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* The Epilogue reveals that Twilight has spoken extensively with the Magician of Coal Crater, and was excited to learn that he is old enough to have personally met Starswirl the Bearded, one of her heroes. What the Magician has to ''say'' about Starswirl, however, is something of a disappointment for her…[[spoiler: Particularly the parts about him having an impenetrable lisp, and wearing his famous bells because he was paranoid about insects stealing his clothes.]]
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* The Epilogue reveals that Twilight has spoken extensively with the Magician of Coal Crater, and was excited to learn that he is old enough to have personally met Starswirl the Bearded, one of her heroes. What the Magician has to ''say'' about Starswirl, however, is something of a disappointment for her…[[spoiler: Particularly her…particularly the parts about him having an impenetrable lisp, and wearing his famous bells because he was paranoid about insects stealing his clothes.]]
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--->'''Applejack:''' Mah ears ain't drunkerer than yer mouth.
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--->'''Applejack:''' Mah ears ain't drunkerer than yer mouth.mouth.
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-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Hey Spike, you made a totally awesome splash when you hit the water!...At least you kept your rump up!
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-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Hey Spike, you made a totally awesome splash when you hit the water!...At water!…At least you kept your rump up!
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-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry... ([[Main/DudeNotFunny tries muffling her giggles with one hoof]])
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-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry... Sorry… ([[Main/DudeNotFunny tries muffling her giggles with one hoof]])
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-->'''Spike''': Glad... it's so... amusing...
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry... [[Main/DudeNotFunny ahahahah! Aha... ahuh... hummhmm...]]
* In chapter 10, Spike finds out that Sapphire Shores wrote an overly sappy, sad song about him called “Full of Fire.” Spike’s initial reaction to this is, hiding himself under his wings forever to hide [[Main/TheWoobie himself from embarrassment]]. But what really makes this so funny is Twilight and the [[Main/KickTheDog others reaction]].
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry... [[Main/DudeNotFunny ahahahah! Aha... ahuh... hummhmm...]]
* In chapter 10, Spike finds out that Sapphire Shores wrote an overly sappy, sad song about him called “Full of Fire.” Spike’s initial reaction to this is, hiding himself under his wings forever to hide [[Main/TheWoobie himself from embarrassment]]. But what really makes this so funny is Twilight and the [[Main/KickTheDog others reaction]].
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-->'''Spike''': Glad... it's so... amusing...
Glad…it's so…amusing…
-->'''Rainbow Dash''':Sorry... [[Main/DudeNotFunny Sorry…[[Main/DudeNotFunny ahahahah! Aha... ahuh... hummhmm...]]
Aha…ahuh…hummhmm…]]
* In chapter 10, Spike finds out that Sapphire Shores wrote an overly sappy, sad song about him called “Full of Fire.” Spike’s initial reaction to this is, hiding himself under his wings forever to hide [[Main/TheWoobie himself from embarrassment]]. But what really makes this so funny is Twilight and the [[Main/KickTheDogothers others' reaction]].
-->'''Rainbow Dash''':
* In chapter 10, Spike finds out that Sapphire Shores wrote an overly sappy, sad song about him called “Full of Fire.” Spike’s initial reaction to this is, hiding himself under his wings forever to hide [[Main/TheWoobie himself from embarrassment]]. But what really makes this so funny is Twilight and the [[Main/KickTheDog
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-->'''Scootaloo''': In case of emergency, don't – and I repeat don't – jump off Spike. We have a unicorn standing by if he hits a sudden downdraft or something...
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-->'''Scootaloo''': In case of emergency, don't – and I repeat don't – jump off Spike. We have a unicorn standing by if he hits a sudden downdraft or something...something…
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-->'''Scootaloo''':... but she can't catch all of you and a dragon, so just stay put. Keep your seatbelt on at all times, and the pilot better not tell you to take it off, otherwise he's lookin' at a tail-kickin'."
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** Don't forget the others reactions:
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** Don't forget the others others' reactions:
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* The Epilogue reveals that Twilight has spoken extensively with the Magician of Coal Crater, and was excited to learn that he is old enough to have personally met Starswirl the Bearded, one of her heroes. What the Magician has to ''say'' about Starswirl, however, is something of a disappointment for her... [[spoiler: Particularly the parts about him having an impenetrable lisp, and wearing his famous bells because he was paranoid about insects stealing his clothes.]]
* Applejack and Rainbow get drunk at the Gala. Every part of their antics is hilarious, from Pinkie's announcement of their states...
* Applejack and Rainbow get drunk at the Gala. Every part of their antics is hilarious, from Pinkie's announcement of their states...
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* The Epilogue reveals that Twilight has spoken extensively with the Magician of Coal Crater, and was excited to learn that he is old enough to have personally met Starswirl the Bearded, one of her heroes. What the Magician has to ''say'' about Starswirl, however, is something of a disappointment for her... [[spoiler: her…[[spoiler: Particularly the parts about him having an impenetrable lisp, and wearing his famous bells because he was paranoid about insects stealing his clothes.]]
* Applejack and Rainbow get drunk at the Gala. Every part of their antics is hilarious, from Pinkie's announcement of theirstates...states…
* Applejack and Rainbow get drunk at the Gala. Every part of their antics is hilarious, from Pinkie's announcement of their
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-->'''Fluttershy:''' Is Applejack...drunk?Applejack…drunk?
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** ...to Rainbow bawling over how "awesome" Spike is...
--->'''Rainbow Dash:''' He's...so...grown-up...You are...''you are,'' you're so awesome it totally and completely and totally and ''totally'' boggles my mind. You boggle. ''BOGGLE.'' Best dragon ever. ''Ever.'' You...you're the best...You're the ''besht.''
** ...to Pinkie and Spike thinking up nicknames for their inebriated friends...
--->'''Rainbow Dash:''' He's...so...grown-up...You are...''you are,'' you're so awesome it totally and completely and totally and ''totally'' boggles my mind. You boggle. ''BOGGLE.'' Best dragon ever. ''Ever.'' You...you're the best...You're the ''besht.''
** ...to Pinkie and Spike thinking up nicknames for their inebriated friends...
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** ...to Rainbow bawling over how "awesome" Spike is...
is…
--->'''Rainbow Dash:'''He's...so...grown-up...He's…so…grown-up...You are...''you are…''you are,'' you're so awesome it totally and completely and totally and ''totally'' boggles my mind. You boggle. ''BOGGLE.'' Best dragon ever. ''Ever.'' You...you're You…you're the best...You're best…You're the ''besht.''
** ...to ** …to Pinkie and Spike thinking up nicknames for their inebriated friends...
--->'''Rainbow Dash:'''
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-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' He's...so...grown-up...You are...''you are,'' you're so awesome it totally and completely and totally and ''totally'' boggles my mind. You boggle. ''BOGGLE.'' Best dragon ever. ''Ever.'' You...you're the best...You're the ''besht.''
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-->'''Pinkie:''' Oh, oh, oh, I know! We've got Rainbow Splash!
-->'''Spike:''' Appletanked.
-->'''Pinkie:''' Rainbow Sloshed!
-->'''Spike:''' Dash of Spirits!
-->'''Pinkie:''' Applejack!
-->'''Spike:''' ''({{beat}})'' I got nothin'.
-->'''Pinkie:''' [[BrickJoke Appletini]] still works.
-->'''Spike:''' I was trying for new material.
-->'''Spike:''' Appletanked.
-->'''Pinkie:''' Rainbow Sloshed!
-->'''Spike:''' Dash of Spirits!
-->'''Pinkie:''' Applejack!
-->'''Spike:''' ''({{beat}})'' I got nothin'.
-->'''Pinkie:''' [[BrickJoke Appletini]] still works.
-->'''Spike:''' I was trying for new material.
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-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' Hey, look, AJ! It's Sapphire Surely!
-->'''Applejack:''' It's Shores, yer silly filly.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' Oh, whoops. Sorry, Miss Surely.
-->'''Applejack:''' ''Shores.''
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' That's what I said! Your ears are drunk.
-->'''Applejack:''' Mah ears ain't drunkerer than yer mouth.
-->'''Applejack:''' It's Shores, yer silly filly.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' Oh, whoops. Sorry, Miss Surely.
-->'''Applejack:''' ''Shores.''
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' That's what I said! Your ears are drunk.
-->'''Applejack:''' Mah ears ain't drunkerer than yer mouth.
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* Applejack and Rainbow get drunk at the Gala. Every part of that is hilarious, from Pinkie's announcement of their states...
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* Applejack and Rainbow get drunk at the Gala. Every part of that their antics is hilarious, from Pinkie's announcement of their states...
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** to them disagreeing on how to say Sapphire Shores' name.
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-->'''Pinkie:''' Oh, oh, oh, I know! We've got Rainbow Splash!
-->'''Spike:''' Appletanked.
-->'''Pinkie:''' Rainbow Sloshed!
-->'''Spike:''' Dash of Spirits!
-->'''Pinkie:''' Applejack!
-->'''Spike:''' ''({{beat}})'' I got nothin'.
-->'''Pinkie:''' [[BrickJoke Appletini]] still works.
-->'''Spike:''' I was trying for new material.
** ...to them disagreeing on how to say Sapphire Shores' name.
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-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' He's...so...grown-up...You are...''you are,'' you're so awesome it totally and completely and totally and ''totally'' boggles my mind. You boggle. ''BOGGLE.'' Best dragon ever. ''Ever.'' You...you're the best...You're the ''besht.''
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-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' He's...so...grown-up...You are...''you are,'' you're so awesome it totally and completely and totally and ''totally'' boggles my mind. You boggle. ''BOGGLE.'' Best dragon ever. ''Ever.'' You...you're the best...You're the ''besht.''''
** to them disagreeing on how to say Sapphire Shores' name.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' Hey, look, AJ! It's Sapphire Surely!
-->'''Applejack:''' It's Shores, yer silly filly.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' Oh, whoops. Sorry, Miss Surely.
-->'''Applejack:''' ''Shores.''
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' That's what I said! Your ears are drunk.
-->'''Applejack:''' Mah ears ain't drunkerer than yer mouth.
** to them disagreeing on how to say Sapphire Shores' name.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' Hey, look, AJ! It's Sapphire Surely!
-->'''Applejack:''' It's Shores, yer silly filly.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' Oh, whoops. Sorry, Miss Surely.
-->'''Applejack:''' ''Shores.''
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' That's what I said! Your ears are drunk.
-->'''Applejack:''' Mah ears ain't drunkerer than yer mouth.
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-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' He's...so...
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-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' He's...so...grown-up...You are...''you are,'' you're so awesome it totally and completely and totally and ''totally'' boggles my mind. You boggle. ''BOGGLE.'' Best dragon ever. ''Ever.'' You...you're the best...You're the ''besht.''
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-->'''Rainbow Dash''':"Hey Spike," she chuckled, "You made a totally awesome splash when you hit the water!"
-->''([[Main/TheWoobie He groans and closes his eyes]]. His whole body feeling like it had been pummeled by experts)''
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': At least you kept your rump up
-->'''Spike''': [[Main/SarcasmMode Hooray for me]]
-->''([[Main/TheWoobie He groans and closes his eyes]]. His whole body feeling like it had been pummeled by experts)''
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': At least you kept your rump up
-->'''Spike''': [[Main/SarcasmMode Hooray for me]]
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-->''([[Main/TheWoobie He groans and closes his eyes]]. His whole body feeling like it had been pummeled by experts)''
-->'''Spike''': [[Main/SarcasmMode Hooray for
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-->'''Spike''': [[Main/ThatLiarLies You lied]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry ([[Main/DudeNotFunny tries muffling her giggles with one hoof]])
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry ([[Main/DudeNotFunny tries muffling her giggles with one hoof]])
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-->'''Spike''': [[Main/ThatLiarLies You lied]]
lied]].
-->'''Rainbow Dash''':Sorry Sorry... ([[Main/DudeNotFunny tries muffling her giggles with one hoof]])
-->'''Rainbow Dash''':
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-->'''Spike''': Breaking News at Ten: Wonderbolts Star Finally Cracks. Crazy Pegasus Kills Incredibly Handsome Young Dragon Stone Dead
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[Main/ComicallyMissingThePoint That was a pretty wicked somersault you just did]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[Main/ComicallyMissingThePoint That was a pretty wicked somersault you just did]]
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-->'''Spike''': Breaking News at Ten: Wonderbolts Star Finally Cracks. Crazy Pegasus Kills Incredibly Handsome Young Dragon Stone Dead
Dead.
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[Main/ComicallyMissingThePoint That was a pretty wicked somersault you justdid]]did]].
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[Main/ComicallyMissingThePoint That was a pretty wicked somersault you just
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-->'''Rainbow Dash''': "Additional Report: [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Dragon Blubs and Moans Just Like a Little Filly]]
-->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker "Policeponies Warn That Pegasus Is Obviously Deranged and Dangerous. Do Not Approach]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Dragon should get his backside back up that hill and have another go
-->'''Spike''': Pegasus loves to see Dragon suffer
-->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker "Policeponies Warn That Pegasus Is Obviously Deranged and Dangerous. Do Not Approach]]
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Dragon should get his backside back up that hill and have another go
-->'''Spike''': Pegasus loves to see Dragon suffer
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-->'''Rainbow Dash''': "Additional Report: [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Dragon Blubs and Moans Just Like a Little Filly]]
Filly]].
-->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker "Policeponies Warn That Pegasus Is Obviously Deranged and Dangerous. Do NotApproach]]
Approach]].
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Dragon should get his backside back up that hill and have anothergo
go.
-->'''Spike''': Pegasus loves to see Dragonsuffersuffer.
-->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker "Policeponies Warn That Pegasus Is Obviously Deranged and Dangerous. Do Not
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Dragon should get his backside back up that hill and have another
-->'''Spike''': Pegasus loves to see Dragon
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-->'''Spike''': Glad... it's so... amusing,
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-->'''Spike''': Glad... it's so... amusing,amusing...
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-->'''Spike''': I'm fine with downdrafts
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-->'''Spike''': I'm fine with downdraftsdowndrafts.
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-->'''Scootaloo''': I'm doin' my civic duty,"
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-->'''Scootaloo''': I'm doin' my civic duty," duty.
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-->'''Spike''': You are in so much trouble
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-->'''Spike''': You are in so much troubletrouble.
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-->''(His claws bunched in the soil of the clifftop as he blushes)''
-->'''Spike''': I hate you
-->'''Scootaloo''': I know
-->'''Spike''': I hate you
-->'''Scootaloo''': I know
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-->'''Scootaloo''': I
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-->'''Pinkie Pie''': Cute
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-->'''Pinkie Pie''': CuteCute!
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-->'''Spike''': Oh, shut up
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-->'''Spike''': Oh, shut upup.
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* The Epilogue reveals that Twilight has spoken extensively with the Magician of Coal Crater, and was excited to learn that he is old enough to have personally met Starswirl the Bearded, one of her heroes. What the Magician has to ''say'' about Starswirl, however, is something of a disappointment for her... [[spoiler: Particularly the parts about him having an impenetrable lisp, and wearing his famous bells because he was paranoid about insects stealing his clothes.]]
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* The Epilogue reveals that Twilight has spoken extensively with the Magician of Coal Crater, and was excited to learn that he is old enough to have personally met Starswirl the Bearded, one of her heroes. What the Magician has to ''say'' about Starswirl, however, is something of a disappointment for her... [[spoiler: Particularly the parts about him having an impenetrable lisp, and wearing his famous bells because he was paranoid about insects stealing his clothes.]]]]
* Applejack and Rainbow get drunk at the Gala. Every part of that is hilarious, from Pinkie's announcement of their states...
-->'''Pinkie:''' I found them!
-->'''Fluttershy:''' Is Applejack...drunk?
-->'''Pinkie:''' Of course not, silly. She's ''[[InsistentTerminology plastered.]] ''
** ...to Rainbow bawling over how "awesome" Spike is...
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' He's...so...
* Applejack and Rainbow get drunk at the Gala. Every part of that is hilarious, from Pinkie's announcement of their states...
-->'''Pinkie:''' I found them!
-->'''Fluttershy:''' Is Applejack...drunk?
-->'''Pinkie:''' Of course not, silly. She's ''[[InsistentTerminology plastered.]] ''
** ...to Rainbow bawling over how "awesome" Spike is...
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' He's...so...
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* The Epilogue reveals that Twilight has spoken extensively with the Magician of Coal Crater, and was excited to learn that he is old enough to have personally met Starswirl the Bearded, one of her heroes. What the Magician has to ''say'' about Starswirl, however, is something of a disappointment for her... [[spoiler: Particularly the parts about him having an impenetrable lisp, and wearing his famous bells because he was paranoid about insects stealing his clothes.]]
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** When Spike is giving air-rides to some ponies, Scootaloo tell the passengers what the rules are. Needless to say {{hilarity ensues}}
->'''Scootaloo''': In case of emergency, don't – and I repeat don't – jump off Spike. We have a unicorn standing by if he hits a sudden downdraft or something...
->'''Spike''': I'm fine with downdrafts
->'''Scootaloo''':... but she can't catch all of you and a dragon, so just stay put. Keep your seatbelt on at all times, and the pilot better not tell you to take it off, otherwise he's lookin' at a tail-kickin'."
->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Who gave you this job anyway?]]
->'''Scootaloo''': I volunteered. Now, shhh. Please keep your hooves close to you at all times, and please don't tickle the pilot mid-flight."
->'''Spike ''': Did you make [[Main/UnreliableNarrator all this up too?]]
->'''Scootaloo''': I'm doin' my civic duty,"
->'''Scootaloo''': Cheering, whooping and yells of 'YEAH!' are strongly encouraged, and you may talk to your pilot as long as he's not bein' a grumpy-pants. [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Which he is, so don't talk to him.]]
->'''Spike''': You are in so much trouble
->'''Scootaloo''': "Full of Fire,” Spike.
->''(His claws bunched in the soil of the clifftop as he blushes)''
->'''Scootaloo''': In case of emergency, don't – and I repeat don't – jump off Spike. We have a unicorn standing by if he hits a sudden downdraft or something...
->'''Spike''': I'm fine with downdrafts
->'''Scootaloo''':... but she can't catch all of you and a dragon, so just stay put. Keep your seatbelt on at all times, and the pilot better not tell you to take it off, otherwise he's lookin' at a tail-kickin'."
->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Who gave you this job anyway?]]
->'''Scootaloo''': I volunteered. Now, shhh. Please keep your hooves close to you at all times, and please don't tickle the pilot mid-flight."
->'''Spike ''': Did you make [[Main/UnreliableNarrator all this up too?]]
->'''Scootaloo''': I'm doin' my civic duty,"
->'''Scootaloo''': Cheering, whooping and yells of 'YEAH!' are strongly encouraged, and you may talk to your pilot as long as he's not bein' a grumpy-pants. [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Which he is, so don't talk to him.]]
->'''Spike''': You are in so much trouble
->'''Scootaloo''': "Full of Fire,” Spike.
->''(His claws bunched in the soil of the clifftop as he blushes)''
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->'''Spike
-->'''Spike ''': Did you make [[Main/UnreliableNarrator all this up too?]]
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* In chapter 10, Spike finds out that Sapphire Shores wrote an overly sappy, sad song about him called “Full of Fire.” Spike’s initial reaction to this is, hiding himself under his wings forever to hide [[Main/TheWoobie himself from embarrassment]]. But what really makes this so funny is Twilight and the [[Main/KickTheDog others reaction]].
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* In chapter 10, Spike finds out that Sapphire Shores wrote an overly sappy, sad song about him called “Full of Fire.” Spike’s initial reaction to this is, hiding himself under his wings forever to hide [[Main/TheWoobie himself from embarrassment]]. But what really makes this so funny is Twilight and the [[Main/KickTheDog others reaction]]. reaction]].
** The chapter with the Gala includes Applejack and Rainbow singing the song. Very loudly. While completely pissed. The rest of their drunken arguments count as well.
** The chapter with the Gala includes Applejack and Rainbow singing the song. Very loudly. While completely pissed. The rest of their drunken arguments count as well.
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-->'''pinkie Pie''': Cute
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->'''Rainbow Dash''':"Hey Spike," she chuckled, "You made a totally awesome splash when you hit the water!"
->''([[Main/TheWoobie He groans and closes his eyes]]. His whole body feeling like it had been pummeled by experts)''
->'''Rainbow Dash''': At least you kept your rump up
->'''Spike''': [[Main/SarcasmMode Hooray for me]]
->''([[Main/TheWoobie He groans and closes his eyes]]. His whole body feeling like it had been pummeled by experts)''
->'''Rainbow Dash''': At least you kept your rump up
->'''Spike''': [[Main/SarcasmMode Hooray for me]]
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* Also:
-->'''Spike ''': Did you make [[Main/UnreliableNarrator all this up too?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': I'm doin' my civic duty,"
-->'''Scootaloo''': Cheering, whooping and yells of 'YEAH!' are strongly encouraged, and you may talk to your pilot as long as he's not bein' a grumpy-pants. [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Which he is, so don't talk to him.]]
-->'''Spike''': You are in so much trouble
-->'''Scootaloo''': "Full of Fire,” Spike.
-->''(His claws bunched in the soil of the clifftop as he blushes)''
-->'''Spike ''': Did you make [[Main/UnreliableNarrator all this up too?]]
-->'''Scootaloo''': I'm doin' my civic duty,"
-->'''Scootaloo''': Cheering, whooping and yells of 'YEAH!' are strongly encouraged, and you may talk to your pilot as long as he's not bein' a grumpy-pants. [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Which he is, so don't talk to him.]]
-->'''Spike''': You are in so much trouble
-->'''Scootaloo''': "Full of Fire,” Spike.
-->''(His claws bunched in the soil of the clifftop as he blushes)''
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->'''Spike ''': Did you make [[Main/UnreliableNarrator all this up too?]]
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->'''Spike''': I thought I burned all of those!
** Twilight, and the others reactions, are equally hilarious:
** Twilight, and the others reactions, are equally hilarious:
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** It doesn't help that, Scoop Headlines had won his third [[Main/AddedAlliterativeAppeal Ponitzer Prize]] that year, with an article featuring a picture of Spike's scaly rump.
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** It doesn't help that, Scoop Headlines had won his third [[Main/AddedAlliterativeAppeal Ponitzer Prize]] that year, with an article featuring a picture of Spike's scaly rump.
rump.
* The author puts rather hilarious disclaimers at the start of the chapters. One example, from chapter 7:
--> ''My ponies! Muaahahah! Mine, all mine! M-my p-ponies! Mine? Please? Maybe one? Just one? Just a little one then? How about a background one? Aw dammit. Selfish Hasbro.''
* The author puts rather hilarious disclaimers at the start of the chapters. One example, from chapter 7:
--> ''My ponies! Muaahahah! Mine, all mine! M-my p-ponies! Mine? Please? Maybe one? Just one? Just a little one then? How about a background one? Aw dammit. Selfish Hasbro.''
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->'''Spike''': [[Main/ThatLiarLies You lied]]
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry ([[Main/DudeNotFunny tries muffling her giggles with one hoof]])
->'''Spike''': You've killed me.
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Hey, if you will insist on falling...
->'''Spike''': Breaking News at Ten: Wonderbolts Star Finally Cracks. Crazy Pegasus Kills Incredibly Handsome Young Dragon Stone Dead
->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[Main/ComicallyMissingThePoint That was a pretty wicked somersault you just did]]
->'''Spike''': "Eyewitnesses Say; 'It Was a Pretty Wicked Somersault'."
->'''Rainbow Dash''': "Additional Report: [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Dragon Blubs and Moans Just Like a Little Filly]]
->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker "Policeponies Warn That Pegasus Is Obviously Deranged and Dangerous. Do Not Approach]]
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Dragon should get his backside back up that hill and have another go
->'''Spike''': Pegasus loves to see Dragon suffer
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry ([[Main/DudeNotFunny tries muffling her giggles with one hoof]])
->'''Spike''': You've killed me.
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Hey, if you will insist on falling...
->'''Spike''': Breaking News at Ten: Wonderbolts Star Finally Cracks. Crazy Pegasus Kills Incredibly Handsome Young Dragon Stone Dead
->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[Main/ComicallyMissingThePoint That was a pretty wicked somersault you just did]]
->'''Spike''': "Eyewitnesses Say; 'It Was a Pretty Wicked Somersault'."
->'''Rainbow Dash''': "Additional Report: [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Dragon Blubs and Moans Just Like a Little Filly]]
->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker "Policeponies Warn That Pegasus Is Obviously Deranged and Dangerous. Do Not Approach]]
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Dragon should get his backside back up that hill and have another go
->'''Spike''': Pegasus loves to see Dragon suffer
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->''(Spike drags himself out of the water, and coughs up a fish. Dash takes one look at him and [[Main/DudeNotFunny keels over laughing]])''
->'''Spike''': Glad... it's so... amusing,
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry... [[Main/DudeNotFunny ahahahah! Aha... ahuh... hummhmm...]]
->'''Spike''': Glad... it's so... amusing,
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry... [[Main/DudeNotFunny ahahahah! Aha... ahuh... hummhmm...]]
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->'''Spike ''': Did you make [[Main/UnreliableNarrator all this up too?]]
->'''Scootaloo''': I'm doin' my civic duty,"
->'''Scootaloo''': Cheering, whooping and yells of 'YEAH!' are strongly encouraged, and you may talk to your pilot as long as he's not bein' a grumpy-pants. [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Which he is, so don't talk to him.]]
->'''Spike''': You are in so much trouble
->'''Scootaloo''': "Full of Fire,” Spike.
->''(His claws bunched in the soil of the clifftop as he blushes)''
->'''Spike''': I hate you
->'''Scootaloo''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker I know]]
->'''Scootaloo''': I'm doin' my civic duty,"
->'''Scootaloo''': Cheering, whooping and yells of 'YEAH!' are strongly encouraged, and you may talk to your pilot as long as he's not bein' a grumpy-pants. [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Which he is, so don't talk to him.]]
->'''Spike''': You are in so much trouble
->'''Scootaloo''': "Full of Fire,” Spike.
->''(His claws bunched in the soil of the clifftop as he blushes)''
->'''Spike''': I hate you
->'''Scootaloo''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker I know]]
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-->'''Spike''': I hate you
-->'''Scootaloo''': I know
*When a newspaper article about Spike comes out, there's photo of his newly-hatched self, stuffing his tail into his mouth. His reaction to it is priceless:
->'''Spike''': I
->'''Scootaloo''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker
**Twilight, and the others reactions, are equally hilarious:
-->'''Fluttershy''':You're soooo cute. Widdle baby waby Spikey-wikey.
-->'''Spike''':Must you?
-->'''Twilight''': Well, you were cute.
-->'''pinkie Pie''': Cute
-->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry, Spike, you were cute ''(snickers)''
-->'''Spike''': Oh, shut up
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* In the epilogue, Spike couldn't get through the courthouse door, and his hindquarters were left sticking outside for the whole of Canterlot to photograph.
**It doesn't help that, Scoop Headlines had won his third [[Main/AddedAlliterativeAppeal Ponitzer Prize]] that year, with an article featuring a picture of Spike's scaly rump.
**It doesn't help that, Scoop Headlines had won his third [[Main/AddedAlliterativeAppeal Ponitzer Prize]] that year, with an article featuring a picture of Spike's scaly rump.
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->'''Scootaloo''': [[Main/Blackmail"Full of Fire,”]] Spike.
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->'''Scootaloo''': [[Main/Blackmail"Full "Full of Fire,”]] Fire,” Spike.
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''([[Main/TheWoobie He groans and closes his eyes]]. His whole body feeling like it had been pummeled by experts)''
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''(Spike drags himself out of the water, and coughs up a fish. Dash takes one look at him and [[Main/DudeNotFunny keels over laughing]])''
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**When Spike is giving air-rides to some ponies, Scootaloo tell the passengers what the rules are. Needless to say {{hilarity ensues}}
->'''Scootaloo''': In case of emergency, don't – and I repeat don't – jump off Spike. We have a unicorn standing by if he hits a sudden downdraft or something...
->'''Spike''': I'm fine with downdrafts
->'''Scootaloo''':... but she can't catch all of you and a dragon, so just stay put. Keep your seatbelt on at all times, and the pilot better not tell you to take it off, otherwise he's lookin' at a tail-kickin'."
->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Who gave you this job anyway?]]
->'''Scootaloo''': I volunteered. Now, shhh. Please keep your hooves close to you at all times, and please don't tickle the pilot mid-flight."
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->'''Spike ''': Did you make [[Main/UnreliableNarrator all this up too?]]
->'''Scootaloo''': I'm doin' my civic duty,"
->'''Scootaloo''': Cheering, whooping and yells of 'YEAH!' are strongly encouraged, and you may talk to your pilot as long as he's not bein' a grumpy-pants. [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Which he is, so don't talk to him.]]
->'''Spike''': You are in so much trouble
->'''Scootaloo''': [[Main/Blackmail"Full of Fire,”]] Spike.
->''(His claws bunched in the soil of the clifftop as he blushes)''
->'''Spike''': I hate you
->'''Scootaloo''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker I know]]
->'''Scootaloo''': In case of emergency, don't – and I repeat don't – jump off Spike. We have a unicorn standing by if he hits a sudden downdraft or something...
->'''Spike''': I'm fine with downdrafts
->'''Scootaloo''':... but she can't catch all of you and a dragon, so just stay put. Keep your seatbelt on at all times, and the pilot better not tell you to take it off, otherwise he's lookin' at a tail-kickin'."
->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Who gave you this job anyway?]]
->'''Scootaloo''': I volunteered. Now, shhh. Please keep your hooves close to you at all times, and please don't tickle the pilot mid-flight."
*Also:
->'''Spike ''': Did you make [[Main/UnreliableNarrator all this up too?]]
->'''Scootaloo''': I'm doin' my civic duty,"
->'''Scootaloo''': Cheering, whooping and yells of 'YEAH!' are strongly encouraged, and you may talk to your pilot as long as he's not bein' a grumpy-pants. [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Which he is, so don't talk to him.]]
->'''Spike''': You are in so much trouble
->'''Scootaloo''': [[Main/Blackmail"Full of Fire,”]] Spike.
->''(His claws bunched in the soil of the clifftop as he blushes)''
->'''Spike''': I hate you
->'''Scootaloo''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker I know]]
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** After his second attempt also ended in failure, we got this:
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*** And after trying again for a [[Main/RuleOfThree THIRD TIME]], and [[Main/FailureIsTheOnlyOption failing]], we got this:
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->'''Rainbow Dash''':Sorry... [[Main/DudeNotFunny ahahahah! Aha... ahuh... hummhmm...]]
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->'''Rainbow Dash''':Sorry...Dash''': Sorry... [[Main/DudeNotFunny ahahahah! Aha... ahuh... hummhmm...]]
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*Spike’s first flight lesson in Chapter 4
->'''Rainbow Dash''':"Hey Spike," she chuckled, "You made a totally awesome splash when you hit the water!"
''([[Main/TheWoobie He groans and closes his eyes]]. His whole body feeling like it had been pummeled by experts)''
->'''Rainbow Dash''': At least you kept your rump up
->'''Spike''': [[Main/SarcasmMode Hooray for me]]
**After his second attempt also ended in failure, we got this:
->'''Spike''': [[Main/ThatLiarLies You lied]]
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry ([[Main/DudeNotFunny tries muffling her giggles with one hoof]])
->'''Spike''': You've killed me.
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Hey, if you will insist on falling...
->'''Spike''': Breaking News at Ten: Wonderbolts Star Finally Cracks. Crazy Pegasus Kills Incredibly Handsome Young Dragon Stone Dead
->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[Main/ComicallyMissingThePoint That was a pretty wicked somersault you just did]]
->'''Spike''': "Eyewitnesses Say; 'It Was a Pretty Wicked Somersault'."
->'''Rainbow Dash''': "Additional Report: [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Dragon Blubs and Moans Just Like a Little Filly]]
->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker "Policeponies Warn That Pegasus Is Obviously Deranged and Dangerous. Do Not Approach]]
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Dragon should get his backside back up that hill and have another go
->'''Spike''': Pegasus loves to see Dragon suffer
**I thought this was hilarious because both characters are pretty much [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Deadpan Snarking]] each other in third person.
***And after trying again for a [[Main/RuleOfThree THIRD TIME]], and [[Main/FailureIsTheOnlyOption failing]], we got this:
''(Spike drags himself out of the water, and coughs up a fish. Dash takes one look at him and [[Main/DudeNotFunny keels over laughing]])''
->'''Spike''': Glad... it's so... amusing,
Sorry... [[Main/DudeNotFunny ahahahah! Aha... ahuh... hummhmm...]]
* In chapter 10, Spike finds out that Sapphire Shores wrote an overly sappy, sad song about him called “Full of Fire.” Spike’s initial reaction to this is, hiding himself under his wings forever to hide [[Main/TheWoobie himself from embarrassment]]. But what really makes this so funny is Twilight and the [[Main/KickTheDog others reaction]].
->'''Rainbow Dash''':"Hey Spike," she chuckled, "You made a totally awesome splash when you hit the water!"
''([[Main/TheWoobie He groans and closes his eyes]]. His whole body feeling like it had been pummeled by experts)''
->'''Rainbow Dash''': At least you kept your rump up
->'''Spike''': [[Main/SarcasmMode Hooray for me]]
**After his second attempt also ended in failure, we got this:
->'''Spike''': [[Main/ThatLiarLies You lied]]
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Sorry ([[Main/DudeNotFunny tries muffling her giggles with one hoof]])
->'''Spike''': You've killed me.
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Hey, if you will insist on falling...
->'''Spike''': Breaking News at Ten: Wonderbolts Star Finally Cracks. Crazy Pegasus Kills Incredibly Handsome Young Dragon Stone Dead
->'''Rainbow Dash''': [[Main/ComicallyMissingThePoint That was a pretty wicked somersault you just did]]
->'''Spike''': "Eyewitnesses Say; 'It Was a Pretty Wicked Somersault'."
->'''Rainbow Dash''': "Additional Report: [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Dragon Blubs and Moans Just Like a Little Filly]]
->'''Spike''': [[Main/DeadpanSnarker "Policeponies Warn That Pegasus Is Obviously Deranged and Dangerous. Do Not Approach]]
->'''Rainbow Dash''': Dragon should get his backside back up that hill and have another go
->'''Spike''': Pegasus loves to see Dragon suffer
**I thought this was hilarious because both characters are pretty much [[Main/DeadpanSnarker Deadpan Snarking]] each other in third person.
***And after trying again for a [[Main/RuleOfThree THIRD TIME]], and [[Main/FailureIsTheOnlyOption failing]], we got this:
''(Spike drags himself out of the water, and coughs up a fish. Dash takes one look at him and [[Main/DudeNotFunny keels over laughing]])''
->'''Spike''': Glad... it's so... amusing,
Sorry... [[Main/DudeNotFunny ahahahah! Aha... ahuh... hummhmm...]]
* In chapter 10, Spike finds out that Sapphire Shores wrote an overly sappy, sad song about him called “Full of Fire.” Spike’s initial reaction to this is, hiding himself under his wings forever to hide [[Main/TheWoobie himself from embarrassment]]. But what really makes this so funny is Twilight and the [[Main/KickTheDog others reaction]].