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** To top it off, Muneca (who apparently has ''multiple'' pairs of handcuffs) intentionally used the one she doesn't has a key to on Cinna.
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** To top it off, Muneca (who apparently has ''multiple'' pairs of handcuffs) intentionally used the one she doesn't has have a key to on Cinna.
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* Our introduction to Breanne is [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators/MangaPacisV01CH01P224.html slightly anti-climatic.]]
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* Our introduction to Breanne is [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators/MangaPacisV01CH01P224.html slightly anti-climatic.anti-climactic.]]
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-->'''Taffe:''' (whispering) More like from dreaming about your dream guys.
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-->'''Taffe:''' (whispering) ''(whispering)'' More like from dreaming about your dream guys.
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-->'''Daryl:''' (whispering) I’m so embarrassed!
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-->'''Daryl:''' (whispering) ''(whispering)'' I’m so embarrassed!
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-->'''Aphrodite:''' [giggling]
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-->'''Aphrodite:''' [giggling]''(giggling)''
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* Cinna and Aphrodite meets. It’s taken UpToEleven when Aphrodite, being chased by Cinna, runs into... [[OhCrap Muneca.]] Luckily for Aphrodite, Cinna and Muneca got into a fight (but of course), allowing her to escape.
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* Cinna and Aphrodite meets. It’s taken UpToEleven up to eleven when Aphrodite, being chased by Cinna, runs into... [[OhCrap Muneca.]] Luckily for Aphrodite, Cinna and Muneca got into a fight (but of course), allowing her to escape.
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** And that's how they got into their second VolleyingInsults fight... [[UpToEleven in Italian]].
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** And that's how they got into their second VolleyingInsults fight... [[UpToEleven in Italian]].Italian.
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** Also a CrowningMomentOfAwesome because Muneca still managed to graduate with the twelfth ranking - that’s right, there were only eleven students who graduated with better G.P.A. than she did. Had she attended the P.E. courses, odds are good she would’ve been the top student.
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** Also a CrowningMomentOfAwesome SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome because Muneca still managed to graduate with the twelfth ranking - that’s right, there were only eleven students who graduated with better G.P.A. than she did. Had she attended the P.E. courses, odds are good she would’ve been the top student.
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* Khnum ''tied up'' Muneca with a ''brass pipe.'' What made that a CrowningMomentOfFunny, instead of just CrowningMomentOfAwesome, was that he added [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV04n228.html a pretty little bow as a finishing touch.]]
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* Khnum ''tied up'' Muneca with a ''brass pipe.'' What made that a CrowningMomentOfFunny, Funny, instead of just CrowningMomentOfAwesome, SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome, was that he added [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV04n228.html a pretty little bow as a finishing touch.]]
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fixed a wick for a split trope
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-->'''Daryl:''' Yeah! [[ComicallyMissingThePoint He’s like]] [[StopHelpingMe our big brother!]]
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-->'''Daryl:''' Yeah! [[ComicallyMissingThePoint He’s like]] [[StopHelpingMe [[UnwantedAssistance our big brother!]]
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* A long BrickJoke: remember Cinna reading the personal ads in hopes of finding a hot guy? Remember how the hottest guy in those ads was gay? Turns out he's a commander of a Pacificator platoon...
-->'''Cinna:''' Hey! There's [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n135.html that hot gay guy]] I saw in the personal ads! (The guy is the leader of Platoon 101.)
-->'''Cinna:''' Hey! There's [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n135.html that hot gay guy]] I saw in the personal ads! (The guy is the leader of Platoon 101.)
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* A long BrickJoke: remember Cinna reading the personal ads in hopes of finding a hot guy? Remember how the hottest guy in those ads was gay? Turns out he's a commander of a Pacificator platoon...
platoon... (Platoon 101 to be precise)
-->'''Cinna:''' Hey! There's [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n135.html that hot gay guy]] I saw in the personal ads!(The guy is the leader of Platoon 101.)
-->'''Cinna:''' Hey! There's [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n135.html that hot gay guy]] I saw in the personal ads!
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-->'''Cinna:''' Hey! There's [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n133.html that hot gay guy]] I saw in the personal ads!
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-->'''Cinna:''' Hey! There's [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n133.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n135.html that hot gay guy]] I saw in the personal ads!ads! (The guy is the leader of Platoon 101.)
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-->'''Cinna:''' Fottere, you porn star! [[note]]Most likely a short version of "via a farti footers."[[/note]]
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-->'''Cinna:''' Fottere, you porn star! [[note]]Most likely a short version of "via a farti footers.fottere."[[/note]]
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-->'''Cinna:''' Fottere, you porn star!
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-->'''Cinna:''' Fottere, you porn star!star! [[note]]Most likely a short version of "via a farti footers."[[/note]]
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-->'''Aphrodite:''' Vaff****ulo!
-->'''Cinna:''' Fo***ti, you porn star!
-->'''Cinna:''' Fo***ti, you porn star!
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-->'''Aphrodite:''' Vaff****ulo!
Vaffanculo!
-->'''Cinna:'''Fo***ti, Fottere, you porn star!
-->'''Cinna:'''
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* Muneca got the rest of the platoon to agree to pay for Travis' expenses... ''then'' she slapped Cinna with her bill. You just ''know'' that Cinna got a considerably higher bill than the rest. (Obviously implied by her reaction.)
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* Muneca got the rest of the platoon to agree to pay for Travis' expenses... ''then'' she slapped Cinna with her bill. You just ''know'' that Cinna got a considerably higher bill than the rest. (Obviously implied by her reaction.)[[note]]Look at the bill closely. The cost is ''at least'' 650 credits, and as we know from the "Building Up the World" series, a small meal is roughly 35 credits, and an outfit is 150 credits. Now let that sink in.[[/note]]
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-->'''Cinna:''' [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n191.html Not again]]!
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-->'''Cinna:''' [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n191.html [[LampshadeHanging Not again]]!
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-->'''Osiris:''' [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV04n227.html Swirling spots appearing in your sight herald your death.]]
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-->'''Osiris:''' [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV04n227.html [[ThePessimist Swirling spots appearing in your sight herald your death.]]
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** And [[PsychoElectro Rendo]] had an explosive nosebleed… however, his face was blotted out, censor-style, complete with a note from the author:
--->'''J.A.:''' Not the kind of face children should see.
--->'''J.A.:''' Not the kind of face children should see.
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* [[spoiler:Queen Belinda is getting awfully [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n262.html bold with]] Nozomi.]]
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* [[spoiler:Queen Belinda is getting awfully [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n262.html bold with]] Nozomi.]]]]
* Forget Muneca and Larima. You want a DeathGlare? [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n266.html Enlil meets Egmond once again]]. [[note]]Remember, it was Egmond who killed [[WomanScorned Enlil's lover Zeus]].[[/note]]
* Forget Muneca and Larima. You want a DeathGlare? [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n266.html Enlil meets Egmond once again]]. [[note]]Remember, it was Egmond who killed [[WomanScorned Enlil's lover Zeus]].[[/note]]
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* Look at the panel in the middle of the page, after the platoon has been told [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n259.html that the Chancellor will be interviewing them]].
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* Look at the panel in the middle of the page, after the platoon has been told [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n259.html that the Chancellor will be interviewing them]].them]].
* [[spoiler:Queen Belinda is getting awfully [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n262.html bold with]] Nozomi.]]
* [[spoiler:Queen Belinda is getting awfully [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n262.html bold with]] Nozomi.]]
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-->'''Muneca:''' I recall one lady who believed that Japan was just west of Spain.
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-->'''Muneca:''' I recall one lady who believed that Japan was just west of Spain.Spain.
* Look at the panel in the middle of the page, after the platoon has been told [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n259.html that the Chancellor will be interviewing them]].
* Look at the panel in the middle of the page, after the platoon has been told [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n259.html that the Chancellor will be interviewing them]].
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-->'''Muneca:''' [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n248.html Don't swear in the presence of children]]!
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-->'''Muneca:''' [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n248.html Don't swear in the presence of children]]!children]]!
* Apparently there's a few of stupid commanders/people in high position in the Pacificators.
-->'''Muneca:''' I recall one lady who believed that Japan was just west of Spain.
* Apparently there's a few of stupid commanders/people in high position in the Pacificators.
-->'''Muneca:''' I recall one lady who believed that Japan was just west of Spain.
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-->'''Muneca:''' Don't swear in the presence of children!
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-->'''Muneca:''' [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n248.html Don't swear in the presence of children!children]]!
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* Cinna thinks Travis' outfit looks ridiculous.
-->'''Cinna:''' Poor kid. He has been turned into a dress-up doll by the life-sized Doll.
-->'''Muneca:''' /DeathGlare
-->'''Cinna:''' Poor kid. He has been turned into a dress-up doll by the life-sized Doll.
-->'''Muneca:''' /DeathGlare
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* Ferdinand [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n244.html meets Rendo]]. Be sure to look at the face on his hat.
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* Ferdinand [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n244.html meets Rendo]]. Be sure to look at the face on his hat.hat.
* Muneca got the rest of the platoon to agree to pay for Travis' expenses... ''then'' she slapped Cinna with her bill. You just ''know'' that Cinna got a considerably higher bill than the rest. (Obviously implied by her reaction.)
-->'''Muneca:''' Don't swear in the presence of children!
* Muneca got the rest of the platoon to agree to pay for Travis' expenses... ''then'' she slapped Cinna with her bill. You just ''know'' that Cinna got a considerably higher bill than the rest. (Obviously implied by her reaction.)
-->'''Muneca:''' Don't swear in the presence of children!
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* Rendo now has a crush on Tiamat. [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n233.html She's not impressed]].
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* Rendo now has a crush on Tiamat. [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n233.html She's not impressed]].impressed]].
* Ferdinand [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n244.html meets Rendo]]. Be sure to look at the face on his hat.
* Ferdinand [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n244.html meets Rendo]]. Be sure to look at the face on his hat.
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--> '''Tiamat:''' (dives-elbow-drops Rendo) Bad boy!
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--> '''Tiamat:''' (dives-elbow-drops Rendo) Bad boy!boy!
* Rendo now has a crush on Tiamat. [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n233.html She's not impressed]].
* Rendo now has a crush on Tiamat. [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n233.html She's not impressed]].
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** And that's how they got into their second VolleyingInsults fight... [[UpToEleven in Italian]].
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** And that's how they got into their second VolleyingInsults fight... [[UpToEleven in Italian]].Italian]].
* Rendo is still a pervert. When he pulled up the unconscious Larima's skirt, Tiamat put a quick end to it.
--> '''Tiamat:''' (dives-elbow-drops Rendo) Bad boy!
* Rendo is still a pervert. When he pulled up the unconscious Larima's skirt, Tiamat put a quick end to it.
--> '''Tiamat:''' (dives-elbow-drops Rendo) Bad boy!
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* Apparently Indiana Jones became a legend in the future.
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* Apparently Indiana Jones Franchise/IndianaJones became a legend in the future.
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* Jacob flashes [[SourPrude Muneca]] (and Daryl, who wasn’t quite as disturbed). Later he tried this technique on the Torbern sisters, but they were completely unfazed. [[FridgeBrilliance Well, they are French...]]
* Any of Shiva’s LargeHam moments.
* Any of Shiva’s LargeHam moments.
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* Jacob flashes [[SourPrude [[SourPrudes Muneca]] (and Daryl, who wasn’t quite as disturbed). Later he tried this technique on the Torbern sisters, but they were completely unfazed. [[FridgeBrilliance Well, they are French...]]
* Any ofShiva’s Shiva's LargeHam moments.
* Any of
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--->'''Muneca:''' [[SourPrude That's]] [[ProperLady enough!]]
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--->'''Muneca:''' [[SourPrude [[SourPrudes That's]] [[ProperLady enough!]]
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* In an example of WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome, Daryl [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n032.html learned her wrestling]] [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n033.html moves from a goat]].
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* In an example of WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome, Daryl [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n032.html learned her wrestling]] [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n033.html moves from a goat]].
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* Nozimo answered the phone carefully, expecting Enrique to shout like he did before. [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV04n258.html He didn’t this time.]] Nozimo was not sympathetic at all.
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* Nozimo Nozomi answered the phone carefully, expecting Enrique to shout like he did before. [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV04n258.html He didn’t this time.]] Nozimo Nozomi was not sympathetic at all.
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-->'''Nozimo:''' [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV04n259.html ...Maybe.]] [hangs up]
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-->'''Nozimo:''' Nay, he brought it upon himself.
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--->'''Aphrodite:''' /waves and sticks out her tongue at Muneca behind the Chancellor
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--->'''Aphrodite:''' /waves and sticks out her tongue at Muneca from behind the Chancellor
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** Enlil did nothing [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n195.html but laugh]] at Ferdinand Cook. (Despite being technically hired by him as a part of his crew. Way to support your boss, Enlil.)
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** Enlil did nothing [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n195.html but laugh]] at Ferdinand Cook.Cook when she found him. (Despite being technically hired by him as a part of his crew. Way to support your boss, Enlil.)
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** Enlil did nothing [[http://www.sailorenergy.net/MangaPacificators2/MangaPacisV05n195.html but laugh]] at Ferdinand Cook. (Despite being technically hired by him as a part of his crew. Way to support your boss, Enlil.)
