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-->'''Joe''': Stick to the plan!
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-->'''Shopper''': Where the ''fuck'' is my basket?
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-->'''Joe''': Jump in the basket.
-->'''Willie''': Who the hell do you think I am? E.T.?
-->'''Joe''': Willie, jump in the bloody basket!
-->'''Willie''': ''I’m not getting in no bloody basket!''
-->''(The security guard whistles. Both of them look behind them in a collective OhCrap moment. [[GilliganCut Cut to Willie in the basket with Joe driving away]].)''
-->'''Willie''': Who the hell do you think I am? E.T.?
-->'''Joe''': Willie, jump in the bloody basket!
-->'''Willie''': ''I’m not getting in no bloody basket!''
-->''(The security guard whistles. Both of them look behind them in a collective OhCrap moment. [[GilliganCut Cut to Willie in the basket with Joe driving away]].)''
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-->'''Security guard''': Halt!
-->'''Al''': What are you chasing me for?
-->'''Security guard''': Halt!
-->'''Al''': I heard you the first time.
-->'''Security guard''': Don't make me tase you!
-->''(Al stops and promptly raises his hands)''
-->'''Al''': This is not an admission of guilt. I'm just tired.
-->'''Al''': What are you chasing me for?
-->'''Security guard''': Halt!
-->'''Al''': I heard you the first time.
-->'''Security guard''': Don't make me tase you!
-->''(Al stops and promptly raises his hands)''
-->'''Al''': This is not an admission of guilt. I'm just tired.
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-->'''Store Manager''': You were gonna make a Cordon bleu with chicken thighs? That's a crime in of itself.
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-->'''Al''': Yeah, couple of great friends I got. You just made me an accomplice to a robbery!
-->'''Joe''': We never asked you to do anything.
-->'''Al''': I drive you there. I drive you back. That makes me a getaway driver.
-->'''Willie''': Oh, don't flatter yourself. You drive like my grandmother, and she drove a horse and buggy.
-->'''Al''': That's a good one. Just for that you can walk home.
-->''(They get to the car. Al stops them from getting in as he gets in himself.)''
-->'''Al''': Don't touch my car. Don't get in the car.
-->'''Willie''': You're not going to make us walk.
-->'''Al''': Hell I'm not. Oh, boy. You guys are going to be great bank robbers. You just got busted robbing Value Town. Oh-ho.
-->''(Al drives off.)''
-->'''Willie''': I hate when he's right.
-->'''Joe''': We never asked you to do anything.
-->'''Al''': I drive you there. I drive you back. That makes me a getaway driver.
-->'''Willie''': Oh, don't flatter yourself. You drive like my grandmother, and she drove a horse and buggy.
-->'''Al''': That's a good one. Just for that you can walk home.
-->''(They get to the car. Al stops them from getting in as he gets in himself.)''
-->'''Al''': Don't touch my car. Don't get in the car.
-->'''Willie''': You're not going to make us walk.
-->'''Al''': Hell I'm not. Oh, boy. You guys are going to be great bank robbers. You just got busted robbing Value Town. Oh-ho.
-->''(Al drives off.)''
-->'''Willie''': I hate when he's right.
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-->'''Joe''': I hate when he's right.
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** And then Al promptly gets chased by a guard for no reason.
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** And then Al promptly gets chased by a another guard for no reason.
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** And to end the scene off, we get this funny exchange between the three.
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** And to end the scene off, we get this funny exchange between the three.three as they leave.
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-->'''Willie''': We never asked you to do anything.
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** And to end the scene off, we get this funny exchange between the three.
-->'''Al''': Yeah, couple of great friends I got. You just made me an accomplice to a robbery!
-->'''Willie''': We never asked you to do anything.
-->'''Al''': I drive you there. I drive you back. That makes me a getaway driver.
-->'''Willie''': Oh, don't flatter yourself. You drive like my grandmother, and she drove a horse and buggy.
-->'''Al''': That's a good one. Just for that you can walk home.
-->''(They get to the car. Al stops them from getting in as he gets in himself.)''
-->'''Al''': Don't touch my car. Don't get in the car.
-->'''Willie''': You're not going to make us walk.
-->'''Al''': Hell I'm not. Oh, boy. You guys are going to be great bank robbers. You just got busted robbing Value Town. Oh-ho.
-->''(Al drives off.)''
-->'''Joe''': I hate when he's right.
-->'''Al''': Yeah, couple of great friends I got. You just made me an accomplice to a robbery!
-->'''Willie''': We never asked you to do anything.
-->'''Al''': I drive you there. I drive you back. That makes me a getaway driver.
-->'''Willie''': Oh, don't flatter yourself. You drive like my grandmother, and she drove a horse and buggy.
-->'''Al''': That's a good one. Just for that you can walk home.
-->''(They get to the car. Al stops them from getting in as he gets in himself.)''
-->'''Al''': Don't touch my car. Don't get in the car.
-->'''Willie''': You're not going to make us walk.
-->'''Al''': Hell I'm not. Oh, boy. You guys are going to be great bank robbers. You just got busted robbing Value Town. Oh-ho.
-->''(Al drives off.)''
-->'''Joe''': I hate when he's right.
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** And then Al promptly gets chased by a guard for no reason.
-->'''Security guard''': Halt!
-->'''Al''': What are you chasing me for?
-->'''Security guard''': Halt!
-->'''Al''': I heard you the first time.
-->'''Security guard''': Don't make me tase you!
-->''(Al stops and promptly raises his hands)''
-->'''Al''': This is not an admission of guilt. I'm just tired.
-->'''Security guard''': Halt!
-->'''Al''': What are you chasing me for?
-->'''Security guard''': Halt!
-->'''Al''': I heard you the first time.
-->'''Security guard''': Don't make me tase you!
-->''(Al stops and promptly raises his hands)''
-->'''Al''': This is not an admission of guilt. I'm just tired.
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** Their plan is to steal supplies to make Cordon bleu. Willie then rebels and tells Joe he's gonna get a Chicken roast instead, to Joe's objections.
-->'''Joe''': Stick to the plan!
-->'''Joe''': Stick to the plan!
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** Also, this line from the store manager after they were caught.
-->'''Store Manager''': You were gonna make a Cordon bleu with chicken thighs? That's a crime in of itself.
-->'''Store Manager''': You were gonna make a Cordon bleu with chicken thighs? That's a crime in of itself.
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** Also, the PrecisionFStrike by one old shopper when her mobility scooter is stolen by Joe during the getaway.
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** Also, the one PrecisionFStrike in a PG-13 film is fulfulled by one old shopper when her mobility scooter is stolen by Joe during the getaway.
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** Al immediately gets tired of waiting in the hot car and goes into the store. In the middle of the shoplifting attempt.
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** Al immediately gets tired of waiting in the hot car and goes into the store. In ''In the middle of the shoplifting attempt.''
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** ''(The security guard whistles. Both of them look behind them in a collective OhCrap moment. [[GilliganCut Cut to Willie in the basket with Joe driving away]].)''
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''(The security guard whistles. Both of them look behind them in a collective OhCrap moment. [[GilliganCut Cut to Willie in the basket with Joe driving away]].)''
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** ''(The security guard whistles. Both of them look behind them in a collective OhCrap moment. [[GilliganCut Cut to Willie in the basket with Joe driving away]].)''
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** Also, the PrecisionFStrike by one old shopper when her mobility scooter is stolen during the getaway.
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** Also, the PrecisionFStrike by one old shopper when her mobility scooter is stolen by Joe during the getaway.
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** And Joe trying to convince Willie to get in.
-->'''Joe''': Jump in the basket.
-->'''Willie''': Who the hell do you think I am? E.T.?
-->'''Joe''': Willie, jump in the bloody basket!
-->'''Willie''': ''I’m not getting in no bloody basket!''
''(The security guard whistles. Both of them look behind them in a collective OhCrap moment. [[GilliganCut Cut to Willie in the basket with Joe driving away]].)''
-->'''Joe''': Jump in the basket.
-->'''Willie''': Who the hell do you think I am? E.T.?
-->'''Joe''': Willie, jump in the bloody basket!
-->'''Willie''': ''I’m not getting in no bloody basket!''
''(The security guard whistles. Both of them look behind them in a collective OhCrap moment. [[GilliganCut Cut to Willie in the basket with Joe driving away]].)''
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-->'''Shopper''': Where the ''fuck''is my basket?
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-->'''Shopper''': Where the ''fuck''is ''fuck'' is my basket?
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** Also, the PrecisionFStrike by one old shopper when her mobility scooter is stolen during the getaway.
-->'''Shopper''': Where the ''fuck''is my basket?
-->'''Shopper''': Where the ''fuck''is my basket?
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** Al immediately gets tired of waiting in the hot car and goes into the store. In the middle of the shoplifting attempt.
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** Al immediately gets tired of waiting in the hot car and goes into the store. In the middle of the shoplifting attempt.attempt.
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* [[EpicFail The ENTIRETY of the value town robbery. ALL OF IT.]]
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* [[EpicFail The ENTIRETY of the value town robbery. ALL OF IT.]]]]
** Al immediately gets tired of waiting in the hot car and goes into the store. In the middle of the shoplifting attempt.
** Al immediately gets tired of waiting in the hot car and goes into the store. In the middle of the shoplifting attempt.
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* The ENTIRETY of the value town robbery. ALL OF IT.
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* [[EpicFail The ENTIRETY of the value town robbery. ALL OF IT.]]
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* The ENTIRETY of the value town robbery. ALL OF IT.
