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-->'''Alex:''' "ARE YOU NUTS?! AND NO, I HAVEN'T, YOU PERV!"
-->'''Ashley: "OH MY ARCEUS, YOU'RE SUCH A PERVERT! KEEP YOUR SICK FANTASIES TO YOURSELF!"
-->'''Ashley: "OH MY ARCEUS, YOU'RE SUCH A PERVERT! KEEP YOUR SICK FANTASIES TO YOURSELF!"
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-->'''Alex:''' "ARE YOU NUTS?! AND NO, I HAVEN'T, YOU PERV!"
-->'''Ashley:PERV!"\\
'''Ashley:''' "OH MY ARCEUS, YOU'RE SUCH A PERVERT! KEEP YOUR SICK FANTASIES TO YOURSELF!"
-->'''Ashley:
'''Ashley:''' "OH MY ARCEUS, YOU'RE SUCH A PERVERT! KEEP YOUR SICK FANTASIES TO YOURSELF!"
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-->'''Rory:''' Um... I've read Twilight a few t-
-->'''Lizzie:''' TWILIGHT?!That garbage?! Oh my Arceus... Don't get me started on that sad excuse of a book! The characters are flat, the two main characters are totally obsessed with each other, and-"
-->'''Lizzie:''' TWILIGHT?!That garbage?! Oh my Arceus... Don't get me started on that sad excuse of a book! The characters are flat, the two main characters are totally obsessed with each other, and-"
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-->'''Rory:''' Um... I've read Twilight a few t-
-->'''Lizzie:'''t-\\
'''Lizzie:''' TWILIGHT?!That garbage?! Oh my Arceus... Don't get me started on that sad excuse of a book! The characters are flat, the two main characters are totally obsessed with each other, and-"
-->'''Lizzie:'''
'''Lizzie:''' TWILIGHT?!That garbage?! Oh my Arceus... Don't get me started on that sad excuse of a book! The characters are flat, the two main characters are totally obsessed with each other, and-"
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* Most of Ashley and Alex's interactions are this or CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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* Most of Ashley and Alex's interactions are this or CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments.
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* Bronze's glorious reaction to walking in on Lizzie.
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* Drake's reaction to Kyle asking him if he and Maria had already consummated their relationship.
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* Drake's reaction [[SpitTake reaction]] to Kyle asking him if he and Maria had already consummated their relationship.
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-->'''Lizzie:''' TWILIGHT?!That garbage?! Oh my Arceus... Don't get me started on that sad excuse of a book! The characters are flat, the two main characters are totally obsessed with each other, and-"
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-->'''Lizzie:''' TWILIGHT?!That garbage?! Oh my Arceus... Don't get me started on that sad excuse of a book! The characters are flat, the two main characters are totally obsessed with each other, and-"and-"
* Auburn ''freaking'' at the mention of him having kids with Jade.
* Auburn ''freaking'' at the mention of him having kids with Jade.
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* Alex's reaction to Adult!Alex and finding out that she's married to Cobalt.
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* Amethyst [[DeadpanSnarker snarking]] at Conway.
-->'''Conway:''' You are merely a child! You ought to listen to me!
-->'''Amethyst:''' And you ought to shut up.
* Conway gets this a lot...
-->'''Conway:''' You're useless! You're weak!
-->'''Drake:''' I don't need the opinion of an obsessive freak.
-->'''Conway:''' You are merely a child! You ought to listen to me!
-->'''Amethyst:''' And you ought to shut up.
* Conway gets this a lot...
-->'''Conway:''' You're useless! You're weak!
-->'''Drake:''' I don't need the opinion of an obsessive freak.
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* Bronze's reaction to walking in on Pyrite and Lena.
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* Bronze's reaction to walking in on Pyrite and Lena. Lena.... repeatedly.
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* Bronze's ranting about needing more sane friends.
* Everyone from the past's reactions to Luna finding out about Twilight.
-->'''Luna:''' Hey there's a Jasper in here!
-->'''Jasper:''' And I am very ashamed of having the same name as a sparkly fairy.
* Everyone from the past's reactions to Luna finding out about Twilight.
-->'''Luna:''' Hey there's a Jasper in here!
-->'''Jasper:''' And I am very ashamed of having the same name as a sparkly fairy.
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* Bronze's ranting inner monologue about needing more sane friends.
*Everyone from the past's reactions to Luna finding out Lizzie's rant about Twilight.
-->'''Luna:''' Hey there's -->'''Rory:''' Um... I've read Twilight a Jasper in here!
-->'''Jasper:''' And I am very ashamedfew t-
-->'''Lizzie:''' TWILIGHT?!That garbage?! Oh my Arceus... Don't get me started on that sad excuse ofhaving a book! The characters are flat, the same name as a sparkly fairy.two main characters are totally obsessed with each other, and-"
*
-->'''Jasper:''' And I am very ashamed
-->'''Lizzie:''' TWILIGHT?!That garbage?! Oh my Arceus... Don't get me started on that sad excuse of
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* Bronze's ranting about needing more sane friends.
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* Bronze's ranting about needing more sane friends.friends.
* Everyone from the past's reactions to Luna finding out about Twilight.
-->'''Luna:''' Hey there's a Jasper in here!
-->'''Jasper:''' And I am very ashamed of having the same name as a sparkly fairy.
* Everyone from the past's reactions to Luna finding out about Twilight.
-->'''Luna:''' Hey there's a Jasper in here!
-->'''Jasper:''' And I am very ashamed of having the same name as a sparkly fairy.
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* The Gamma's Crew to: "It's a long story".
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* The Gamma's Crew Gammas' reaction to: "It's a long story".
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-->'''Dazzle:''' I told Jax to gave them my ''middle'' name! Dammit, she did this on purpose, didn't she?
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-->'''Dazzle:''' I told Jax to gave them my ''middle'' name! Dammit, she did this on purpose, didn't she?she?
* Just about ''any'' comments that Jasper makes toward the many relationships in the story.
* Bronze's reaction to Kyle and Lizzie dating.
** He found them making out in a closet.
* Bronze's ranting about needing more sane friends.
* Just about ''any'' comments that Jasper makes toward the many relationships in the story.
* Bronze's reaction to Kyle and Lizzie dating.
** He found them making out in a closet.
* Bronze's ranting about needing more sane friends.
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* ''Anything'' that Cobalt says to rile Alex up.
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* ''Anything'' that Cobalt says to rile Alex up.up.
* The revelation of Dazzle's first name.
** It's [[spoiler: Marion]].
-->'''Dazzle:''' I told Jax to gave them my ''middle'' name! Dammit, she did this on purpose, didn't she?
* The revelation of Dazzle's first name.
** It's [[spoiler: Marion]].
-->'''Dazzle:''' I told Jax to gave them my ''middle'' name! Dammit, she did this on purpose, didn't she?
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* Jasper's nonchalance when he's trying to drag Citrine away.
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* Jasper's nonchalance when he's trying to drag Citrine away.away.
* The Gamma's Crew to: "It's a long story".
-->'''Ashley:''' It's a long story.
-->'''Alex:''' Ugh. Do ''not'' use that phrase.
* Cobalt teasing Jet to no end about Citrine.
* Jax calling Riley "Miss Riley".
* The Dex Holders/anime characters' reactions to their grandchildren.
* Paul and Dawn's reaction in finding out that Cobalt and Alex's twins were born out of wedlock.
* Jasper's remarks after Cobalt [[spoiler: kissed Alex, causing her to react violently]].
* ''Anything'' that Cobalt says to rile Alex up.
* The Gamma's Crew to: "It's a long story".
-->'''Ashley:''' It's a long story.
-->'''Alex:''' Ugh. Do ''not'' use that phrase.
* Cobalt teasing Jet to no end about Citrine.
* Jax calling Riley "Miss Riley".
* The Dex Holders/anime characters' reactions to their grandchildren.
* Paul and Dawn's reaction in finding out that Cobalt and Alex's twins were born out of wedlock.
* Jasper's remarks after Cobalt [[spoiler: kissed Alex, causing her to react violently]].
* ''Anything'' that Cobalt says to rile Alex up.
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Deleted line(s) 6,16 (click to see context) :
* Jet's reaction to alternate!Cobalt getting together with alternate!Garnet and meeting one of their kids.
** The best part is:
-->'''Adult!Jet:''' You...
-->'''Teen!Jet:''' Knocked...
-->'''Adult!Jet:''' Her...
-->'''Teen!Jet:''' UP?!
-->'''Both:''' OAK!
-->'''Kyle:''' And this is when you run off screaming.
-->'''Royal:''' ...How annoying.
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* Most of Ashley and Alex's interactions are this or CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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-->'''Drake:''' Screw you, I don't need the opinion of an obsessive freak.
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-->'''Drake:''' Screw you, I don't need the opinion of an obsessive freak.freak.
* ''Anything'' that shows Beryllium's lack of education.
* Beryllium not understanding why Gemma freaked out when he called her his girlfriend.
* Jade and Auburn's reactions to a reporter asking her if she was pregnant with Auburn's child.
* Drake's reaction to Kyle asking him if he and Maria had already consummated their relationship.
** Also Alex's nonchalance during the scene.
* Bronze's reaction to walking in on Pyrite and Lena.
* Jasper figuring out that Auburn and Jade already had [[spoiler: sex]].
** Jasper's reaction to why Auburn had broke up with Jade in the first place.
* Jasper's nonchalance when he's trying to drag Citrine away.
* ''Anything'' that shows Beryllium's lack of education.
* Beryllium not understanding why Gemma freaked out when he called her his girlfriend.
* Jade and Auburn's reactions to a reporter asking her if she was pregnant with Auburn's child.
* Drake's reaction to Kyle asking him if he and Maria had already consummated their relationship.
** Also Alex's nonchalance during the scene.
* Bronze's reaction to walking in on Pyrite and Lena.
* Jasper figuring out that Auburn and Jade already had [[spoiler: sex]].
** Jasper's reaction to why Auburn had broke up with Jade in the first place.
* Jasper's nonchalance when he's trying to drag Citrine away.
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* Amethyst snarking at Conway.
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* Amethyst snarking [[DeadpanSnarker snarking]] at Conway.
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-->'''Amethyst:''' And you ought to shut up.
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-->'''Amethyst:''' And you ought to shut up.up.
* Conway gets this a lot...
-->'''Conway:''' You're useless! You're weak!
-->'''Drake:''' Screw you, I don't need the opinion of an obsessive freak.
* Conway gets this a lot...
-->'''Conway:''' You're useless! You're weak!
-->'''Drake:''' Screw you, I don't need the opinion of an obsessive freak.
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-->'''Conway:''' Think about it! All of the lives you could save! I can convince the government to spare your sister!
-->'''Amethyst:''' I'm more concerned about my dead brain cells that had to suffer from that ''awful'' speech of yours. Really, you need to work on your monologues.
-->'''Amethyst:''' I'm more concerned about my dead brain cells that had to suffer from that ''awful'' speech of yours. Really, you need to work on your monologues.
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-->'''Drake:''' O_O
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-->'''Drake:''' O_OO.o
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-->'''Drake:''' *JawDrop*
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-->'''Drake:''' *JawDrop* O_O
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* Amethyst snarking at Conway.
-->'''Conway:''' Think about it! All of the lives you could save! I can convince the government to spare your sister!
-->'''Amethyst:''' I'm more concerned about my dead brain cells that had to suffer from that ''awful'' speech of yours. Really, you need to work on your monologues.
-->'''Conway:''' You are merely a child! You ought to listen to me!
-->'''Amethyst:''' And you ought to shut up.
-->'''Conway:''' Think about it! All of the lives you could save! I can convince the government to spare your sister!
-->'''Amethyst:''' I'm more concerned about my dead brain cells that had to suffer from that ''awful'' speech of yours. Really, you need to work on your monologues.
-->'''Conway:''' You are merely a child! You ought to listen to me!
-->'''Amethyst:''' And you ought to shut up.
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** Alex's reaction was to beat him up.
* Jet's reaction to alternate!Cobalt getting together with Garnet and meeting one of their kids.
* Jet's reaction to alternate!Cobalt getting together with Garnet and meeting one of their kids.
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-->'''Ashley: "OH MY ARCEUS, YOU'RE SUCH A PERVERT! KEEP YOUR SICK FANTASIES TO YOURSELF!"
* Jet's reaction to alternate!Cobalt getting together with
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* Alex's reaction to Adult!Alex and finding out that she's married to Cobalt.
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* Alex's reaction to Adult!Alex and finding out that she's married to Cobalt.Cobalt.
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-->'''Pyrite:''' *snickers* "How shall I put this? Are you so uptight because you haven't been laid yet?"
-->'''Drake:''' *JawDrop*
** Alex's reaction was to beat him up.
-->'''Drake:''' *JawDrop*
** Alex's reaction was to beat him up.
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-->'''Royal:''' ...How annoying.
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* Just Pyrite and his antics.
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* Just Pyrite and his antics.antics.
* Jet's reaction to alternate!Cobalt getting together with Garnet and meeting one of their kids.
** The best part is:
-->'''Adult!Jet:''' You...
-->'''Teen!Jet:''' Knocked...
-->'''Adult!Jet:''' Her...
-->'''Teen!Jet:''' UP?!
-->'''Both:''' OAK!
-->'''Kyle:''' And this is when you run off screaming.
* Alex's reaction to Adult!Alex and finding out that she's married to Cobalt.
* Jet's reaction to alternate!Cobalt getting together with Garnet and meeting one of their kids.
** The best part is:
-->'''Adult!Jet:''' You...
-->'''Teen!Jet:''' Knocked...
-->'''Adult!Jet:''' Her...
-->'''Teen!Jet:''' UP?!
-->'''Both:''' OAK!
-->'''Kyle:''' And this is when you run off screaming.
* Alex's reaction to Adult!Alex and finding out that she's married to Cobalt.
