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* Tobirama takes Otsuno's statement "The omukade are restless” literally.
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* Tobirama takes Otsuno's statement "The omukade are restless” literally.[[LiteralMinded literally]].
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* The posts where Izuna kidnaps Tobirama so he can find and exorcise some strange presence. The original post mentions an Akimichi Taijima has invited for secret discussion being the culprit. Tobirama finds Zetsu. Uchiha freak out upon finding his discovery. The exchange between the Gate Guard and Butsuma is also amusing.
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* The posts where Izuna kidnaps Tobirama so he can find and exorcise some strange presence. The original post mentions an Akimichi Taijima has invited for secret discussion being the culprit. Tobirama finds Zetsu. Uchiha freak out upon finding his discovery. The exchange between the Gate Guard and Butsuma is also amusing.
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* The posts where Izuna kidnaps Tobirama so he can find and exorcise some strange presence. The original post mentions an Akimichi Taijima has invited for secret discussion being the culprit. Tobirama finds Zetsu. Uchiha freak out upon finding his discovery. The exchange between the Gate Guard and Butsuma is also amusing.
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* The posts where Izuna kidnaps Tobirama so he can find and exorcise some strange presence. The original post mentions an Akimichi Taijima has invited for secret discussion being the culprit. Tobirama finds Zetsu. Uchiha freak out upon finding his discovery. The exchange between the Gate Guard and Butsuma is also amusing.amusing.
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* The string of posts where Izuna finds out that tsukumogami are fairly common and freaks out, becoming paranoid that family heirlooms are telling Tobirama stuff. At one point, he's yelling that they need to burn all the trees. Right after Madara mentions him accusing the furniture of being traitors.
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* The string of posts where Izuna finds out that tsukumogami are fairly common and freaks out, becoming paranoid that family heirlooms are telling Tobirama stuff. At one point, he's yelling that they need to burn all the trees. Right after Madara mentions him accusing the furniture of being traitors.traitors.
* The posts where Izuna kidnaps Tobirama so he can find and exorcise some strange presence. The original post mentions an Akimichi Taijima has invited for secret discussion being the culprit. Tobirama finds Zetsu. Uchiha freak out upon finding his discovery. The exchange between the Gate Guard and Butsuma is also amusing.
* The posts where Izuna kidnaps Tobirama so he can find and exorcise some strange presence. The original post mentions an Akimichi Taijima has invited for secret discussion being the culprit. Tobirama finds Zetsu. Uchiha freak out upon finding his discovery. The exchange between the Gate Guard and Butsuma is also amusing.
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* Hashirama and Butsuma are aware that Tobirama's bed (Botan) isn't in his room. They wonder if he takes it everywhere. Hasirama pouts over the fact Tobirama says the bed is more reliable than him.
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* Hashirama and Butsuma are aware that Tobirama's bed (Botan) isn't in his room. They wonder if he takes it everywhere. Hasirama pouts over the fact Tobirama says the bed is more reliable than him.him.
!Meta
Pandafleur's tumblr has some very amusing entries.
* One entry has Tobirama turning to a dragon in front of Izuna and Izuna screaming, prompting Tobirama to sit on him.
* The string of posts where Izuna finds out that tsukumogami are fairly common and freaks out, becoming paranoid that family heirlooms are telling Tobirama stuff. At one point, he's yelling that they need to burn all the trees. Right after Madara mentions him accusing the furniture of being traitors.
!Meta
Pandafleur's tumblr has some very amusing entries.
* One entry has Tobirama turning to a dragon in front of Izuna and Izuna screaming, prompting Tobirama to sit on him.
* The string of posts where Izuna finds out that tsukumogami are fairly common and freaks out, becoming paranoid that family heirlooms are telling Tobirama stuff. At one point, he's yelling that they need to burn all the trees. Right after Madara mentions him accusing the furniture of being traitors.
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* Some of the chapter titles. For example, the second chapter is called "You should have thought of that before you got eaten".
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* Butsuma finds out Tobirama's possessions survived the fire. Including the bed (Botan).
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* Butsuma finds out Tobirama's possessions survived the fire. Including the bed (Botan).(Botan).
* Hashirama and Butsuma are aware that Tobirama's bed (Botan) isn't in his room. They wonder if he takes it everywhere. Hasirama pouts over the fact Tobirama says the bed is more reliable than him.
* Hashirama and Butsuma are aware that Tobirama's bed (Botan) isn't in his room. They wonder if he takes it everywhere. Hasirama pouts over the fact Tobirama says the bed is more reliable than him.
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* Churippu tries to strange the Kodama enthusiastically.
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* Churippu tries to strange the Kodama enthusiastically. Their contradicting statements, one being happy and wanting cuddles, the other murderous only adds to the humor.
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* Churippu tries to strange the Kodama enthusiastically.
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* Izuna's dramatic tendencies. For making dramatic pauses in his speech, to flipping up onto the ceiling when he could just wall-walk - he is very dramatic.
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* Izuna's dramatic tendencies. For From making dramatic pauses in his speech, to flipping up onto the ceiling when he could just wall-walk - he is very dramatic.
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* Izuna's dramatic tendencies. For making dramatic pauses in his speech, to flipping up onto the ceiling when he could just wall-walk - he is very dramatic.
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* Izuna's dramatic tendencies. For making dramatic pauses in his speech, to flipping up onto the ceiling when he could just wall-walk - he is very dramatic.dramatic.
* Botan suggests eating Butsuma.
* Butsuma finds out Tobirama's possessions survived the fire. Including the bed (Botan).
* Botan suggests eating Butsuma.
* Butsuma finds out Tobirama's possessions survived the fire. Including the bed (Botan).
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* The antics of the Kodoma after Tobirama sneezes while collecting firewood,
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* The antics of the Kodoma after Tobirama sneezes while collecting firewood,firewood.
* Izuna's dramatic tendencies. For making dramatic pauses in his speech, to flipping up onto the ceiling when he could just wall-walk - he is very dramatic.
* Izuna's dramatic tendencies. For making dramatic pauses in his speech, to flipping up onto the ceiling when he could just wall-walk - he is very dramatic.
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* The Senju think Tobirama's odd behavior is due to puberty, resulting in Butsuma trying to have a talk with his younger son, to Tobirama's horror.
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* The Senju think Tobirama's odd behavior is due to puberty, resulting in Butsuma trying wondering if he needs to have a talk with his younger son, to Tobirama's horror.
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* The Senju think Tobirama's odd behavior is due to puberty, resulting in Butsuma having a talk with his younger son, to Tobirama's horror.
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* The Senju think Tobirama's odd behavior is due to puberty, resulting in Butsuma having trying to have a talk with his younger son, to Tobirama's horror.
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* Botan's method of distracting the Crane Woman from Tobirama. He licks him, getting his ectoplasm in his hair. THe horrified Crane Woman promptly throws herself at Botan shrieking.
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* Botan's method of distracting the Crane Woman from Tobirama. He licks him, getting his ectoplasm in his hair. THe The horrified Crane Woman promptly throws herself at Botan shrieking.
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** Tobirama: “I’m blaming you for this Shishou!”
** Otsuno:“Yeah, I’ll give you that one.”
** Otsuno:“Yeah, I’ll give you that one.”
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* Tobirama's thoughts on Osafumi's reaction to Botan and Fox-Izuna. "He hadn’t known you could induce that kind of panic in an Uchiha with anything less than a broken sword, a ring of explosive seals, and a jar of sake."
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* Tobirama's thoughts on Osafumi's reaction to Botan and Fox-Izuna. "He hadn’t known you could induce that kind of panic in an Uchiha with anything less than a broken sword, a ring of explosive seals, and a jar of sake.""
* The antics of the Kodoma after Tobirama sneezes while collecting firewood,
* The antics of the Kodoma after Tobirama sneezes while collecting firewood,
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* The Sarumura innkeeper's reaction to seeing Tobirama again. Actually, just the innkeeper in general.
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* The Sarumura innkeeper's reaction to seeing Tobirama again. Actually, just the innkeeper in general.general.
* Tobirama's thoughts on Osafumi's reaction to Botan and Fox-Izuna. "He hadn’t known you could induce that kind of panic in an Uchiha with anything less than a broken sword, a ring of explosive seals, and a jar of sake."
* Tobirama's thoughts on Osafumi's reaction to Botan and Fox-Izuna. "He hadn’t known you could induce that kind of panic in an Uchiha with anything less than a broken sword, a ring of explosive seals, and a jar of sake."
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* The Sarumura innkeepers reaction to seeing Tobirama again. Actually, just the innkeeper in general.
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* The Sarumura innkeepers innkeeper's reaction to seeing Tobirama again. Actually, just the innkeeper in general.
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* When Tobirama meets Higanbana, the koto-furunushi formed from Elder Akahiko's koto, it stick it's tongue out at him.
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* When Tobirama meets Higanbana, the koto-furunushi formed from Elder Akahiko's koto, it stick sticks it's tongue out at him.
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* Apparently Izuna has a habit of monologuing during katas.
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* Apparently Izuna has a habit of monologuing during katas.katas.
* The Sarumura innkeepers reaction to seeing Tobirama again. Actually, just the innkeeper in general.
* The Sarumura innkeepers reaction to seeing Tobirama again. Actually, just the innkeeper in general.
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* When Otsuno refuses to allow Tobirama to join the Crane Wives on a raid on the Onikuma, the only explanation he'll give is “That way lies bad ideas, and baldness.”
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* When Otsuno refuses to allow Tobirama to join the Crane Wives on a raid on the Onikuma, the only explanation he'll give is “That way lies bad ideas, and baldness.””
* Apparently Izuna has a habit of monologuing during katas.
* Apparently Izuna has a habit of monologuing during katas.
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** Otsuno:“Yeah, I’ll give you that one.”
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** Otsuno:“Yeah, I’ll give you that one.”
* When Otsuno refuses to allow Tobirama to join the Crane Wives on a raid on the Onikuma, the only explanation he'll give is “That way lies bad ideas, and baldness.”
* When Otsuno refuses to allow Tobirama to join the Crane Wives on a raid on the Onikuma, the only explanation he'll give is “That way lies bad ideas, and baldness.”
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* Tobirama takes Otsuno's statement "The omukade are restless” literally.
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* Tobirama takes Otsuno's statement "The omukade are restless” literally.literally.
* Botan's method of distracting the Crane Woman from Tobirama. He licks him, getting his ectoplasm in his hair. THe horrified Crane Woman promptly throws herself at Botan shrieking.
**Tobirama: “I’m blaming you for this Shishou!”
**Otsuno:“Yeah, I’ll give you that one.”
* Botan's method of distracting the Crane Woman from Tobirama. He licks him, getting his ectoplasm in his hair. THe horrified Crane Woman promptly throws herself at Botan shrieking.
**Tobirama: “I’m blaming you for this Shishou!”
**Otsuno:“Yeah, I’ll give you that one.”
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* Tobirama's Sage Training had him wishing dearly to destroy the Training Staff. Otsuno hid it after a few attempts. As a ''broom''.
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* Tobirama's Sage Training had him wishing dearly to destroy the Training Staff. Otsuno hid it after a few attempts. As a ''broom''.''broom''.
* Tobirama takes Otsuno's statement "The omukade are restless” literally.
* Tobirama takes Otsuno's statement "The omukade are restless” literally.
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* Otsuno has never met a cat that likes him. Even though he always waits for invitations before petting, he always gets clawed.
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* Otsuno has never met a cat that likes him. Even though he always waits for invitations before petting, he always gets clawed.clawed.
* Tobirama's Sage Training had him wishing dearly to destroy the Training Staff. Otsuno hid it after a few attempts. As a ''broom''.
* Tobirama's Sage Training had him wishing dearly to destroy the Training Staff. Otsuno hid it after a few attempts. As a ''broom''.
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* When Tobirama meets Higanbana, the koto-furunushi formed from Elder Akahiko's koto, it stick it's tongue out at him.
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* When Tobirama meets Higanbana, the koto-furunushi formed from Elder Akahiko's koto, it stick it's tongue out at him.him.
* Otsuno has never met a cat that likes him. Even though he always waits for invitations before petting, he always gets clawed.
* Otsuno has never met a cat that likes him. Even though he always waits for invitations before petting, he always gets clawed.
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** Hashirama later concludes Tobirama is hitting his rebellious stage.
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** Hashirama later concludes Tobirama is hitting his rebellious stage.stage.
* When Tobirama meets Higanbana, the koto-furunushi formed from Elder Akahiko's koto, it stick it's tongue out at him.
* When Tobirama meets Higanbana, the koto-furunushi formed from Elder Akahiko's koto, it stick it's tongue out at him.
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* The Senju think Tobirama's odd behavior is due to puberty, resulting in Butsuma having a talk with his younger son, to Tobirama's horror.
** Hashirama later concludes Tobirama is hitting his rebellious stage.
** Hashirama later concludes Tobirama is hitting his rebellious stage.
