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** Right before their fight with Anathos in Book 10, the Legendaries stop on an Island. Then, noticing Shimy's depressed situation, Jadina makes a failed attempt to cause her to hold on, which cause the Elementary Elf to go after her. This cause a chain reaction who leads all Legendaries other than Danael and Tenebris to have a comical fight.

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** ~~Right before~~ In preparation for their ~~fight~~ confrontation with Anathos in Book 10, the Legendaries ~~stop~~ make camp on an a deserted Island. ~~Then, noticing Shimy's depressed situation,~~ Jadina ~~makes~~ kicks a ~~failed attempt to cause~~ disheartened Shimy in the ass and gives her ~~to hold on,~~ a GetAHoldOfYourselfMan speech, which ~~cause the Elementary Elf~~ causes Shimy to ~~go after her.~~ ''imediately'' and violently retaliate. This ~~cause~~ causes a chain reaction ~~who~~ that leads ~~all Legendaries other than~~ Gryf to pick a fight with Razzia, while Danael and Tenebris ~~to have a comical fight.~~stand back and watch the chaos unfold.

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--->'''Razzia''': I warned him, didn't I?
--->'''Amy''': I concur!

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~~--->'''Razzia''':~~ --->'''Razzia:''' I warned him, didn't I?
~~--->'''Amy''':~~ --->'''Amy:''' I ~~concur!~~

concur!

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--->'''Jadina''': What were you thinking ? Have you any concern for our reputation ?
--->'''Shimy''': What about that scene you just imposed to the readers ?

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~~--->'''Jadina''':~~ --->'''Jadina:''' What were you thinking ? Have you any concern for our reputation ?
~~--->'''Shimy''':~~ --->'''Shimy:''' What about that scene you just imposed to the readers ?

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--->Are you kidding me ? I'm sure even the readers have already understood who I am referring to...

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~~--->Are~~ --->'''Cylbar:'''Are you kidding me ? I'm sure even the readers have already understood who I am referring ~~to...~~
to...

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--->'''Elysio''': Right, okay! I'm going to try to make it clearer... So, on one side, there's me, the person in front of you. And then there's the other me, who's somewhere else! I'm the nice one. The other me is the bad guy. I'm here because of the other me... actually, wait, no. Switch that. Or... hang on...
--->'''Danael''': Ahem! Can you try the complicated version? Because this one...

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--->'''Elysio''': Right, okay! I'm going to try to make it this clearer... ~~So, on one side,~~ so, there's me, the person standing right in front of you. And then there's the other me, who's somewhere else! I'm the ~~nice one.~~good guy. The other me is the bad guy. I'm here because of the other me... actually, wait, no. Switch that. Or... hang on...
--->'''Danael''': Ahem! ~~Can~~ Think you could try the complicated version? Because this ~~one...~~is...

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--->'''Gryf''': [[BrutalHonesty Elysio drank the Zar-Iko Memory Draught, and he turned back into Darkhell!]]
--->'''Elysio''': GRYF! DO YOU WANT TO GET ME KILLED OR SOMETHING?!

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~~--->'''Gryf''':~~ --->'''Gryf:''' [[BrutalHonesty Elysio drank the Zar-Iko Memory Draught, and he turned back into Darkhell!]]
~~--->'''Elysio''':~~ --->'''Elysio:''' GRYF! DO ARE YOU ~~WANT~~ TRYING TO GET ME KILLED OR SOMETHING?!

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--->'''Danael''' Trust me, it will be a long, long, long time before we even reach the door of Klafooty.
--->([[GilliganCut next pannel, they arrive in front of it]])
--->'''Danael''': Here we are.
--->'''Gryf''': [[LampshadeHanging Well, that was fast.]]

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--->'''Danael''' Trust me, it will be a long, long, long time before we even reach the door of Klafooty.
--->([[GilliganCut Klafooty.\\
''([[GilliganCut next ~~pannel,~~ panel, they arrive in front of it]])
--->'''Danael''': there]])''\\
'''Danael''': Here we are.
--->'''Gryf''': are.\\
'''Gryf''': [[LampshadeHanging Well, that was fast.]]

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--->'''Dark-Razzia''': [[EvilLaugh Ah Ah Ah]] ! [[UnderestimatingBadassery You]], [[LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt kick my ass]] ? [[TemptingFate I would like to see tha...]] (''[[KilledMidSentence Razzia punches him through the face with Amy,]] [[TalkToTheFist sending him flying metters away]]'')

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* In book 11, Shimy is knocked off her improvised mode of transport and Gryf leaps down after her. He succeeds in catching her before she hits the ground, [[AccidentalPervert but unfortunately]][[PantyShot not the right way up]].

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* In book 11, Shimy is knocked off her improvised mode of transport and Gryf leaps down after her. He succeeds in catching her before she hits the ground, [[AccidentalPervert but ~~unfortunately]][[PantyShot~~ unfortunately]] [[PantyShot not the right way up]].

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---> '''Shimy:''' Gryf... I'm grateful that you caught me but[[SuddenlyShouting WOULD YOU MIND LOOKING LITERALLY ANYWHERE ELSE, PLEASE??]]

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---> '''Shimy:''' Gryf... I'm grateful that you caught me ~~but[[SuddenlyShouting~~ but [[SuddenlyShouting WOULD YOU MIND LOOKING LITERALLY ANYWHERE ELSE, PLEASE??]]

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** Upon learning Elysio was Darkhell, Shaki immediatly goes berserk and tries to kill him to avenge his people. [[CurbStompBattle Elysio literally defeats him just by lifting a finger]].

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** Upon learning Elysio was Darkhell, Shaki immediatly goes berserk and tries to kill him to avenge his people. [[CurbStompBattle Elysio literally defeats him just by lifting a ~~finger]].~~finger]].

* In book 11, Shimy is knocked off her improvised mode of transport and Gryf leaps down after her. He succeeds in catching her before she hits the ground, [[AccidentalPervert but unfortunately]][[PantyShot not the right way up]].
---> '''Shimy:''' Gryf... I'm grateful that you caught me but[[SuddenlyShouting WOULD YOU MIND LOOKING LITERALLY ANYWHERE ELSE, PLEASE??]]

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--->'''Shaki''': You may not recognize me, but I'm pretty sure you remember the one who gave you this scar on your cheek...
--->'''Darkhell''': What the... ? My scar... You are the warrior called [[EmbarrassingNickname Little Cat Drinking his Milk Bowl]] ?!
--->'''Shaki''' ({{Beat}}): Yeah, that's me. But I'd rather be called Shaki please! Not my fault if I have a silly name...

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--->'''Shaki''': You may not recognize me, but I'm pretty sure you remember the one who gave you ~~this~~ that scar on your cheek...
--->'''Darkhell''': What the... ? My scar... ~~You~~ So you are the warrior ~~called~~ they call [[EmbarrassingNickname Little Cat ~~Drinking~~ who Drinks his ~~Milk Bowl]]~~ Bowl of Milkl]] ?!
--->'''Shaki''' ({{Beat}}): ~~Yeah,~~ Uh, yeah, that's me. But I'd rather ~~be called Shaki please! Not~~ Shaki, if you don't mind. S'not my fault if I have a ~~silly~~ stupid name...

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---> '''Menthos''': WHAT THE HELL IS THIS HORROR?! He won't last a minute against my opponents' monslaves !
---> '''Folk-For''': Alright, alright, you don't want it... but I'm sure it has potential...

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---> '''Menthos''': ~~WHAT THE HELL~~ IS THIS ~~HORROR?! He won't~~ SOME KIND OF JOKE?! That thing wouldn't last a minute against my opponents' monslaves !
---> '''Folk-For''': Alright, alright, if you don't want it... ~~but~~ though I'm sure it has potential...

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--->'''[[TokenEvilTeammate Tenebris]]''': Looks fun... can we play too, Danael ?
--->'''Danael''': GET THOSE BLADES DOWN, TENEBRIS!
--->'''Tenebris''': Pfff... not fun...

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--->'''[[TokenEvilTeammate Tenebris]]''': Looks fun... ~~can we play too,~~ wanna play, Danael ?
--->'''Danael''': ~~GET~~ YOU PUT THOSE BLADES ~~DOWN,~~ AWAY RIGHT NOW, TENEBRIS!
--->'''Tenebris''': Pfff... ~~not~~ you're no fun...

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--->'''Kasino''': Why ? [[LargeHam WHY]]? For the only thing worth fighting for, of course!
--->'''Razzia''': Ew... [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Food]]?
--->'''Kasino''': ({{Beat}}) Nah... though right now I would indeed kill for a steak...

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--->'''Kasino''': Why ? [[LargeHam WHY]]? Why do you think?? For the only thing worth fighting for, of course!
--->'''Razzia''': ~~Ew...~~Uh... [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Food]]?
--->'''Kasino''': ({{Beat}}) ~~Nah...~~ No... though I could totally murder a steak right ~~now I would indeed kill for a steak...~~now...

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--->'''Amy''': I confirm!

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--->'''Amy''': I ~~confirm!~~

concur!

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** In Book 3, when Jadina forces Shimy to wear a robe:
--->'''Jadina''': What are you thinking ? Do you have any concern for our reputation ?
--->'''Shimy''': How about the scene you just imposed to the readers ?

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** In Book 3, when Jadina forces Shimy to wear a ~~robe:~~
ballgown:
--->'''Jadina''': What ~~are~~ were you thinking ? Do Have you ~~have~~ any concern for our reputation ?
--->'''Shimy''': ~~How~~ What about ~~the~~ that scene you just imposed to the readers ?

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--->'''Elysio''': Tenebris?! What the Hell are you doing? We have got enough problems like this!
--->'''Darkhell''': Hey! Watch out how you talk to my daughter!

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--->'''Elysio''': Tenebris?! What the Hell are you doing? ~~We have~~ We've got enough problems ~~like this!~~
as it is!
--->'''Darkhell''': Hey! ~~Watch out how~~ Who said you could talk to my ~~daughter!~~daughter like that!

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--->'''Darkhell''': Yeah, but ''I'' am the one she likes the most!
--->'''Elysio''': In your dream! Do we want us to ask her to make a choice?
--->'''Tenebris'''({{Beat}}): That's embarrassing...
* In ''Origines'', Jadina captures Saryn, forces her to come under her tent and [[LesYay orders her to strip down]], much to Saryn's surprise. Next page, we are revealed [[SubvertedTrope she just wanted to use Saryn to try her robes, since she was lacking any mirror]].

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--->'''Darkhell''': Yeah, but ~~''I'' am the one~~ she likes ~~the most!~~
me better!
--->'''Elysio''': In your ~~dream! Do we want us to~~ dreams! Wanna ask her to ~~make a choice?~~
choose?
--->'''Tenebris'''({{Beat}}): ~~That's~~ This is embarrassing...
* In ''Origines'', Jadina captures Saryn, forces her to come under her tent and [[LesYay orders her to strip down]], much to Saryn's surprise. Next page, we are revealed [[SubvertedTrope she just wanted to use Saryn to try on her ~~robes,~~ wedding gown, since she was lacking any mirror]].

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--->'''Gryf''': [[BrutalHonesty Elysio drank the Zar-Iko Memory Elixir, and he became Darkhell again!]]
--->'''Elysio''': GRYF! DO YOU WANT ME TO GET KILLED OR WHAT?!

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--->'''Gryf''': [[BrutalHonesty Elysio drank the Zar-Iko Memory ~~Elixir,~~ Draught, and he ~~became Darkhell again!]]~~
turned back into Darkhell!]]
--->'''Elysio''': GRYF! DO YOU WANT ME TO GET ME KILLED OR ~~WHAT?!~~SOMETHING?!

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