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* After Phase's knife misses, Raymond goes "Phew, do you like fruit? Someone is getting a fruit basket!". And then Phase teleports in saying "I hate fruit!" and punches him.
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* After One saves Raymond from Phase's knife misses, knife, Raymond goes "Phew, do you like fruit? Someone is getting a fruit basket!". And then Phase teleports in saying "I hate fruit!" and punches him.
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* "I'm out of fruit basket gift cards, so what do you think about poetry?"
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* "I'm out of Raymond after being saved by One: "I don't have any more fruit basket gift cards, so what cards. How do you think feel about poetry?"
poetry? Like, really long, flowery stuff. None of it rhymes."
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* Zero calls Shatter Squad to challenge them to stop him. After the call ends, One immediately asks Tiny if she traced it.
-->'''Tiny:''' Um. Probably? Can I borrow a pen? ''[beat]'' Oh, also, he sent an email with his current location.\\
'''Raymond:''' An email?\\
'''Tiny:''' From [=ZeroPwns@69.rvb=]. How retro!
-->'''Tiny:''' Um. Probably? Can I borrow a pen? ''[beat]'' Oh, also, he sent an email with his current location.\\
'''Raymond:''' An email?\\
'''Tiny:''' From [=ZeroPwns@69.rvb=]. How retro!
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* The final dialogue, with a discussion on how to hang out later. Once Phase suggests a Thai boxing course, there is the exchange "You want to fight right now? What's wrong with you?" "She was experimented on as a kid."
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* The final dialogue, with a discussion on how to hang out later. Once Phase suggests a Thai boxing course, there is the exchange "You want to fight right now? What's wrong with you?" "She was experimented on as a kid.""
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[[AC:Viper]]
* "How did you... Who are you?" "Seconds to live, and these are your last words?"
* During Phase's TeleportSpam, at one point, she decides to fall on her back before vanishing.
* Everything regarding One taking a shortcut, from Axel regretting suggesting it in the first place ("Don't do it. *throws off the map* You're doing it."), to East getting angry at losing the lead and deciding to take over the Warthog's turret.
* Raymond puking inside his own helmet.
* Wash's CasualDangerDialogue while being threatened, starting with "Does roughing up your prisoners usually work out for you?" during a NeckLift, and following it by commenting on Phase's shiny device: "That look kinda scary. You're not stick that in anything, or up anything..."
[[AC:Recovery]]
* The image of Carolina with a cast ''above the armor'', which has already been signed by Shatter Squad.
* Just the scene where Tiny is introduced, where an enormous, intimidating armored soldier [[VocalDissonance is actually a squeaky-voiced girl.]]
* "I need a charger, forgot the end thingy, the butt... I call it the butt." "Hey... You're a butt."
** And later, Raymond is seen charging it on a nearby terminal, saying he'd like to charge his phone battery to 30%. A [[{{Beat}} moment later]], West shoots the terminal and says "Looks like 30% to me."
* Axel's excitement talking about a lawnmower.
[[AC:Duo]]
* Tiny liking the camouflage for being "a huge mood ring" and "able to change along with your favorite EDM track" rather than its actual purpose of hiding.
* "...in short, if there's no more room in the dishwasher, it's time to run the cycle. Don't just shove your stuff in there and walk away."
* [[TheGuardsMustBeCrazy The guard mistakes One's warning for a robocall... right before the wall explodes.]]
[[AC:Encounter]]
* After Phase's knife misses, Raymond goes "Phew, do you like fruit? Someone is getting a fruit basket!". And then Phase teleports in saying "I hate fruit!" and punches him.
[[AC:Sideways]]
* Tucker asks if anyone else has saved the world. One soldier lifts a hand saying "I donate to environmental causes..."
* Tucker starts to hit on East, and gets punched in the stomach.
* "I'm out of fruit basket gift cards, so what do you think about poetry?"
[[AC:Shattered]]
* Tucker enraged at losing his sword [[FreudWasRight to near post-castration levels]], while Wash just says it's good to see him and Carolina leaves in a dismissive mood.
[[AC:For Power]]
* "It speaks! I thought it was only capable of grunting..."
* Once Phase joins the battle against Zero, One has an awkward moment "welcoming" her.
* The final dialogue, with a discussion on how to hang out later. Once Phase suggests a Thai boxing course, there is the exchange "You want to fight right now? What's wrong with you?" "She was experimented on as a kid."
* "How did you... Who are you?" "Seconds to live, and these are your last words?"
* During Phase's TeleportSpam, at one point, she decides to fall on her back before vanishing.
* Everything regarding One taking a shortcut, from Axel regretting suggesting it in the first place ("Don't do it. *throws off the map* You're doing it."), to East getting angry at losing the lead and deciding to take over the Warthog's turret.
* Raymond puking inside his own helmet.
* Wash's CasualDangerDialogue while being threatened, starting with "Does roughing up your prisoners usually work out for you?" during a NeckLift, and following it by commenting on Phase's shiny device: "That look kinda scary. You're not stick that in anything, or up anything..."
[[AC:Recovery]]
* The image of Carolina with a cast ''above the armor'', which has already been signed by Shatter Squad.
* Just the scene where Tiny is introduced, where an enormous, intimidating armored soldier [[VocalDissonance is actually a squeaky-voiced girl.]]
* "I need a charger, forgot the end thingy, the butt... I call it the butt." "Hey... You're a butt."
** And later, Raymond is seen charging it on a nearby terminal, saying he'd like to charge his phone battery to 30%. A [[{{Beat}} moment later]], West shoots the terminal and says "Looks like 30% to me."
* Axel's excitement talking about a lawnmower.
[[AC:Duo]]
* Tiny liking the camouflage for being "a huge mood ring" and "able to change along with your favorite EDM track" rather than its actual purpose of hiding.
* "...in short, if there's no more room in the dishwasher, it's time to run the cycle. Don't just shove your stuff in there and walk away."
* [[TheGuardsMustBeCrazy The guard mistakes One's warning for a robocall... right before the wall explodes.]]
[[AC:Encounter]]
* After Phase's knife misses, Raymond goes "Phew, do you like fruit? Someone is getting a fruit basket!". And then Phase teleports in saying "I hate fruit!" and punches him.
[[AC:Sideways]]
* Tucker asks if anyone else has saved the world. One soldier lifts a hand saying "I donate to environmental causes..."
* Tucker starts to hit on East, and gets punched in the stomach.
* "I'm out of fruit basket gift cards, so what do you think about poetry?"
[[AC:Shattered]]
* Tucker enraged at losing his sword [[FreudWasRight to near post-castration levels]], while Wash just says it's good to see him and Carolina leaves in a dismissive mood.
[[AC:For Power]]
* "It speaks! I thought it was only capable of grunting..."
* Once Phase joins the battle against Zero, One has an awkward moment "welcoming" her.
* The final dialogue, with a discussion on how to hang out later. Once Phase suggests a Thai boxing course, there is the exchange "You want to fight right now? What's wrong with you?" "She was experimented on as a kid."
