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* Chapter 99: We get Whitley sneaking around Beacon Academy trying to figure out what is happening with Weiss. The attempt is rather pathatic and the only reason Ozpin hasn't stoped him is that Whitley technically isnt breaking any rules.
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* Chapter 99: We get Whitley sneaking around Beacon Academy trying to figure out what is happening with Weiss. The attempt is rather pathatic pathetic, and the only reason Ozpin hasn't stoped him is that Whitley technically isnt breaking any rules.
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* Chapter 99: We get Whitley sneaking around Beacon Academy trying to figure out what is happening with Weiss. The attempt is rather pathatic and the only reason Ozpin hasn't stoped him is that Whitley technically isnt breaking anny rules.
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* Chapter 99: We get Whitley sneaking around Beacon Academy trying to figure out what is happening with Weiss. The attempt is rather pathatic and the only reason Ozpin hasn't stoped him is that Whitley technically isnt breaking anny any rules.
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* Chapter 99: We get Whitley sneaking around Beacon Academy trying to figure out what is happening with Weiss. The attempt is rather pathatic and the only reason Ozpin hasn't stoped him is that Whitkey technically isnt breaking anny rules.
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* Chapter 99: We get Whitley sneaking around Beacon Academy trying to figure out what is happening with Weiss. The attempt is rather pathatic and the only reason Ozpin hasn't stoped him is that Whitkey Whitley technically isnt breaking anny rules.
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* Chapter 99: We get Whitley sneaking around Beacon Academy trying to figure out what is happening with Weiss. The attempt is rather pathatic and the only reason Ozpin hasn't stoped him is that Whitkey technically isnt breaking anny rules.
--> '''Roman:''' We just letting the brat do that?
--> '''Ozpin:''' The alarms didn't trigger, so he has no weapons. And as the family of a student, he's welcome within our halls... even if he doesn't realize that.
--> '''Roman:''' We just letting the brat do that?
--> '''Ozpin:''' The alarms didn't trigger, so he has no weapons. And as the family of a student, he's welcome within our halls... even if he doesn't realize that.
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* Chapter 3, Ruby quite bluntly sums up the research she, Weiss, and Yang have found about Blake's symptoms:
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* Chapter 3, Ruby quite bluntly sums up the research she, Weiss, and Yang have found about Blake's heat symptoms:
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* In chapter 15 Yang asks Blake how becoming mates would effect her and Ruby. Once the rest of the team understand what Yang is implying they all freak out and sputer out denial.
* Roman Torchwick who is a man in his mid-thirties has the RWBY Chibi end theme has his ring tone.
* Roman Torchwick who is a man in his mid-thirties has the RWBY Chibi end theme has his ring tone.
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* In chapter 15 Yang asks Blake how becoming mates would effect affect her and Ruby. Once the rest of the team understand what Yang is implying they all freak out and sputer sputter out denial.
denials.
* RomanTorchwick who is Torchwick, a man in his mid-thirties mid-thirties, has the RWBY Chibi end theme has as his ring tone.
* Roman
** While going shopping at a Faunus drug store, Blake notices Yang examining a bottle of shampoo specifically for thick-haired dog Faunus and obviously thinking about it. When Blake calls for her, Yang fumbles the bottle and tries to act nonchalant while putting it back on the shelf.
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* Right after Yang anounces her return to Junior's Bar, she and Neptune find a bunch of guns pointed at them. Neptunes responce.
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* Right after Yang anounces her return to Junior's Bar, she and Neptune find a bunch of guns pointed at them. Neptunes responce.Neptune's response.
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--> '''Penny:''' Mostly
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--> '''Penny:''' MostlyMostly.
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* Chapter 60: It turns out the bird that Ruby flew into during Beacon's initiation was Raven.
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* Chapter 60: It turns out the bird that Ruby flew into during Beacon's initiation was Raven.a shape-shifted Raven. Ruby is mortified while Yang just finds it hilarious.
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* Chapter 87: Sun and Neptune come to check on team RWBY, only to see Neo trying to pick the lock (she wanted to spar with them, and decided to enter her way when they didn't answer the door). It quickly devolves into an offscreen brawl (with several of the participants in pajamas) that ends when Pyrrha inadvertently reveals Penny's robotic nature when trying to disarm everyone, pinning her to the ceiling.
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* Chapter 87: Sun and Neptune come to check on team RWBY, only to see Neo trying to pick the lock (she wanted to spar with them, and decided to enter her way when they didn't answer the door). It quickly devolves into an offscreen brawl (with several of the participants in pajamas) that ends when Pyrrha inadvertently reveals Penny's robotic nature when trying to disarm everyone, pinning her to the ceiling.ceiling with her magnetic Semblance.
** Of particular note is that when Pyrrha pinned everyone's weapons to the ceiling, Neo refused to let go of her parasol and got dragged up to the ceiling along with it.
** Of particular note is that when Pyrrha pinned everyone's weapons to the ceiling, Neo refused to let go of her parasol and got dragged up to the ceiling along with it.
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** Penny almost causes her system to crash becouse when she looked up a perfect dress on the internet her internal drive got to many conflicting answers.
** Weiss vows to keep an extra eye on Neo due to the ex cons bags being to full for her perchase.
** Weiss vows to keep an extra eye on Neo due to the ex cons bags being to full for her perchase.
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** Penny almost causes her system to crash becouse because when she looked up a perfect dress on the internet her internal drive got to too many conflicting answers.
** Weiss vows to keep an extra eye on Neo due to theex cons ex-cons bags being to too full for her perchase.purchase.
** Weiss vows to keep an extra eye on Neo due to the
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** Penny almost causes her system to crash becouse when she looked up a perfect dress on the internet her eternal drive got to many conflicting answers.
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** Penny almost causes her system to crash becouse when she looked up a perfect dress on the internet her eternal internal drive got to many conflicting answers.
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-->'''Winter:''' [[LetGetThisStraight Weiss, just to be clear]]: you had sex with three separate girls.\\
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-->'''Winter:''' [[LetGetThisStraight [[LetMeGetThisStraight Weiss, just to be clear]]: you had sex with three separate girls.\\
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* When Weiss is about to explode at Ruby due to Winter knowing about team RWBY's relationship, Sun, Neptune and Penny read the room and try to get as far from the group as posible to avoid getting caught in the fallout.
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-->'''Winter:''' [[LetMeGetThisStraight Weiss, just to be clear]]: you had sex with three separate girls.\\
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-->'''Winter:''' [[LetMeGetThisStraight [[LetGetThisStraight Weiss, just to be clear]]: you had sex with three separate girls.\\
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* The chapter ends with team RWBY freaking out becouse they forgot about the upcoming dance and all need to get dresses for the event.
* Chapter 88 has a good number of funny moments:
** Penny almost causes her system to crash becouse when she looked up a perfect dress on the internet her eternal drive got to many conflicting answers.
** Weiss vows to keep an extra eye on Neo due to the ex cons bags being to full for her perchase.
** Ruby, Nora, and Neo begin to [[ShipperOnDeck scheme on how to get Jaune and Pyrrha together]]
* Chapter 88 has a good number of funny moments:
** Penny almost causes her system to crash becouse when she looked up a perfect dress on the internet her eternal drive got to many conflicting answers.
** Weiss vows to keep an extra eye on Neo due to the ex cons bags being to full for her perchase.
** Ruby, Nora, and Neo begin to [[ShipperOnDeck scheme on how to get Jaune and Pyrrha together]]
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* Chapter 27 starts with Yang messing around with Nepune as a punishment for flirting with Weiss in the previous chapter, ending with her abruptly stopping Bumblebee causing Neptune to go flying. Neptune's inner monolouge is pretty funny as he reacts to this is pretty funny as well.
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* Chapter 27 starts with Yang messing around with Nepune as a punishment for flirting with Weiss in the previous chapter, ending with her abruptly stopping Bumblebee causing Neptune to go flying. Neptune's inner monolouge is pretty funny as he reacts to this is pretty funny as well.
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* Chapter 27 starts with Yang messing around with Nepune as a punishment for flirting with Weiss in the previous chapter Ending with her abruptly stopping Bumblebee causing Neptune to go flying. Neptune's inner monolouge is pretty funny as he reacts to this as well.
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* Chapter 27 starts with Yang messing around with Nepune as a punishment for flirting with Weiss in the previous chapter Ending chapter, ending with her abruptly stopping Bumblebee causing Neptune to go flying. Neptune's inner monolouge is pretty funny as he reacts to this is pretty funny as well.
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* Chapter 27 starts with Yang messing around with Nepune as a punishment for flirting with Weiss in the previous chapter Ending with her abruptly stopping Bumblebee causing Neptune to go flying. Neptune's inner monolouge is pretty funny as he reacts to this as well.
* Right after Yang anounces her return to Junior's Bar, she and Neptune find a bunch of guns pointed at them. Neptunes responce.
--> '''Neptune:''' Sun, I take it back. Now, I hate you.
* Right after Yang anounces her return to Junior's Bar, she and Neptune find a bunch of guns pointed at them. Neptunes responce.
--> '''Neptune:''' Sun, I take it back. Now, I hate you.
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--> '''Yang:''' Wait,what?
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--> '''Yang:''' Wait,what?Wait, what?
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* Yang gives penny a playfull punch to the sholder as thanks for saving her from falling off the freeway during the Paladin fight. When Yang hurts her hand doing this we get this exchange.
--> '''Yang:'''"Youch! Geez, Pen, that hurt! What, are you made of pure metal?"
--> '''Penny:'''Mostly
--> '''Yang:'''Wait,what?
--> '''Yang:'''"Youch! Geez, Pen, that hurt! What, are you made of pure metal?"
--> '''Penny:'''Mostly
--> '''Yang:'''Wait,what?
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* Yang gives penny Penny a playfull playful punch to the sholder shoulder as thanks for saving her from falling off the freeway during the Paladin fight. When Yang hurts her hand doing this we get this exchange.
-->'''Yang:'''"Youch! '''Yang:''' "Youch! Geez, Pen, that hurt! What, are you made of pure metal?"
-->'''Penny:'''Mostly
'''Penny:''' Mostly
-->'''Yang:'''Wait,what?'''Yang:''' Wait,what?
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