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-->'''Arlo:''' We'll get it eventually.
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* Ansel experimenting with nicknames to give Arlo. The moment he considers "pumpkin", Gordy [[SurpriseCreepy shows up out of nowhere]] and just stares at him before [[ImpliedDeathThreat making a slit throat gesture to him,]] complete with PsychoStrings.
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* Ansel experimenting with nicknames to give Arlo. The moment he considers "pumpkin", Gordy [[SurpriseCreepy shows up out of nowhere]] up]] and just stares at him before [[ImpliedDeathThreat making a slit throat gesture to him,]] complete with PsychoStrings.
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* A seagull tossing a stone weight through a window to unleash a horde of them into the air.
* The gang [[BrickJoke trying the video again,]] and they seem to finally get it right...then a dolphin comes out of nowhere and smashes through the window behind them.
* The gang [[BrickJoke trying the video again,]] and they seem to finally get it right...then a dolphin comes out of nowhere and smashes through the window behind them.
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** [[IAteWhat ''Who Ate This?'']]
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* Ansel wonders where Arlo got the idea that he's fancy right before receiving a Memory of Pizza from Marcellus said to be infused with "essense of diamond, caviar, and inherited wealth", [[IResembleThatRemark which he declares are three things fancy people like him love]] before [[HypocrisyNod realizing where Arlo's coming from.]]
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* Tony's "Memory of Pizza" setting Furlecia's hair on fire.
* The fact that this whole thing was a CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot thanks to Ansel interpreting Elena's visit all wrong.
-->'''Ansel:''' I tend to catastrophize.
-->'''Elena:''' Okay, well let's listen less to the bird man with the golden helicopter.
* The fact that this whole thing was a CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot thanks to Ansel interpreting Elena's visit all wrong.
-->'''Ansel:''' I tend to catastrophize.
-->'''Elena:''' Okay, well let's listen less to the bird man with the golden helicopter.
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* Mayor Elena telling Ansel that she prefers things that on on the ground, like cars and trains. It's obvious from the man's voice, him being a bird-person, that his heart might have sank a little from that.
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* Mayor Elena telling Ansel that she prefers things that on on the ground, like cars and trains. It's obvious from the man's voice, him being a bird-person, that his heart might have sank a little from that.that.
* Alia trying to distract Elena with a pitch to lower the legal driving age.
* While everyone's racing to fix up the parlor, Marcellus is just scarfing down pepperoni.
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* Alia trying to distract Elena with a pitch to lower the legal driving age.
* While everyone's racing to fix up the parlor, Marcellus is just scarfing down pepperoni.
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-->'''Arlo:''' Look at me! I'm a desperado!
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-->'''Arlo:''' Look at me! I'm a desperado!desperado!
* Mayor Elena telling Ansel that she prefers things that on on the ground, like cars and trains. It's obvious from the man's voice, him being a bird-person, that his heart might have sank a little from that.
* Mayor Elena telling Ansel that she prefers things that on on the ground, like cars and trains. It's obvious from the man's voice, him being a bird-person, that his heart might have sank a little from that.
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-->'''Ansel:''' Okay, not pumpkin.
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-->'''Ansel:''' Okay, not pumpkin.pumpkin.
* Arlo proudly declaring that the fake flowers will outlive them all.
* Bertie serving coffee to Ansel in a cowboy boot painted gold, which she describes as having been worn by the only cowboy outlawed in all 50 states.
** Once Ansel notices Bessie and tosses the boot away, it lands on Arlo's head.
-->'''Arlo:''' Look at me! I'm a desperado!
* Arlo proudly declaring that the fake flowers will outlive them all.
* Bertie serving coffee to Ansel in a cowboy boot painted gold, which she describes as having been worn by the only cowboy outlawed in all 50 states.
** Once Ansel notices Bessie and tosses the boot away, it lands on Arlo's head.
-->'''Arlo:''' Look at me! I'm a desperado!
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** Marcellus stating that he's OnlyInItForTheMoney while everyone else is for Seaside.
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** Marcellus stating that he's OnlyInItForTheMoney while everyone else is for Seaside.Seaside.
* The gang spraypainting a box in gold color so that they can hide the fountain's head.
* Alia somehow getting a live bear as a "living rug". Amazingly, it's quite docile, and is also [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment never mentioned again]].
* Ansel experimenting with nicknames to give Arlo. The moment he considers "pumpkin", Gordy [[SurpriseCreepy shows up out of nowhere]] and just stares at him before [[ImpliedDeathThreat making a slit throat gesture to him,]] complete with PsychoStrings.
-->'''Ansel:''' Okay, not pumpkin.
* The gang spraypainting a box in gold color so that they can hide the fountain's head.
* Alia somehow getting a live bear as a "living rug". Amazingly, it's quite docile, and is also [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment never mentioned again]].
* Ansel experimenting with nicknames to give Arlo. The moment he considers "pumpkin", Gordy [[SurpriseCreepy shows up out of nowhere]] and just stares at him before [[ImpliedDeathThreat making a slit throat gesture to him,]] complete with PsychoStrings.
-->'''Ansel:''' Okay, not pumpkin.
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* Every time there's a close-up of the fountain, the nostrils on the horse bubble up with green gunk that could pass as mucus. Amazingly, the mayor sees it as a feature.
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-->'''Alia:''' Maybe a {{Foreshadowing Rat King.}}
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-->'''Alia:''' Maybe a {{Foreshadowing [[{{Foreshadowing}} Rat King.}}]]
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-->'''Alia:''' Maybe a [[Main/Foreshadowing Rat King.]]
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-->'''Alia:''' Maybe a [[Main/Foreshadowing {{Foreshadowing Rat King.]]}}
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--> '''Marcellus:''' Yeah, this is a fancy person's nightmare.
--> Later after everyone agrees to the plan
--> '''Tony (still struggling with the gull):''' Help! Help! I can't let go! It's strength is otherworldly!
--> Gets smashed through the ceiling.
--> '''Arlo:''' Yeah, the pizzaria needs the most work.
--> Everyone agrees.
** Marcellus stating that he's OnlyInItForTheMoney while everyone else is for Seaside.
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* At the very end, Arlo gets Jeromio in the mail, and laughs about how if he had come a day earlier, he and Arlo could have been roommates without needing Bertie to always be there. It's pretty obvious that Bertie just realized this whole thing has been a CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot.
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* At the very end, Arlo gets Jeromio in the mail, and laughs about how if he had come a day earlier, he and Arlo could have been roommates without needing Bertie to always be there. It's pretty obvious that Bertie just realized this whole thing has been a CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot.CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot.
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* The gang repeatedly trying to make a promotional video for Seaside, only for them to keep futzing up the last line, resulting in countless takes.
** The sign at the beginning reading "The New York Tourism Board has not approved this video".
** The actual promo is quite amusing with how Tony proudly advertises things like sidewalks and seabirds, one of which tugs on his mustache.
** They seem to get the line right at one point...then Marcellus shows up with a phone (that's still attached to a cord).
* The moment Marcellus hands Arlo the phone, the poor kid goes flying across Seaside thanks to the cord. Somehow, he has plenty of time to talk to his dad as this goes on before crashing offscreen.
* Ansel repeatedly getting interrupted on the phone by the loud coffee machine next to him. It comes back as a BrickJoke when Arlo uses coffee machine noises to describe what he would do.
* Tony pipes in when everyone's coming up with ideas:
-->'''Tony:''' I could serve up a pizza meal so elegant we could serve it to a king!
-->'''Alia:''' Maybe a [[Main/Foreshadowing Rat King.]]
-->'''Tony:''' You don't know what you're talking about! My pizza is only appreciated by the finest of palates!
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* The gang repeatedly trying to make a promotional video for Seaside, only for them to keep futzing up the last line, resulting in countless takes.
** The sign at the beginning reading "The New York Tourism Board has not approved this video".
** The actual promo is quite amusing with how Tony proudly advertises things like sidewalks and seabirds, one of which tugs on his mustache.
** They seem to get the line right at one point...then Marcellus shows up with a phone (that's still attached to a cord).
* The moment Marcellus hands Arlo the phone, the poor kid goes flying across Seaside thanks to the cord. Somehow, he has plenty of time to talk to his dad as this goes on before crashing offscreen.
* Ansel repeatedly getting interrupted on the phone by the loud coffee machine next to him. It comes back as a BrickJoke when Arlo uses coffee machine noises to describe what he would do.
* Tony pipes in when everyone's coming up with ideas:
-->'''Tony:''' I could serve up a pizza meal so elegant we could serve it to a king!
-->'''Alia:''' Maybe a [[Main/Foreshadowing Rat King.]]
-->'''Tony:''' You don't know what you're talking about! My pizza is only appreciated by the finest of palates!
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* The party is shown to have gone on for THREE DAYS STRAIGHT. Come morning, and everyone (minus Arlo) looks completely exhausted. Furlecia in particular is passed out on the floor while Marcellus is just standing there with his eyes wide open ([[CallBack though that's how he sleeps]] and holding the turtle close to his chest.
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* The party is shown to have gone on for THREE DAYS STRAIGHT. Come morning, and everyone (minus Arlo) looks completely exhausted. Furlecia in particular is passed out on the floor (though still moving her limbs to the beat) while Marcellus is just standing there with his eyes wide open ([[CallBack though that's how he sleeps]] and holding the turtle close to his chest.chest.
* Alia leaving Arlo's house while sleeping on a horde of cats that carry her off.
* At the very end, Arlo gets Jeromio in the mail, and laughs about how if he had come a day earlier, he and Arlo could have been roommates without needing Bertie to always be there. It's pretty obvious that Bertie just realized this whole thing has been a CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot.
* Alia leaving Arlo's house while sleeping on a horde of cats that carry her off.
* At the very end, Arlo gets Jeromio in the mail, and laughs about how if he had come a day earlier, he and Arlo could have been roommates without needing Bertie to always be there. It's pretty obvious that Bertie just realized this whole thing has been a CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot.
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* The party is shown to have gone on for THREE DAYS STRAIGHT. Come morning, and everyone (minus Arlo and Tony) looks completely exhausted. Furlecia in particular is passed out on the floor while Marcellus is just standing there with his eyes wide open ([[CallBack though that's how he sleeps]] and holding the turtle close to his chest.
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* The party is shown to have gone on for THREE DAYS STRAIGHT. Come morning, and everyone (minus Arlo and Tony) Arlo) looks completely exhausted. Furlecia in particular is passed out on the floor while Marcellus is just standing there with his eyes wide open ([[CallBack though that's how he sleeps]] and holding the turtle close to his chest.
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* Alia dancing with the (non-anthropomorphic) dog.
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* Alia dancing with the (non-anthropomorphic) dog.dog.
* The party is shown to have gone on for THREE DAYS STRAIGHT. Come morning, and everyone (minus Arlo and Tony) looks completely exhausted. Furlecia in particular is passed out on the floor while Marcellus is just standing there with his eyes wide open ([[CallBack though that's how he sleeps]] and holding the turtle close to his chest.
* The party is shown to have gone on for THREE DAYS STRAIGHT. Come morning, and everyone (minus Arlo and Tony) looks completely exhausted. Furlecia in particular is passed out on the floor while Marcellus is just standing there with his eyes wide open ([[CallBack though that's how he sleeps]] and holding the turtle close to his chest.
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* Marcellus shacking his backside in front of the old lady at the party wouldn't be as funny if she weren't sporting a LuminescentBlush while he did it.
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* Marcellus shacking his backside in front of the old lady at the party wouldn't be as funny if she weren't sporting a LuminescentBlush while he did it.it.
* Alia dancing with the (non-anthropomorphic) dog.
* Alia dancing with the (non-anthropomorphic) dog.
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* The housewarming gift portrait Bertie gave Arlo featuring the both of them is sweet...thought it probably would be better if it wasn't a pic of Arlo smothering the girl's irritated face.
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* The housewarming gift portrait Bertie gave Arlo featuring the both of them is sweet...thought it probably would be better if it wasn't a pic of Arlo smothering the girl's irritated face.face.
* Marcellus shacking his backside in front of the old lady at the party wouldn't be as funny if she weren't sporting a LuminescentBlush while he did it.
* Marcellus shacking his backside in front of the old lady at the party wouldn't be as funny if she weren't sporting a LuminescentBlush while he did it.
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* Arlo trying and failing to lift his couch half while sounding completely winded.
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* Arlo trying and failing to lift his couch half while sounding completely winded.winded.
* Arlo irritating Tony by calling his parlor twice. Following that, Alia delivers some to him...and almost all of it's already eaten because she got hungry.
* Most of Arlo's housewarming party guests are completely random folks who happened to be nearby, including a stray dog and a sea turtle.
* The housewarming gift portrait Bertie gave Arlo featuring the both of them is sweet...thought it probably would be better if it wasn't a pic of Arlo smothering the girl's irritated face.
* Arlo irritating Tony by calling his parlor twice. Following that, Alia delivers some to him...and almost all of it's already eaten because she got hungry.
* Most of Arlo's housewarming party guests are completely random folks who happened to be nearby, including a stray dog and a sea turtle.
* The housewarming gift portrait Bertie gave Arlo featuring the both of them is sweet...thought it probably would be better if it wasn't a pic of Arlo smothering the girl's irritated face.
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--> '''Marcellus (starring daggers at Arlo): [[TranquilFury Remove yourself from my fountain at once.]]
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--> '''Marcellus (starring daggers at Arlo): Arlo):''' [[TranquilFury Remove yourself from my fountain at once.]]
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* Alia leaves Arlo and Bertie to take up a job at Tony's...that was due two hours ago.
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* Alia leaves Arlo and Bertie to take up a job at Tony's...that was due two hours ago.ago.
* Arlo trying and failing to lift his couch half while sounding completely winded.
* Arlo trying and failing to lift his couch half while sounding completely winded.
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* Arlo declaring himself as super independent, noting that [[NotHelpingYourCase he brushes his teeth at least once a month.]]
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* Arlo declaring himself as super independent, noting that [[NotHelpingYourCase he brushes his teeth at least once a month.]]]]
* Everything about the couch that Arlo and Alia found on the beach. It's every bit as disgusting as that implies. The moment Bertie grips it, green...something...spurts out of it. Her look of absolute disgust says it all.
* Alia leaves Arlo and Bertie to take up a job at Tony's...that was due two hours ago.
* Everything about the couch that Arlo and Alia found on the beach. It's every bit as disgusting as that implies. The moment Bertie grips it, green...something...spurts out of it. Her look of absolute disgust says it all.
* Alia leaves Arlo and Bertie to take up a job at Tony's...that was due two hours ago.
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* The RunningGag of the theater playing movies with all kinds of ridiculous titles that would make any sane person in-universe ask [[WhoWritesThisCrap "Who writes this crap?!"]] In order:
** [[TheMockbuster ''Cory the Crocodile Boy'']]
* The RunningGag of the theater playing movies with all kinds of ridiculous titles that would make any sane person in-universe ask [[WhoWritesThisCrap "Who writes this crap?!"]] In order:
** [[TheMockbuster ''Cory the Crocodile Boy'']]
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--> '''Bertie:''' What is it? Who's after you? The seagulls? (eyes narrow) I'll end them.them.
* Arlo declaring himself as super independent, noting that [[NotHelpingYourCase he brushes his teeth at least once a month.]]
* Arlo declaring himself as super independent, noting that [[NotHelpingYourCase he brushes his teeth at least once a month.]]
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[-->'''Tony:''' Deal of the day, folks, get one slice, get another for the same price!
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* The very first scene has where Arlo greets everyone in the morning, showing:
** A seagull smacking into the old Seaside sign.
** Another gull knocking Furlecia into the door.
** Tony asking Arlo to scream if he sees the health inspector, followed by him advertising his pizza parlor:
[-->'''Tony:''' Deal of the day, folks, get one slice, get another for the same price!
** Arlo greetingseagulls, one of which crashes into Marcellus in the billboard for Seaside.fountain, who responds thustly:
--> '''Marcellus (starring daggers at Arlo): [[TranquilFury Remove yourself from my fountain at once.]]
** When Arlo gets Bertie's attention:
--> '''Bertie:''' What is it? Who's after you? The seagulls? (eyes narrow) I'll end them.
** A seagull smacking into the old Seaside sign.
** Another gull knocking Furlecia into the door.
** Tony asking Arlo to scream if he sees the health inspector, followed by him advertising his pizza parlor:
[-->'''Tony:''' Deal of the day, folks, get one slice, get another for the same price!
** Arlo greeting
--> '''Marcellus (starring daggers at Arlo): [[TranquilFury Remove yourself from my fountain at once.]]
** When Arlo gets Bertie's attention:
--> '''Bertie:''' What is it? Who's after you? The seagulls? (eyes narrow) I'll end them.
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* The very first scene has Arlo greeting seagulls, one of which crashes into the billboard for Seaside.
* The very first scene has Arlo greeting seagulls, one of which crashes into the billboard for Seaside.
