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* So Faybelle is once again forgotten in regards to invites to the biggest party around. On top of that, she’s pressured by her mother to perform more direct evil deeds so she decides to mess with a group going to the Fairy Queen’s party in the enchanted forest by leading them into the dark forest. Eventually they come across what they assume is Ginger’s or her mother’s house. What they wind up finding instead is a candy love shack used by Rex and Ginger and open the door on said lovers during an intimate moment just as Ginger starts taking off her clothes!
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* So Faybelle is once again forgotten in regards to invites to the biggest party around. On top of that, she’s pressured by her mother to perform more direct evil deeds so she decides to mess with a group going to the Fairy Queen’s party in the enchanted forest by leading them into the dark forest. Eventually they come across what they assume is Ginger’s or her mother’s house. What they wind up finding instead is a candy love shack used by Rex and Ginger and open the door on said lovers during an intimate moment just as Ginger starts taking off her clothes!clothes!
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* Brook’s hamminess. Especially when she starts trying to ship Rob and Nina.
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* Brook’s hamminess. Especially when she starts trying to ship Rob and Nina.
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** In his introduction as Kamen Rider Verde, he cannot resist doing the most unexpected thing and performing the [[GroinAttack signature move]] of [[VideoGame/MortalKombat Johnny Cage]] on a mirror monster!
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** In his introduction as Kamen Rider Verde, he cannot resist doing the most unexpected thing and performing the [[GroinAttack signature move]] of [[VideoGame/MortalKombat [[Franchise/MortalKombat Johnny Cage]] on a mirror monster!
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* While it is most assuredly no laughing matter, there’s indeed a hilarious moment amidst the Whyte Knight’s first ever battle with the riders. While Max is fighting off the Rogue leader, it comes to a point where Ryuga decides to do Verde proud and perform, what else? A GroinAttack!
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* While it is most assuredly no laughing matter, there’s indeed a hilarious moment amidst the Whyte Knight’s first ever battle with the riders. While Max is fighting off the Rogue leader, it comes to a point where Ryuga decides to do Verde proud and perform, what else? A GroinAttack!GroinAttack!
* So Faybelle is once again forgotten in regards to invites to the biggest party around. On top of that, she’s pressured by her mother to perform more direct evil deeds so she decides to mess with a group going to the Fairy Queen’s party in the enchanted forest by leading them into the dark forest. Eventually they come across what they assume is Ginger’s or her mother’s house. What they wind up finding instead is a candy love shack used by Rex and Ginger and open the door on said lovers during an intimate moment just as Ginger starts taking off her clothes!
* So Faybelle is once again forgotten in regards to invites to the biggest party around. On top of that, she’s pressured by her mother to perform more direct evil deeds so she decides to mess with a group going to the Fairy Queen’s party in the enchanted forest by leading them into the dark forest. Eventually they come across what they assume is Ginger’s or her mother’s house. What they wind up finding instead is a candy love shack used by Rex and Ginger and open the door on said lovers during an intimate moment just as Ginger starts taking off her clothes!
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** When the talent show rolls around, Darren decides to channel the [[Franchise/TheMuppets The Great Gonzo]] and perform a ridiculous act. Juggling on a unicycle while blindfolded and reciting the alphabet backwards. He does about as well as Gonzo would...
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** Darren uses Copy Vent to do impressions of friends annd faculty. Milton is not amused.
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** the Knights who say “NI!” [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer again, we are dead serious!]] The adventurers encounter the very same knights and believe it or not, Kitty, the Cheshire Cat known for her pranks and trickery is petrified by the knights! Much like the King Arthur from that story, they are tasked with acquiring a shrubbery only Rex, having seen the movie will be having none of it and immediately starts chanting the one word feared by the Knights who say “NI!”. And those of us who’ve seen the film know exactly what [=IT=] is.
** The last obstacle is once again the killer rabbit in front of the Only this time it’s a duo of Lapizuli mirror monsters. Who are of course rabbits!
** The last obstacle is once again the killer rabbit in front of the Only this time it’s a duo of Lapizuli mirror monsters. Who are of course rabbits!
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** the Knights who say “NI!” [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer again, we are dead serious!]] The adventurers encounter the very same knights and believe it or not, Kitty, the Cheshire Cat known for her pranks and trickery is petrified by the knights! scared stiff! Much like the King Arthur from that story, they are tasked with acquiring a shrubbery only Rex, having seen the movie will be having none of it and immediately starts chanting the one word feared by the Knights who say “NI!”. And those of us who’ve seen the film know exactly what [=IT=] is.
** The last obstacle is once again the killer rabbit in front of the cave. Only this time it’s a duo of Lapizuli mirror monsters. Who are of course rabbits!
** The last obstacle is once again the killer rabbit in front of the cave. Only this time it’s a duo of Lapizuli mirror monsters. Who are of course rabbits!
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** In his introduction as Kamen Rider Verde, he cannot resist doing the most unexpected thing and performing the [[GroinAttack signature move]] of [[VideoGame/MortalKombat Johnny Cage]] on a mirror monster!
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** In his introduction as Kamen Rider Verde, he cannot resist doing the most unexpected thing and performing the [[GroinAttack signature move]] of [[VideoGame/MortalKombat Johnny Cage]] on a mirror monster!monster!
* Rex’s quest for the Holy Grail. The future Percival is expecting perilous hazards and danger on what is apparently not only a part of his story but a rite of passage in his family line. What does he get? An homage to Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail! To elaborate, the hazards encountered are as follows:
** a literal KillerRabbit that ambushes Hunter. Keep in mind, Hunter is an experienced fighter and Kamen Rider by this point so this is all the more humiliating!
** A flock of savage turkeys. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer no you did not misread that.]] Killer turkeys!
** Goblins filling in for the rude Frenchman guarding a gate. And yes, that includes the cow!
** The bridge of death except it’s guarded by a sphinx instead of an old hermit. What makes it funny is that Kitty Cheshire is first up and stumps the riddle master with the most famous wonderlandian riddle of all. Why is a Raven like a writing desk?
** the Knights who say “NI!” [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer again, we are dead serious!]] The adventurers encounter the very same knights and believe it or not, Kitty, the Cheshire Cat known for her pranks and trickery is petrified by the knights! Much like the King Arthur from that story, they are tasked with acquiring a shrubbery only Rex, having seen the movie will be having none of it and immediately starts chanting the one word feared by the Knights who say “NI!”. And those of us who’ve seen the film know exactly what [=IT=] is.
** The last obstacle is once again the killer rabbit in front of the Only this time it’s a duo of Lapizuli mirror monsters. Who are of course rabbits!
* Rex’s quest for the Holy Grail. The future Percival is expecting perilous hazards and danger on what is apparently not only a part of his story but a rite of passage in his family line. What does he get? An homage to Film/MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail! To elaborate, the hazards encountered are as follows:
** a literal KillerRabbit that ambushes Hunter. Keep in mind, Hunter is an experienced fighter and Kamen Rider by this point so this is all the more humiliating!
** A flock of savage turkeys. [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer no you did not misread that.]] Killer turkeys!
** Goblins filling in for the rude Frenchman guarding a gate. And yes, that includes the cow!
** The bridge of death except it’s guarded by a sphinx instead of an old hermit. What makes it funny is that Kitty Cheshire is first up and stumps the riddle master with the most famous wonderlandian riddle of all. Why is a Raven like a writing desk?
** the Knights who say “NI!” [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer again, we are dead serious!]] The adventurers encounter the very same knights and believe it or not, Kitty, the Cheshire Cat known for her pranks and trickery is petrified by the knights! Much like the King Arthur from that story, they are tasked with acquiring a shrubbery only Rex, having seen the movie will be having none of it and immediately starts chanting the one word feared by the Knights who say “NI!”. And those of us who’ve seen the film know exactly what [=IT=] is.
** The last obstacle is once again the killer rabbit in front of the Only this time it’s a duo of Lapizuli mirror monsters. Who are of course rabbits!
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*Darren. Just Darren.
** In his introduction as Kamen Rider Verde, he cannot resist doing the most unexpected thing and performing the [[GroinAttack signature move]] of [[VideoGame/MortalKombat Johnny Cage]] on a mirror monster!
