Byte, suddenly being in a hurry for them to keep moving even though she's otherwise reluctant to take Miles to Miguel. Her finally yanking Miles away while he lingers and shoots Spider-Byte a charming smile was just the icing of the moment. The script for the movie would all but confirm that Gwen felt jealous at this part.
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** Pay attention, and Gwen wears an annoyed or sad expression through the entire part that Miles interacts with Spider-Byte, suddenly being in a hurry for them to keep moving even though she's otherwise reluctant to take Miles to Miguel. Her finally yanking Miles away while he lingers and shoots Spider-Byte a charming smile was just the icing of the moment. The script for the movie would all but confirm basically confirms that Gwen felt jealous at this part.
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* While exploring Miles's room, Gwen spots an action figure in its packaging, and Miles explains that it's an extremely rare collector's item. She then asks why it's still in its box[[note]]possibly due to her friendless background, she doesn't know what a collectible is, or it could even not be a thing in her universe, similarly to Miles not knowing what Comic-Con is[[/note]]; cue Miles and probably every toy collector in the audience staring in abject horror as she casually rips open the box before placing the action figure on the shelf and patting its head. Miles reacts if he's been stabbed when the box is opened, and he has to say "This is fine" through a gritted smile.
* After hugging Miles, Gwen playfully bumps his arm and remarks that he must have hit a growth spurt, which is followed by her cringing at herself, apparently embarrassed by her own words. There's also the implication that she was clearly impressed with how much he had indeed grown and felt briefly flustered because of this.
* After hugging Miles, Gwen playfully bumps his arm and remarks that he must have hit a growth spurt, which is followed by her cringing at herself, apparently embarrassed by her own words. There's also the implication that she was clearly impressed with how much he had indeed grown and felt briefly flustered because of this.
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* While exploring Miles's room, Gwen spots an action figure in its packaging, and Miles explains that it's an extremely rare collector's item. She then asks why it's still in its box[[note]]possibly due to her friendless background, she doesn't know what a collectible is, or it could even not be a thing in her universe, similarly to Miles not knowing what Comic-Con is[[/note]]; cue Miles and probably every toy collector in the audience staring in abject horror as she casually rips open the box before placing the action figure on the shelf and patting its head. Miles reacts if he's been stabbed when the box is opened, and he has to say "This is "That's fine" through a gritted smile.
* After hugging Miles, Gwen playfully bumps his arm and remarks that he must have hit a growthspurt, which is followed by her cringing spurt. She then cringes at herself, apparently embarrassed by her own words. There's also the implication that she was clearly impressed with how much he had indeed grown and felt briefly flustered because of this.
* After hugging Miles, Gwen playfully bumps his arm and remarks that he must have hit a growth
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* The tour of HQ involves Miles being shown the multitude of villainous variants imprisoned there. They have several Kravens, Doc Ocks, Mysterios including Mooseterio and a DistaffCounterpart known as ''Miss''-Terio, "a really boring Rhino" (a regular rhinoceros), some video game guys (being supervised by [[VideoGame/SpiderManPS4 Insomniac’s Spider-Man]], fittingly), and a live-action version of Aaron Davis.
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* The tour of HQ involves Miles being shown the multitude of villainous variants imprisoned there. They have several Kravens, Doc Ocks, Mysterios including Mooseterio and a DistaffCounterpart known as ''Miss''-Terio, "a really boring Rhino" (a regular (an ordinary rhinoceros), some video game guys (being supervised by [[VideoGame/SpiderManPS4 Insomniac’s Spider-Man]], fittingly), and a live-action version of Aaron Davis.
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* When Miles finally arrives at the party, his spider-sense actually warns him about his parents being close-by, implying it will go off if they're pissed enough at him.
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* When Miles finally arrives at the party, his spider-sense actually warns him about his parents being close-by, implying it will go off if they're pissed enough at him.
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** Pay attention, and Gwen wears an annoyed or sad expression through the entire part that Miles interacts with Spider-Byte, suddenly being in a hurry for them to keep moving even though she's otherwise reluctant to take Miles to Miguel. Her finally yanking Miles away while he lingers and shoots Spider-Byte a charming smile was just the icing of the moment.
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** Pay attention, and Gwen wears an annoyed or sad expression through the entire part that Miles interacts with Spider-Byte, suddenly being in a hurry for them to keep moving even though she's otherwise reluctant to take Miles to Miguel. Her finally yanking Miles away while he lingers and shoots Spider-Byte a charming smile was just the icing of the moment. The script for the movie would all but confirm that Gwen felt jealous at this part.
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** A few seconds later Miles uses Hobie's advice to break out of the cage. The subsequent shocked beat is broken by Hobie chuckling once. It's somehow both sarcastic and incredibly smug at the same time.
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** Mayday starts treating Miguel as her personal monkey gym with Miguel continuing to stoically look onward, ignoring her. When she slips and falls he [[PetTheDog instantly catches her]] and hands her to Peter without changing his expression one iota.
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** Mayday starts treating Miguel as her personal monkey gym with Miguel continuing to stoically look onward, ignoring her. When she slips and falls falls, he [[PetTheDog instantly catches her]] and hands her to Peter without changing his expression one iota.
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** When Jeff tries to say using his first name is not okay and gives his rank Gwen gives him an adorable little salute in response.
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** When Jeff tries to say using his first name is not okay and gives his rank rank, Gwen gives him an adorable little salute in response.
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* Part of Miles' message that he tells the baker to write on the cake for his dad is, "I'm so proud of you today, and every day (mostly, LOL.)"
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* Part of Miles' message that he tells the baker to write on the cake for his dad is, "I'm so proud of you today, and every day (mostly, LOL.)"
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-->'''Jeff:''' THIS IS IMPORKAGE--[=*=]IMFORKANT--[=*=]IMPORTANT!
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-->'''Jeff:''' THIS IS IMPORKAGE--[=*=]IMFORKANT--[=*=]IMPORTANT!IMPORKAGE--[=*=]IMFORFKANT--[=*=]IMPORTANT!
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-->'''Miles:''' This guy's killing me.
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* When Miles finally arrives at the party, his spider-sense actually warns him about his parents being close-by, implying it will go off if they're pissed enough at him.
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** After Inspector Singh politely thanks Pavitr for saving his life, his daughter comments that [[TheStoic that was the most emotional she had ever seen her father get]].
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** After Inspector Singh politely thanks Pavitr for saving his life, life with a stiff handshake, his daughter comments that [[TheStoic that was the most emotional she had ever seen her father get]].
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* Consider the moment of Miles revealing his suit from Earth 42 Rio's POV, and it oddly becomes hilarious: to her, her son returns with a dramatic speech about how strong he feels and how they're in danger, only to reveal to her that he likes to dress up as a superhero called ''Spider-Man''. It's no wonder Earth 42 Rio can't help but snicker at this and tease "her" son about it, having no further context of the matter.
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*** Even though Miles "didn't wait for three", blink and you'll miss it Miles still briefly adopted the Western 'hand hovering over gun' pose.
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* When the Alchemax building starts to collapse Miles takes charges and tells Gwen and Hobie to holding the building back while he and Pavitr clear out civilians. Hobie agrees in his own inimitable manner.
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* Once Spot realises Spider-Man has arrived, he ''does a little happy dance'' while exclaiming "This is real!"
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** Rio returns Gwen's sweater to her and asks her in an uncomfortable voice: "We found it in Miles' room, so... I guess you must have ''been'' there, huh?" You can practically hear the accusatory tone in her voice wondering if this girl is fooling around with her son.
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* After hugging Miles, Gwen playfully bumps his arm and remarks that he must have hit a growth spurt, which is followed by her cringing at herself, apparently embarrassed by her own words.
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* Rio returns Gwen's sweater to her and asks her in an uncomfortable voice "We found it in Miles' room, so... guess you must have ''been'' there, huh?" You can practically hear the accusatory tone from Rio wondering if this girl is fooling around with her son.
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--> '''Hobie'''': I'll do it, but not because you told me to!
--> '''Hobie'''': I'll do it, but not because you told me to!