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-->'''Blunder:''' [[PrecisionFStrike Shit!]] Please! It was only a joke!
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* Brown Tom's attempted LastStand against the goblins who were coming for the unicorn mare ends when he takes an arrow in his hat. He ''thinks'' he's shot dead through the head and falls over - later it's revealed that what was hit was the wine bottle he keeps on top of his head inside the hat. And he still thinks he actually died back there! Then again, it was ''really'' good spirits, and it went to waste.
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* Brown Tom's attempted LastStand against the goblins who were coming for the unicorn mare ends when he takes an arrow in his hat. He ''thinks'' he's shot dead through the head and falls over - later it's revealed that what was hit was the wine bottle he keeps on top of his head inside the hat. And he still thinks he actually died back there! Then again, it was ''really'' good spirits, and it went to waste.waste.
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* Blix's assessment of Lily:
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* Blix's assessment of Lily:Lili:
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* Brown Tom's attempted LastStand against the goblins who were coming for the unicorn mare ends when he takes an arrow in his hat. He ''thinks'' he's shot dead through the head and falls over - later it's revealed that what was hit was the wine bottle he keeps on top of his head inside the hat. And he still thinks he actually died back there!
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* Brown Tom's attempted LastStand against the goblins who were coming for the unicorn mare ends when he takes an arrow in his hat. He ''thinks'' he's shot dead through the head and falls over - later it's revealed that what was hit was the wine bottle he keeps on top of his head inside the hat. And he still thinks he actually died back there!there! Then again, it was ''really'' good spirits, and it went to waste.
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-->'''Blix:''' May be innocent, may be sweet -- ain't half as nice as rotting meat.
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-->'''Blix:''' May be innocent, may be sweet -- ain't half as nice as rotting meat.meat.
* Brown Tom's attempted LastStand against the goblins who were coming for the unicorn mare ends when he takes an arrow in his hat. He ''thinks'' he's shot dead through the head and falls over - later it's revealed that what was hit was the wine bottle he keeps on top of his head inside the hat. And he still thinks he actually died back there!
* Brown Tom's attempted LastStand against the goblins who were coming for the unicorn mare ends when he takes an arrow in his hat. He ''thinks'' he's shot dead through the head and falls over - later it's revealed that what was hit was the wine bottle he keeps on top of his head inside the hat. And he still thinks he actually died back there!
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* Darkness tries to get Lili to sit at the table, symbolizing her compliance. After some initial refusal, she starts to... then stands back up and says with a grin, "I prefer to stand." making him throw a big hissy fit as she laughs wildly.
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* Darkness tries to get Lili to sit at the table, symbolizing her compliance. After some initial refusal, she starts to... then stands back up and says with a grin, "I prefer to stand." making him throw a big hissy fit as she laughs wildly.wildly.
* Blix's assessment of Lily:
-->'''Blix:''' May be innocent, may be sweet -- ain't half as nice as rotting meat.
* Blix's assessment of Lily:
-->'''Blix:''' May be innocent, may be sweet -- ain't half as nice as rotting meat.
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* While the goblin/demon things are quite scary to look at, most of their dialogue with one another is pretty humorous.
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* While the goblin/demon things are quite scary to look at, most of their dialogue with one another is pretty humorous.humorous
** Blunder, when he tried [[TheStarscream to usurp Darkness]]...only to immediately learn it was a bad idea.
-->'''Blunder:''' [[PrecisionFStrike Shit!]] Please! It was only a joke!
** Blunder, when he tried [[TheStarscream to usurp Darkness]]...only to immediately learn it was a bad idea.
-->'''Blunder:''' [[PrecisionFStrike Shit!]] Please! It was only a joke!
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* Darkness tries to get Lili to sit at the table, symbolizing her compliance. After some initiaul refusal, she starts to... then stands back up and says with a grin, "I prefer to stand." making him throw a big hissy as she laughs wildly.
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* Darkness tries to get Lili to sit at the table, symbolizing her compliance. After some initiaul initial refusal, she starts to... then stands back up and says with a grin, "I prefer to stand." making him throw a big hissy fit as she laughs wildly.
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Moved to proper disambiguated work title.
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* Most of Gump's lines, just because he's such a LargeHam and such a little guy.
* While the goblin/demon things are quite scary to look at, most of their dialogue with one another is pretty humorous.
* Lili trying to brag about baking for Jack... then admits she just took the cookies from her peasant friend.
* Darkness tries to get Lili to sit at the table, symbolizing her compliance. After some initiaul refusal, she starts to... then stands back up and says with a grin, "I prefer to stand." making him throw a big hissy as she laughs wildly.
* While the goblin/demon things are quite scary to look at, most of their dialogue with one another is pretty humorous.
* Lili trying to brag about baking for Jack... then admits she just took the cookies from her peasant friend.
* Darkness tries to get Lili to sit at the table, symbolizing her compliance. After some initiaul refusal, she starts to... then stands back up and says with a grin, "I prefer to stand." making him throw a big hissy as she laughs wildly.
