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Only the first example really needed context this time, to give more insight to why the moment in question was funny. Also changed the dialogue text to make it match with the comic.
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* [[http://www.alopex.li/mirrors/www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus/minus/www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus49.html This strip]].
--> Excuse me, candles aren't allowed in the library, would you...
--> Never!
--> Excuse me, candles aren't allowed in the library, would you...
--> Never!
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* [[http://www.alopex.li/mirrors/www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus/minus/www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus49.html This strip]].
strip]]. For context, minus took a man to the spirit world, where he is taught that a spirit can't live without their life candle being lit. Then, when he returns to the world of the living...
--> '''Librarian''': Excuse me, candles aren't allowed in thelibrary, would you...
--> Never!library. Would you please...\\
'''Man''': ''(holding candle back from her)'' NEVER!!
--> '''Librarian''': Excuse me, candles aren't allowed in the
--> Never!
'''Man''': ''(holding candle back from her)'' NEVER!!
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* [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.16mb.com/Kiwis/minus49.html This strip]].
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* [[http://www.alopex.li/mirrors/www.kiwisbybeat.16mb.com/Kiwis/minus49.com/minus/minus/www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus49.html This strip]].
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* The entirety of Strip [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.16mb.com/Kiwis/minus42.html #42]]. Everything from the bespectacled girl's reaction to getting her order, to the waitress's over-the-top delivery of that order, to the [[PstandardPsychicPstance absurd way]] that minus stares at an empty bowl in order to conjure more dessert, to the fact that the waiter at her booth looks like [[Manga/YuGiOh Kaiba's butler]].
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* The entirety of Strip [[http://www.alopex.li/mirrors/www.kiwisbybeat.16mb.com/Kiwis/minus42.com/minus/minus/www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus42.html #42]]. Everything from the bespectacled girl's reaction to getting her order, to the waitress's over-the-top delivery of that order, to the [[PstandardPsychicPstance absurd way]] that minus stares at an empty bowl in order to conjure more dessert, to the fact that the waiter at her booth looks like [[Manga/YuGiOh Kaiba's butler]].
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* [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus49.html This strip]].
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* [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus49.16mb.com/Kiwis/minus49.html This strip]].
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* The entirety of Strip [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus42.html #42]]. Everything from the bespectacled girl's reaction to getting her order, to the waitress's over-the-top delivery of that order, to the [[PstandardPsychicPstance absurd way]] that minus stares at an empty bowl in order to conjure more dessert, to the fact that the waiter at her booth looks like [[Manga/YuGiOh Kaiba's butler]].
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* The entirety of Strip [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus42.16mb.com/Kiwis/minus42.html #42]]. Everything from the bespectacled girl's reaction to getting her order, to the waitress's over-the-top delivery of that order, to the [[PstandardPsychicPstance absurd way]] that minus stares at an empty bowl in order to conjure more dessert, to the fact that the waiter at her booth looks like [[Manga/YuGiOh Kaiba's butler]].
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Eh, this looks better.
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* Basically any time that minus is surprised, she will make the :-O emoticon.
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* Basically any time that minus is surprised, she will make the :-O :-0 emoticon.
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* The entirety of Strip [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus42.html #42]]. Everything from the bespectacled girl's reaction to getting her order, to the waitress's over-the-top delivery of that order, to the [[PstandardPsychicStance absurd way]] that minus stares at an empty bowl in order to conjure more dessert, to the fact that the waiter at her booth looks like [[Manga/YuGiOh Kaiba's butler]].
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* The entirety of Strip [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus42.html #42]]. Everything from the bespectacled girl's reaction to getting her order, to the waitress's over-the-top delivery of that order, to the [[PstandardPsychicStance [[PstandardPsychicPstance absurd way]] that minus stares at an empty bowl in order to conjure more dessert, to the fact that the waiter at her booth looks like [[Manga/YuGiOh Kaiba's butler]].
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--> Never!
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--> Never!Never!
* The entirety of Strip [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus42.html #42]]. Everything from the bespectacled girl's reaction to getting her order, to the waitress's over-the-top delivery of that order, to the [[PstandardPsychicStance absurd way]] that minus stares at an empty bowl in order to conjure more dessert, to the fact that the waiter at her booth looks like [[Manga/YuGiOh Kaiba's butler]].
* Basically any time that minus is surprised, she will make the :-O emoticon.
* The entirety of Strip [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus42.html #42]]. Everything from the bespectacled girl's reaction to getting her order, to the waitress's over-the-top delivery of that order, to the [[PstandardPsychicStance absurd way]] that minus stares at an empty bowl in order to conjure more dessert, to the fact that the waiter at her booth looks like [[Manga/YuGiOh Kaiba's butler]].
* Basically any time that minus is surprised, she will make the :-O emoticon.
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* [[http://www.kiwisbybeat.com/minus49.html This strip]].
--> Excuse me, candles aren't allowed in the library, would you...
--> Never!
--> Excuse me, candles aren't allowed in the library, would you...
--> Never!
