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** When Alesia notices Riolu with a pair of binoculars, Popplio accidentally lets slip that they are spying on girls and giving them ratings.
--> '''Alesia''': What?! That is DISGUSTING!
--> ''Alesia proceeds to grab the binoculars from Riolu.''
--> '''Alesia''': [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere I'm going back to our room.]]
--> '''Alesia''': What?! That is DISGUSTING!
--> ''Alesia proceeds to grab the binoculars from Riolu.''
--> '''Alesia''': [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere I'm going back to our room.]]
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** When Alesia notices Riolu with a pair of binoculars, Popplio accidentally lets slip that they he and Riolu are spying on girls using the binoculars and giving them ratings.
-->'''Alesia''': What?! That "What?!" Alesia snapped. "That is DISGUSTING!
--> ''Alesia proceeds to grabDISGUSTING!" She grabbed the binoculars from Riolu.''
--> '''Alesia''':Riolu's grasp. [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere I'm “I'm going back to our room.]]”]]
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--> [[BigWhat "What?!"]] Alesia snapped. "That is DISGUSTING!" She grabbed the binoculars from Riolu's grasp. [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere "I'm going back to our room.”]]
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--> [[BigWhat "What?!"]] Alesia snapped. "That '''Alesia''': What?! That is DISGUSTING!" She grabbed DISGUSTING!
--> ''Alesia proceeds to grab the binoculars fromRiolu's grasp. Riolu.''
--> '''Alesia''': [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere"I'm I'm going back to our room.”]]]]
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* A review of the story wherein the reader says that whenever Braviary banged his gavel, he (the reader) imagined the gavel being Braviary's beak.
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* A review of the story wherein the reader says that whenever Braviary banged his gavel, he (the reader) imagined the gavel being Braviary's beak.beak.
* Chapter 22’s title, “Alesia Gained 0 Experience Points”.
** When Alesia notices Riolu with a pair of binoculars, Popplio accidentally lets slip that they are spying on girls and giving them ratings.
--> [[BigWhat "What?!"]] Alesia snapped. "That is DISGUSTING!" She grabbed the binoculars from Riolu's grasp. [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere "I'm going back to our room.”]]
* Chapter 22’s title, “Alesia Gained 0 Experience Points”.
** When Alesia notices Riolu with a pair of binoculars, Popplio accidentally lets slip that they are spying on girls and giving them ratings.
--> [[BigWhat "What?!"]] Alesia snapped. "That is DISGUSTING!" She grabbed the binoculars from Riolu's grasp. [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere "I'm going back to our room.”]]
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This story has been noted for its lighthearted, jovial tone in a slew of dark, edgy ''VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon'' fanfics. Obviously there must be plenty of laughing points.
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* Toucannon roasting [[GrumpyOldMan Trevenant]] during Alesia's court session.
* [[NonIndicativeName Wobbuffet Dojo]] turns out to actually be run by a Gallade (explanation: he inherited the dojo from his grandfather whose will prevents the name or appearance from being changed).
* What does an Elekid do when Alesia encounters it? It charges straight at her and ''gets her stuck between its horns''.
* While in Sunlight Chasm to save Phantump, Team Everlasting see a rug with several items and assume someone left them there for the team to take. After seeing a Kecleon chasing a Tyrunt before, and hearing the description of the rug (a red and yellow pattern), anyone who's played the games will know exactly how this will play out. When they return, the Kecleon angrily chases them, forcing them to make a quick getaway.
* Riolu is distraught when the Mega Donut he was saving is eaten by Braviary.
** After Team Everlasting receive points for defeating the Klefki bandits, they are only a few points away from rising in rank. How do they get those few points? Braviary likes the donut so much that he gives the team those few points.
* Popplio politely says, "'Scuse me," to the unconscious Gliscor that he and his teammates walk over after defeating it.
* Whenever Riolu {{Troll}}s Alesia during their journey up the mountain of Sweeping Rapids, she trolls him right back upon Riolu receiving his comeuppance both times.
* When Riolu is furiously ranting and raving about their losing a criminal to a different team earlier, [[CaptainObvious Popplio still feels the need to point out to Alesia how mad Riolu is]].
* Popplio interrupting Alesia and Riolu's argument with, [[NonSequitur "Banana peanut butter ripple!"]] because he assumed the argument was about ice cream flavors.
* A review of the story wherein the reader says that whenever Braviary banged his gavel, he (the reader) imagined the gavel being Braviary's beak.
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* Toucannon roasting [[GrumpyOldMan Trevenant]] during Alesia's court session.
* [[NonIndicativeName Wobbuffet Dojo]] turns out to actually be run by a Gallade (explanation: he inherited the dojo from his grandfather whose will prevents the name or appearance from being changed).
* What does an Elekid do when Alesia encounters it? It charges straight at her and ''gets her stuck between its horns''.
* While in Sunlight Chasm to save Phantump, Team Everlasting see a rug with several items and assume someone left them there for the team to take. After seeing a Kecleon chasing a Tyrunt before, and hearing the description of the rug (a red and yellow pattern), anyone who's played the games will know exactly how this will play out. When they return, the Kecleon angrily chases them, forcing them to make a quick getaway.
* Riolu is distraught when the Mega Donut he was saving is eaten by Braviary.
** After Team Everlasting receive points for defeating the Klefki bandits, they are only a few points away from rising in rank. How do they get those few points? Braviary likes the donut so much that he gives the team those few points.
* Popplio politely says, "'Scuse me," to the unconscious Gliscor that he and his teammates walk over after defeating it.
* Whenever Riolu {{Troll}}s Alesia during their journey up the mountain of Sweeping Rapids, she trolls him right back upon Riolu receiving his comeuppance both times.
* When Riolu is furiously ranting and raving about their losing a criminal to a different team earlier, [[CaptainObvious Popplio still feels the need to point out to Alesia how mad Riolu is]].
* Popplio interrupting Alesia and Riolu's argument with, [[NonSequitur "Banana peanut butter ripple!"]] because he assumed the argument was about ice cream flavors.
* A review of the story wherein the reader says that whenever Braviary banged his gavel, he (the reader) imagined the gavel being Braviary's beak.
